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posted by GreenLight24
 4444, Desperata Ave.
4444, Desperata Ave.
Author's Note: Well hello faithful readers and amoureux of écriture alike! This is the sequel to the story "Blacktie." on this club. So, if u haven't read it, go ahead a check it out, as this requires some prior knowledge. If u have read it, then awesome! Revenge is a dish best served in a tuxedo! lol.

The nighttime air was calm and the sky was dyed with a deep and reflective blue-black shade. Blacktie was still giddy over the successful trial run of his mental recall technology. He brushed himself off lightly and straightened his bow tie as he began to walk down Meredith rue towards his final destination: 4444 Desperata Ave. "It's Friday.", he whispered indignantly to himself, "Too glad it's Friday." Blacktie casually strode on for a good ten minutes before he noticed something uncannily disturbing. For the first time, Blacktie was panicing. He quickly set his cane down upon the sidewalk and put a finger to the center of his bow tie. "Goodness!", he exclaimed, "The device! What on Earth happened to the device?" The small metal ball containing the radiation necessary for brainwave interference had been lost. "How could it have fallen-" His train of thought was interrupted and an insane burst of laughter erupted from the tuxedoed murderer. "No matter." He picked the cane back up and began to gently coax the crow's head handle. "The real power lies within our minds." Once again, he felt his pulse quicken and his senses sharpen as his vision became blanketed par that familiar blue film. The tie began to blink plus slowly than it had the précédant night, as if deciding between the eerie blue glow and it's regular black shade. Soon, it had settled entirely on the blue glow. "That's plus like it." Blacktie then closed his eyes and reopened them to find that his vision had returned back to normal, and the tie back to the elegantly fierce black. "The control....", he hissed. "So much...control.

"Push me faster mommy! Push me faster!" "Alright, sweetheart." Blacktie's head jerked towards an image of a short young woman pushing a small child on a balançoire, swing at the park across the street. The park was a ghosttown and the lady and her child were the only two there that evening. "Disgusting.", he spat as his gait quickened. "Mommy, mommy! Look at that man over there! He looks funny!" "Don't say that.", the lady replied in a motherly tone, "It's not polite to point, sweetie." Blacktie suddenly stopped walking and let out an amused chuckle. "Kids these days.", he whispered. Without a pause in between, he began to walk eagerly towards the two. "Good evening, ma'am.", he inquired as he removed his casquette, cap and extended an open hand, "Might I ask what toi lovely folks are doing out at this hour." A little taken aback par the villain's eloquence, the young lady nervously took his hand and shook it slowly. "Well, I just thought Junior and I could use some mommy-son time.", she replied playfully, "...His father is never around. He's out on a business trip." "Oh, really." A thinly disguised sneer took refuge underneath Blacktie's sympathetic frown. "My father was often...away. I see how that could be quite...taxing for a boy such as your Junior here." He cleared his throat. "I believe I haven't taken the liberty of properly introducing myself. I am Dr. R.E Venge, master psychologist." "...Uh, pleased to meet toi Dr. Venge. I'm Amy. And this is James Jr." "Hiya, mister!", the boy exclaimed. "Hello, Junior. How are toi tonight?" Blacktie stared gently into the boy's eyes as his vision re-assumed the blue tint. He was quite pleased with what he saw. The child's gleeful expression shifted into a dazed stare. "I'm alright. How are you?" "Oh, me?", he asked. "I'm just incredible tonight. Going to a dîner party." A wicked smile appeared on the well-dressed villain's face and his vision and tie returned to normal. "Uh, okay Dr. Venge, I think we otta go.", a dit Amy, plus nervous than before. She picked Junior up off of the balançoire, swing and grabbed his hand tightly. He seemed to be slightly dizzy. "Oh, do toi really have to go now? That's quite a shame Mrs....Witherspoon."How did yo-" "Let's just say I'm a different sort of doctor." With that, Amy and her son disappeared into a crimson Mercedes E-Class, and sped down Meredith rue away from the park and the dimly lit balançoire, swing set. "Still working like a charm.", grinned Blacktie.

