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f I had to identify the most important step in écriture an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if toi do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If toi can put your thoughts in the right order, toi can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.

Here are some tips to help toi effectively organize your essays in the future.

The Pyramid Method
This is my favori way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. toi start par barely introducing what toi are going to talk about, and then toi build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, toi make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got chienne slapped par brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.

The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where toi start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web article ou a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors l’amour this method, so toi just have to test it out and see what they think.

The sandwich, "sandwich" Method
In this method, toi start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically toi have a thesis at the beginning that poses a question ou a problem, and then toi have a conclusion that réponses it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once ou two.

General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point par point. Each point would be an article all its own.

Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If toi jump all through a book ou resource, toi may lose track of your focus and fluidity.

Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if toi have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.

If toi follow my tips above for your suivant essay in college, toi should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
posted by TeamRosalieHale
24: Victim of the Game

The rest of the trip was in relative silence. Rosalie seemed ok after a while, even talking to Luke and Michael. To Jack, she spoke with her mind only. Tristan had gone to his room-to work on something though what no one knew. At long last the carriage came to an abrupt and Tristan came out, his face grim.
“That bad?” Jack asked, looking up at him.
He didn’t answer, just looked down. “What?” Rosalie asked him, sensing that something big had been kept from her.
No one answered, they all silently got off but Rosalie was not done. “What is going on? Jack?”...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
23: Run to the Hills

IT had caught the right trail, was following it again, swiftly passing into Indiana, Ohio followed minutes later. Yes, IT was getting closer to what master wanted-and this time nothing would stop IT.
Nothing.
Already the carriage had passed into West Virginia, Tristan and Jack were both tense as to what was waiting at home, though they hid it from Rosalie as well as they could. “Are toi sure toi don’t need to hunt?” Jack asked her for the billionth time.
She sighed but smiled. “I’m sure. The jour I found toi again we had hunted.” She made a face as she said...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
18: Home

The jour was nearly over, par now they had reached their destination: Springfield, Illinois. Several times the carriage had stopped, Tristan leaving for short periods of time, always returning silent, the carriage marched on. He had retired when they were almost in Illinois, coming upon the border between Iowa and Illinois. David had remained with Jack and Rosalie, though he kept to himself, For Whom the cloche, bell Tolls had been replaced with A Tale of Two Cities. Eventually though he too went to his room, leaving Jack and Rosalie alone.
They were on the couch, Rosalie’s head on Jack’s...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
8: Sickness

IT was having a great time, trampling through Mexico, killing plus undead creatures, then up-wards through Arizona where they were much harder to find. Nevada was not much better so IT turned to California and had so much success there IT considered never leaving.
Until the master spoke to him again. “That’s enough.” IT looked up and growled, having just finished off two IT was craving more. “I need the girl. toi must not lose her.” IT rolled IT’s eyes and grunted, sprinting off to montrer master how fast it could go. “I’m well aware of your talents-I created you....
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
2: The Hunter

The nightmare started on January 13, 2009 and did not end for nearly twenty years. In those twenty years, it is estimated that the extinction of vampires became the closest in nearly three centuries. The first an alone over 2,000 of them were reported as M.I.A. ou deceased.
No one is quite sure what IT was ou where IT came from ou if IT will come back again. The physical characteristics of IT also changed though those that saw and lived to tell the tale keep their lips closed for fear of starting an unnecessary rouse. Despite the different circumstances in which IT was seen,...
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posted by Fangirl99
As i walk down the street,i wish i was still in bed.Dreaming about the jour that just ended.Summer vacation


"back to hell,"i said.When i say that,i mean school.
in my books,its basically the same thing.

"hey jamie!"my friend izzy calls from across.

i run down t otalk to her

"hey,"i said,putting my hair back form my face."
"wheres Ashlee?"

"umm,i gotta go,bye!" she ran out of site.

"at lunch,i treid to fine izzy and ask her what the hell happened earlier

"hey,izz"i said,sitting suivant to her.
"wheres ashlee?"

"um......"she looked like she was gonna vomit ou something.i didnt understand why.

