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So yeah this topic’s been a long one coming. I’ll say right now, for quite a while now I’ve been very happy to see that there are few Dark Characters, and those that are there are done WELL. So this rant is not based on récent events, it is just advice.

So let’s try to define a dark character. They are basically any and/or all of the following.
~Broody
~Angsty
~A Daredevil
~Anti-Heroes
~Powerful
~Introvert
~Have a lot of secrets
~Hate everyone
~Act uncaring
~Or simply play the bad boy.

What’s wrong with this? Well since this is for Sonic Characters I’ll go with only Sonic-based parameters for this rant, at least for the most part.

Dark Characters CAN have all of these traits and still be good characters. The problem is how many there are. We have SO many Dark Characters, whether they be Shadow rip-offs, ou completely different designs all together. Most of them have the name “DARK”, ou something close. toi look at them and just go “Oh you’re Shadow-Keven-Eleven-Chase-Yong-Mark-3332351. Welcome aboard.”

So even if the traits work in the story, toi look over and see someone doing the exact same thing and toi feel how unoriginal it really is.

I think the main traits that are the most overused and unneeded are Brooding, Angst, Secrets, and being uncaring. I would say being Bad-boys too, but Bad Boys can be upbeat and positive while still being rebels.

These are the characters that go “I’m not going to tell toi my secret even though I have no reason to. I’m just going to fight toi and fight you, talking about how I’ll win even if I lose for no reason.” It’s part of another community’s cliché (and toi know which one), but this isn’t that rant.


So why do people like using these characters so much? Honestly, rebellion. These characters don’t listen to the man, they get the job done, they look epic fighting, they’ve got the epic one-liners, they have the dark past that makes toi go “Oh Loki, I’ll be your girlfriend, I’ll reform you!”

We want them to be the ultimate daredevil beast that gets stuff done, Chews Bubble Gum, sticks up their prey’s noses, then kicks rump. Wanting a character that is that epic is fine, but they become bland because of it.

What led to them being like this? “He was experimented on par the government.”, “She was raised up par ninjas to montrer no mercy”, “He’s a demon”, ou sometimes there’s not even a backstory they’re just… that way naturally. And that’s terrible. toi need a backstory that shows why the person is like this, not just “Oh so he just wanted to be like that? Okay.”

And when it does go the route where the character just chooses to be a Dark Character, they end up as clumsy clowns that need a girlfriend.

The Dark Characters are usually what keeps people entertained with their flashy lights. toi see them still and calm, and you’re just waiting for them to do something awesome. That’s perfectly fine, but that isn’t what happens in Sonic Fan-Franchises today. They just go around killing whoever, then it’s over. The plot is done and it reboots just to pretend that they’re character is awesome.


NO I’m not saying don’t make Dark Characters, but I am saying avoid the traditional Dark Character unless toi actually have a detailed three-dimensional character planned.

And the character can still be dark if they don’t have one of the main traits. They can be a daredevil who kills, and yet not be broody, ou be cursed but not have a ton of power. ou they can be characters that have had tons of bad happen to them but still act upbeat and positive about it. This helps because it makes it harder to get under those layers and get to know plus about the characters so toi WANT to know plus about them. toi want to understand them. And those who make them want to keep them as mysterious as possible for as long as possible because the plus dramatic build up there is the better… until it just turns into annoyance and we don’t care. See what I’m getting at there?


Dark Characters aren’t everything, but they can be done right and have been. I’m glad that I can say that, and I look vers l'avant, vers l’avant to seeing new Dark Characters done well in the future, but again, just because the character is great doesn’t mean it has to be a dark character. No matter how good it is, crowded rooms are still crowded and we don’t need millions of them in one story.

Hope that helped. Leaves opinions in the comments. Thanks for reading.

Eat Pie and Prosper.
posted by XxXLolaXxX
1~ The New Kid? Not Again!


When she first walked in through the two giant cream coloured door, the first thing she noticed was that the strange school had been filled with classical music. She also noticed that all the girls wore skirts ou dresses, all the boys wore a tuxedo ou some type of uniform. What the hell? How did she get here?

