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So yeah this topic’s been a long one coming. I’ll say right now, for quite a while now I’ve been very happy to see that there are few Dark Characters, and those that are there are done WELL. So this rant is not based on récent events, it is just advice.

So let’s try to define a dark character. They are basically any and/or all of the following.
~Broody
~Angsty
~A Daredevil
~Anti-Heroes
~Powerful
~Introvert
~Have a lot of secrets
~Hate everyone
~Act uncaring
~Or simply play the bad boy.

What’s wrong with this? Well since this is for Sonic Characters I’ll go with only Sonic-based parameters for this rant, at least for the most part.

Dark Characters CAN have all of these traits and still be good characters. The problem is how many there are. We have SO many Dark Characters, whether they be Shadow rip-offs, ou completely different designs all together. Most of them have the name “DARK”, ou something close. toi look at them and just go “Oh you’re Shadow-Keven-Eleven-Chase-Yong-Mark-3332351. Welcome aboard.”

So even if the traits work in the story, toi look over and see someone doing the exact same thing and toi feel how unoriginal it really is.

I think the main traits that are the most overused and unneeded are Brooding, Angst, Secrets, and being uncaring. I would say being Bad-boys too, but Bad Boys can be upbeat and positive while still being rebels.

These are the characters that go “I’m not going to tell toi my secret even though I have no reason to. I’m just going to fight toi and fight you, talking about how I’ll win even if I lose for no reason.” It’s part of another community’s cliché (and toi know which one), but this isn’t that rant.


So why do people like using these characters so much? Honestly, rebellion. These characters don’t listen to the man, they get the job done, they look epic fighting, they’ve got the epic one-liners, they have the dark past that makes toi go “Oh Loki, I’ll be your girlfriend, I’ll reform you!”

We want them to be the ultimate daredevil beast that gets stuff done, Chews Bubble Gum, sticks up their prey’s noses, then kicks rump. Wanting a character that is that epic is fine, but they become bland because of it.

What led to them being like this? “He was experimented on par the government.”, “She was raised up par ninjas to montrer no mercy”, “He’s a demon”, ou sometimes there’s not even a backstory they’re just… that way naturally. And that’s terrible. toi need a backstory that shows why the person is like this, not just “Oh so he just wanted to be like that? Okay.”

And when it does go the route where the character just chooses to be a Dark Character, they end up as clumsy clowns that need a girlfriend.

The Dark Characters are usually what keeps people entertained with their flashy lights. toi see them still and calm, and you’re just waiting for them to do something awesome. That’s perfectly fine, but that isn’t what happens in Sonic Fan-Franchises today. They just go around killing whoever, then it’s over. The plot is done and it reboots just to pretend that they’re character is awesome.


NO I’m not saying don’t make Dark Characters, but I am saying avoid the traditional Dark Character unless toi actually have a detailed three-dimensional character planned.

And the character can still be dark if they don’t have one of the main traits. They can be a daredevil who kills, and yet not be broody, ou be cursed but not have a ton of power. ou they can be characters that have had tons of bad happen to them but still act upbeat and positive about it. This helps because it makes it harder to get under those layers and get to know plus about the characters so toi WANT to know plus about them. toi want to understand them. And those who make them want to keep them as mysterious as possible for as long as possible because the plus dramatic build up there is the better… until it just turns into annoyance and we don’t care. See what I’m getting at there?


Dark Characters aren’t everything, but they can be done right and have been. I’m glad that I can say that, and I look vers l'avant, vers l’avant to seeing new Dark Characters done well in the future, but again, just because the character is great doesn’t mean it has to be a dark character. No matter how good it is, crowded rooms are still crowded and we don’t need millions of them in one story.

Hope that helped. Leaves opinions in the comments. Thanks for reading.

