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I remember the jour of September “Mommy Daddy” when my mom and dad and I were walking in a pitch-black dark hallway. I heard screams, crying, shouts my Mom told me there are things in this world we wont understand. She was right I had no clue what was going on here only god did.

My Dad took off his locket that my Mom gave to him he placed it around my neck and let go I felt the cold golden chain around my neck I looked down. At the golden and silver locket I gently held the locket in my hand I pressed a button and it opened up. There I saw a picture of my Mom on the left side and a picture of my Dad on the right and beautiful musique played I closed it and when I closed the locket.

My Mom and Dad were lying on the muddy floor Mom Dad no I fell onto my knees I looked at there pale faces. Rubbed my thumb on my Mothers face her eyes were closed with a smile. But blood was all over her how could toi smile I felt tears run down my cheeks to my lips. I turned to my dad and a dit may god be with toi my father’s eye were open blood dripped down his lip blood was all over him. I felt a surge of anger I whispered to my mom don’t worry I will kill whoever did this I promise.

I suddenly woke from the sound of my alarm I turned my head slapped my alarm clock ugh eight o clock in the morning. I sat up on my lit rubbed my eyes got up from my old bed. Walked to my manteau hanger that’s par my door grabbed my gray sweater. I picked up my phone off of my table, tableau par my lit I dialed johns number salut john. John are toi there I herd a loud burp threw the phone oh sick man!!! That’s just nasty. Anyway I was wondering when you’re coming accueil oh well about five four three two one. And the door opened up john I ran to him and hugged him I missed toi dude. He hugged back I missed toi to. Man the people in Canada are funny. But the people in Africa are stinky that’s why we gave them bath supplies.

Want some coffee I a dit sure I went over to the counter table, tableau I took a jar of my Dads coffee recipe I took the ingredients and the paper to tell me what to do. I carefully followed the ingredients soon it was done I took two mugs from my cup cabinet I laid them out onto the counter. I took johns mug held it in my hand I got the coffee poured it into johns mug I walked towards him gave him the coffee I got my cup stood par the table, tableau put my arms on a cold old wooden chair. So john a dit I have herd about the killer that killed you’re parents in the dark old hallway. I got an image of her I was at Africa and they a dit she helped them out she would come at night.

They called her their little Angel okay I a dit with a curious face on why would they call her that? John threw a picture of her it slid to the edge of the table. I picked it up there was a tall skinny girl about my age so that means she’s twenty one she had snow white hair with neon colored highlights. She had a machine gun in one hand and a machete in the other he black bangs covered her left eye she had a long black sweater with short baggy jeans she had moved her head cause her hair was in the air and some of the hair swung in her face. Oh her name is gem a dit john Okay let me get this strait they think a killer is there Angel this is a complete joke yah know. No its not a dit john she’s you’re killer the one toi are going to kill. But she’s a girl what’s so dangerous about her. Dude anyone with those kinds of weapons’ are dangerous true so how are we going to find her how are we going kill her where is she man you’re hot a dit john. I am what? What a dit john toi a dit I was hot no I didn’t yes I herd you. Oh I wasn’t talking about toi silly I was talking about this picture of a really hot girl.

What’s her name I asked not really caring her name is ivory he told me everything about her like her birthday when she was born what size she was he knew everything about her even things I did not want to know. Trust me toi wouldn’t want to know both I went to john’s side and glanced at the picture he was looking at a Blondie with green eyes. She were a neon blue tank and a black jupe that stopped at her feet she were no shoes at all. She had a couteau in one hand she had cat ears with a cattail. He a dit they were both assassins’ and one of them are blind just were not sure witch one is it all then came back to me I remembered two demonic sisters staring at me when I was crying my eyes out one walked away the other tried to calm me down.

Stop it I told myself stop remembering stop I always hated remembering my parents death I heard john in the background saying calm down are toi okay what’s going on I couldn’t answer I tried to speak but nothing came out but little squeaks. Then I herd a very soft faint voice “Tim Tim” why so scared I thought I was just a wimpy girl I tried to speak one last time and I was able to I a dit who whose there. I quickly turned to catch whoever was there nothing was there just a dark room I couldn’t see my own hand in front of my face I herd john scream get away be gone demon

I couldn’t see what was going on but I saw a white glow and there I saw john trying to find something to grab onto. As he was being dragged what was going on I thought I ran towards him and fell over a chair uh crap I tried to get up but I would just fall I crawled to the outside of the cuisine I called for johns name “john john” where are toi I lifted my hand to feel walls ou doors ou objects that could be in my way. Then I saw the glow come back I could make out a form a human it was in a long white peignoir, robe it reached out its hand and grabbed my hand and lifted me up immediately I felt my leg heal I could walk Jesus? I asked it shook its head no god?

