Okay, so for some reason this got deleted... I don't quite understand why considering everything that's in this is stuff constantly used on fanpop... anywho...
This is the prévisualiser for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and commentaires were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope toi like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately déplacer my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a an now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved liste yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s cuisine explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my cul, ass lately, not Courtney ou Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
salut man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, toi wanna come? Invite Gwen if toi want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story prévisualiser ;P leave any comments!
This is the prévisualiser for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and commentaires were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope toi like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately déplacer my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a an now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved liste yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s cuisine explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my cul, ass lately, not Courtney ou Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
salut man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, toi wanna come? Invite Gwen if toi want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story prévisualiser ;P leave any comments!
Cameron:Mom i won!!!!!!
Camerons Mom:i saw i cant belive toi one total drama
Cameron:YEAH well i have to go check on squeeky
Camerons Mom:about that Squeeky passed away
Cameron:What? Your kidding?
But his mom was'nt so that jour he invited his 2 Friends (Mike and Zoey) To a funeral.
Zoey:I am so sorry about sqeeky
Cameron:(crying) its (sniff)ok
The service was short Cameron burried a shoe box with the hamster in it and then they got pie.
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ok i know this sucks eggs but it was a bad idea i got i also had a idea for a NOCO story appear in a dream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It will be on there page soon.
Camerons Mom:i saw i cant belive toi one total drama
Cameron:YEAH well i have to go check on squeeky
Camerons Mom:about that Squeeky passed away
Cameron:What? Your kidding?
But his mom was'nt so that jour he invited his 2 Friends (Mike and Zoey) To a funeral.
Zoey:I am so sorry about sqeeky
Cameron:(crying) its (sniff)ok
The service was short Cameron burried a shoe box with the hamster in it and then they got pie.
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ok i know this sucks eggs but it was a bad idea i got i also had a idea for a NOCO story appear in a dream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It will be on there page soon.
Noah and drawn turn and look at the arbre were the sound came from....no one was there so they started to talk.
Drawn: toi do no we Lost and will not win
Noah: yes but at least im with you*he kisses Drawn on the cheek*
Everyone thats was behind the arbre ran back to the loser place and sat down.
sierra: wow
Zoey: wait wheres mike.
Mike now Vito : Anne Maria where toi at
Anne Maria:Vito is that you* she ran over to him with a flag in her hand*
Vito: ya
Anne Maria: look i got a flag....wheres yours....
Vito:ummmmm.......just come here *he pulls her to him*
And then they started making out.
Ok i need some ideas i did not do part 7 because i had on ideas so plz help
Drawn: toi do no we Lost and will not win
Noah: yes but at least im with you*he kisses Drawn on the cheek*
Everyone thats was behind the arbre ran back to the loser place and sat down.
sierra: wow
Zoey: wait wheres mike.
Mike now Vito : Anne Maria where toi at
Anne Maria:Vito is that you* she ran over to him with a flag in her hand*
Vito: ya
Anne Maria: look i got a flag....wheres yours....
Vito:ummmmm.......just come here *he pulls her to him*
And then they started making out.
Ok i need some ideas i did not do part 7 because i had on ideas so plz help