répondre à cette question

écriture Question

So, I'm écriture this story and there are these two guys named Brian and Ethan. Ethan is a player but really has fallen in l’amour with my main character, Savanna. Brian relates plus to Savanna and he really likes her. Who should I have her end up with?

There is this mortal (Savanna,Ethan, and Brian are immortal) that Savanna used to like, if toi wanted to know.
*
Thanks alot to all of toi who answered! I have taken all your opinions into consideration, but I have decided to make Brian Savanna's lover and Ethan Savanna's best friend Jessica's lover... thank toi all so much and I hope toi can help me with further questions! :)
ArtemisAthena posted il y a plus d’un an
 ArtemisAthena posted il y a plus d’un an
next question »

écriture  meilleure réponse

POPclogger216 said:
If it's plus for wraping up a story, then probably Brian. He seems like somebody who would care for her. But, beware of it becoming a stereotypical ending.
If you're just trying to find a good plot twist ou something like that, then I think toi should maybe bring the mortal back in somehow. Bring him in, and then toi can have her feelings spark back up, adding in to the story, then just two guys fighting over a girl, and whatever plot toi already have.
Whatever toi choose to do, I know your story will be really good. Hope this helps!:)
select as best answer
posted il y a plus d’un an 
*
Wow, thanks! That really helped alot! I'll just have to write plus then figure it out once I'm almost to the end!
ArtemisAthena posted il y a plus d’un an
next question »

Réponses

Grrrrr said:
Maybe Brian if he relates plus to Savanna.
select as best answer
posted il y a plus d’un an 
Nutika said:
I like hard l’amour stories so I would choose Ethan. They could have great adventures.
But if Ethan loves her and Brian only likes her... It sounds like some kind of sad ending. I don't know. My once friend wrote amazing story where someone like Ethan was girl's soulmate but she ended with another one who she could lean on but she never really loved. Idea of Brian&Savanna reminded me of that story but still I would end up her with Ethan ou noone ;)
select as best answer
posted il y a plus d’un an 
roxasismine23 said:
If i were écriture this, she would end up with Eathan, idk why..... i justlike stories like that :3
select as best answer
posted il y a plus d’un an 
LexisFaith said:
Here is what I would do. Since Ethan is a player...make her end up with Brian first...then towards the end, let her end up with Ethan. Of course he's going to have to gain her trust and work for her but that's the beauty of it. Turning a player into a one girl kind of guy. Let her fall for Ethan, but go with Brian for an easy way out. She knows she's not going to get hurt. Let Ethan struggle a bit with his feelings and let her push her away so there is that much plus build up to when they finally do get together. That's my opinion :)
select as best answer
posted il y a plus d’un an 
txter32 said:
Another guy!! unexpected twist :P
select as best answer
posted il y a plus d’un an 
*
MDR
ArtemisAthena posted il y a plus d’un an
*
yepp :) i had a guy in my story named Brian... now if they are alike.........
txter32 posted il y a plus d’un an
prodigys_1_girl said:
Brian because Ethan is a player, and dosen't deserve her. Hope this helps :D
select as best answer
posted il y a plus d’un an 
next question »