Eat Pie and Prosper.
Date this chart was completed: 4/6/2012

Profile for seconde Rin (After the Conflicts Arcane)

Character's Full Name: *deep breath* Iron-Nicole Rin Chaos Identity Virus Seven Server Spelunking
Reason ou meaning of name: Rin was the name randomly donné to her par Nick Falon. Iron-Nicole was who she was originally. Identity is the name of her self-appointed species. Virus is the name of what she was in her seconde form. Chaos as in Chaos Energy, which she is composed of. Seven Server because she a Zonac Soul. Spelunking because she felt like naming herself that for no reason at all.
Nickname: Rin, Freak...
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posted by SaraTheDog
I smiled as Cam tried to convence Lee in coming with us."No way!I'm going to the BIGGEST beauty montrer in HISTORY!And I NEED to win!" Lee a dit in anger."Yes but every one KNOWS you'll win.Like toi always do." I told Lee.Lee looked sad now."Oh my dear Sara I forgot it was for you.I'll go because toi save me from Roxan."Lee was now part of are adventure.Cam yawned a fake yawn and put his arm around my neak which acording to Lee means A guy really likes you.And Cam said"Maybe we can--" I pulled away from Cam, even though I'm his girl friend it bothers me when he tries to make a move.I guess I must really want to see my birth parents.
Chapter two: New living situation

Location: Mobius-zone-8, Faconicks, Meridona, North-Tropan, Gas-station

Date: Monday, March 10th, Second-Line-2101

Time: 2:32 P.M.


“This is… uh… well I guess I should just start a new one. My name’s Ni-… *sigh*. I’m Talon. I’ve been on the road for three to five days. I’ve been traveling with two Supernatural mobians, like myself. A girl named Kal, who has a bunch of strange rings, and a living scarf… ou something, and an imploding dude named Jesse. We’re being chased par some Overlander organization, and have lost… our loved ones in the process....
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posted by Molly6
 This Is Mina
This Is Mina
Mina Was In Her House, Alone. Her Boyfriend Called And a dit "It's Over *Chuckles* So Unfortunate!" I Didn't Even Sound Like Her Boyfriend... "That Wasn't My Boyfriend, But Who Was It?" a dit Mina, As She a dit That The Doors Began To Shut par Themselfs. She Felt A Cold Shiver On Her Shoulder, Her Whole Room Turned Into Darkness, It Was An Evil Spirite, Her Name Was Susana The Hedgehog. She Krept Up Her With A Creepy Smile And Sliced Her cœur, coeur Out! Shadow Heard The Scream And Came To See What Happend, He Went Into The House Where He Saw Susana. "I Heard A Scream," a dit Shadow "Oh, It Was Me Sorry I Worried You, Honey!" a dit Susana (Susana Is Shadows New Girlfriend) " Are toi Sh-" Suddunly Shadow Stepped On Mina's Dead Body "WH- Who Is That?!" He Exclained "Oh Nobody, I'll Get Rid Of Her *Chucks Her Out The Window* There We Go!" For 21 Years Her Body Lay There, But If par Magic She Came Back To Life! "What Happend..." a dit Mina, It's As If She Raised From The Dead! How Could This Be?!
 Evil Spirite
Evil Spirite
posted by Ciara-the-Gecko
Chapter 2: Queen of my Heart

*THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS KISSING*

Lyssa woke up, her body ached all over and she felt cold. She pulled the blanket over her properly and looked around, the walls were a bland cream colour, the carpet…the carpet was an ugly grey and it looked terribly worn. There was a faint smell of burnt pain grillé in the air, too.
"Where am I?" she asked to the silence
"You're in my house, Lyssa," Aria replied, leaning on the door "it's good to see you're awake, do toi feel ok?" Lyssa nodded; surprised that Aria had been living in such conditions. She looked at Aria who had changed into...
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posted by snootygirl50701
Under My World -Prologue
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The ground started to divisé, split and crackle. Shrears of screams broke threw. King,Gracie's father and the king of the place, was smiling. Blood smites were smuthered. Gracie looked around. She had it up to here and then but now it was personable.
"Stop! Father,king of Underworld,please stop these men feu at your will." Gracie cried.
"Fine!" He snarled and stopped the men with a signal of his hand.
The men held down their guns. The men cried at what they had to do. A man ran to a bleeding child. The mother...
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Dear my lovely Harlem,

