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posted by greenstergirl
 if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
Danny:

I grabbed my rose and green duffel bag off the wooden shelf beside my green bed.

I was inside the earth elemental arbre house where all the earth elementals sleep if they are staying in the BOES over night. Marcus, Brenna, and I were supposed to be sleeping but we all weren't. We were running out to go find Janie. We weren't supposed to leave.

After pulling on skinny jeans and a green Nike chemise I was ready. I woke up Marcus after I had pulled on my brown Converse and jacket.

"wha....what is it Danny?" He asked impatiently while rubbing his eyes. I ruffled his black hair.

"Get up meat head we're going. And be quiet. toi don't want Trixi waking up and hearing us." I pointed at the lit par the window where Trixi snored.

He nodded and got up to change in the boy's room. I went to wake up Brenna where I found her already out on the ground with her bag strapped over one shoulder.

"Hurry up slow pokes!!" She whispered. Yea she's an early riser. She wakes up the minute the sun begins to rise. It's her element. Still the sun wasn't all the way up yet.

I giggled and went back in for Marcus. We slowly climbed down the ladder and saw Brenna and her red curls.

After we jumped over boundary between the real world and the valley Marcus pushed us into a tree.

"Marcus!!" I a dit frustrated. "The arbre says that pushing us into it isn't a very good wake up call."

"Sorry.." He whispered. "I sensed someone close by, like someone is following us."

"Did the earth tell you?" I a dit jokingly.

He gave me an annoyed look. "Yes, it did for your information. Any way toi just talked to the tree."

I stared back.

After about 5 secondes Marcus let go of me and Brenna. We began walking again until Marcus pushed us into a green bush.

"What was that for?!" Brenna yelled at him. Marcus put a finger to her lips to shush her.

"I heard him again."

I sighed. "Are toi sure it's a 'him'?" I asked.

"Yes. He's hot."

"Ugh....." awkward. Brenna and I stared at each other. Marcus DID NOT get the memo.

"OH!!!!! No no no I didn't mean it that way I meant like he is burning as in hot! Like his aura is like a fire!"

"Okay that explains it. Now will toi get off of me?" I cried. I freeked and jumped up.

"Wait we may have to-" But we already knew what he was going to say.

A tall boy with blond hair and a tan muscular body of about 14 chucked a feu ball at Marcus. The boy looked like he was a volley-ball player from California. toi know that kind.

He jumped up and sent a path of burning flame towards Marcus's bare feet. (you know, earth elemental)

I screamed and sent a twig to et the burn. Marcus winked at me and sent a charging rock at the boy.

Brenna couldn't do anything, there was no sunlight. Frantically, I sent her up to the haut, retour au début of the arbre and ran behind the boy.

As I slid behind him I turned and found my self a raging grizzly bear. My animal.

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Janie:

A small tear slid down my cheek. I couldn't believe I did that. I had left my family. I knew being there was the key to my survival. Why wouldn't I want to be with them? Learn their ancient secret?

Honestly, I had a feeling this wasn't going to happen to anyone. Finding out you're half loup half human. ou that toi can control one of the elements.

I remembered the times when Danny and I were little. The times when In the summer I would come to her house and play in the water. I could stay in there for hours and never get cold. Danny and I would pretend to be princesses in distress. We would pretend to drown while Danny's dad would play and come save us.

I remembered the jour we bought Daisy. That cute little puppy. I remember how we would make limonade stands so we could go to build-a-bear and buy an animal. I bought a white wolf.

I turned off the iced road and walked through a dark ally. My house is in that kind of area of town. The one where all the robbery happen. I was a block away from my house now. Several times I heard a whisper in my head to turn back and go to Danny. To say I loved her and that I was sorry. I didn't.

I heard a dog bark behind me. I heard a woman scream. I even seemed to hear a woman water her plants in the middle of winter. Ever since I enter through that château back at BOES I had gotten better senses. Better strength. I seemed to have better reflexes as well.

I kicked a bière bottle away from my path into the snow. It was late. I had been walking for hours. It was probably 3 a.m. par now.

Suddenly I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around...but no one was there. Ignoring it I flipped my brown hair out of my face and kept walking. I heard it again. Turning I found no one. But I did see tracks in the snow. And they weren't mine. They were a goat's hoof prints.

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Danny:

After we had tied up the boy with my vines and I was back to human form we had a meeting. WE dragged the boy out to the main rode and decided to ask him who he was.

"who are?" Brenna asked with her hand on her hip.

"What's it to you? I probably shouldn't tell you, besides, toi did attack me." He seemed strong. But I noticed a hint of fear in his voice.

Marcus laughed. "Us attack you? You're the one who chucked a feu ball at me!"

"Ahhh....true."

I laughed. "I don't think you're dangerous. I'm Danny Brown, Daniella Brown actually." Brenna slapped my hand. I rolled my eyes.

"I'm Marcus Lee, and I see your a feu elemental. I'm earth elemental." Marcus a dit while eying me.

He smiled. "You guys are like me. I already knew though. I'm Kyle Shivoni. I'm looking for my Dad."

