écriture Club
rejoindre
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 11

The dry hot air inside the garage was almost unbearable and the smell of motor oil and tires wasn’t helping. Bone usually did not drink a can of bière while in his boutique but there were no customers and it was just too damn hot to do anything.

Dropping himself onto his boutique canapé and cracked open his Miller Light; he closed his eyes to try and ignore the stuffy heat.
He remembered calling Koda’s house and left a message when no one answered. It was odd for no one to be accueil but he shrugged it off.
Taking a long swig he didn’t realize how tired he felt from the heat as he started to drift off.

“Nice bikes…”







“Are toi telling me that kid Koda is the one toi saw last night? There’s no way he could have done this.”

“I’m tellin’ I know Koda, I know what he looks like and that was him…” Jax insisted. A police officer had come to the hospital to question Jax about the other night’s incident. The officer wasn’t very cooperative. “But it wasn’t him, he was different,” he finished.

“Okay, so it was him but not him. How does that work?” the officer replied sarcastically. The officer was one of those cops that was overweight and never did any dangerous action except giving traffic violations in the downtown area of town…which was about the size of the high school football field.

Jax sighed heavily, closing his eyes in frustration. He thought for a brief seconde to mention his dream but quickly decided against it knowing how Officer Slob would react to some guys’ drunken dream that had half his face scratched off.

“Look, Shilah was my best friend since grade school, I knew his little brother since he was barely walkin’. I know the kid’s face anywhere, somethin’ happened to him but I don’t know what…” Jax gave up and laid back down on his oreiller feeling annoyed and exhausted.

“That Koda kid took off; any kid like him would not come back with cops lookin’ for him. This was most likely a coyote attack and toi were probably too drunk realize it—according to some of your police records, you’ve got quite the history with alcohol.”

“I wasn’t drunk!” he yelled, wincing in pain from the deep scratches on his face.

“Whatever toi say buddy,” the cop waved him off and he left the hospital room.

Jax knew the truth. Koda did it and he was going to make him pay.
He made a silent promise to Shilah.







Bone nearly choked on his bière when he heard a deep voice near the garage entrance. He quickly put the can of bière on the floor trying to hide the fact he was drinking on the job.
He got up to see who it was that came in.
It was a young man that looked to be in his 20s with shoulder length black hair, strong cheek Bones and dark reddish brown skin and was wearing a dirty white chemise that looked 2 sizes too small but he was definitely an Indian.

“Uh, sorry about that, I almost fell asleep. Business has been quiet today.” Bone quickly explained as he walked toward the young guy.

“Don’t worry about it,” the young guy replied. His voice was surprisingly low and deep.

As Bone got a better look at him, he reminded him of someone but couldn’t put his finger on it.

“So what can I do for ya? Need a bike fixed ou lookin’ for one?”

The guy walked around surveying the garage with great interest. “I’m actually looking to replace my old bike. It’s gotten too…small for me.”

“What kind are toi looking for? Choppers, a bobber ou a dirt bike?” Bone carefully watched the guy feeling a sense of danger with him. Something was off.

“A chopper, dirt bikes are….” A sneer came across his face. “Premature.” He came across one of Bone’s personal choppers, a particular one that wasn’t for sale.

It was black with white flames on the gas tank and tail end. The back tire was broad and flat with low handle bars.

“That’s one of my personal choppers, not for sale.”

The man slowly turned to face him. His face was dark with a look full of defiance.

“Personal? It’s obviously not for you.”

The air in the garage began to grow cold.

“No, I was building it for my nephew as a surprise on his birthday.”

“Well ain’t that sweet,” he made another sneer.

“Do I know toi from anywhere? toi look very familiar to me.”
“Ohh I just have those faces,” he a dit looking directly at him in the eyes as if trying to say “guess who”.

“Oh come on Bone, can’t even recognize your own nephew’s face?”

Bone nearly choked on his own spit this time.

“Ex….cu…se me?” he a dit with his eyes wide trying to see if this guy was either nuts ou one of Shilah’s Friends playing a stupid joke on him.

“You heard me,” he a dit darkly grabbing Bone’s neck crushing it with sheer force.

Bone collapsed to the floor struggling to breathe.

The man squatted down. “You won’t die, I didn’t crush any Bones ou the windpipe but it’s gonna burn like hell for a while.”

His throat was burning as he tried to take short breaths in.

“And yes I am Koda just a bit…different. I did do my spiritual journey as I was told and look how well I turned out.” He a dit standing up montrer off his new self par taking off his too small chemise and grabbing a black work chemise from one of the work benches.

Rubbing his neck, Bone tried to listen to what this nutcase was saying. How could he know Koda? He watched as the guy opened his personal locker and took out his prized leather jacket.

“I’ll be needing this, can’t ride a new chopper without a new jacket.” He a dit while slipping it on.

