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posted by CheekyCheese
Sorry if this isn't very good!

Angel was so excited, her best best Friends were coming for her birthday sleepover at five o clock! Time crept slowly to ten past five and still not a single soul in sight! Suddenly her little sister Summer shouted “Ha Ha they're not coming they hate toi so much!” Angel ran upstairs weeping and charged desperately into her sister Friday's room.


“Was Summer being mean to toi again?” asked Friday
“Yes, she a dit that my Friends weren't coming because they hate me and that's not true!”
“Don't worry its only because she is jealous about toi having the best sleepover ever”said Friday
Suddenly Angel heard a knock at the door “I'll get it!” she called out. As soon as she opened the door Yvonne started chant happy birthday and was holding a large oval shaped present neatly wrapped up in sparkly purple paper. Angel and Yvonne hugged and while they were doing so Tillie appeared holding a square box covered in 'Happy Birthday' paper. They were all catching up on gossip when the cloche, bell rang “That must be Aliona!” shouted Yvonne and they all ran to the door. “Hello people!” Aliona shouted in her excited American voice.
“I hope you've all remembered your swimming costumes because after thé we're going for a swim in the lake!” exclaimed Angel
“Right time for the presents!” anges mum souci, marigold shouted. First of all Angel opened Tillie's present which was a short book and a fleur craft set. Then she opened Aliona's, which was an art box with pencils and charcoal all neatly in arc en ciel order.
“Oh thank toi Aliona! I have been wanting this for ages!”
“Your pleasure” a dit Aliona feeling pleased that Angel had liked her gift.
“Mine suivant mine next!” shouted Yvonne. Yvonne's gift turned out to be a massive tub of sequins, beads and lots of arty things.
“Oh thanks Yvonne!”

After their magnificent party thé the girls went to the lake near Angel's house. “I'll be first in!” Aliona shouted. So Aliona jumped in the lake and screamed at the temperature. The others were too scared so they just left Aliona in there. “I'll try and touch the bottom then” Aliona said. Aliona ducked down sticking her feet in the air and sticking an arm up over the haut, retour au début of the water, waving. A few secondes later Angel, Tillie and Yvonne heard some splashing and saw some bubbles where Aliona had gone down. “She must of reached the bottom!” Tillie shouted excitedly. A number of secondes passed and still no sign of Aliona!
“Where is she?” asked Angel

They waited.
“It's been over nine minutes now!” Tillie shouted, almost in tears.
“What are we going to do?” asked Yvonne who was the smartest of the lot. It was bad news if she couldn't even think of an idea. “We can't exactly tell Angel's Mum, she'll go ballistic!”
“And so will Aliona's parents! They'll never want to see us again!” Things were looking very bad for the girls and they still didn't know what to do.
“Right I'm going in!” cried Yvonne “What? We cant just stand here and do nothing!”
“Y...v..v..v..vonne's right” stammered Tillie who was in tears now “We have to help A..A..Aliona!”
“Right” Yvonne declared “It was nice knowing toi guys!” she hugged both of them and jumped in. Tillie and Angel burst into floods of tears. It was bad enough losing one best friend let alone two!
“Yvonne shouldn't of followed Aliona down there, it could be dangerous!” exclaimed Angel (The
worrier of the group). It was getting dark and the two girls who were still dry were very very worried! It had been over 11 minutes since Yvonne had jumped in and 18 since Aliona had disappeared! “Lets go inside and get Mum!” Angel suddenly decided after lots of pondering. “She'll know what to do!”
“But what if they come back up?!” Angel cried “I'll stay here!”

So Tillie went pelting back towards the house, faster and faster, when she saw a hooded figure in the distance. For a divisé, split seconde she thought it was Angel's Mum but no, it couldn't have been. For Angel's Mum didn't have fiery red hair. Angel's Mum wasn't that tall. Tillie slipped out a small scream. Her legs had frozen. She didn't know why, she didn't know how. The hooded figure turned. It had a chalky white face. Tillie felt her cœur, coeur freeze.
Chapter1 At my school (St.John's) we have only two majoir athletic groups. Those would be football and football. If your not an athlete your a wanna-be ou toi wanna kill one. KIll not being an understatment.

I'm Kris and yes I am both a loathed and suat after person. My being the captin of the girls varsity football team. I was the first captin to reject the boys vrsity captin. As i presume you've taken it under usumption that he didn't agree. Tushay toi say, well I've thrown a spin on it. I'm dateing the wonderful, the glouriuos, the perfect Dakota Dawning(he's the captin of the football team)....
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posted by viju
I'm sitting there lire silent, softly,
People walk par and they roll their eyes,
They don't even know who I am,
And who I could be.
Oooooh
I am plus than what they think I am,
Someday I know I'll prove them wrong.
They walk around just like they're so strong,
When they know they're not.