No well who are toi I a dit in a shaky voice the light dimmed down I saw beautiful snow white hair, but I saw something that really disturbed me her she had wings but they were not bird wings ou Angel wings I am not even sure if there demon wings they were made out of Bones bone wings I guess, she had all kind of neon couleurs for streaks she had black bangs that covered her left eye I saw her eyes adjust to the darkness around the room her eyes turned from gray to white she had nothing but white eyes, I felt a very cold chill go threw the air and she opened up her mouth and spoke her voice was so soothing she a dit don’t worry I wont hurt toi I quickly looked down I was scared if I looked something would happen. She touched my back look up and face me john don’t be afraid of me how can I trust toi toi killed my parents I could tell she was mad for her voice raised face me now I looked up and straitened my back and looked down at her She was tall but she stopped at the very haut, retour au début of my neck. So she was a couple of inches smaller than me you’re name is gem isn’t it she nodded her head in disappointment she knew right away that I knew who she was. I walked over to my couteau compartment got a couteau and held it behind my back she kept looking at my arm behind my back for I bet she knew I had a couteau that I was ready to kill her. She put her and on my face then on my for head and on my cheek she moved the hair out of my face I giggled it tickled when her hands went through my hair you’re blind I a dit in shock her cheeks turned red red as a cerise she looked down at her feet tears went down her face.

I lifted her face up with my pointer finger its okay I forgive toi she smiled and hugged me her cold clammy hands ran through my hair. I wrapped my arms around her once I felt comfortable she then stopped running her fingers through my hair she started slipping from my arms I didn’t fell her the little glow from her was gone I felt something wet on my chemise I looked down slowly and there was red blood stained into my white shirt. Oh heck no I bent down and I saw my couteau that I put down on the floor how did this happen? There was john panting no need to thank me Tim all the thanks I need is are friendship I gave him a look like I was going to kill him.

He then knew what was going on oh so she’s good and not bad and yawl were just starting to bee Friends and I probably destroyed the friendship that was going to happen. So now what we both shrugged are shoulders while we looked at the dying angel. Want go get pizza NO I DON’T WANT TO I WANT TO SAVE THIS Angel I DON’T WWANT TO HAVE SOMEONE DIE IN ARE HOUSE WERE GONNA SAVE HER WETHER toi LIKE IT ou NOT GOT IT!!!!!! Got it he a dit I walked over to my canapé and took my blanket that was on the canapé went over to gem and wrapped it around her john go start the car. He ran quickly to the door opened up the door and ran out to the car I picked gem up and looked at her and whispered its okay I ran outside towards johns black Honda hurry he a dit I jumped into the car we headed for the hospital I held her delicately in my arms her eyes were wide open her pure white eyes turned black fully black I just stared at her john put one of his hands around me its okay dude she will make it she’s an Angel yah but I mean listen Tim she will make it. Trust me I shook my head and a dit yes to him but I was doubting she would make it its not possible I thought john kept driving he spoke words of wisdom to calm me down nothing helped I just looked at her sadly.

Hours went par driving in the hot smelly car blood all over me john still talking and praying. I would talk to gem just to make sure she was alive........what will happen in part2
posted by mars15
I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing toi makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because toi can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because toi make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because toi can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world toi keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me toi were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need toi is
because I'll always l’amour you!


This was in my head so i just thought to write it
posted by nimone
Let's be honest we have all at least once in our lives experienced the misfortune that is the power cut.

The power cut it'self may not be as intolerable depending on the circumstance. If toi live in a place where it is sunny and there is a lot to do outside then toi don't have much to worry about.
I for one do live in this kind of climate usually. This however was not the case yesterday!

Not only was it the only jour of the week where everything is closed as it was a Sunday, oh no it was also pouring down raining!

I was forced indoors with nothing to do and it was really dark inside due to the...
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posted by irena83
Life,
priceless and important,
gives toi the roads
and leaves toi choices
of which your luck depends on.


This is your life
and toi live it
wrapped par sadness
ou happiness.
Who cares?


This is your life,
invisible for others.


toi pick the road
and pray that the choice
is right,
but life loves toi not,
that's toi who l’amour
the joy of life.


Life,
priceless and important,
gives toi choices,
unpredictable events,
grays and hope,
and life is all yours.


But, the question is
will toi remain sane
even though your life
is cruel to your dreams,
will toi remain sane
even when your life
is dying in your eyes.
posted by irena83
Chapter 5: News

Suddenly, she felt weird.
She went quickly at the bathroom
and laved herself.
She looked pale and was feeling sick.
She closed her eyes and tried to
take a deep breath.
Now she felt little better.
She took a phone and called a neighbor,
telling her that she must see a doctor
and someone should take care of Gwenny.
Joanna a dit that there were no reason
to be worried about and she would
look after baby.
Dana, thankful and scared the same time,
got dressed quickly and immediately
called a cab.
While she was waiting for a cab,
she was so confused and tense.
The cab came soon.
She barely could...
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their are six technique(originally theirs eight but i only know six)


technigue one:Start with a short,effective sentence(4-5 words max): Her hair shone gold.

technique two:Start with an interesting metaphor ou simile: The loup was like a tornado,changing the lives of all who crossed his path.

technique three:Start with a literary device(ex.onomatopoeia,alliteration,etc):Gobbling Grandma and her grandchild was his plan all along.

technique four:Start with a prepositional phrase: ALong the spooky road to Grandma's house,Red skipped with an air of confidence.