He walked back to where he lying on the floor. “You know, toi were the only one that treated me decent. Maybe it’s because I reminded toi of yourself but..."
He put his hand gently on Bone’s face looking into his eyes. Bone recognized those eyes anywhere. “You never once told the rest of the family to ‘f off.”

He mounted the chopper, adjusting himself to the new siège and the handle bars. Getting the feel of it before he turned on the engine.

"Nice workman ship, I can tell toi put a lot of l’amour into it."

He looked at him again with a smile. A surprisingly warm smile.

He turned the key that was left in the gas tank.

“Thanks for the bike Uncle Bone, I l’amour it.” He yelled over the loud engine.
Revving the accelerator he rode out of the garage leaving Bone on the floor with a feeling as if the world just played the greatest trick on him.
 Koda and his new chopper
Koda and his new chopper
In the West,cartoons are used chiefly to make people laugh.The important feature of all these dessins animés is the joke and the element of surprise which is contained.Even though it is very funny,a good cartoon is always based on close observation of a particular feature of life and usually has a serious purpose.

Cartoons in the West have been associated with political and social matters for many years.In wartime,for example,they proved to be an excellent way of spreading propaganda.Nowadays dessins animés are often used to make short,sharp commentaires on politics and governments as well as on a variety of...
continue reading...
Difference Between Helping Someone Become A Pro Writer And Doing It Yourself - Kelly Edwards via FilmCourage.com.
video
écriture
film
films
tv
télévision
hollywood
filmmaking
Why écriture A High Concept Movie Doesn't Make Any Sense - Corey Mandell via FilmCourage.com.
video
écriture
film
films
filmmaking
télévision
livres
auteur
tv
There Is No Story Unless A Bad Situation Gets Worse - John Vorhaus via FilmCourage.com.
video
écriture
film
films
filmmaking
tv
livres
auteur
télévision
What Writers Gets Wrong About The Hero's Journey - John Bucher via FilmCourage.com.
video
écriture
film
films
filmmaking
télévision
livres
auteur
tv
myths
hello my brother wrote this for me on skype , he has donné me permission to publier this , i think he has a great talent and should write more, but he aint sure. what do toi guys think ?

-----------------------------------
She spun around at the screech that divisé, split the night. They were letting her and her Friends know they were still there, still coming, still hunting.

Lisa and her Friends had been out for the evening hunting down a party they had heard about. They had taken a shortcut through an alley, and as they were passing a traverser, croix alley that let to a cul-de-sac, they heard a scream. Running...
continue reading...
Chapter 5
Brandy walked into the porch with the child in his hand. His cœur, coeur had melted like a soft serve on a hot day. He had a baby. He was a dad. I mean, he knew he was a little young but, he was so happy. He would name it Brandy. His dad always a dit if he had a son to name it Brandon and while he knew his dad wasn’t going to be all that proud of him this time, at least it could be the beginning of “something”. He didn’t know what but something. He didn’t think about the fact that he would have to explain his story to his family and not to mention his girlfriend who was waiting...
continue reading...
 Yn
Yn
4 girls par the name of Taylor,Jasmine,Aaliyah&Yn who are getting bullied,abused, and nearly killed par there "So called" FRIENDS: Craig,Chresanto,Jacob&Raquan out of the the whole group Yn is the one who is getting hurt the most. Her brother is Craig and he knows that she is getting tormented but yet does nothing to stop it, As much as he says im sorry he still never does anything to stop this mess.







Readers will notice some emotion,cheating,lieing,and fightng. Rated R & PG13. We should stop bullying because of the fact it leads to suicide.Do NOT let ANYONE judge toi because u are diffrent ou ur not as pretty. Because u are.
 Aaliyah
Aaliyah
jasmin
Jasmine
 Taylor
Taylor
posted by malmcd
Millions of Miles Apart

    From the moment your born somewhere out there toi have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same cœur, coeur strings as toi and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep toi apart from one another...But what if my one true l’amour isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him ou her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
    My name is Sunflower I was born on the...
continue reading...
posted by para-scence
I was even plus of a mess after that. I thought it was bad before. This was just incomparable. Before, I still had hope, even if it was only a tiny splinter. Now, I had no hope, with confirmation from Blake himself. I spent many nights venting to Kara, who listened intently, and offered conseil when necessary.

"Honey, I promised it'll all get better soon," she a dit quietly. I prayed that she was right.

Then spring break came. When I wasn't working, I was at home. When I wasn't at home, I was working. Not the best spring break I've ever had. Then Gwen's party came around. I was about to call...
continue reading...
It started, with a star…

How many times have toi fallen in l’amour with someone toi know toi can't be with.…? Not for anything... toi can't run away, and they can't l’amour toi back....

or-- won't.....

