écriture Article: My Unamed Story pt.2

posted by boomboombunni

"I'm glad to meet someone my age. I've lived here since I was eight, and I haven't seen any kids." She a dit her parents were wealthy wine makers. They couldn't take care of her, so they gave her a small amount of their fortune, and left her here. "Wow, your life sounds so difficult." "Yeah, it was, until i died." Andrew's face went bone white and he felt like collapsing. "I'm sorry, what? ALIVE? AS in, no longer living?" "Yeah! I thought toi knew!" Poor Andrew caved in on himself. The last thing he remembered was Elizabeth reaching out to catch him as he fell to the floor.

bri-marie Still the same thing - very rushed and confusing. There are no details, no descriptions. What does it mean that 'her' (I'm assuming 'she' is Elizabeth?) parents can't take care of her? They're obviously financially stable as they [i]gave[/i] her a small [i]fortune[/i]. They obviously care about her, since they gave her said fortune. She wasn't old enough to survive on her own. It doesn't make any sense. What do things look like? Smell like? Feel like? Sound like? What are the characters feeling - anxious, happy, sad? How old are they? What do they look like?

woofbark Right now, this is a good story. Add more detail, and it will be great. :D

boomboombunni okay listen! its a little rough i know! i will try to make it better!

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A whole new world - Chapter 1: Out of accueil

posted by barbie91lala

There I was… Stepping on my own feet on the real ground. Yeah… the real one.
No plus “dad, will toi give me a ride to…?”, ou “ please mom, I need that money to buy a lovely pair of jeans”.
No plus dependence, no plus good meals in family, no plus life as I know it.
Time to step up on my feet.
Lily is my name…and I´m 18 years old. This is the new beginning of a new life. MY own life, the one that I have to build up.
Desperate about all this thoughts, all I could do is call my BF to cry over the phone.
-Soph…Oh Soph! This is nerve racking…OMG OMG OMG! I can´t believe we´re...

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Prom Night (Chapter One: BEST PROM EVER!)

posted by moolah

Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter One: BEST PROM EVER
It was December on Christmas Eve. Tucker and Kaylee were on their way to the midnight prom when, they ran into Ashlynn and Luke. They were on their way to prom too. Then they all went in the same car. On their way they ran into Hannah and Jacob, so they all rode together, when they ran into Anne and Jordon, then they went to prom. When they got there Haley was taking pictures about 10 minutes later Haley went up to Sean, the DJ, and Haley asked Sean to play a pop song. Then, Haley’s boyfriend, Zack came and they danced.
Later...

Try My Life Chapter 9 (Riley's POV)

posted by mitchie19

Book 2

Alexander Riley
Cruz

9. N E A R T H E L I M I T

After a few weeks, Mariah was recovered from the accident. I didn’t really expect she would come and get me. She just appeared in the racing tracks in the other night telling me to slow down. I was surprised, though. It’s like she was concerned. I didn’t know why I kissed her in the forehead. I’m pretty sure she expects that we’ll be touching lips par then. But, that didn’t bother me too much.
Mariah is a great person. She’s thoughtful, funny, well what else can I say, gorgeous? I guess that’s the right word to describe...

The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 5

posted by Triscia95

This one is pretty short but I've been so busy, hope toi like it commentaire and tell me what toi think.

Elena’s POV
I woke up to find the curtains being draw open and Stefan gone. Every thing seemed a little fuzzy. I could see a figure walked towards me. I sat up in lit and rubbed my eyes.
“Good morning sleeping beauty.” Damon spoke softly. When things came back to focus I saw Damon half dressed, wearing just a pair of sweats.
I ran my fingers threw my hair pulling it out of my face. “Where’s Stefan.” “Not here, in fact it’s just toi and me. Hungry?”
He got up and headed for the...

just a twist in twilight chapter 1

posted by mia1emmett

Chapter 1.
I had just moved into forks, Washington, me and my brother Eddie were
close so after our parents died Eddie didn't leave me out of his sight.
I was unpacking and going through my things when I heard the door cloche, bell
ring. I knew who it was because every time I moved the people suivant door
would come and welcome us. Well I figured it was our neighbor.
I heard the door open and heard talking. I looked like a slob in my
baggy t-shirt and my shorts. So I changed into jeans and a long rose
tank top. I walked down stairs and a dit my hellos I let...