technique five:Start with a riddle and...
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posted by sweetpea92
    Everyday at lunch for all of high school so far I would stand in line and wait to get up to the front to tell the lunch lady that “I need a to-go tray please.” Then once I had gotten my tray, I would scan my lunch card and dash down the hallway to my favori teacher’s room to rejoindre “the lunch bunch” on everyday except Wednesday, and Friday. On those days the beginning of this routine is relatively the same, but instead of heading off to another meeting of the lunch bunch, I would take a detour at the bibliothèque to rejoindre my Friends at our usual table, for either...
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posted by Firewriter
There was once a boy
Who loved a girl
A very distant girl- haunted par her demons that no one else could see
The boy- lonely and afraid of pursuing his passions
The heat of the mid-July sun beating on their backs
On a little dirt road suivant to a vine-covered wall
That little boy handed the little girl a citron vert green envelope
Her name printed on that envelope in his fine pen writing

Their cheeks red and hearts pounding
The two continued their days apart
Both afraid their darkness will come over
And destroy what they tried to break
The jour to follow, that little broken girl
Smiling a real smile for the first...
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First Step In écriture A Screenplay par Richard Walter
video
richard walter
ucla
screenplay
script
writer
auteur
how to write a screenplay
added by vampiress015
Also very funny, don't toi just wish toi could do these things yourself?
video
kaleb nation
écriture
auteur
bran hambric
added by ZekiYuro
added by HarryPLover
 Surviver of The Thing prequel that is till the end that was the beginning of The Thing 1984
Surviver of The Thing prequel that is till the end that was the beginning of The Thing 1984
How to survive a horror movie apocalypse. par L.R.Talbot
This is a liste of things to keep in mind in order to survive a horror movie. Note most of these can be used in a daily life as well.
——————
1.If there's someone at the door never say whose there
2.never put your back against a door. toi never know if someone has enough strength to put a couteau through the door plus there's the mail slot to consider.
3.Try to be as quiet as possible especially if they(your attacker ou possible attacker) are near by
4.Find a weapon as soon as possible. In my opinion preferably something that could...
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added by SomethingDreamy
added by axemnas
posted by Ragefulchimp
Vandals and crooks
an aging man, caught like a poisson on a hook
Getting reeled in, he's easy prey
Eyes sag, creating bags, pupils widen, creating paralysis

Confusion and fear
An ailing man, with poisson hooks everywhere
The biggest catch today
Pavement runs red, creating pain, flesh torn, creating animals

Torment and Horror
An aching man, aches no more
The poisson hook rips away
Smiles widen, creating youth, blood drips, creating paralysis
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posted by para-scence
"We've got to tell Mom," I a dit quickly. "She'll get Matt to actually pay it this time." I hoped I was right. He would, wouldn't he? He couldn't just let his girlfriend suffer. I picked up Auburn, and Sage held my hand as the five of us set out to Matt's house.

It was dark, and I was getting really anxious. During the day, the neighborhood was fine. But during the night... it was frightening. This place turned into a battle ground; shootings everywhere. It hasn't been so bad lately. The cops got rid of most of them. But toi could never be too careful.

Matt's house was bigger than ours; it had...
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posted by para-scence
I got home, where Reed was at the cuisine table, tableau playing poker with some Friends and smoking. I walked up to the table, tableau and threw the bag onto the table. His Friends all looked at it, gaping. Reed laughed.

"Good job, baby sister!" he said. He took the bag and inspected it. I smiled at his praise. He looked up at me and smiled. "But shouldn't toi be at school? If Nikolai finds out he'll bust your head in."

"So don't let him find out," I a dit like it was an obvious answer. His buddies laughed. Reed shook his head at me, but a smile still played on his lips. He threw the bag back at me.

"Well then,...
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posted by mitchie19
2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a étoile, star on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. canard, drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...
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posted by ChickRiddler
Preface: We were called freaks. Strangers. Mutants. As my claws ripped through the peculiar woman’s skin I thought, “What am I now?” My teeth sunk into her arm. The screech that pierced the air at that moment brought me back to reality, I was human again. I spat the blood out of my mouth and looked around myself. The handsome man was looking at me with terrified eyes.
    “I’m so sorry,” I whispered. Shrinking into myself, I began to run away. The man wouldn’t catch me. But something held me back. I went back to him and reappeared. “Help me.” I wasn’t even sure he heard me I a dit it so low. Suddenly, my body couldn’t take the pain. There was a buzzing in my ears, a pounding in my head, and spots in my vision. It was then the darkness swallowed me whole.
posted by Lolo-star20
If I'm a reason to leave
I don't talk about this on a sheet
I want to everybody see
What toi do of me

I'm become a princess
with a knight who not fearless
I want to watch a cloudless sky
because my cœur, coeur and my eyes cry

Chorus
It is what I want
It is what I need
And never other thing
that the l’amour which I want

The only thing I know
It's I'm better when toi are
Near to me, did toi know?
And I want that toi are

Chorus

It's like
I have a couteau in my back
It's like
I don't can stay in the black
Without what I want
Without what I need

Chorus x3

You're all I want
I'll be what toi need
And ever other thing
If it's what toi want