"ive been wondering...
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~Carmen~
I couldn't believe how real the dream felt: the ocean, washing over my skin; the sun pouring heat over my head; the seaweed tickling my feet. It felt plus of reality in the dream than in the actual description of life, which scared me like hell. The vividness was choking my senses alive, but I was able to hear the cry in the background; yes, very angelic and begging me to come closer, to ease the pain. I tried turning, but my body willingly ignored me, and I flailed about desperately.
And then I saw him.
The black capuche, hotte wrapped around him like a religious cloak, twirling farther down...
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salut this is the l;atest chapter to the story, it is set when Nessie isfive months pregnant...x Hope toi enjoy and keep your eys peeled for the suivant chapter...x
Amber/Twilightsauce

I slipped mums wedding dress over my head, it fitted perfectly. Mum smiled and sighed as she wiped a joyous tear from my eye.
“Don’t cry baby, Alice will kill us if toi ruin your makeup she has spent all morning getting toi ready.” She laughed looking at me with a delighted expression on her face,
“Oh mum! I am so happy; Jake is waiting down there for me isn’t he?” I asked nervously. I had felt a little queasy...
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posted by I_love_Mikey
Sobriety is beyond a horizon for you,
One toi won't be alive to even get to.
Your mind is set to be dead in 10
Years, my fears, my tears,
don't matter, your emotionless, here.

My bothersome phone calls,
"I'm just checking in"
"Yeah, I don't care"
I can't ever win.

My eyes are taped open,
horrific images replay,
and even when I close them,
they're imprinted in my mind,
they're there to stay.

Blackness engulfs me,
like a whirlpool of nothing,
Your arch nemesis,
Your pal,
Your meaningless suffering.

Why do toi do this,
to yourself, and to me?
I don't get why toi mess around,
just let yourself be!
posted by TeanRose424
 this is just somthing that describes me :)
this is just somthing that describes me :)
I could feel everything i could feel my muscels ripple. I could feel the warmth flooding around me. I could feel my joints streghthen. I could feel myself becoming a god. It feltjust as he had said. i couldnt beleive the plesure.

He looked at me then. His face looked concern. I had been moaning from the pleasure. I had been calling out for more. The pleasure was leaving me though i could feel it. It had been many days i could feel it. I was relunctent to have it leave me, i was relunctent to have the feeling of my life leave. It was unbelievable.

Zach looked at me in wonder. i stared back...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 l’amour bites
love bites
l’amour sucks especially when the one toi love, couldn't possible l’amour toi back. When Kisa and Zack Finley get together, all hell brakes lose. Kisa finds out a striking secret about Zack, and that secret, can be the end of everything good as she knows it. Will Zack and Kisa work threw it? ou will it break them up as well.

"Kisa,kisa" jasmin was waving her hand back in forth in front of Kisa's face, Kisa, shook her head. "huh, what?" jasmin rolled her eyes, "I was trying to tell toi that me and Blake are going to whacth a movie, and i was wondering if toi wanted to go?" Kisa blanked "sure, what...
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posted by coolie
They all looked around. Just in the middle of nowhere,” a dit bill. Bill searched in his pockets. Hey! My mini meddle fan! He took it out of his pockets and attached it to… the ground. Teehee! I so got you!” a dit the auteur of this really weird book. “You should of seen the look on your face!” Back to the story. Bill turned the fan on. What are toi doing?” asked Death. “I’m going to blow us out of here” Bill continued. If I add 3+4, from my calculations, that would equal… 9. Oh I get it. At 9-o-clock we can’t four-get to blow us 3 out of here,” answered Ted. Exactly!”...
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posted by rose12345
 I'm haunted par the memory's i hold
I'm haunted by the memory's i hold
"No, NO"! I was having that dream, the one were my best friend drowned last summer. I was eight years old when I went to summer camp I didn't want to go but my mom a dit that it would be a good experience for me. Mrs. Jackson signed Jamie up, Jamie Jackson was and forever will be my best friend. When it was time to go to camp, we sat on the bus together, A couple of the girls from our school went too. They started to pick on me, and Jamie defended me.Towards the last jour of summer camp the girls dared Me and Jamie to jump into the lake, I backed out, but Jamie took the dare.
"It's the only...
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posted by viju
 Impossible
Impossible
toi just tear me down,
Throw me all around,
Treat me like a clown.
Hit me on the head,
Push me off the bed,
Keep the hamster (But not me), Well fed.
I know what toi think,
And before toi blink,
I'm asking toi about it.....
You're not wanna answer,
You are such a disaster,
But toi have to answer me