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The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 4

posted by Triscia95

Katherine’s POV
I leaned off the mur smiling. “I can tell that toi didn’t miss me.” I a dit turning to Stefan my smile fading.
I turned back to Damon smiling. “I can’t tell much if toi miss me with all that ‘I l’amour toi Elena.” I glided my hands over his perfectly sculpted abs. His chemise so thin toi could feel every little curve.
My fingers moving up his stomach one par one. “You seem to l’amour Elena so much, have toi ever wanted to tasted her blood, because I know I’ve been dying to.” I a dit running my thumb over his lower lip.

Damon’s POV
From the moment she spoke my body...

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I figured out I couldn't enter this in a écriture contest after I wrote it...

posted by QueenVictoria73

So, I am alway on the look out for écriture contests with inspiring prompts for me to enter. I got really exited when I found this one:
link because I had an idea for it right away. I spent all afternoon researching the Battle of Little Bighorn, because I wanted to set it in the aftermath of that battle, and écriture it, instead of écriture a biography of William Blake that I was supposed to be doing for school :P. then, when I went to go soumettre it, I figured out the people wanted me to sign up for a membership to their website for $6.75 a mois to enter the contest, which I don't really want to....

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Still of the night ch.17 (Jack's POV)

posted by TeamRosalieHale

17: Wheel in the Sky

Dying is not what most people think it is-nothing flashes before your eyes, there’s no white light ou what have you. The only thing I felt was pain, the blood flowing through my chemise and fingers, making them sticky and beginning to form a manteau on my clothes. I couldn’t see much beyond the few feet in front of me, the sun had long such set and darkness had fallen on rapide, swift wings. There was one sound: my blood pulsing like it was right in my ears. Eventually I made it to the herbe colline where I fell, too weak to walk another step.
While I lay there, certain I was destined...

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Dark Hold: The Story Of Vampire Curse In A New Tale! Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

"You know... I'm not...the one toi love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos

"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos

There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be plus adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, ou even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...

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Dark Hold: The Story Of Vampire Curse In A New Tale! Chapter Three

posted by amethyst44

My eyes traveled over to the waitress, and underneath the cuff of her uniform I saw a dagger-slash on her wrist, still throbbing with a small smidge of blood.

In the place where I lived, there was worry to a person when they saw a nine-year-old crossing the rue and looking around in fear. Most people would back off, since that was a common sense habit. But when I was the nine-year-old walking around in fear, there was no way that common sense would be a part of me anymore. I had to use the mature inner self that I refused to shed in the past and make it come to good use, because I would need every ounce of manliness I had.
He left a note beside the cottage when I came back from school, and that scared the hell out of me. I wondered why he didn't...

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Whisper Chapter Two

posted by amethyst44

After that, I had the courage to go into the forest. Every time I did, however, I felt a smidge closer to guilt and foolishness. His threat should have prevented me from going into the forest again, ou even think about it. But no. I wasn't going to be bullied down par a snobby kid in the forest from letting me have my lovely freedom when I wanted. Besides, we owned these woods. He could file against me, ou burn the whole forest for all I cared, but he would be the one to pay the price. And par the way his clothes were mangled and destroyed, I don't think the price would even match his dream sufficiency...

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The Sisters: Chapter 6: Dear Dairy

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Bobby’s p.o.v

After I had spent the night with Tayce I went back to the protector’s dorms, they weren’t as nice as the house ou cleaner for that matter but it was a place to sleep. I noticed Kale sitting on his lit lire some chapter book Belinda had recommended earlier this week. He looked up and smirked. “Where did toi go?” he asked, I coughed and sat down suivant him. “Walk” I said, his judgmental eyes followed mine. “Gee that was so convincing” He said, I playfully pushed him. “So what, it’s not like I’m the killer” I said, I could tell he believed me, but he still...

