écriture Article: My Unamed Story pt.2

posted by boomboombunni

"I'm glad to meet someone my age. I've lived here since I was eight, and I haven't seen any kids." She a dit her parents were wealthy wine makers. They couldn't take care of her, so they gave her a small amount of their fortune, and left her here. "Wow, your life sounds so difficult." "Yeah, it was, until i died." Andrew's face went bone white and he felt like collapsing. "I'm sorry, what? ALIVE? AS in, no longer living?" "Yeah! I thought toi knew!" Poor Andrew caved in on himself. The last thing he remembered was Elizabeth reaching out to catch him as he fell to the floor.

bri-marie Still the same thing - very rushed and confusing. There are no details, no descriptions. What does it mean that 'her' (I'm assuming 'she' is Elizabeth?) parents can't take care of her? They're obviously financially stable as they [i]gave[/i] her a small [i]fortune[/i]. They obviously care about her, since they gave her said fortune. She wasn't old enough to survive on her own. It doesn't make any sense. What do things look like? Smell like? Feel like? Sound like? What are the characters feeling - anxious, happy, sad? How old are they? What do they look like?

woofbark Right now, this is a good story. Add more detail, and it will be great. :D

boomboombunni okay listen! its a little rough i know! i will try to make it better!

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Alex's Hunter Chapter 3

posted by dragonrider

Alex froze up as his hunter came near him with his bag. Alex started crying again but silently. His thoughts were raging out of control Should I tell him? Nah then he'll just kill me and my family Alex looked up in time to get slapped again.
"Tell me where your family is Alex! ou else," Alex's hunter roared raising his hand again
Alex started to shake bad.
"N..No I will not Dude just kill me now so at least I can be in a happy place," he a dit looking down his tears dripping onto the hard wooden floor
The hunter laughed a big belly laugh. Alex looked up in time to get slapped again. Alex glared...

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Gods: Chapter 12: 2 birds with 1 stone

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

We both stood there in awe. I closed my eyes and then opened them again to check if he was real. He looked just as shocked as I was. He moved closer but I moved back. “Sadie, please” he begged, I shook my head. “You’re not dead” I stated, he nodded. I know it was a stupid thing to say, but at this moment it was the first thing that went through my mind. “Please, let me explain” he pleaded. I didn’t answer, I just stood there. “But, Dawn” I said, he nodded. “Dawn saw what I wanted her to” he simply said. I looked up at him with disgust. “What do toi mean?” I asked...

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Underworld: Chapter 4: Fallen Angel

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Dawn’s p.o.v

“What?’ I asked, closing my mouth. He smiled, sending a shiver down my spine. “I need to speak to my new slayer to be” he told us. Rebecca eyed him. “Why, we have taught her the basic and the rules” she said, he now looked annoyed. Why was he doing this? I thought to myself. “Now, young ladies I would like to talk to her in private” he said, but before we could go Billy had walked in. “Derek” he simply said. My father turned to him. “Billy, how have toi been?” he asked. Billy snickered. “Just great, now what do toi want with Lilly?” he asked, my father...

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Gods: Chapter 9: Til death do us part

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing robe and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years il y a she was the outcast, her...

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Barely Noticed (Metaphor)

posted by funnyshawna

Life is an iPod. The different melodies, the ups and the downs, the changes in tempo, every song, and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, meaningless lyrics, and soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; repetition, a song meant for young ears, nothing to think about, nothing to ponder, just to breathe and to live. One song flows into the next, changing subtly, barely noticed. Then the words begin to gather plus depth; the beat becomes a little faster, a little louder. The musique plays, slow and monotonous during the school day, dragging...

I've Always Been Different. Chapter One. The Beginning

posted by M169

Everyone knows no one is normal. Everyone knows everyone is the same too. But do toi know what it's like to have nothing normal about you? From the way toi dress from the way toi talk? I do. My name is Elizabeth Mills. This is the story of my life. It all started when I was five. Thats the jour I became the opposite of normal.

I was just a little girl. I was in my own world. Thats a lie. Every little girl is in a world of her own. I acted as if I was five years older than I should be. I'm not normal, remember? Well I was at my Grandmothers house to spend the weekend. My cousin always prefered...