All she heard were whispers and that taunting music. Someone tapped on her sholder. Quickly she turned her head to the left. No one there. Then the right. Found her... Aya.

"Come. We must go see Miss Heather." Aya took her hand and pulled her to some strangely-shaped...
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It was 7:00 AM. Chris woke up. He stretched and yawned. He looked up, figuring his sword would be there. It wasn't he got a confused look on his face. "Huh?" He said, slowly. He got up and sighed. He crawled out of his hole. It was not very bright out at all. No one was out yet. He slowly walked through Green Hill. There were water drops everywhere. He slowly kept walking. He noticed the sky was cloudy and gray. He kept walking, then stopped. He gasped. He saw hooded creature with glowing eyes. The creature looked at him then ran away. He shrugged and kept walking. He figured that it was just...
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posted by sierradawn9
Here toi go, Soda-Slave xD

I'll try not to make this a Mary-Sue, guys ;)

Name: Bella Esther
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Nickname: Bellz-E
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Reason for the nickname: Self-named
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Age: 23 (appears so...)
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Race: Hedgehog turned demon
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Gender: female
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Occupation: DJ for raves
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Friends: Has one friend named Xellos. 
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Family: She outlived her family, but calls Xellos her brother.
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Attitude: Lighthearted, but is very aggressive if need be. Humorous, but easily set off. 
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Social Stereotype (goth, emo, popular, jock, geek, etc...) :
Music-loving emo xD
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Alignment: Neutral/Evil
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Fears: Losing her music, losing a fight,...
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posted by sorandom15
ok ignore the spelling kk

1 at first i thought toi where picking on me for my spelling cuse i know im not great at it DX but u made me something and i thought that was relly nice and i figured out toi where trying to help me and we rped it was crazy fun MDR X3

2 ok i gotta abmit that at first i was careful and we rped and that was sooo fun and than i got to know toi and someday i hope we can meet in person
and than u become 1 of my bestfriends on here :3

3 ok first i thought toi where relly wired but then we rped and i had fun u have helped me out and i have helped toi out with plenty of your shadow...
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Written and copyrighted par Zane Luxuria Zenon

Loud and obnoxious shrieks of utter terror were unleashed through the walls of the deceased man who was only referred to as The Doctor. It was no surprise for people indigenous to the area, which is a grand total of one. Screams happen all the time, and he despises them. The very person who causes the yelling is the one who hates it, irony at it's finest. His name is Dsy, a teenage boy who has Amnesia and short-term memory loss.
"I hate the loud noises, I fucking told you!"
His angry remark was followed par the clanking sound of a cleaver. His generic black clothes were slathered in in blood. He smirked at the decapitated head of yet another victim.

"Another sin for humanity, another strain on my blade."
salut ppl! I'm back and here is episode 2 part 2! Now let's start!
Icefire:Hello Molly & Jake
Molly:Hello icefire.
Jake:Hello.
Icefire:So toi are -
Molly:Jason go up to your room.
Jason:Yes mom.=(
(Jason goes up to his room)
Icefire:So toi to are wanted?
Molly:No. We where famed.
Jake:And we need toi to take care of Jason & Crystal.
Icefire:Ok.
(crystal starts to cry)
Molly:It's ok crystal just shhhh..........
Ok I'm just going to skip to the sad part!
Ok it's night time and some ppl get inside the house and try to get Molly & Jake.
Well that's all folks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know right!
posted by thetacoman
Mother burst into the control room, quite literally, actually, as her paws made excellent battering rams.
"ANY OF toi WATCHIN' THE READOUT?" she screamed at Torren and Tydus, who were idly slurping slushie.
"I don't know what you're talking about," a dit Tydus, lying on the floor with Torren sitting on his chest.
"Yeah," chimed Torren, spilling some of his slushie on the floor to have it burn it's way straight through.
Mother stared in disbeleif.
"GET ON YOUR EFFING LEGS AND DEFEND US, YOU-"
Tydus cut her off, saying, "Who are you, anyway? How'd toi get past clearence?"
"I broke them," she said, camly,...
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posted by steve-the-dog
let the story begin Steve the dog is laying in the grass. Man this sucks being stuck on an island theirs nothing to do but eat and sleep i need something exciting thrilling something to get the blood pumping a dit Steve in deep thought at that moment he thought of something A PIRATE that’s it a dit Steve as he got up and started running towards town anybody got a ship he asked everybody. Finally someone gave him a makeshift radeau that not even a feather would touch. well i guess this will do for now a dit Steve as he set off OK now to get to business first things first i need a crew a first mate a navigator a cook a musician a engineer and plus
well i guess we get first mate first i think ill set out north a dit Steve setting sail in the modern world we live in today soon he fell asleep when he woke up he was greeted par marines...to be continued
{this story has been copied off of almost every GOOD movie and book ever}
plz read chapt 1-23 before lire this

