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ok...that sounds nice
Jade wasn't sure if this was the right choice,she could always find some where to stay. I'm a girl ill never be homeless.. she thought. But still she went through with it and they walked to mrs.l's car."umm if toi don't mind, do toi think we could stop at my apartment? I need to get some things from there....if toi don't mind of course." She asked
"No, I don't mind.where do toi live?" She gave her the directions and about ten minuetes later they pulled into a dark alley,they stopped in front of a door in the side of a small building."this is where toi live?" She asked
"Yeah..it not much but its home. Well was home.." she opened the door of the car and started to get out,but turned and faced mrs.l "would toi like to come in?" She asked politley."ok sure."

They walked in and it was nothing like mrs.l expected. When she first met Jade she thought that she would have a decent home. Boy was she wrong... there was a small cuisine that was just big enough for a stove.refridgerator and a small counter haut, retour au début with a cabniet below it. Across from the cuisine there was a small carpeted area which she assumed was the living room. There was a small canapé only big enough for to people and a old rocking chair, there was also a few baby toys scattered on the floor which she guessed were her sisters. They walked down the hall and walked into Jade's room. It was a simple bedroom. It had a twin size bed, a dresser, a small gray radio on a shelf in the corner. Jade opened the closet, and grabbed a smull duffle bag out of it and threw it on the bed.

"Not what toi expected is it?" She asked while puttinf some clothes in the bag. "Not at all.." she walked across the room and grabbed her phone charger and I pod and threw in the bag " yeah I fiugured so much. Its not the best house around but hey, its still a house and to me it was home." They walked out of the house and back to the car. She threw her bag in the back and closed the door. They started to drive to mrs.l's house when Jade asked " I don't mean to be nosey,but what's going on between toi and mr.m?" That question made her cœur, coeur almost stop. What was she going to say? O yeah about that. Me and him both reallly like each other but haven't been out on a rendez-vous amoureux, date because we both just got divored a mois ou so ago.but I really like him and that's why my marrige ended because I l’amour another man? Yeah like I'm gonna say that she thought. " Juhh..nothing, nothing at all.." she panciked. " mrs.l... I know l’amour when I see it, and the spark I see when toi two look at each other just says it all, toi like him and he likes you. " she was speechless. "I...uh..we...um." "its ok.you don't have to say anything."

They drove for a few plus minuetes in silence, until mrs.l asked, "do toi want to listen to the radio?".she had to do something to break the silence."uh...sure." mrs.l reached over and clicked the POWER button to the radio. A song was just ending and another came on, one of jades favorites, so she sang along.
a chair is still a chair...
Even if there no.ne sitting there
But a chair is not a house
And a house is not a home
When there's no one there
toi can hold..

she was Lost in jades voice. She didn't know that she had that kind of voice.


a room is still a room
Even when its full of glum
Ohh a room is not a house
And a house is not a home
When there's no one there
toi can hold hold....

She thought as she pulled into her driveway to her home,that she really did have strong feeling for mr.m and this girl. This girl has helped her realize that. l’amour found its way,it jusst needed some help. They walked in to her house. Jade looked some what scared to walk in, like she was afraid something would happen."its ok,you can come in. Nothings going to happen." She finally walked in the room and mrs.l lead her to the guest bedroom."here's the guest room,you can sleep in here and the bathroom is right across the hall. She left her to change in private and she went to make some food

Then her phone started going off. It a dit new message from brian.(mr.m)
[I] salut jasmine! Do toi want to go out tomarrow night with me?"
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Tbc. So this chapter sucked but it was the most I could come up with. Later in the story somethings in this chapter will be explained more.kk.hope toi liked it..
posted by TeanRose424
I was sitting on my bed; my legs were in my chest, my arms wrapped around them. There was a thunderstorm tonight; i've always loved thunderstorms. There was a flash of lightning and my room lite up around me. I smiled; the thunder was next. It was a huge clapp of thunder. Thunder was always my favori part of thunder storms because it was louder than life. There was another flash of lightning; i saw a dark figure outside my window lite up par the lightning.

I was scared. I didnt dare move. I sat without movement; maybe it would go away. But he didnt go away. He tapped on the window; i saw...
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I NEED inspiration for this book. I cant say why, because it will ruin the last book but the school has been rebuilt,and theres a new gardening class, and Haru-Kun, Kariko-Kun, and Shimura-Chan are falling into love, could Kariko finaly fall for Haru, ou could it be Haikuga-Kun? Haru could have his cœur, coeur torn into pieces, ou turned into gold. And Shimura, being the only lesbian in the school could have problems with l’amour too. Karuga-Chan (a new character introduced as a Japenese girl found lying on the plage after a violent storm) changes all of that. Life when thrive this an in Dojenskei Koukou (Dojenskei High School). All these questions and plus will be answered in the garden of Hinjou, the Garden Classroom. Be waiting, Both the first chapter of the first and seconde book are being worked on. (PLEASE give me good names for the third and fourht book, and the main name for the seconde series, such as Burning Passion Book One: The Flame. (oo, I might use that) Byes!)
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (6): Dream



A crystallized life, on the bright TV screen,

But I’ve finally broken away from the dream,

And into the warm embrace of your esteem.

The stage that I left disappears from my mind,

Like suddenly being engulfed par sunshine,

I am truly alive, for the very first time,

All at once, let me sing, let me cry!

‘Til it bursts,

From my lungs, like a child,

Let me smile ‘til it hurts!

Let the blue of the morning

Strike my tearful eyes,

I still don’t know how,

I still don’t know why,

(I still fear this life may yet be a lie,)

But even if this world is the true dream, I want to play out this beautiful scene.


