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posted by para-scence
My breaths were trapped in the back of my throat. I was afraid to breathe, because they'd probably come out as screams. The barrel of the gun pressed harder into my head, probably leaving a mark.

"Give me your money," the voice said. I tried to speak, but I couldn't. A couple moments later he took his hand away from my mouth so I could speak.

"I-- I-- I-- don't ha-- a-- ave an-- n-- n--y," I said, my voice shaking so much it took him a while to tell what I was saying. Then he laughed darkly.

"Well, that sucks for you." I felt the gun déplacer a little, as he put his finger on the trigger. I took a deep breath. I would not go out like this. I had somewhat of a plan, but it might just backfire and kill me. I gritted my teeth, bracing myself, then threw my head to the side, against the gun barrel. I hoped it wouldn't make him pull the trigger, and luckily it didn't; it knocked the gun out of his hand. Then I kicked back, hitting him where it counts. He whimpered a little bit, and let go of me.

I took off running. I ran as fast as I could, which was still not fast enough. I focused on my feet, trying to run fast, but still not trip. I heard the gun shot, aimed at me. I ducked, but tried to keep running. I almost fell, but luckily I didn't. Another gun shot.

Then I felt the searing pain. It was through the back of my leg, a couple inches under the back of my knee. I almost fell, but I had to keep going. I managed to run a couple plus houses down, out of sight, when I couldn't handle it anymore. With each step, the bullet seemed to rip deeper and deeper into my flesh. I fell onto the sidewalk, leaving a small trail of blood. Tears ran down my face unrelenting.

I didn't know what to do. I couldn't walk home, even though it was only a half a block farther, and I couldn't scream someone's name. I feared the attacker would hear and come after me again. So I laid there on the sidewalk for a while, trying to deal with the red-hot pain.

I took a deep breath, and tried to crawl, but it did almost nothing. I got about four houses down, when I just couldn't anymore. I was exhausted. I gave up, and figured enough time had passed; the gunman was probably gone par now.

"Kirsten! Sage!" I screamed. A couple minutes later, and nothing. I screamed their names again. A couple minutes later, they finally showed up.

"Oh my God!" Kirsten said. "What happened?!" She put my arm around her shoulders, and tried to lift me up. Sage held my other side.

"I got shot," I said, keeping my leg off the ground. I winced; it hurt from even the slightest movement. Kirsten and Sage managed to get me home, and laid my carefully on the couch.

"What're we going to do?" Sage asked. Surprisingly, for a seven an old, she was staying pretty calm.

"We need to go get Paige," Kirsten said.

"No," I a dit quickly. "She just went to work. She needs to. I'll just wait until she gets back."

"But what if it hurts toi more? It could get infected."

"I don't care. I'll wait." Kirsten pursed her lips.

"At least let me clean it with rubbing alcohol," she said. I sighed, then agreed after a little while.

Kirsten went and got the rubbing alcohol, then helped me flip over onto my stomach so the wound was faced up. She rolled up my jeans, up to my knee.

It was too much.

She had poured the alcohol into the wound, an amount probably the size of a dime, and it burned incredibly. I hissed, and buried my face in the arm of the couch.

"Sorry!" she apologized. "But I need to clean it!" She poured plus alcohol into it, and it felt like my leg was on fire. I screamed, and clenched my teeth together.

"Enough!" I shouted at her. She nodded and backed away. "I'll just wait for Paige now..." I managed to actually fall asleep a while after that, despite the pain.


."What happened?!" Paige screamed, jerking me away from a nice nap. I peered over my shoulder, to see her gaping at me.

"She got shot," Sage a dit quietly. "You need to fix it." Paige stared at me, unbelieving, and then shook her head.

"Fine. Ok, ok... Um, toi guys get her to lay down on the table, under the light. I'll go get Mom's old sewing kit."

"Sewing kit?!" I squeaked.

"Yes, Shelby," she said, exasperated. "We need to get the bullet out, and sew up the wound." I whimpered as she disappeared into Mom's room, and Kirsten and Sage helped me get up. I had to lay down on the cuisine table; it felt like I was being operated on. It was frightening.

"How do toi plan on getting the bullet out?" I asked when Paige came back.

"Not sure yet," she said, looking around the room. She was quiet for a moment. "There..." she said, going to the kitchen. She held up a spoon.

"Are toi fucking kidding me?!" I screeched. "No! No way!"

"It's either this, ou a fishing hook, Shelby." I gulped. She grabbed something else, and threw it at my face. "Bite on it." It was a towel. I stuffed it into my mouth, and braced myself.

***

"STOP! JUST STOP!" I screamed. "JUST LEAVE IT! I CAN LIVE WITH A BULLET IN MY LEG!!"

"It's out," Paige finally said, after almost an heure of "surgery." I sighed a big sigh of relief. "Now we have to stitch it up," she sighed, holding up a needle and thread. I whimpered, and bit down hard on the towel again.

***

I was in tears par the end. I couldn't take it; the pain was terrible. After a half hour, the bullet hole in my leg was all stitched up. I squeezed my eyes shut, unable to move.

"Just stay here for a while," Paige said. "I'm going to put ice on it to numb it."

"You couldn't have done that before?!" I shouted at her. She pursed her lips, and shrugged sheepishly. I groaned, and put my forehead on the table. It was beaded in sweat, and I took a lot of deep breaths. She put a pack of ice in another towel on my leg cooling down the burning feeling in my leg.

"How're toi feeling?" Sage asked quietly from the couch.

"Hell," I muttered.

"Watch it," Paige said. "I let the profanities slip par before because I knew toi were in a lot of pain. Doesn't mean toi can swear now." I growled at her.