"Be right back, evryone. Someone's at the door." Margaret Baker walked out of the living room and toward her front door with gentle feet. "Hi, sir. Who are you? I'm not interested in your product." Typical aunt Margaret. "Oh, I'm not selling anything, ma'am.", a dit Blacktie politely. "You see, my name is Dr. R.E Venge. I am a master psychologist. I heard that there was a gathering here tonight." "You heard correctly." Margaret raised a skeptical brow. "Have I seen your before, sir." "Maybe. I'm quite well known in the field of psychology. I've come to inquire about your nephew, Anthony. I've been hearing that he is in dire need of help." "My Anthony? Oh no, sir toi must be mistaken. Are toi one of those crackpot teachers up at that school? I'll have toi know that I am an excellent guardian and that there is absolutely nothing wrong with my Anthony!" "Well, hasn't he been Lost for the last jour ou so?", Blacktie injected, feeling accomplished in dismantling his aunt's argument. "Why, yes...but, I'm going to-" "When are toi going to look for him?" "Well, when...uh, when..." "Let's hear it." "When..uh...tomorrow. After thé is over....Sir I'm going to have to ask toi to lea-" "Looking for him won't be necessary. He's right here." "Anthony!?", she screamed before falling into a dazed stupor. "Now, aunt Margaret. Tell me where my parents are." "I don't know," She was struggling to stand and her body went cold. "They've been dead for ye-" "THE TRUTH, MARGARET!", he demanded. "I don't know." "YOU LIAR!", he yelled. par this time, the whole entryway had been set ablaze par bright blue flames, and the eyes and bow tie shone brightly. "Now look at me, Margaret." The woman involuntarily stared into his hazy blue eye sockets. "Oh no!", she screamed, "Anthony, please!" Her pleas were ignored. "What do toi see?" Margaret was crying heavy tears and knelt down upon the ground as if begging him for mercy. She saw four little girls at church, one of which was separate from the others. She saw that same little girl sitting in the corner of a U.S History classroom, a dunce casquette, cap on her head and a bright red nose strapped across her face. She heard boisterous laughs from the rest of the students. But, most of all, Margaret saw the silhouette of an angry middle-aged teacher holding a wooden rod and frowning coldly at the frightened little girl. Blacktie's eyes and bow tie ceased glowing. "Anthony. I'm sorry.", whispered Margaret as she fell gradually deeper into an endless slumber. "Sorry?", he murmured. "No toi aren't. The glowing blue flames left the entryway and everything was as it was before, but Margaret Baker was dead. Blacktie overheard laughter and lighthearted conversation from the living room. "Jamie.", he hissed angrily, "And Lola."

TO BE CONTINUED
posted by EmoKidSteven
i cant take any more
of these drugs.
the poison,
attacking at my veins,
feu spreading through,
cant breathe.
but i need these,
and i must feel this
in order to get better.
no matter what it takes,
i have to get over you.
and even if this is
the most irrational way
to get over you,
i still intend on doing this.
i dont care how many needles
i must pierce through my arms,
how many seizures i must suffer through,
whatever it takes.
im going to do my best
to forget toi even exist.
i dont care how much cocaine i snuff,
how many pills i take,
how many cuts
slice through my skin,
ou even if i end up
killing myself in the process.
i would be so lucky.
so,whatever it takes
to get over you
is the extreme
im going to have to
accomplish.
i dont care if i live,
i dont care if i die,
i dont care if all of this
is even real ou not.
im just going to do
whatever it takes
to get toi out of my mind.
even if i die...
posted by Karartegirl99
Once upon a time There was a girl named Abby. She loved to talk. Her teachers eventually stopped calling on her.

One day, she talked during a feu while a kid in her class was telling her teacher where the 17 other children were.
The teacher couldn't here her, and the chercher for the children lasted twelve hours. During that time, a gang a volé, étole five computers, three cars, seventeen dogs, and blackmailed the mayor into giving them seven grand.

Abby was expelled from the school.
When she told her parents, they imediately looked for a school for her to go to.
But the only school that gave her acceptence was the class in the juvinille deliquent center.

So she was accueil schooled.

But she caused her parents so much trouble that in a week they Lost their all hair and were standing on the thin line between sanity and the nut house.

So they duct-taped her mouth shut.

