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I have just read a paragraph from what could possibly be, the worst book that I have seen in a long time. Fifty shades of Grey does not even have a good story line. The man Mr Grey is a complete pervert that is obsessed with SM. He meets this woman, warns her that he is a creep, and the woman stays!
WHAT THE HELL!
The novel apart from this is filled with parts where Mr Grey has sex with this woman practically everywhere in his house. Yet many woman seem to l’amour this complete piece o rubbish.
And that is not even the worst part. The novel is full of the worst grammatical errors I have ever seen. It´s like a perverted 11 an old child wrote this (and yes children are awful today too).
I mean this stuff makes Mills and Boon look clean and normal.
What is the world coming to honestly, people around my mother´s age are bragging about this book saying how much they l’amour it. This is just as bad as pornography. Which is exactly what Fifty shades of Grey is, it is porn for women.

toi don´t even have to read the whole book series to know this, just one paragraph ou page tells toi that already. The novel also portrays women in a very sexist light as it promotes male domination of women sexually. The fact that women can be so engrossed in something like this is sickening.
What ever happened to independent women in literature?
What ever happened to women´s modesty?
What example is a novel like this portraying for women of a younger generation?
I don´t know exactly how novels like this will affect people in future, but I do know that it won´t be for the better.
posted by HarryPLover
Its too dark
Too dark to see what is going on
Tripping over the couch
Slamming into the wall
stepping on the remote
It was too dark
The undone dishes
The scattered roses
The broken picture
My broken heart
It was too dark
Believing it would change
That he would change
A Waste
A waste of my time
My Effort
The “No Messages” left on my phone
It was too dark
It was too dark to see what had happened
Too dark to try to fix things
Its just too dark
Someone turn on the light
That light bulb in my head of what Ive done wrong
Its too dark
Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter One: BEST PROM EVER
It was December on Christmas Eve. Tucker and Kaylee were on their way to the midnight prom when, they ran into Ashlynn and Luke. They were on their way to prom too. Then they all went in the same car. On their way they ran into Hannah and Jacob, so they all rode together, when they ran into Anne and Jordon, then they went to prom. When they got there Haley was taking pictures about 10 minutes later Haley went up to Sean, the DJ, and Haley asked Sean to play a pop song. Then, Haley’s boyfriend, Zack came and they danced.
        Later...
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Book 2


Alexander Riley
Cruz

















9. N E A R T H E L I M I T


After a few weeks, Mariah was recovered from the accident. I didn’t really expect she would come and get me. She just appeared in the racing tracks in the other night telling me to slow down. I was surprised, though. It’s like she was concerned. I didn’t know why I kissed her in the forehead. I’m pretty sure she expects that we’ll be touching lips par then. But, that didn’t bother me too much.
Mariah is a great person. She’s thoughtful, funny, well what else can I say, gorgeous? I guess that’s the right word to describe...
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This Story begans with a man. And his Brother Tom. Tom Was 20 yrs old n Played Gutiar in a band called Tokio hotel. Tom Was cacasin n had dirty blonde long dreads. Always Wore Gucci Close n Fifty59s (Type of hat) he Was 6,2. his Twin Brother bill on the Other Hand. had blk long Hair like a lion. Cacasin n Dresses Rocker Style 6'2. Wears Make up n Nail polish. n is The lead Singer in Tokio hotle. in That band r 2 Other mebers of That band Gustav n George
Gustav has Short Hair big Glases n is The Drumer. George has Shighty long hair down 2 his Sholders n Was The basse, bass Gutairest. This band n These...
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This one is pretty short but I've been so busy, hope toi like it commentaire and tell me what toi think.

Elena’s POV
I woke up to find the curtains being draw open and Stefan gone. Every thing seemed a little fuzzy. I could see a figure walked towards me. I sat up in lit and rubbed my eyes.
“Good morning sleeping beauty.” Damon spoke softly. When things came back to focus I saw Damon half dressed, wearing just a pair of sweats.
I ran my fingers threw my hair pulling it out of my face. “Where’s Stefan.” “Not here, in fact it’s just toi and me. Hungry?”
He got up and headed for the...
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Chapter 1.
    I had just moved into forks, Washington, me and my brother Eddie were
close so after our parents died Eddie didn't leave me out of his sight.
I was unpacking and going through my things when I heard the door cloche, bell
ring. I knew who it was because every time I moved the people suivant door
would come and welcome us. Well I figured it was our neighbor.
    I heard the door open and heard talking. I looked like a slob in my
baggy t-shirt and my shorts. So I changed into jeans and a long rose
tank top. I walked down stairs and a dit my hellos I let...
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Katherine’s POV
I leaned off the mur smiling. “I can tell that toi didn’t miss me.” I a dit turning to Stefan my smile fading.
I turned back to Damon smiling. “I can’t tell much if toi miss me with all that ‘I l’amour toi Elena.” I glided my hands over his perfectly sculpted abs. His chemise so thin toi could feel every little curve.
My fingers moving up his stomach one par one. “You seem to l’amour Elena so much, have toi ever wanted to tasted her blood, because I know I’ve been dying to.” I a dit running my thumb over his lower lip.

Damon’s POV
From the moment she spoke my body...
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Elena's POV

"Why don't toi sit down and we can talk." I was pressed tightly up against the counter. "No need to be scared." Katherine was smiling as she took steps towards me. "Katherine this is between Damon, Stefan and toi not me." Katherine tilted her head and shook it tell me no. "Honey this is about you."

Damon's POV

"How the hell could toi do that? Damon I asked toi to do this for Elena." Stefan was furious. I just rolled my eyes. "Your just upset because she may also have feelings for me to, just like Katherine."