she was so beautiful. her beauty made me question my sexuality...not really..but u know what i mean. now i see where Rane get her beautifulness from. the duchess looked at us for a while then asked "Rane?"
Rane with tears in her eyes ran to her mother. misery whispered to me "what a touching mother-daughter moment" it was indeed touching. the duchess lead us into the dining hall and gave us fruits and stuff that i have never seen before. then the duchess asked "So children while have...
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posted by Ashuras-shadow
How strongs your imagination? Are toi capable of doing anything toi want? If your answer is yes to any of these questions then maybe just maybe toi can set foot into my world of terror,romace,hatred and a desperate hunger,and loss of loved ones...

My names Jessy ...





And this is my
story....








* CHAPTER ONE*


MOM AND DAD





"OUCH!!" I screamed in pain. Usualy when i scream like that my parents come running in the door...Awkward nothing happened. I feel my neck (my fingers dip into two indentations on my neck) "MOM,DAD!?!" I yelled helplessly. Still i had gotten no responce. I grabed my scarf and...
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posted by thetacoman
I sat on the sickbed, sulking. "You can't make me leave," I complained.
"C'mon, Festus!" a dit the stronger twin. "We can set feu to mentally handicapped children! ou whatever goths do for fun."
The taller twin elbowed him.
"Look, Festus," a dit Tall. "You can walk out, ou we can put toi in a bubble and float toi out."
Strong folded his arms and stood behind Tall like Mr. Creaux did when Mrs. Sueland yelled at me.
"Fine," I grumbled.
I put the capuche, hotte of my new manteau over my head as we went outside.
"Why is it so bright here?" I asked, annoyed.
"This IS the city of Light," answered Tall.
"And there's a...
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 Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight:I wonder if Silver likes me...
Platinum:You never know men are wierd like that.
Midnight:Were almost at Chaos mountain!
Platinum:Are toi ready to climb it?
Midnight:Yeah if Silver is their than of course!
Platinum:Lets go!
(Midnight and Platinum started climbing it)
Midnight:Hey It's Silver!
Platinum:Hi Silver!
Silver:Hello Platinum and Midnight.
Midnight:Hi Silver.
Platinum:Silver come with me a minute.
Silver:What is it Platinum?
(Platinum asks Silver if he likes Midnight quietly)
Silver:Yes,I do
Platinum:Then tell her.
Silver:Midnight?
Midnight:What is it Silver?
Silver:I like toi do toi like me?...
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posted by thetacoman
"It is amusing, my king,"
answered the servant at the feet of his master. "That a loup and renard should preform our task for us."
"Indeed," a dit the King with a dry smile under his hood. "How amusing that the animaux on our flag should do our bidding." He turned to the flag above his throne. A loup and renard on the hunt was depicted on the cloth.
"How does the battle go?" demanded the King of the slave.
"The rebels shall be put to a rapide, swift end after the last sacrifice is made," answered the servant fearfully.
"Excellent," answered the King. "The reinforcements shall make Grand Nimea whole again. And...
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posted by thetacoman
DOOMDADADOOM!
READ THE FREAKEN STORY, DERNIT!
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I had my scythe at the ready.
I wanted to relish this forever.
The black night metamorphasised to gray twilight, and on we traveled.
Finally, we reached the shack outside of the city where I was raised.
I told the child to watch for the militia.
Ever since we blew a appartment complex to smithereenes, we had to deal with the higher security in the city.
Little did they know the true horror was about to strike.