"I. Don't. Give. A. Fuck right now," I a dit through my teeth. Despite the ice, my leg still hurt like crazy. There was the sound of a door unlocking, and someone stepped in. Paige stood up, and I looked over my shoulder to see who it was.

Mom.

"Hey girls!" she a dit cheerfully. "How was your day? I had the greatest jour with Matt! Oh, it was wonderful..." She went and got Auburn from her crib, and came back, all smiles. She sighed at me, shaking her head. "Shelby, why are toi on the table," she chastised. I groaned and let my head fall back onto the table.
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posted by EmilyMJFan910
The fiction story I wrote EXCLUSIVELY for Fanpop. In Chapter 2. Enough said.

The chiens ran furiously until they were out of breath. They stopped in the unfamiliar woods. The brother chiot looked at his sister as if to say, "Let's go back to Mama."
She refused, attempting to cuddle with him instead. He ran away when she tried to nuzzle him.
He ran away from the woods, closer and closer to the open field and his family. He looked back to see his sister wasn't running. He didn't care. She would realize he was on the right track. She'd catch up.
The speeding chiot looked straight ahead of him to see...
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posted by Faith-Rulz
Life may be a hard path to walk
but as the years pass toi learn
on how to adapt and face it head on.

Fear of leaving something ou someone familiar
to tread somewhere new and foriegn,
but thats the beauty of life
how we see things grow from the earth, the birth of a human life,
animals of the wild struggling for survival
through the ages since the beginning of time.

Where despair fills your soul
you cry for renewal within
it will take deep forgiveness in your heart
to wash away the hurt of betrayal
as it happens forevermore
as long as we continue to fight and hurt each other.

Love bleeds deeply when you...
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posted by IloveMyLord
In this article I'm going to write about how to enjoy writing. I'm a writer and do a lot of writing, both for my website and for other people. I find some ways of écriture are plus enjoyable than others.




How To Enjoy Writing




I find écriture is most enjoyable when it's not done in a forced ou particularly planned manner. If toi find it's hard to get yourself to write, I think it's best to relax about it. Perhaps relaxation will be all toi need to get your inspiration flowing, in fact.




I often spend some time meditating for ideas before sitting down to write an article. After a few secondes of keeping...
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posted by para-scence
"Shelby?" Sage asked quietly, coming into my room. "Can I ask toi something?" I sat up on my bed.

"Sure," I sighed, not so enthusiastic; but I was trying not to be so irritable all the time. Sage came in front of the bed, then plopped down on the floor in front of me.

"What's that stuff toi take?" she asked. I furrowed my eyebrows.

"What do toi mean, Sage?"

"You know, that stuff toi take," she said. "Like this." She put her palm to her nose, and inhaled deeply. My cœur, coeur fell into my stomach. I quickly fell down to her height, and grabbed her shoulders.

"Sage. How do toi know about that," I said...
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posted by halunik
I was just 5 minutes on foot to my dancing class. When I left accueil 20 minutes ago, I didn’t expect, I would be raining. But it wasn’t just raining – it was going to be a real storm. It was the middle of July and I was wearing a dress with the short sleeves. The rain was becoming heavier with each minute while I was walking down the street. Unfortunately there was no boutique ou bus station close for me to hide from the storm, so when I felt my dress all wet and drops in my hair, I couldn’t do anything but stopping under the tree. The rue was desert – apart from one car standing in...
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posted by InvadaMiz
Eleven an old twins Miyu and Nakku have been begging their mother for weeks about checking out the attic, their mother finally a dit yes during week four.The twins raced up the spiral staircase to the attic.They found old toys and books, then Miyu found a small crawl l’espace door.
"Nakku!Nakku!Come here!"Miyu called out to her brother.Nakku ran over and saw the door she pointed at.
"Let's see what's inside Miyu."Nakku suggested, Miyu nodded rapidly and reached for the door.Nakku grabbed her hand, then looked at her like she was crazy.
"Miyu, let me open it first."Nakku said.He yanked the door open,...
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posted by PeterPansgirl12
Ok, heres a story I've had in my head for a while...

I haunt her, I know I shouldn't. Being dead is boring. It's not like I chose death. Death just happened.

I was a normal seventeen an old guy, ready to start collge. Then, I saved her life. She means everything to me.
I l’amour everything about her. Her hair, her smile, her lips, her body, her laugh, her snort, her mad face, her happy face, her flirty face, her attitude.

I l’amour her.

That's why I pushed her out of the way when the murderer shot the gun. That's why I saved her life.

Now, I haunt her. I watch her every minute of everyday, as a ghost....
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posted by werewolflover
Caitlin Tresp moved to my small town in Tennessee when we were in fourth grade,which was two years ago.This is her story so far.
So,she moved here in fourth grade.She was in my class.It was her first day,and she was already being bullied.By everyone.Ecxept for my Friends and I.Jessica,Molly,Chyanne,Tori and me.It was like she was already part of the group.We all got along greatly.But later in the year,Jessica and Caitlin got in a fight at recess.When we went back inside,we all had to talk to our teacher,Mrs.McDonald.By the end of the dayit was all sorted out...or so I thought.For the rest...
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posted by kateeuy
Alise opened her eyes on a beautiful Thursday morning. As she sat up, she wiped the sleep from her eyes and brushed through her long black hair with the tips of her fingernails. She looked at the time on her IPod dock. “Its 7:30, I’m late” yelled Alise as she jumped out of lit and ran to her wardrobe. She pulled out a white button-up chemisier and a green tartan skirt. She opened the drawers underneath and pulled out a pair of black stockings. Alise quickly go dressed and packed her country road bag. She lived at accueil with her aunty, uncle and her cousin Eliza. Eliza rushed downstairs and...
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