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posted by Charlieminster
It wasn't my fault! I was just there! In fact I tried to stop the whole thing. Max- my boyfriend- just flipped out. I'm not even sure what it was all about really but I know it ended badly. It may of have had something to do with Liam- the other boy- steeling something him. I do remember what happen though, Max started punching Liam all over the upper half of his body I shouted STOP but Max just wouldn't listen he kept going and going until Liam past out and hit the floor with a crash, but Max went to kick him 'MAX, STOP IT NOW' I yelled at him, he stopped mid kick and turned to look at me it was at this point we heard sirenes getting closer Max and I exchanged glances "Oh Crap!" i heard Max breathe as an ambulance and two police cars came around the corner. As the police woman arrested me I turned round to look at Liam who had now been moved from the floor to a streghter with a oxgyen mask covering his mouth and nose. How could Max do that to someone? I wasn't even doing anything but yet I still sit here in this horrible dark sell trying to plead my innocent.......

salut Guys can toi post a commentaire below it would help alot as I have to preform this on monday in front of my drama group and i would like to make any changes if toi think any are needed. Thanks for taking the tome to read it :).....
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