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Mary Sue 101: How to Spot Her and How to STAY AWAY

posted by Dearheart

Who is Mary Sue, toi ask?

She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the fan fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings ou Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In fan fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified par the following traits:

1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting...

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[2]I'm Emo,Hot,Pregnant, and toi are...the father of my baby?!

posted by moolah

Hmm...James, bringing back any memories-Lulu

____after school_____getting ready in Lulu's bathroom
I was listening to "Bella's Lullaby"from my faveorite Robert Pattinson flicks.It was blasting through the speakers.Andria was applying baby blue eyeshadow.I was putting on mascara.I popped my lips when the song was over.The suivant song that came up was Ke$ha's "Blah Blah Blah".I looked over towards Andria.We loved this song.We started singing.Halfway through the song I heard my phone chant "Fearless"by Taylor Swift.That meant it was Rob.I picked it up and put it on speaker."Hey Rob!"I said."Hey,Lu."he said."Andria's here too."He chuckled."Cool.Hey...

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Young Demons; Chapter 2; The Hunters

posted by tayandkris4evr

I woke up feeling groggy. My eyes were swollen from crying, and my head felt like it'd been hit with a sledge hammer a couple of times. Niki's head was on my shoulder, his blonde hair was dry now, and his eyes were also swollen and pink.
I slowly put Niki's head on a soft trash bag then I scooted out from the hollow tree's cover. Standing there in the forest made me realize something. It made me realize that sometimes Death brings sadness and sometimes it brings a reason, a meaning, ou a story. Niki a dit that he'd burned the tree... with his hands. But, I'm not sure if that's true at all....

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Another Poem

posted by RanmaRaj

I wrote this Song when my girl broke off with me

My college's band a dit it was too boring and told me to write another

I'd shared it with Kathy(Lilacool)
She a dit she liked it......Thanks Kathy

In the center of my heart
there is a deep pain
as if struck par a dart
blood is all going drain

but wait a minute
am i..............?

'tis there all jour and night
either asleep ou awake
doesn't leave what I might
kick it ou give it a shake

but on seconde thought
am i..............?

Lil puzzling is it's reason
someone once lived there
may be till précédant season
she was my heart's only heir

though she is long gone
my heart...

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The Chipettes And Chipmunks Meet Again(Part 2/Story 1)

posted by angelbrat

(The Chipettes went out of class to the bus stop)

Brittany:You know what?I think we'll go to school par car tomorrow.

Jeanette:Sure.We can take the black car.

(At their house)

Eleanor:Home Sweet Home.

Jeanette:It's already 6:00.We should make dîner with mac and cheese.

Brittany:Cool.And I'll make milkshakes.I'll make vanilla,choclate and strawberry.

Jeanette:Dinner is served.

Eleanor:Wow,Jeanette!Your mac and cheese is awesome!!!And toi Brittany,you make the best milkshakes!

Brittany and Jeanette:Thanks.And toi make the best pastries ,cakes and cookies.

Eleanor:Thanks.I'll always help my girls.

(At 9:00)...

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Painful Memories Chapter 1 (Twilight fanfiction)

posted by IsabellaMCullen

This was my first fanfic, I've been posting this story on my spot, but I want to see what some different fans think of it.I only have 3 ou 4 who actually read it so I'm not sure....please please comment.I need your opinion and If I'm bad just tell me, kay?

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Painful Memories
Chapter One

I was sitting at my vanity. I started brushing my long golden waves. I was preparing myself. I knew Edward would be accueil soon. Charlie had Edward leave every night at a certain time. Of course Edward would just go back once Charlie was asleep. He chose to go to...

