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posted by greenstergirl
 My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible
My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible
Her scream was high pitched. The kind where toi get a shiver down your back. The kind when someone scrapes their nails on a chalk board. The kind where the person screaming is in utter pain. But gladly it wasn't all the way like that.

toi would think the water elementals would be plus careful around the giant sea snake. It's one of the many creatures that live in our vally's lake. Some of the water elementals are even poisson ou sea snake shape shifters. Thats why I laughed when one of them screamed at the giant serpent.

Trixi yelled at me for my rude behavior and we ran towards the snake. From far away it looked dangerous but up close I could see it better. It wasn't the sea snake that sacred the swimmers. It was the thing on the sea snake.

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Janie:

Even if I was many miles away from it, I seemed to hear a scream, a girls scream.

"What was that?" I asked Zuka, interrupting my bubble of water and letting it fall to the ground.

"I don''t-" But Zuka stopped speaking. He dropped his head to the floor and began sniffing.

"Janie.......we need to go down there..now."

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After we ran down the rocky hillside to the lake we could now see what really happened. A gigantic green and blue sea snake was swimming frantically with an odd thing on its back.

A long silver spear was stabbed into the back of the sea serpent and it was covered with blood.

"Oh My Gosh!!" I screamed as I ducked from the snake as it violently turned. "What are we going to do?" I asked confused. "And who stabbed him?"

Zuka's face looked grim. "Laman did it."

"Who's Laman?" I asked.

"Laman is the only other energy elemental in the world besides me. He was brother's with Nephi. But apparently he went toi know....."

"Yea yea I get it. This is a magical world. toi have to have a bad guy. Woopde doo."

"NO SHUT UP!!" Woa. Not cool. WE ran down towards the sea serpent.

It had fallen down in a splash. A tall Chinese girl was crying at the sea serpents feat.

"What's wrong?" I asked her. Danny and a girl with freakishly curly red hair came par me.

"The Sea serpent is dying Janie. I t was stabbed par an energy sword. It is made par an energy elemental. Energy elementals can bring life ou death. This snake will die."

I wasn't listening. To her at least.

"Well can't one of us heal it? Zuka is an energy elemental. He can bring it life can't he?"

The red haired girl finally spoke. "No. Zuka isn't like Laman. Laman is the one who stabbed the sea serpent. We saw him earlier. Laman is an energy chimera shape shifter. Zuka is just an energy elemental."

"What about these guys!?" I asked while pointing at all the people siting on the bank of the pond.

"No. They may be water elemental's they can heal. But they can't heal an energy elemental's doing."

I rolled my eyes and sat down. I pulled at my dress. Why was I supposed to wear this? It has nothing to do with what I am. Why can't I wear jeans and a T-shirt like all the other kids can?

I got up and passed Danny and her 'new' best friend. I ran strait to Mrs Brown. "Mrs. Brown I want to leave this crazy place and never, ever come back. And if toi would like to know, your daughter is a huge jerk who takes pride in hurting her best friend."

And thats when I walked out. In my blue dress. in my hatred for that place. In my happiness to leave it all. But also, in that small feu of hope inside of me. Saying, I may actually be a bit sad to leave it all. But it was still little.

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Danny:

I stared, with my mouth open. I couldn't believe how stupid she could be!! Good ridens. She was a bad friend anyway. I knew I was lying. I somehow wished she hadn't left.

Brenna was quiet the entire time. But finally she spoke after everyone left to go take care of the serpent and to go home.

"Danny, toi have to go after her. It's only the right thing to do." Brenna whispered.

"She doesn't want this." I a dit on the verge of tears.

"No, but she is our secret weapon now. Laman is now at large. We all thought he was dead. She is the only one who can withstand his powers. Ice and energy can't hurt each other. loup and Chimera can't either."

(If toi want to know what a chimera is it is a Greek Mythology creature that was half lion, half goat, half snake.)

"I guess you're right." I whispered. The BOES all decided that since we now knew that Laman was alive we all needed to stay inside the Vally for safety.