(Chorus)
Well I guess,
Some guys, they just don't have their brains.
Some gals, they just see me as plain.
Some folks, they just don't have ability,
To see what I could be, to see what I could, I Could be
One day.

I step out feeling like no one understands,
Who I am, Who I am, deep inside.
They just don't get who I really am,...
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 "Mrs.Sanchez?"!!
"Mrs.Sanchez?"!!
My mind started to go off into wonderment.My dream that had startled the crap about Juan marrying me was really starting to get to me.But I just kept telling myself that it it was only because Juan had mentioned marriage the night before,but he was saying that he wasn't the marriage type at all unless he had found "the one."
But it was plus of a joke than anything else.I knew I had to stop it though because Juaney was starting to wake up now and he would easily tell that I wasn't mentally there.So I took a few deep breaths and tried to not to ake him any faster,but then I realized that he wasn't...
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posted by avatarluver990
GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY!! I WILL BE RE-WRITING THIS!! IT'LL BE COMING UP SOON!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICLE!!! Thank you.

Nynxa was still at shore, hiding behind the rock, and watching the humans passing by. She later noticed a castle. A château far from where she was, it was old and it needed paint, but she still gazed at the château and soon fell into a daydream where she was in that castle. Her mother and father and all of her sisters were there! She also imagined that all of the merpeople and humans would someday be friends, and forget about their differences. Her reverie soon popped like...
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posted by XDRoseLuvsHP
I literally just wrote this five minutes ago. It popped into my head, and I was bored, so I jotted down a sort of preface of an idea. I probably won't end up using it, but I thought I might as well get some feedback. It would be historical fiction, which I don't usually do (I'm plus of a fantaisie girl), so ours with me. Here it is:


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I have seen many a young girl wishing that she could be a princess. Beautiful dresses, fancy dances, luxurious meals, flourishing gardens in a majestic palace... who would deny this?

I myself was born a princess. I was...
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posted by TeanRose424
When toi think toi think your in love. Its just a trick. When toi feel like your falling toi are. Your fallin down and down intill toi fall on spikes. The spikes peirce every part of your body but most of all they hit your heart. Thats why toi fell like your bleeding from the inside to the outside. Thats why it hurts so badly.

l’amour can be a trick. But sometime it can be real. It takes a long time to see if it is. During that time your in danger of falling on spikes. BUt if it is real, then, when toi fall, your falling into a heaven on earth. When toi fall with the one your supposed to be with then your arent in danger with the spikes anymore.


Tell me what this artical makes toi feel. If toi think Im right, ou if im wrong, im curios to what toi think. Thankyou!
posted by TeanRose424
 This is when he leaned in to breath down her neck
This is when he leaned in to breath down her neck
When he a dit the word vampire I thought he was bluffing. Then he started to explain it. It sounded just like the twilight book. All the charecteristics of a vampire, they were the same. Stephanie meyer just got one thing wrong. The Changing.


"When toi change it isnt agony," a dit Zach. " It feels like heaven. Your being transformed into a God. It feels like a comfortable warmth. It's so relaxing, toi wish toi could do it again, and again." he said
" That sounds..." I was trying to find the word. "Exilarating" I finished. He smiled. I decided to turn on the lamy suivant to my lit so i could get...
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posted by dragonrider
That same jour - At accueil Athena's perspective

I glance at Tom who was standing right suivant to me "Well that was weird," I said. I looked down at his device
He nodded "Yup. He was never like this before," he a dit putting his hands in his pockets
"What is wrong with him? He seemed pretty freaked out," I asked
"Yeah I don't know. Maybe there is something wrong with his boy ou something because he didn't come back when he went to the bathroom," he said
"That's because he didn't go to the bathroom. I found him in my room. He was gaping at my drawer of undergarments," I a dit smirking
Tom grinned "Maybe...
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posted by OCFan123
In hours, days, months, and years to come, I would not know what posessed me to say yes to tutor Ryan Calving.
Maybe it was the way he was staring at me, those eyes glaring right into mine, impossible to look away. Maybe it was the way a girl with red hair was looking at us, raising her eyebrows, whispering to her brunette friend. I don't know what it was.
But I do know I had a dit yes.
The minute that single word left my mouth, I regretted it. Even when Ryan smiled at me, and started écriture in his notebook.
But it didn't matter now. I was Ryan Calving's tutor. Fantastic.
I could have just said...
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posted by JaCoB_LoVeR_26
How did this happen, nothings write like a plane not taking flight? It’s wrong like a song with no end. ou a paper but no pen. Were this is coming from I cannot explain. Maybe its ur pointless silly games. Like in hide and go seek am I not aloud to peek. toi were wrong and so was I. Are arguments are now in the sky. There done. No redo's ou undo's to bring it back. There finished almost deminished.But toi bring them back. Back again to haunt me. To taunt me into your little game. But it wont work. toi wont get me. Not this time.Cuz my life Is mine.
posted by twilight-rocks9
Chiron was happy to see us back unharmed. Maybel kept staring at me evilly when I was around Tyler (witch was a lot). We were one of the camp couples. Jose told me he liked sherry from Aphrodite’s cabin. She had dark red hair that shined, tan skin and light blue eyes. She had a boyfriend but Jose was sure shed dump him. That night I had the same dream but it was sort of different. “Sorry I haven’t told toi my name daughter I hate these interruptions.” he said. “It’s ok now can toi tell me who toi are?” I a dit this started to irritate me. “Of curse I’m Hades and I sent you...
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A/N: And now the few of the good and many of the bad and the ugly moments begin!! :-)