I passed through the lawn unseen. Not even the birds stopped chant at my presence.
As the door fell before me, I heard a fusil, carabine cock.
Daddy.
In a...
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posted by SailorStar122
Ash walks into Vince's apartment.It wasnt much but what could toi expect from a rue performer."Nice place ya got here."Ash said."Yeah,It isn't much.Its accueil though"Vince answered.Vince and Ash talked played a few board games and watch some animé on a TV from the 50's.


Soon moon white glow filled the sky."I'll be right back!"Ash exclaimed as she ran through the door.Ash soon went on a thieving rampage.Also destroyed the lives of 2 people.Soon it was dawn so she ran back to the apartment where Vince had already went to bed.

Vine awoke to a surprise.His apartment looked like it was $100,000...
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This is an opinion. If toi can't respect it, don't bother commenting negatively. >_>

Anyway, this is to get this off of my chest--The main topic is that some of toi people are mooching off of my idea like it's yours, and yeah--I'm talking about the SONIC'S suivant haut, retour au début MODEL COMPETITION.

I'm pretty sure that when somebody creates an idea for something, toi have to ask permission before toi make your own version, right? :L

Well anyway, this all started when I booted off Katkat57 first because she was voted the most during the competition. Then she made her own version, which caused tons of other...
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ok ive seen five people recolor my pics and im upset bout it so plz do not recolor my pics and toi can recolor my recolor just make em diferent not just color the color a diff color make them plus glacière i do not exept people recoloring my own pics that i created i dont like people making different accounts and put em on there now i aint recoloring again ive gone on the Recolor haters side i dont want toi to recolor then make a new account then post it on there i want toi to supprimer that recolor pic i am talking to toi jordan the bee aka jordan the fox!

ruin the hedgehog im ok with you. toi me...
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The girl with the Angel wings looked up to her and answered. "An assassin named Zak was planning to kill the citizens of this town. He got his assassins to capture them and lock them up here. One of them called help, and I came along."

"What is your name?" Myka asked.

"Anaya," she said. "I'm a healer." Myka didn't exactly know what being a healer was, but she knows that it means to patch up people's injuries.

Suddenly, The orange hedgehog was calling her name. "Pssst!" He said. Myka looked at him. "Can toi take off these ropes?" He asked. Myka bent down and ripped the rope. The hedgehog got up....
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YAYYY IT'S OUT! :D Alright, character time! C:

Main Character: Myka
Best Friend of Myka: Krad Storm (ZeroLunar696)
Good Friends of Myka: Shiro, Norax
Enemy: Zak
Zak's Assassins (3): Keegan (Zenzes), Nazo, Shane (MephilesTheDark)
Healers (2): Anaya, Lofa (Thirddevision)
Others: Typhoon (Marksmen456)

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"Zak, we killed them both."

"Good. Now kill the rest."

"What do toi mean kill the rest?! How many times do toi have to keep sending us out! We're not slaves!"

"Just get out of here, Keegan."

The lights flickered in a dark room. In a chair sat a hedgehog of gray, talking to his three assassins; Nazo,...
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It's me... (duh) and I was lire Danni and Monstrosity's articles about people they admire and their opinions of the people here. Naturally, that got me thinking- I should do something like that!

So, here it is...

I would like to first of all, thank all the wonderful people on this club- toi know who toi are. EVERYONE here who's ever posté anything original, whether I personally like it ou not, has helped me become who I am. (Can't say I'm 100% proud of who I am... But I like to think toi guys changed me for the better)

First off, link. I'm not sure if toi really know just how many people here...
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