Wait. toi should probably know the story of Laman. toi know, never mind. You'll figure it out.
Brenna, Marcus, and I all decided one thing. We were going to sneak out that night. And go look for Janie. Not even my mother knew.
 Sorry its upside down.....its my attempt to draw Janie. I don't think it worked.
Sorry its upside down.....its my attempt to draw Janie. I don't think it worked.
posted by Kimi4312
heres a song about me and my boyfriend enjoy :)Lyrics:
As a very small girl, I met a boy, hes so sweet,

I was shy and he wasn't, he always watch out,

He never left my side, I never left his side,

Because we're stuck together,

Always be stuck together,

His new girlfriend showed up but I don't like her,

He is blinded par her but I know her l’amour is a lie,

I seen him being unhappy everyday since she show

But I ask salut wanna hang out at my house,

Then he a dit yeah and we start hanging out,

We are stuck together and always will be,

I have been stuck to his side forever,

Then we been playing video games and laughing,...
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I starred down at the skinny "liar" in my hands.I couldn't be pregnant.Pregnancy test could be wrong right?At that moment I didn't know whether i should scream ou pass out."What happened to perfect little Annie?" I thought to myself."The one who had gotten into a ivy league school and would be attending in the fall?Well she was gone now,along with her virginity."
In case toi hadn't figured it out already,I'm Annie,Annie Green and I'm PREGNANT!Shivers went down my spine as the words echoed in my head.This was my fault;and Emett's of course.Emett is the "thing's" father."That's even if I have...
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posted by VAMPirella1997
this my poem...I just wrote it randomly...Don't know if it's any good...what do toi think?

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If toi l’amour him,
Tell him so.
If toi l’amour him,
Tell him not to go.

The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.

Don’t hide away,
Wishing all day,
Don’t hide away,
Just come out and say.

“Yes, I l’amour you,
I’ve told toi so.
And if toi l’amour me,
Please don’t go.”

“Yes, I l’amour you,
I’ve told toi so.
And if toi l’amour me,
Please don’t go.”

“Please, please,
Please don’t go.
Please, please.
Please, please don’t go.”

So, if toi l’amour him,
Tell him so.
If toi l’amour him,
Tell him not to go.

The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
posted by lilacool
Little raindrops shiny,silver,
Dropping silently into the river.
A girl sitting quiet,alone,
Her smile is fading,her hope is gone.
It faded really long ago,
That sounds sad,i know.
She quickly wipes away a tear,
It's her secret so no one can hear.
She secretly cries every night,
It's her fate,so she cant fight.
She touches a raindrop and goes back inside,
She is so lost,she's losing her pride.
All she asks for is a friend,
Someone to be there and understand.
So help her to make her dream come true,
There's always something toi can do.
posted by shomill
He has feu in his eyes.

Burning, flaming, blazing with his fury,
But not at me,
Never at me,
For I am his love,
The one he holds above
All others. His fury
Is for those who would harm me,
Who would dare to bring amer tears to my eyes.
They alone see the full fury of his fire.

He has feu in his eyes.

They sparkle when he smiles,
Crackling feu behind dark irises.
They are beautiful because of the firelight behind them.
What is he thinking of as he smiles at me,
The flames in his eyes gleaming brightly?
He's thinking of the thing we both hold dear,
The treasured, precious l’amour we share.

He has feu in his...
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posted by T-lover
what I'm écriture isn't exactly an article , but I hope toi will enjoy it ^_^ ..

Girl; Do I ever traverser, croix you'r mind ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do toi like me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do toi want me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would toi cry if I left ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would toi live for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would toi do anything for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Choose me ou you'r life ?
Boy; My life .

The girl runs away in shock and pain and the boy runs after her and says ....