(Chorus)
Why do toi do this to me?
What is the reason why?
What have I ever done to hurt you?
Why are toi abusing,
When my anger, my l’amour are fusing?
You abuse to me,
But toi want me to stay with you.
I'm sick of the abuse,
Wanna turn toi onto mute,
Before toi blow up and shoot.
To be with u
its impossible

Taking deep breath...
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posted by kacimay72293
Chapter One

My name is Kitty Prince. I was borne on July 22, 1809. I was the young daughter of a lord. I was loved par all even though I was the third daughter.
My older sisters were Elizabeth at age twenty-one and Sarah Maine at age nineteen. they were both very beautiful. Elizabeth had golden brown eyes and deep brown hair that curled around her face. She loved musique and art. Sarah was very plain with brown eyes and hair. She loved to read hated parties.
I had fair blonde hair like my late mother's and ocean blue eyes. I loved to dance, sing, and grow a garden in the back of our manor. I was...
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posted by HarryPLover
Here I phase
Here in my old age
Here I run with no place to go
Here I stand with no purpose
Here I am with no show,
No lights,no cameras,no grace
Here I am with this world having me in it's tight embrace.

But I won't give in.
For God Loved me so.

Here I am in this place,
Here I am just watching the world race.
Watching the world fall apart,
Here I am just waiting for a new start.
As this breaks my heart,
I know I will rejoindre God's cart,his army,his people and I will live in heaven above.

Here I am asking you,
What will toi do?
Here I am watching toi phase,
Here I am watching toi turn to old age.
With no place to go,
Here I am telling toi don't want to low.

As we change and as we grow,
This world will face judgment,This I know.
Don't turn to old age,
Don't get Lost in the world's maze.
Save toi self.
Don't let yourself phase.......
posted by amethyst44
I never knew. My whole life, no one had the courage ou the right to tell me what happened. I had to find out the hard way, and that nearly cost me my life.
Last December was an important time for me. I never moved before, and it was all brand new to me. Moving boxes wasn't the challenge. The hardest part was coming into school during the middle of the an and not having a clue what the people were like. So far, my only friend here was the next-door neighbor Joselynn, some seventy-year old lady that had her grandkids over as much as possible. My mom encouraged me to meet them and possibly play...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter Five:Past
Hayley's Journal, I decided to see what my friend's mom had been doing then I watched through the window then I saw Maddie's mom beat her and broke her nose, it is scary to watch someone get hurt like this but toi know toi wouldn't do anything about it, well unlike Hayden, I'm always a tough one and she's like always wanting a unusually life but our lives are changing since we met our mom, we didn't know she was our actual mom because she looked so young and well she was 15 but she is between 29 ou 30 right now, I seen Maddie get burned par matches par her mom, it scares me to...
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posted by avatarluver990
GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY, I WILL BE RE-WRITING A NEW ONE!!! IT WILL COME UP SOON!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICE!!! Thank you.

Benedic hated the trip! It wasn't that bad though, it was at the beach, with rides and fast nourriture restaurants and cool sights; except that where him and his family were going to stay for summer vacation was at an old château that it once belonged to a prince. It was old and delapadated, it needed some paint and it smelled like someone died at the front steps of the castle.
"Dad," he grumbled. "Do we have to stay here?"
"Well all of the hotels are booked." his father explained....
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posted by avatarluver990
GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY!! I WILL BE RE-WRITING IT! IT'LL BE COMING UP SOON!!!!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICLE!!!!! Thank you.

Not too long ago, probably this time period, deep below in the sea, where no human had ever crossed, was a kingdom; a kingdom strong and powerful which was ruled par a great sea king named Octlantus; he was a powerful ruler, along with his trident. The people respected the Sea King that named the kingdom Octlantia in his honor. Octlantus and his wife, Sea Queen Lynsca, had seven beautiful daughters: Jinsya, Kynlana, Otsyncia, Renya, Tsyniana, Isynlana, and Nynxa. The Sea...
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