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Guardian Angel's Hell (G.A.H.) Chapter One-New girl

posted by anime_obsessed5

Ellen Collins is Moving to a new town.which means a new life,new house and new friends.Her new accueil was in the middle of town.It was huge.
"Mom...I don't like it here no one will like me." Ellen a dit to her mother concerned her partners were separated.It was a tough time for her.
"Not now hunny I'm on a very important business call.Why don't toi go to school?" Her mom said.Her mom was a very impotent business women
"Can I have some money?For some food." Ellen said.
"Yeah yeah here's a twenty." Her mom a dit handing her a twenty dollar bill.
"Thanks."
"Go,go."
Ellen went in town,She stop a girl around...

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a cursed story:chapter 8 & 9!: not a sweet life:(

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 8: not a sweet life
I woke up with Damien's arms tightened around my naked chest.ewww eww eww eww, I swear I’ll kill him! i slid myself out of his grasp and flew to my closet I quietly wore something to escape from him while I was putting on my jeans I was thinking of some place where Damien cant find me, I really couldn’t think of any where so I grabbed my bag and headed to the door hope fully Damien was still sleeping I opened the door and quietly closed it behind me I rushed to my car when jasper interrupted me
-Bella what's wrong? Your so scared and worried.
Not a good timing please...

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Jacob and Renesmee's Life -- Chapter 10

posted by BiteMeCullen107

“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in plus pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET toi cul, ass UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud I thought Jacob would go def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.

“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 4 An Honest Tale Speeds Best Being Plainly Told Part 2

posted by H-A-T-R-M

The four of them started walking straight ahead, if this was a large creature you’d think toi could spot the thing. Grito a dit they can be quite the handful and we can’t kill it, just capture it. “See anything yet?” Opal Asked. “Grass, lots and lots of grass” Marley Answered. After giving Marley an evil look, they continued through the field. Little did they know, this field, was no normal flied. “It’s about time, right?” Parvulo Asked. As Grito washed his face, he answered “Yeah, the field will break apart soon”. Just after Grito spoke the ground shook. “What was that?...

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black moon chapter 18

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella toi finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see toi vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend ou something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella toi were sleeping here for 100 years!and now toi finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...

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The Stupid, Jackass boy everyone in my skool hates

posted by Nayeli53

Okay, so this might sound boring, but its been on my nerves for a long time and this is the only place to spill it out so here it goes.

So at my middle school whose name shall remain secret (La villa Middle School), theres this kid whose name shall also be kept secret (jose guerro) and is real jackass. he smells horrible, he gets into fight with guys AND girls, says stuff that make us want to crack his neck, and he sent lots of people to the office for something he did, and the teachers dont do anything but tell him niclely tobehave and get after the people who he made pissed. the other day...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 1-part 3

posted by summerfrog

Skiro
My first class was chemistry and I sat in the seconde row suivant to a skinny girl with short blond hair talking to another girl behind us. From their conversation I learned her name was Stacey and the other was Beonca and they were both cheerleaders.
The teacher started to talk about the rules and objectives for this an but no one was paying attention,they were much plus interested in texting on their cell phones ou passing notes to the person suivant to them. I wasn't that interested in what the teacher a dit ether so my mind wondered off....
The cloche, bell woke me out of my jour dreams. As Stacey...

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Forbidden l’amour - Chapter 4

posted by ashesandwine

Sorry for just posting it in this spot now:( If toi want toi can rejoindre my spot and lire it as soon as it's ready:D

"Daniel POV"

We wrote so much letters to each other, even if we were just a few blocs away... I still remmember our first letter; I had so much to say, so much that I wanted her to know, how could I put all of my l’amour into one letter? So I a dit the only thing I could say:

"I only know that I belong where toi are!"

Her response was something that I will never forget:

"You're my fragement of light in the end of the tunnel, you're my reason to fight when everything is getting dark..."...