I am sorry. Ever so sorry. For hurting, and leaving and everything to you. I had too. My time will soon be up. I don't want toi ou Sisiro ou anyone else who I l’amour to die ou get hurt when it happens. So I left. There is a war going on when I am. I'd like to use my end to help. Please understand, my love, please do. Please promise me some things. Stay strong for Sisiro. If toi break down ou something like that, who knows how Sisiro would feel. Don't come looking for me. Stay with her. give her my l’amour which she is missing. i want her to know that I still loved her. She...
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posted by shadowxcreamftw
Crystal: oh these fleurs are wonderful Dash <3
Dash: but they're no where close to how beautiful toi are <3
Crystal: *giggles and then kisses him*
*as soon as that happens, suddenly Kazen enters and then a laud noise wakes Dash up from his dream*
Dash: *jumps up from the noise*
Yuki: whoops I may have opened the door to fast and forceful ^^;
Yogi: *followed par Gant* Sorry for waking toi up Dash ^^; Anyway happy Valentine's day! Oh and Slick's out of jail finally! I kinda bailed him out xD
Dash: after a week? If toi were going to bail him out, why wait a week?
Gant: we had some complications....
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posted by HUGE-sonic-fan
 Meranden with robber suit
Meranden with robber suit
Name:meranden (mer-an-den)
Gender:Female
Personality:reckless, bold, lonely

Meranden (nickname:denny) is a robber who only robs because of a person who talks to her through telepathy, but she doesn't know who is talking to her. All she knows is whenever the person wants something and she refuses to get it, she feels a very sharp pain throughout her body for an unlimited amount of time. She can tell the person she'll get the item through telepathy too. They meet up (though the person is invisible) and she gives the item(s) to the mysterious person and then she's free for a couple months. During that time frame, she enjoys life like a regular person, and always wishes she can meet Sonic the Hedgehog. Only when the mysterious person asks for something, is when she'll gear up with her gadgets and suit. She also has the ability to copy her opponent in any movement ou power. She can do a homing attack and spin dash too like Sonic.
 her head is too big for her body, but this is Meranden without her robber suit
her head is too big for her body, but this is Meranden without her robber suit
posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
The city seemed quiet. Too quiet. She knew this. She did her job well. Another nay-sayer of the twisted rumors, silenced forever. Her name is Kiri the Doll. Some say that she can be the most elegant, and at the same time, quite insane.
One day, the authorities caught on to this, and tried to capture her to joint, joint d’étanchéité her away, not much success. She knew she could outwit the authorities until they got smart.
Then, the men in white lab coats came in, carrying a straight jacket, just her size. She was sealed away for a total of 15 years. But right when they thought she was cured of her mental illness, she murdered the guards she befriended, took the keys, and escaped.
Some new rumors had started, saying she now resides in a dark mansion, living with herself and her creations.
posted by -Wednesday-
On April 21st, we were born. My twin sister and I. On the rainy morning, the children of the King and Queen were born. We were born in expectation, my sister to be the suivant Queen and for me to be her servant, her valet. On the morning of April 21st, a church cloche, bell blessed us. It blessed the princess and her valet. But my sister was born without the life I had. She wasn't crying like me. She wasn't breathing like me. She was born dead. But in a week ou two, I was lying in my lit de bébé and my mother's advisor, Harlem, placed my sister beside me. She was crying. she was breathing. She was alive. She...
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Chapter Thirteen: The suivant File part one: Crowds
Location: Phantis File H.Q., Lexistropolis
Date: Saturday, December 16th 4337
Time: 9:40 A.M.

“Y’know when I’m told that we are about to go find some haut, retour au début secret file that can cause the destruction of the world ou something, I would expect people to be up and here a bit plus early.” Tess complained, as she and her brother continued to wait for the other members, outside of the base.
“You do realize that toi *yawn* are the only person in existence toi always acts like you’re on steroids twenty-four-seven, right?” Zen teased. “PEOPLE...
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posted by aly001
Name:Bunny
Age:21
l’amour interest:Shane(she has a crush on him)
Life:She ran away from her accueil at the age of 14. She later met Emily and her friends. Bla bla bla, she later met Shock the dog. Bla bla bla, she later met Shane, bla bla bla. She is afraid of guns.
Other:She lives in the human world[a.k.a my dream world] but later left to Sonic's world. And lives on the Jaguar Islands.
Drinks:No, that's Emily's job.(I'm sorry Emily)
Weapons:Gun,Knife,And that's all.
Looks like:Is a green rabbit.
Clothes:Wears a green short shirt, her pants are Military green. She also wears green sunglasses.
Likes:Sunglasses (more like an obsession), dogs.
Dislikes:Anybody who "kills" sunglasses(long story). Getting hit.
Obsess with:Sunglasses (long story).
Eye color: Green.
Finally I'm done with her bio!
posted by Killaudia
Episode One: "My name is..."