*The reason toi never traverser, croix my mind is because toi are always on my mind .
*The reason why I don't like toi is because I l’amour toi .
*The reason I don't want toi is because I need toi .
*The reason I wouldn't cry if toi left is because I would die if toi left .
*The reason I wouldn't live for toi is because I would die for toi .
*The reason why I'm not willing to do toi anything for toi is because I would do everything for toi .
*The reason I chose my life is because toi are my life .
posted by Bella_Swan3
Taylor had never shadow-walked with no destination in mind. Shadow walking was something she was slightly afraid to do. It made her feel unbalanced, as if she had been donné too much control. Like standing on the edge of a cliff, the wind pushing toi to jump, and some part of toi secretly wanting to succumb to it's persuasive power.

She opened her eyes to the flat, glassy expanse of water in front of her. The tiny sliver of the moon was distorted par the waves.

Granted, shadow walking allowed her to appear wherever she wanted, but to her, it also served as a constant reminder that she was not...
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slowly climbing

inch par inch

bringing me closer

to my doom

papillons of

anticipation

flutter nervously

in my stomach

knuckles whiten

jaws clench

what have I

gotten myself into

the suspense

is killing me

I'm going to hate it

I'm going to l’amour it

I might lose my lunch

but I don't care

heaven help me

here it comes...

...

I hold my breath...

...

and then
I scream
my stomach
drops
my breath
is stolen
my heart
is pounding
adrenaline
courses
through
my veins
amid screams
of sweet terror
I fling up
my hands
and ride on
the wings
of Thrill!
posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I walked in and saw Dawn and Thor. I walked over and gave them both a look. “Where are mom and dad” I asked looking around the house. Dawn smile. “Still in Australia” I looked at Dawn with a confused smile. “Well then what’s going on” I asked. I was angry at Thor and Dawn and not because of Liz ou that mom and dad were still in Australia, but because they weren’t telling me anything. “Well?” I asked. Thor looked at me but he didn’t smile he just stared at me. “We were told to go home, we don’t know anything” he a dit in a palourde voice. I heard a bang, I turned and saw...
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posted by CheeryDavis
Hi, so this is my first story put on here! It's in poem style so i thought what the foins, hay i'll post it! so here it is:

the sky turns black and gray
all the color withers away
but in your arms i will stay
come what may

the lights could dim
the sky could fall
the world could stand still
but your arms are all i can feel
and in them i will stay
come what may

the waves come crashing
pulling me into the deep
but your arms are all i can feel washing over me
and as toi pull me up and hold me close
i know that toi will never let go
in your arms i will stay come what may

the sky shines bright for the first time is...
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posted by iluvtheshow
I remember the jour I fell in love.
Not just simple love.
No, this was head over heels, I'd die for toi love.
I remember where I fell in love.
A small middle school in a small town.
A place toi could easily miss.
I remember the my matchmaker.
A short women, but with plus feu then toi could ever imagine.
plus passion for what she does then I had ever seen.
I remember my girlfriends who were with me.
My athletic, sassy, fun-loving chicks.
My flirting consultants.
I remember him.
Good God, he was beautiful.
Yes, I remember the jour I fell in love.
True Love.
Head over heels love.
With..................
Basketball.

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This is dedicated to my first real basketball, basket-ball coach. She taught me not just how to play basketball, but how to be part of a team. I have so much respect for her and I know I should thank her everyday for helping me fall in love. For Coach Joy.
posted by CullensFinest13
toi hurt me I hope toi die I cant belive I trusted toi I cant belive I loved toi I cant belive I stayed up and worried that toi wouldnt call. I cant belive that i loved toi i trusted toi and cared for you. im tired of toi its time i let toi go but your always there toi wont leave me alone...its time for toi to leave so never come back walk out of my life i am going to lock my door and never let toi back in stay out so i can be happy toi need toi need to die let me live my own life toi shouldnt be controlling me anymore im not property im a human and i dont belong to the likes of you, toi were...
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posted by vampiress015
I presuming we all joined this spot 'cos we l’amour to write, right? If so then toi all know what I'm talking about when I say that we all l’amour our main characters and sometimes want to make them the best people in the world.