I am a falling star. I am Ashtaroth. That is my human name, my real name is Unukalhai. I am part of the constellation Serpens Caput. Every étoile, star that falls dies when it hits the ground-- Except one. It is very seldom, but, if the world needs help... The chosen star, when it falls, does not die. It, in fact, turns into an angel. toi must know that all anges are stars. However, only one can exist...
continue reading...
posted by SHARR
BODY OF THE STORY:
The most exiting thing is somthing we normaly wouldn't do.

"Work is work,men......hmmm.....no time for that",said Jade Broussard.Jade is a cool,indipendent women who works for the FBI as detective security gaurd.One word for her,that nothing is in posible.she is afraid of nothing

One call for a new mission.
She must protect a thief??...What?!...Or is he somting els?...Well we'll know it later =)
His name is Remy Tremaine.what i can say is that he is sexy.he turned the warr in love......

Remy usualy dont like to life with rueles,but Jade is around him 24hours each jour in one roomwith service(...[and a bed])





wait for episode 1
Chapter Twenty-Two

It was the night of Mac Thomas’s birthday dîner with just the Thomas family and in addition to the Thomas family; Mac invited someone to her special dinner. A man and Mac’s ‘boyfriend’ named Sean Connors. She wants him there because in her words, he had to dump his plans he made before meeting a girl like a mois il y a and had to go to both of her birthday events: the dîner and the party with her family and Friends from football and school on Saturday.

Hearing this the jour before the dîner and once Mac left the cuisine to somewhere else, Sean turned to Jamie and whispered...
continue reading...
This article contains suggestions for basic practices for being a good writer, and was last edited on 12 June 2009 (to add the admonition about backups).

How to be a Better Writer
If you're lire this, chances are that toi are interested in being a Good Writer: someone who is able to write well and convey ideas effectively through text. Note that we are not talking about being a Successful Writer here, nor a Widely-Read Writer; those are separate concerns. Before toi worry about who's going to read your écriture ou what toi can get out of your writing, toi should concern yourself with making...
continue reading...
“Even as a child I had a wild imagination. A younger child, I should say. I’m only sixteen now, so I could be considered a child to some. Oh, par the way, my name is Sarah Way. I live in a small town called Ammarion. It’s a growing town found in America. It’s really in Idaho, if that tells toi anything.” Sarah began. “I’m here to tell toi my story. I know toi are skeptical about magic, but toi won’t be after hearing my story.”
I’d like to drag toi back in time with me. We only need to go back to last summer. School had just gotten out and I had ample plans for my three months...
continue reading...
posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I woke up in my lit Thor was there sitting par me. “What happened?” I a dit in a confused tone. “You fainted. Now what’s going?” he had control in his voice. “None of your business” I a dit getting out of bed, he backed off until I reached for the door handle. His hand was holding my arm. “Tell me” his tone was threatening. “Let go of me!” I said, I didn’t struggle he just let go. Me and Thor were always getting into fights and only once did it ever got physical. We were in Paris. He was training me. I never had taken orders from him and I never will. “I will get it out...
continue reading...
♥ I've always mused about this significant quandary!
Here are some of the provided words that are in the English Dictionary and no other words rhyme with them.

It is sometimes a dit that the words:

orange, purple, and silver ♥ are the only words which rhyme with no other words.


♥ Non-rhyming English words of two syllables ou fewer

amande

aspirin

bachelor

chaos

chimney

circus

different (whether pronounced as two- ou three-syllable word)

film

hostage

javelin

justice (only rhymes with proper nouns)

laundry

luggage

monster

mois

citrus

office

olive

orange (only rhymes with proper nouns)

pint

manchot, pingouin

pizza

promise (only rhymes with proper nouns)

purple

shadow

silver

transfer

vacuum
Page 1 Script Analysis For 'A California Christmas' with Director Shaun Paul Piccinino via FilmCourage.com.
video
écriture
film
films
netflix
filmmaking
tv
télévision
independent filmmaking
posted by tamore
He's looking at me and smiling, obviously oblivious to what’s inside of me.

I smile back but I’m looking at his lips and thinking about how I would pry them apart with my own, only to spit poison down his throat just when he starts to think he’s safe.

My lips would still be on his even as his tongue stopped responding to mine. I would pull away and place my hand on his cheek as if pushing the color out of them, as if the poison is a snake sliding through his veins under my command. I would watch his eyes lock on mine as his body became limp in my arms. I would stare at the paleness and...
continue reading...
I am and avid Sonic fan. Ever since I was 3 I've been hooked on Sonic. Sonic R was my first game, after all. That being a dit one of my favori characters in all of fiction is Shadow the Hedgehog. So, toi can imagine my surprise when I found out he had his very own game. Now I'm going into this review without any bias. I'm not excusing anything just because it's Sonic. So without further ado, let's begin the review.


Gameplay: Have toi played Sonic Adventure 2, ou Heroes? If so you'll be glad to know that the gameplay is the same. For those of toi who don't know Shadow can run, mur jump, and...
continue reading...