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anyone interested in this?

im gonna write a book called "phoebe, bratton, & the mother bird" its science fiction/adventure/a little romance.
its in the future and there are 7 neighborhoods who evaluate what each other invents.
the labratory neighborhood has this one crazy scientist and one jour par accident he lets one of his experiments drink some radioactive thing and it grows eight feet tall. its a bird. the reaction caused it to be a flesh eating bird. its the mother bird. she begins giving birth to a bunch of birds that are cannibalistic. bratton (the main boy who lives suivant door to the crazy scientist) discovers the crazy birds but keeps it a secret until a aléatoire girl (phoebe) on the rue finds bratton's secret notebook about the birds and tries to find him.
they are donné this impossible task of killing all the birds. i have this crazy vision that it will be a seven book series, and at the end of the first book, phoebe asks bratton "why does this have to be so goddamned hard and what on earth does the mother bird eat if she doesn't eat birds like all the others?"
he turns to her and answers, "phoebe, there's only one other thing she could eat. people."

so yeah please give me feedback as soon as possible... yay!

 flabaloobalah posted il y a plus d’un an
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darkling_menace said:
um, its not bad, but it could go a lot farther than just a carnivorous mutant bird on the loose and two kids trying to stop it
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well theres gonna be like thousands of these eight foot tall cannibalistic birds that totally destroy this little district and the world is a living hell pretty much and....yeah. but thank toi for answering i will take your advice.
flabaloobalah posted il y a plus d’un an
ZekiYuro said:
The idea is quite interesting,but it depends on how toi write your story too
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wildcannabis said:
Sounds really, really funny in a weird way. And creative; much plus creative the stuff most people come up with. Roll with it, it sounds cool :)
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