Heyyyy Lostie here XD
I'm here to write information about this story I'm writing. I know most of toi are bored about hearing about vampires, but trust me, Bloodthirsty is different.
Bloodthirsty is a story about a young girl whose parents get killed par the "Wretchens" (Wretchens are demons). A vampire called Kieran comes to her rescue as soon as the Wretchens turn on her. The girl discovers that her parents are part of a once powerful clan called the Psys, people who are in touch with their psychic powers on a powerful level.
Kieran is donné the job to protect the girl from Wretchens attacking but he battles a problem of his own - battling the urge to drink her blood. Psys blood are meant to be the most delicious blood in all of Pandora (not referring to Avatar).
Joined par his faithful friend Harry, a smart human boy who has been like family to Kieran, Kieran and Harry set the difficult task of leaving everyone they love, to save the last of the most powerful Psys, all in order to stop the world from freezing into an eternal winter.
Please commentaire on this I've already wrote 2 chapters and I need to know what toi guys think :D
Bloodthirsty: Monsters We Are (Book One)
I'm here to write information about this story I'm writing. I know most of toi are bored about hearing about vampires, but trust me, Bloodthirsty is different.
Bloodthirsty is a story about a young girl whose parents get killed par the "Wretchens" (Wretchens are demons). A vampire called Kieran comes to her rescue as soon as the Wretchens turn on her. The girl discovers that her parents are part of a once powerful clan called the Psys, people who are in touch with their psychic powers on a powerful level.
Kieran is donné the job to protect the girl from Wretchens attacking but he battles a problem of his own - battling the urge to drink her blood. Psys blood are meant to be the most delicious blood in all of Pandora (not referring to Avatar).
Joined par his faithful friend Harry, a smart human boy who has been like family to Kieran, Kieran and Harry set the difficult task of leaving everyone they love, to save the last of the most powerful Psys, all in order to stop the world from freezing into an eternal winter.
Please commentaire on this I've already wrote 2 chapters and I need to know what toi guys think :D
Bloodthirsty: Monsters We Are (Book One)
-apple
-raped
-tree
-sour
-lose
-ask
-opinion
-weather
-racket
-enough
-ant
-zebra
-ate
-the
-monkey
-batman
-puffball
-name
-laughter
-muse
-water
-soap
-opera
-why
-weird
-gate
-still
-lost
-ran
-away
-creature
-devour
-paper
-domes
-fly
-until
-question
-unable
-superficial
-needed
-desire
-sorry
-apologize
-okay
-never
-happened
-again
-tomorrow
-dread
-caution
-able
-the
-end
I have absolutely no idea what that was. Did anyone read until the end? (Literally "the end") Yeah, I would've skipped a few words too. That isn't what normally goes on in my mind, since I don't think in singular words, and I was looking around the room to get the words to pop into my head. Did toi get bored before "-the -end" and are not even lire this? Hello? Anyone there? Weird...
-raped
-tree
-sour
-lose
-ask
-opinion
-weather
-racket
-enough
-ant
-zebra
-ate
-the
-monkey
-batman
-puffball
-name
-laughter
-muse
-water
-soap
-opera
-why
-weird
-gate
-still
-lost
-ran
-away
-creature
-devour
-paper
-domes
-fly
-until
-question
-unable
-superficial
-needed
-desire
-sorry
-apologize
-okay
-never
-happened
-again
-tomorrow
-dread
-caution
-able
-the
-end
I have absolutely no idea what that was. Did anyone read until the end? (Literally "the end") Yeah, I would've skipped a few words too. That isn't what normally goes on in my mind, since I don't think in singular words, and I was looking around the room to get the words to pop into my head. Did toi get bored before "-the -end" and are not even lire this? Hello? Anyone there? Weird...
ok people let get this good because if toi like him toi will regret it for ever he was making people do things for his good and he told me to lie about my age when the bible says do not lie that is not good to lie
this is the truth and i am not lieing trust me
toi can ask me anything toi do get
so if toi do not believe me and all that send me something and ask me anything what toi do not get in écriture just do not over do it
do not fan this person are toi will be put up to things toi will not want to do
dont dont dont
thank toi and good bye
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is the truth and i am not lieing trust me
toi can ask me anything toi do get
so if toi do not believe me and all that send me something and ask me anything what toi do not get in écriture just do not over do it
do not fan this person are toi will be put up to things toi will not want to do
dont dont dont
thank toi and good bye
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!