THE END
posted by hgfan5602
As I grow to think about it plus and more, and understand it plus and more, I see that, as the saying goes, life is like a game of chess. But I have made my own saying up, which seems plus true to me. Life is like a venture into the unknown. toi never know what might await toi next, plus dangers, ou even happy successes. But one thing is for certain, toi cannot always be happy, ou always be depressed. Life is like a mountain. toi climb it, face all the challenges life brings you. toi dump and break up, toi win and make up. Things happen. toi can't control it most of the time. So never blame yourself for bad things that happened to toi in life. Life gets confusing a lot. But I still strive to reach my goals. Without goals, I would be like a broken-winged bird that could not fly. I would be aimless. I would not become better, build my character. Life is like a venture into the unknown, and I believe that to be true. So true.
I stand here looking at your emotionless, cold face from across this empty field. Behind me stand my most beloved people of all the world besides toi with me. I can hear them breathing nervously along with mines, as I take slow, steady steps towards you. Our breaths get plus nervous as I near you. However your piercing stare will not scare me, even if this act will be the last thing I do. With each step I try to remember through hazy memories what went wrong.

Only weeks il y a toi were a bubbly, lively, cheerful and friendly girl who wanted to have fun. Along with me, we were unstoppable, nothing...
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posted by sweetpea92
CHAPTER TWO
    “Ok well the whole not kicking me thing is definite progress!” I a dit the uncomfortable silence was killing me. His midnight blue eyes for once showed something, I couldn’t tell if it was surprise ou anger, though it was probably anger. That seemed to be a common theme with him. He walked over to me and I noticed that his feet still didn’t make a sound as they brushed against the dry ground.
    “Ok,” He said, “what gave toi the idea that I’m still human?” I rolled my eyes as I brought them up to meet his. “Well for...
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posted by blossomyumyum
I know I asked for too much before
I know I deserved for toi to walk out the door
But toi didn’t need to give it away
I promise toi I’ll give it a try

toi don’t have to buy my love
toi don’t need to give so much
I know I asked for a lot, never seemed satisfied
The word want makes me needy
Cause toi don’t have to buy my love

Wants have become a trigger
I’ll put your white string around my finger
Shouldn’t have asked
I never should’ve asked

toi shouldn’t be buying love,
Don’t give it all away to me
I hope toi finally see
That wanting from toi makes me feel
toi shouldn’t buy my love
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posted by blossomyumyum
Dear Noel,
I wish toi were still here. At times I go back to when we were little- we loved to eat Push Pop Ice Cream and played in the pool every jour at summer. toi were my best friend….. But we were like sisters, playing house with my little brother. Your grandmother got along with my grandmother, too- they talked to each other, and life seemed to be so easy. But then we parted par moving away. I still thought of toi every day, and every night I worried that something would happen to you. But now, you’ve left us all, and gone on to a place only toi and your sister know about, along with...
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posted by graystone
I don't remember how long I've been running on the open grounds. It does seem long enough. But I was determined,devoted. Up above me,I noticed the jet planes streaking through the blue-black sky. I did not care. I did,but I'm not going to pay any plus attention to it than the sinking feeling of hopelessness that wrapped my mind. The grounds were filled with rocks and sharp stones. Any other day,I would have bothered to watch my way trying not to fall onto the sharp stones which threatened to tear my skin,but not today. No,not today...
There were sirens screaming faraway,in my direction and...
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posted by problematic124
****Please don't copy, Enjoy!****
Chapter 1
The new girl
The first thought that came to Phire's mind of the new accueil she was ment to live in for the suivant four years was how strange. Her new hometown looked like something from a movie ou a magazine.
If Phire hadn't known that she was in Open fields she probably would have mistaken this for L.A. ou even Hollywood.
Everywhere Phire looked there was always something there. Whether it was stores ou houses ou even forests, it all looked perfect. What was funny was that Open Fields didn't even have a single farm. Nothing personal to the place but with...
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Max's POV
I ran into my room crying. My head and my cœur, coeur ached. I thought it was clear I loved Fang, but I guess he didn't know. I saw him s’embrasser a blonde haired tramp at school today. I fell on my lit and burried my face in a pillow. I cried.