Stefan sat there shaking his head. "Don't toi get it Damon Katherine never...
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So, I am alway on the look out for écriture contests with inspiring prompts for me to enter. I got really exited when I found this one:
link because I had an idea for it right away. I spent all afternoon researching the Battle of Little Bighorn, because I wanted to set it in the aftermath of that battle, and écriture it, instead of écriture a biography of William Blake that I was supposed to be doing for school :P. then, when I went to go soumettre it, I figured out the people wanted me to sign up for a membership to their website for $6.75 a mois to enter the contest, which I don't really want to....
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
17: Wheel in the Sky

Dying is not what most people think it is-nothing flashes before your eyes, there’s no white light ou what have you. The only thing I felt was pain, the blood flowing through my chemise and fingers, making them sticky and beginning to form a manteau on my clothes. I couldn’t see much beyond the few feet in front of me, the sun had long such set and darkness had fallen on rapide, swift wings. There was one sound: my blood pulsing like it was right in my ears. Eventually I made it to the herbe colline where I fell, too weak to walk another step.
While I lay there, certain I was destined...
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 "You know... I'm not...the one toi love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be plus adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, ou even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Bobby’s p.o.v

After I had spent the night with Tayce I went back to the protector’s dorms, they weren’t as nice as the house ou cleaner for that matter but it was a place to sleep. I noticed Kale sitting on his lit lire some chapter book Belinda had recommended earlier this week. He looked up and smirked. “Where did toi go?” he asked, I coughed and sat down suivant him. “Walk” I said, his judgmental eyes followed mine. “Gee that was so convincing” He said, I playfully pushed him. “So what, it’s not like I’m the killer” I said, I could tell he believed me, but he still...
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Chapter 8: not a sweet life
I woke up with Damien's arms tightened around my naked chest.ewww eww eww eww, I swear I’ll kill him! i slid myself out of his grasp and flew to my closet I quietly wore something to escape from him while I was putting on my jeans I was thinking of some place where Damien cant find me, I really couldn’t think of any where so I grabbed my bag and headed to the door hope fully Damien was still sleeping I opened the door and quietly closed it behind me I rushed to my car when jasper interrupted me
-Bella what's wrong? Your so scared and worried.
Not a good timing please...
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Parvulo clapped his hands together, the cage closed in on the Karkadann, and then it just vanished, Parvulo then returned to Grito’s shoulder. “You did well; toi lasted the full 10 minutes” a dit Grito. They understood that this was their first case, so really it was a test and they passed. “It is time for us to go” a dit Grito. Parvulo summoned the portal over them all, most likely that Alec was unable to walk properly. This time it was not cold, they saw each other and could talk freely. “How toi doing over there, man?” Marley Asked. Alec gave him the thumbs up (Which still meant...
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The four of them started walking straight ahead, if this was a large creature you’d think toi could spot the thing. Grito a dit they can be quite the handful and we can’t kill it, just capture it. “See anything yet?” Opal Asked. “Grass, lots and lots of grass” Marley Answered. After giving Marley an evil look, they continued through the field. Little did they know, this field, was no normal flied. “It’s about time, right?” Parvulo Asked. As Grito washed his face, he answered “Yeah, the field will break apart soon”. Just after Grito spoke the ground shook. “What was that?...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella toi finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see toi vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend ou something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella toi were sleeping here for 100 years!and now toi finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...
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Skiro
My first class was chemistry and I sat in the seconde row suivant to a skinny girl with short blond hair talking to another girl behind us. From their conversation I learned her name was Stacey and the other was Beonca and they were both cheerleaders.
The teacher started to talk about the rules and objectives for this an but no one was paying attention,they were much plus interested in texting on their cell phones ou passing notes to the person suivant to them. I wasn't that interested in what the teacher a dit ether so my mind wondered off....
The cloche, bell woke me out of my jour dreams. As Stacey...
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posted by ashesandwine
Sorry for just posting it in this spot now:( If toi want toi can rejoindre my spot and lire it as soon as it's ready:D


"Daniel POV"



We wrote so much letters to each other, even if we were just a few blocs away... I still remmember our first letter; I had so much to say, so much that I wanted her to know, how could I put all of my l’amour into one letter? So I a dit the only thing I could say:

"I only know that I belong where toi are!"

Her response was something that I will never forget:

"You're my fragement of light in the end of the tunnel, you're my reason to fight when everything is getting dark..."...
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Ximena knelt down besides the majestic bed. She could no longer hold back her tears. Her hands were wrapped around the lifeless form of the Cid. The cruel wound had finally extinguished the light which had burned bright and guided the people of Valencia through the dark times. Their beloved Cid was no more.


Rodrigo Diaz de Bivar, El Cid had commanded the Spanish conquistadors against the invasion of Yusuf‘s Berber armies. A mighty leader he was, who fought with Supernatural vigour and whose energy was transmitted to all who fought beside him. Many legendary battles he had waged and won. Undefeated...
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Narrator: Macbeth slowly entered the crept room were Duncan was sleeping soundly. Macbeth quietly began to reach for his sharpened dagger. Macbeth pondered many thoughts regarding the demise of Duncan, but never to this degree. Now, the time had come to fulfill the quest to be crowned king. Duncan suddenly returns to reality. Visualizing Macbeth par his bedside withholding a dagger pointed at his wretched chest. Would this mean the end of Macbeth’s planned tragedy ou the end of Duncan’s existence?
Duncan: Cousin, why hast thou forsaken me?
Macbeth: Forsaken you? Thou hast forsaken me. Thou...
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