plus Than Friends ou Just a Dream? (Eminem Story) [Chapter Three - feu Her]

posted by EminemAddict09

I woke up to the door being shut. I sat up quickly and stared at the girls. “Oh hi,” I said. “Thought toi were someone else for a seconde there,” I a dit with a slight laugh.
“Sorry,” Hailie a dit as she came and sat par me.
“Don’t worry about that,” I a dit patting her on the head, she looked at me funny but I don’t think she mined my pattingness. “Anybody have homework?” I asked looking at both of the girls. Laney just nodded and walked towards the cuisine without saying a word, I thought that was a bit strange but I guess that’s just the way she is. I sat there for a...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 1 Antiworld Part 4

posted by H-A-T-R-M

The suivant jour at school they had an athlete tryout at lunch time in the stadium. “Alec, there toi are I’ve been looking all over for you, why are toi watching the tryouts, man” a dit Marley. “Nothing, just supporting people” a dit Alec with a big smile on his face. “Your perving on the girls aren’t you?” a dit Marley. “You know me too well man; take a sit, perv with toi fellow friends” a dit Alec with the same smile. ‘I’ll rejoindre toi guys” a dit Nathan while watching a girl sprint. “You guys are such pervs, man” a dit Marley even though he was sitting right suivant to them...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 1 Antiworld Part 1

posted by H-A-T-R-M

I'm the real writer of this story, my siter a.k.a gossipgirlxoxo posté it for me but now i have my own....

15 years ago, mankind found that there was plus than the world showed us. There was another world where creatures of all appearances were hiding, the creatures made a deal with the humans that if they let them live in the human world as normal citizens they would help the humans deal with deceases and technology. They agreed but the humans decreed that all monsters must hid in a human form, this was no shock to the creatures and it was agreed that man and monster would live as one, as...

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Life is a Song, l’amour are the Lyrics

posted by BURITOES

Chapter One-

I screamed as loud as I possibly could (well, screaming to the lyrics.). I was screaming to Paramore. They were my favori band of all time. I and my best friend Alexia won tickets to see them and a bunch of other bands on the Vans Warped Tour. After the show, I could go and meet everyone who played there. I was so excited, also because I could meet my other favori band, All Time Low. So, yeah. I was pretty excited about that. Right now, my favori song: Where the Lines Overlap was playing. Alexia was using the bathroom, she doesn’t really like Paramore....

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WHY DOES DADDY HURT ME?**CRY**

posted by VampirePrinsess

I read this and had to pass it on.
my name is sarah
i am three
my eyes are swollen
i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made
my daddy so mad
i wish i were better
i wish i werent ugly
then maybe my mommy
would still wanna hug me
i cant do a wrong
i can't speak at all
or else i locked up
all jour long
when i wake up
im all alone
the house is dark
my folks arent home
when my mommy does come home
i try to be nice
so maybe i'll just get
one wipping tonight
i just heard a car
my daddy is back
from charlie's bar
i heard him curse
my name is called
i press myself
against the wall
i try to hide
from his...

Hell's Outlaw - Chapter 4

posted by HouseMindFreak

1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link

3rd chapter: link

Chapter 4

Koda ran out of the school before anyone heard ou found out about his little incident. But he knew sooner ou later someone would walk in that office and see Principle Nakai on the floor with his bureau on haut, retour au début of him and realize who wasn’t in school anymore…he would be serious trouble.

The sun was at its peak in the sky, probably around 1 ou 2 pm. It was hot, the breeze that blew was dry and it burned Koda’s eyes. He stood suivant to his dirt bike, contemplating where he should go before any cop…or parent arrived.
He decided it didn’t...

Hell's Outlaw - Chapter 3

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 3 of my story. It does get a bit plus dramatic and a wee bit violent/scary but it will make sense as I go further along.

1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link

Chapter 3

Koda stood just outside his school, only 10 minutes until the first cloche, bell rang. He was thinking about what Jax told him with his dream. He knew he shouldn’t let it bother him but it kept picking at his conscience like a corbeau, corneille was picking at his heart.
It was just a drunken dream, he told himself.
His thoughts quickly turned to anger as he began to remember how his family always treated him.

An outcast, a screw up…

The cloche, bell rang...

Hidden in the darkness (lies the ugly truth)

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

sorry everyone who reads these but i have to stop écriture them for three weeks. I thnk i will be able to fit in maybe 1 in that period, but i have my prelims and i will be too tired ou too something to publier them, sorry. But i will try, i promise!

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sorry it had to be longer MDR

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