It was a nice afternoon in Mobius. Killer was sitting on some rocks near a pond in a nice, grassy area. Killer was a loup and Siberian husky hybrid with crimson red fur. She was a bit quick-tempered, and it's hard to get her to forgive somebody. She was thinking about her arch nemesis, Mystery, who was designed par scientist to be like a chupacabra, a blood-sucking cryptid. He had a gray body which was covered in scars.He always brung terror to anyone he met. Suddenly, the red wolfdog saw the chupacabra, but he was not alone and he wasn't going for her.

A young vixen...
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It was very gloomy and cold outside. I would have figured that it would have at least warmed up a little bit, but I thought wrong. It was snowing outside, so I decided I'd do things with it. I flew out of my tree.

About an heure later I had constructed a humongous snow-hedgehog. It was no particular hedgehog, just a mobian hedgehog. Not too soon later, a loup walked over.
She had long red hair(literally red), camoflauged pants,a gray shirt, and a black jacket.
"Nice snow-thingy. Unfortunately, it's nothing compared to this." She said.
She pulled out two rocket launchers made of snow.
She aimed them...
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posted by shadowknuxgirl
I look in the mirror
And I see evil
But it doesn't scare me
It's who I am
It's what courses through my metallic veins
I guess this is me
And it always will be
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The moon is my best friend
It shows up every night to listen to what I have to say
I feel I can tell it anything
But one night it left....
Why?
Did it not like me anymore?
Was I a nuisance?
An annoyance?
Did I do something wrong?
I thought I might never see the white stone I had come to l’amour ever again
But it was ok
For the suivant night, it came back
And listened to everything I...
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The suivant morning was dark and rainy.
I got up out my lit and stretched. I got a big smile on my face and put a crown on my head that read "birthday boy."
I was expecting tons of visitors, but only one came. I heard knocking on my door. I opened it up to see who it was.
With a sad face, I walked up to the door and opened it. It was that one Chris the Mechahog guy. He was holding a present and he was smiling. I sighed.
"Hi!" He shouted. He handed me a present and brought in a cake. "How's your birthday been?" He asked.
"Crappy," I said. "I was expecting a lot of people and plus presents."
Chris's...
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posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
(Note: I won't be écriture often. And this back-tracks to my early roleplaying days when I roleplayed as Princess Safaia Sky the Cagon, aka the last old dragon clan member.)

The barely awake, pale yellow sun had just rose. The dragon clan was weak from yesterday's battle with the orcs, they also had plaged the hatchlings... Poor them. I outstretched my electric blue wings, tired and hungry, my tail unfurled as if it too, was tired. My blue hair was in a mess from sleeping on my deer hide that I had made into a roll out bed. My ears Hung low, in hunger.
So I silently ran out of the cave, barefoot...
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The boy steped out. It was dog with a banane with the letter "S" on it."Who is he? He looks like he's 11.""Emily his name is Shock the dog." Ashley said."Hello Emily." Shock said."Hello."Emily a dit in a low voice. Poor Emily, she is now scared that she well never see her little twin sister agin!"Now tell me how do I keep my sister safe?"Emily said."Well, we don't know ri-"Emily cut him off."What do toi mean par "We don't know" Shock!" Emily yelled out."Please I don't like to be yelled at!"Shock said."Will I don't care about toi Shock!"Emily yelled at him."Please stop yelling at me!"Shock said...
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Emily went down stairs and saw the christmas tree."wow". Emily a dit in a low voice."What toi like the tree?"Amy said."Yep, so where are my presents?"Emily a dit in a happily voice."Emily open mine please!"Star a dit to Emily gives her present."Umm sure."Emily a dit opening the gift."Yay!"Star said. Emily opened the present to find something she always want it!"A bow and arrow! Thank toi star!"Emily a dit in the most happily voice."Your welcome Emily!"Star said."Hey Em! Open my present!"Sonic said."Ok where is-"Emily a dit only to see a little chiot to come to her."Is-is this m-my present?" Emily...
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