Chapter Twenty

Jamie groaned loudly when she woke up on her lit with a blanket over her body and was suffering the nastiest hangover she ever experienced since the Marine Ball she went with Michael almost two years expect that Michael isn’t there. He’s still in California, probably packing his things and heading to the airport and flies his way accueil today to be with his wife and three kids. From thinking about him, Jamie felt like she’s about to run over to the nearby bathroom and puke into either the...
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posted by marissa
 “What do toi want me to do… repent ou something?”
“What do you want me to do… repent or something?”
Chapter Four:

Jeremy:

    
“Yeah, right.”
    
“It’s the truth,” Benny said, holding up his hands to montrer that his fingers weren’t crossed.
    
“Whatever toi say, man.”
    
Benny thought for a moment. He had just let Jeremy Greene, a twenty-one-year-old mechanic on his way to visit his girlfriend, in on the fact that he was God.
    
“Okay, don’t believe me, that’s fine. I’m used to it, really,” Benny a dit with a laugh. “But, humour me.”
    
Jeremy huffed,...
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There was a carnival in town that week, and I decided I wanted to go. I called up my best friend Alysa and asked her if she wanted to go with me. She thought it sounded like fun, too, so we met at the entrance of Le papillon (that’s French for ‘the butterfly’) at ten in the morning that day.
    We rode ride after ride until we couldn’t walk a straight line anymore, then collapsed on a bench. It took a couple of tries before my bottom hit the bench, but when it finally did, I laughed so hard that I toppled off the bench and into the prickly bushes. It hurt, but I...
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All the houses were the same. All rather big but looked smaller to me now that I’d grown and extra foot. I closed my eyes and tried to think of my liste reasons why I would want to come back here, to the place that swallowed my childhood in one bite. “New around here, Ma’am?” The casquette, cap driver asked I looked up to the elderly man, his lazy eyes twitched. “No, I grew up here” I told him, he nodded and smiled, his yellow teeth shining. “Right...I thought toi looked familiar” He admitted, I looked down at my now shaking cold hands. “You’re Cybil Jones” he said, looking rather...
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Chapter Nine

Jamie officially had nothing to wear. Even through that there were many pieces of clothes to choose from the closet that she shares with Michael, there was nothing that could impresses Sean who looked like the guy who doesn’t cares what toi wear but he does want toi to have some lunch with him but it was making Jamie nervous as hell.

Looking through the closet for the fourth time while Jake was sitting on the bed, playing with his toy and being his mother’s fashion expert which he had no experience on unless he had spitted on your unattractive clothes after nursing him, Jamie...
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posted by brooki
Hi. My name is Epira, but Epi for short,and I'm 15. I go to a school in the rural South Carolina area, with only 14 people in my class. I have a lot of Friends who get themselves into a lot of trouble. Awsome family, and wonderful life. School starts back today, so it will be the first jour I've seen my Friends in a while!

"Epi!", squealed Kae,who is my bestest of all best friends. We have a lot in common, and l’amour each other like sisters. She has the coolest family and cutest little sister toi ever did see, Mackie. She was the only person I constantly talked to over the summer; I went over to...
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posted by dragonrider
Ugh she's been crying all day! I'm sick of it thought one of Alex's sisters Janet
Janet was the middle child and felt she never got attention. She was never a sensitive child. She never had a close relationship with Alex. Janet was five feet one with blond curly hair with ocean blue eyes. She had on a wavy blue faded dress with a few rips in it.
Janet looked at her hysterical mother. She hated to see her mother cry " Mother stop crying! I'm sure Alex is fine!" she shouted to her hysterical mother
The grandmother in the corner of the cabine near the closed window stood up suddenly "Your daughter...
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posted by TDIlover226
Annie & Ann, The spirits of the devil and and an angel part 1.

It all started out in a little town in missouri, it was surrounded par small hills and cornfields and from it toi could see the beautiful horrizon and watch the sunset. No matter how beautiful this small town was, no matter how colorful, it still held a terrible secret that the towns people struggled to keep. Outside of this town hidden away in the cornfields was the spirit, called Annie. The spirit of the devil, she was truly this, she would terrify the townspeople who went into "her" cornfield. The town did have only one good...
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