B-O-R-I-N-G

Yes, we want to make our main character gets the best out of the story, since it's their story. But if they're the best people in the world it doesn't really make them believable and then the reader just doesn't care about them (which is hard to understand cos we as the writer l’amour em, but unfortunantley it's true)

So here is my step-by-step guide to make sure that...
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posted by Sweet_Pants
Just a poem. I hope it isn't much of a bother to rate.

I dream of all things

Uncertain of dark deeds and pasts

Within these thoughts as dark as sea

When once those wings of black

Hung over all

Shadowing but of the wretched white

That blinds me of all beauty.

I dream of all things

From happiness to highs

Let down these pills

ou I’m gone, retreat inside my mind

Where none but the darkest thoughts

Swallowing twilight

I dream of all things

From the stories told par hidden scars

Unable to montrer themselves

Under this intense scrutiny

That makes up this world’s attire

To the times that I could be happy

Without a drug to create

The much-needed illusion...


I dream of all things
No matter of their contents
Because, well,
Nightmares are still dreams.
posted by mrs-mindfreak
I decided to do a story where I put my iPod on shuffle and start writing. Lucky for me, all the songs were basically sad ou angry music. So this is what I came up with :)

The rain pattered on the windows drowsily, drowning out Alana’s choking sobs. She sat in her favori wooden rocker, and buried her face in her hands miserably. Her black hair clung to her sweaty face. Her clammy palms were wet from tears. She never wanted to déplacer from that spot again. Although she was filled with irrevocable remorse, she felt comfortable there. No one in the house, rain falling softly outside, and just...
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‘You shouldn't have shot the dog.’ That single thought reverberated inside my head, knocking from side to side, smashing at the sides of my skull until I had to put my hands to my temples in a futile attempt to stop the pain. The man sitting suivant to me took a swig of his whiskey, the glass bottle knocking against his yellowed and rotten teeth. His other hand held onto the steering wheel, maneuvering the car down the winding and deserted stretch of highway. I leaned my head against the cool glass of the passenger side window, willing my head to stop pounding. From the radio, the soft strains...
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 The Writer Behind the Words
The Writer Behind the Words
Luck has little to do with link. A long lasting écriture career doesn’t just happen. A writer can burst onto the scene and quickly disappear. Another can have a series of hits then write a bunch of flops and never be heard from again. The difference between a long lasting career and one that burns out is strategy. Here are seven rules to help toi find the right strategy for toi and get toi started on your journey to long lasting success.

Learn the power of focus. For most of us, we have plus than enough to do on a daily basis. And when it comes to any écriture project the liste can grow exponentially-...
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The fragrance of scotch pine and blue épicéa, épinette is pungent in the air, amplified par the heat of late June. ou so toi think it is June. This place feels oddly void of time. toi open your eyes to see a sun hazed over par stratus clouds. From all angles toi spy familiar wooden structures.
You are back.

You sit up with your legs tucked under your bottom and bask in the estival air and all of the scents that waft within it. toi furrow your brows, thinking that it is not as clean as before. Even so, the place hums with earthy energy. A stronger gust of wind picks up the hem of your chemise and flutters...
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (3): Mask




When the curtain rises, all is forgiven.

I’ll brush it all off with a movie-star smile,

A genuine laugh, but my eyes must be hidden,

The truth they contain is considered too vile.

My voice is a song that will play through your ears,

And invite toi to dance to the sound of my tune,

I take a bow, deeply, and drink in your cheers,

I’ll always remain here,

You’ll come see me soon.

A new jour is dawning,

“Quick, put on your mask!”

And hurry outside, meet the crowd.

“Where’ve toi been?”

With fanciful réponses to all that toi ask,

I’ll always wait here for...
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posted by WritingBookWorm
So, one of my New’s Years Resolutions this an it to write more. So, I decided to make this:

The goal is to write something every day.

Starting on the 31st of January, every jour there is a vague word, idea, object, question, statement ou anything. toi can take it anyway toi want.

Then each jour toi should write what it tells toi too ou something inspired par it. Whether it be a poem, a small scene, a character description, journal entry, short story ou even just one really well crafted sentence.

Even if the prompt confuses you, ou toi have no ideas just write something! It’s a great exercise...
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