10 minutes later

I heard my door open, but I didn't dare to look. I knew who it was and I didn't want to talk to him. Fang sat down suivant to me and stroked my back.
"Max what's wrong?" He said, worriedly. I just shook my head.
"What's wrong?" I took my head out from under the oreiller and stared daggers at him. I didn't care my mascara was running ou that...
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1) Girls (at the age of 15 ou so) think about sex just as much as guys do... The only catch is some of us think about it for the emotional parts, and some of us like it for the physical parts. You'd be surprised who is in which group.

2)If toi like us, tell us. Do not be worried about what we'll think, because we are flattered no matter if we like toi ou not.

3) Most of the time girls are 99% sure when a guy likes us. The only way to be 100% sure is if toi tell us.

4) For some strange reason I've always found myself to become attracted to guys that like me. (Unless they're super creepy and stalk...
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posted by dawnisbeauty
She sat there,at the foot of the bed,holding the book in her trembling hands.Rain fell,slamming against the window.The room was cold,dark,gloomy despite the bright blue of the walls.Somehow,blue didnt seem so bright anymore..not without her wide dimpled smile to liven it up.Lisa...the name filled her mind,sending little pinpricks of raw pain throughout her body.Lisa,bright thrteen an old Lisa,her only little sister was gone.Tears spilled from Jane's eyes.She looked out the window.Max was standing in the porch,his handsome face tight with concern.Somewhwere in her mind,she,Jane knew it was...
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posted by princess_mimi
salut guys...I'm very much nervous... This is my very first writing.. I've never write anything in my whole life except for school essays ....I will update it in 3 parts... please if u like it leave a comment... criticism is also well-comed


Darjeeling,India. Darjeeling is definitely one of the most beautiful places on the earth. Every single thing of Darjeeling is beautiful. Its a dit that Great dangerous are always lurking behind every beautiful thing, same is here. Every single thing have its own story here. Some of them will make toi happy and the others will make toi sad ou it will make you...
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posted by para-scence
"Alessa! What happened?!" Micah shouted. I had a long, somewhat deep scar around my face. Last night Dad pushed me down the stairs, and the railing had scratched my face. But I just shook my head.

"Nothing. I just fell," I said. He sighed and shook his head.

"Would toi please be plus careful? Do toi know what it'd do to me if anything happened to you?" I frowned.

"I'm sorry," I a dit quietly. He rolled his eyes and hugged me.

"C'mon. We're late for school."

***

After school, I told Micah I wanted to go to the park ou something; just to have fun. I didn't tell him I was still afraid to go home. He...
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posted by StarWarsFan7
Author's Note: "Look, now I am going to tell toi a story of the life of Rosemary Vega a.k.a me."

I am 11 years old.
My birthday is on March 25.
I am very talented at écriture stories, chant like famous people (example: Shakira, Selena Gomez, Demi Lovato and Lady Gaga) I l’amour to act!
When I grow up I want to be singer ou a voice actress.
I am interested in étoile, star Wars, Pokemon, Everybody Hates Chris and George Lopez.
My favori pokemon are: Jirachi, Roserade, Mismagious and Meganium.
I was born in Wilson, North Carolina.

Thank toi for giving me your time to read this article! :D
posted by HarryPLover
 "Overall, I can say that I do l’amour him.."<3
"Overall, I can say that I do love him.."<3
I was still in his tight embrace. I never noticed how warm he was. Well maybe because I have never really hugged him like this before. I was just happy to have him back.
"Mmmmm. I missed you." I heard him whisper in my ear.
"Mmmm...No I'm pretty sure I missed you." I manged to whisper back. It felt a little weird saying that too him. I didn't want to be all rude and not say it back, but I just.. I still haven't decided whether I actually wanna go through with this ou not.
Granted, I did say that I do l’amour him like l’amour him, l’amour him, but at the same time I l’amour him as my best friend and right...
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posted by rAsberrStrarS
He took my face in his hands, so normally-as if it were a natural instinct to be doing something like this with me.
My breath caught in my throat,as we inclined our heads towards each other in perfect unison.
His lips were warm and soft and sweet,all at the same time,the sensation blinded me.That he was s’embrasser me,not other better girls who'd had plus experience.My cœur, coeur was beating like a birds wings fluttering together in my chest.
Taylor pressed his forehead against mine ans sighed,his breath warmed my face.
We pulled back form each other but still twined our fingers together like we were never...
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