"We're looking for our friend. She's...." But I stopped Marcus. We couldn't trust this guy. He could be a follower of Laman. If we told him there was now a ice loup shape shifter...we would be in deep doodoo.

"We are looking for our friend. She is....a..." I had to make an excuse. "She is a water elemental."

Marcus nodded at me. Good excuse was what his face said.

"That's cool. Do toi think toi could let me go?" He asked with eagerness in his eyes.

I looked at Brenna. "I don't think we can still trust you." she said. "But we will let toi travel with us. And we will unbind you." She walked over to him and untied his vine binds.

"WHAT!!!???" I a dit in astonishment. I thought we WEREN'T going to trust him!! So toi unbind him and let him travel with us?

**************************************************

Janie:

I screamed at the touch of his ice cold hands. And I don't get cold. They were raspy and weird. the touch of them on my shoulder made me jump and scream. I turned around to see who he was. No one was there. After I turned around again I-


"AAAAAAHHHHH!!!" I screamed. I was face to face with a man with dark red eyes, long black hair, a scrunched up face, a long freaky scar draped across his cheek, and a long pointed nose.

I knew who he was. As he spoke his toung was a Snake's slithered strip of flesh that always scares me. I don't think toi can really call it a snake's toung though.

"Who....are...you?" I whispered in a scared voice. His hot breathe smelled of gasoline which was odd.

After a moment of his red eyes glaring into mine he answered. "I'm Laman. toi should know that par now."

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posted by genyva
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Cold Toes

Prologue
June 30, 2004
11:45 Open Door Eating


It’s the worst jour in the world for a lunch date. I look like hell my light brown hair was frizzing like a poodle. Damn this humid summer, only in Texas the humidity 90% all the time. And this place is like a hut; all the hot air coming from the windows is blowing out the A/C. How is any one able to enjoy lunch when they are drinking the air?

I looked over to Ethan, who was making his way towards the table. We had been together so long in this little town. I l’amour it to death but I think its time to déplacer out. Greene, Texas...
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posted by twilight0girl
 isaac
isaac
this mois is going to be terrible.
i live in barrow alaska.this is thier mois of complete,totall darkness.also,this is when the vampires come out to feed on the helpless men,women,and children.but instead of shaking in pure fear,i'll go out and see how they act.but i'm also going out because my two brothers,isaac and marcus,are vampires too.

__________________________________________________
4 days later

i've never walked around outside during this time of month.i can hear the screaming coming from every direction.i havent seen any va,pires nor my two brothers.when i started to walke away...
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posted by BeSafe
I chanced a glance at you
from across the crowded room
and that was when I noticed
toi were looking at me too

we both know this shouldn't happen
its a road we've been down before
and the only way it ever ends
is with toi walking out the door

so I wish someone would explain to me
why I'm still rooted in place
staring in the direction
of just another lonely face

my mind is screaming at me to run
while my cœur, coeur asks me to stay
for a moment I dont know what to do
and if its a price I'm willing to pay

we both know this is wrong
the l’amour that we share
but we also know that wont stop us
because to find this kind of l’amour is rare
posted by Maria_Quinn8
salut guys I'm new here and I just want to tell u guys how to become a mermaid for those sirènes lovers
I only know 1 spells and I hope it works for u guys
SPELL1#
these 're the following items needed
cup of water with salt mixed in it
voice
steps to take
put ur hand in the salty water ou fresh water if u want
say the spell 3 times
sirènes in the sea oh so fast and free
I wish to be one of u, I will have a tail colour of ()
and the power to () water
I will get my tail and power in ten minutes but no later
mermaid when wet, human when dry
10 secondes is all it takesto transform
so mote it be×2
U might get ur tail after 10 minutes but it might work for some people
BEWARE:U CHANGE AFTER ONE DROP OF WATER
Good luck
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posted by jacob_lover5253
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Ashelyn (Ash):

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posted by emmett
Lonely Girl

So peaceful in sleep she lies
Brown hair spilled across her pillow
I can picture her beautiful eyes
Looking into her dreams…

She looks like she’s not listening
But really she’s deep in thought
Remembering forgotten memories
When she lived life as she ought

Stolen kisses in the night
Laughing with her friends
Little did she know back then
This is where it all would end

Her cœur, coeur is filled with regret
Always looking back
She wishes she would just forget
And find happiness once plus

I don’t think she’ll ever forget you
But for now there’s joy on her face
She keeps reminding herself
It’s not a race, to be the first to find your place

Now as the sun goes down
She’ll say a prayer
Wishing perhaps for you
But really, life’s not that fair
There’s nothing this Lonely Girl can do
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posted by Rae-Ash
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To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

As we wish upon the stars
For the very first time
We stand there
Like time is ours
In a world
That's speeding by

Do toi know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

So here we stand
In the wake of our dreams
Hoping and wishing
For a day
That they can come true
Hoping for a world
Where I can fit

Do toi know what it's like
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To be so different
That no one understands?

Now I sit here all alone
In a world where I just don't fit
I sit here alone
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posted by DarkGirl23
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It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know toi hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...
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