Here it is, the last in the Man With No Eyes Collection! I wanted to complete this on a pleasant note, give the guy some mercy.
added by SymmaGirl2
posted by hgfan5602
I just started going on the path where my life had no light. I missed everyone from our school who graduated, and I really had many amazing Friends there. Friends who gave me memories that lasted forever...friends who helped me out when things got bad...friends who were always there for me. I know, however, that they will always continue to be in my heart, even as they went away from me. If they never come back, they will still have left hand prints on my cœur, coeur that will never be washed away. Life without the light makes me feel so lonely...like a vagabond on the streets with no home...like an eagle with no prey...like me with no one to cry with. However sad this situation I find myself in...I still know that life will go on...and I must continue to strive to be the best I can be. Even without the warmth of my Friends close by, I know that they will always be par my side even if they are not with me. All my Friends are the light in my life.
posted by EmoKidSteven
The noise,
buzzing and buzzing in my ears.
It's just not right,
toi think toi are so bright,
saying toi buzz because toi care.
But it's so unfair.
I don't need your concern,
the best way toi can montrer toi care,
is to leave me alone.
Why can't toi understand?
Have toi tried to understand?
Do I really expect toi to understand?
This is not a teenage problem,
the excuse toi uses so often,
This is about my freedom.
toi think I don't know anything,
toi think I am naive and innocent.
But things are so different.
toi think because toi are older,
toi know plus than we do,
That’s not true.
The world has changed,
We are not the fairy tales that sing,
we are the ones who could take our lives in a blink.
No, toi are lying to yourself,
blocking the truth that would make toi knelt
posted by I_love_Mikey
It would be nice if the world worked like a remote.

Where, if toi were in a bad situation, toi could pause it, and still keep moving yourself.
Where, if toi happened to be in a bad situation, toi could press “pause” and think of what to do next.
Where toi could completely abandon certain aspects of life, like selecting a different episode.
But, if toi skip an episode, toi don’t learn what toi need to learn from it, and toi get confused on the suivant one. You’ll be behind, and unable to catch back up. Because toi just can’t stand to watch that episode that comes first.
It’d be nice if we...
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added by ScreamoGirl
I look out
Into the crowd
Looking for you
Hoping to see you

I search
And search
But can’t find
Your face

In all the crowd
The one person
I wanted to see
I couldn’t see

I was left
With my disappointment
As I begin to think
Of all the times
You’ve broken your word

But then
I should have known
toi never stayed
Unless toi profited

toi never were
A real dad
Never has been
Never will

I look out
In the crowd
Hoping against hope
That toi will be there

But I shouldn't even bother
I'm a nobody
Someone toi never loved
Someone toi don't even know

Maybe someday
I'll learn
That all I get from you
Is broken promises
Half truths
And utter disappointments

So now I say good bye to it all
The hurt and anger
My disappointment
And you
posted by dragonsmemory
"You'll never get the secret from me!" The monsters' eyes gleamed. They wanted me to yell. It was a sign of my weakening resolve. I lowered my voice. "The secret is worthless to toi unless toi know where they are. Without them, you'll be trapped." None of us in the small chamber knew who was bluffing and who wasn't.
"We will get the secrets. Do not worry about that. Your 'friends' helped us plus than they could realize," a large black…thing said. Its eyes gleamed yellow. Not yellow like the sun, but yellow like the foulest thing ever seen. Another spoke up.
"What is in this case? toi act like it contains something of value. Is the secret in there?"
"That's for me to know, and toi to spend the rest of your lives guessing. The secret is going back where it belongs. Tonight. Once it's there, it will be forever beyond your reach."


And that is where I stop. If I get at least ten favorable comments, I'll write more. And be honest.
posted by iluvharrysomuch
Dear diary
Today was my first rendez-vous amoureux, date with Oisin. It is kind-of wierd going out with your best friend. So, we went to brun foncé, dun Drum shopping centre. Then we went to see a movie, and then headed over to hes place. Then Olivia called and asked to go round to talk about girl stuff. I gave Oisin a little Kiss good-bye. Olivia was worrying that Sean might be cheating on her. I didn't know what to say.
Lucy xx



Tell me what toi think. Rate, comment, tell me what should happen next. is it bad?!?
“I can’t even remember why I chose to marry you!” She yelled. Her beautiful face filled with anger, those sparkling brown eyes that I have loved since jour one, bore into me with no affection. She had a dit them, the words I never wanted to hear.
The fight had been going on for an heure now and I started to yell back, I could no longer control myself. Our first real fight in five years. I knew she would be over it soon and that big bright smile will light up her face, but I was overwhelmed too. I was hurt. But I stopped myself.
There were no lights on in our house; the outside light had...
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posted by Ichigo127
I wrote it once when i was down in the dumps =) écriture helps....so if you're sad, Write....it's an easy way to let it all out =D
so, Here goes:
Facades. That’s something everyone has. Some may appear to be tough and cool, others will be cute and delicate but in reality, they’re all same. Pretending to be someone else, someone they’re not but someone they want to be. They’ll pretend to be living, but inside, they’re dead, full of shattered feelings.
Even the smallest acts in this life forces our facades upon us. Someone higher up will insult us and we’ll appear to be sorry and say...
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added by ZekiYuro
Heres a song about my boyfriend and his last ex enjoy

Hey, I heard your girlfriend had a fight with you,

She is a very crazy cheerleader,

She thinks she can fool everyone but she is wrong,

She can't fool me because I seen her bad soul,

She already fooled toi but she haven't fool me,

I seen toi smile everytime toi walked up to me,

I never seen toi smile in days since she showed,

I know what she is been doing behind your back,

I got your back since we were so small,

You walked me accueil and always stay par my side,

She don't l’amour toi like I do,

She don't l’amour toi like I do,

She don't l’amour toi like I do,

Her...
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