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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. par no means am I forcing toi to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless toi truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before toi start posting. It can be as little as a bio, ou as big as an entire article series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no plus than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he ou she is in, can pull out another trick out of his ou her hat.
4. If toi absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his ou her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aléatoire and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when toi have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the suivant jour you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own ou is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the récent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, ou claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If toi must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, ou so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if toi do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot ou stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutes later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull ou flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to ou dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to ou dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created par you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing ou potential character is a Mary Sue, ou if toi suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, toi can take link. If toi want, toi can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case toi were curious, which toi probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all toi want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, par no means do toi have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Robin_Love
 Ena
Ena
Name: Ena Sikora
Alias: Viveka
Powers/Abilities: dance fighting, flight, hand to hand combat
History: Ena grew up with her parents, her father being a millionaire. Her mother was nurturing and her best friend until the tragic accident tore them apart. With her mother gone, Ena became alone in her father’s house. Teased and bullied because of her father’s power, Ena was alone in the world. She threw herself into her dancing, focusing only on her moves and not the people who sought to bring her down. As Viveka, she became a beacon of hope to her city of Central. She was later approached par Nigtwing...
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 Smart Alex!
Smart Alex!
(So I haven't been on in quite awhile, I'm going to change that, I need an escape from Uni... Expect stories, Rps and general mischief!
I thought the best comeback would be to re-introduce my little bastards, everyone seems to be trying this format so.... Enjoy!)

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Knight, Alex Knight.
Reason ou meaning of name: Sweet, short, rolls of the tongue ladies l’amour it! (Oh boy, here we go.)
Eye Colour: Blue, I think? I can't really look myself. (Use a mirror, don't go cross-eyed!)
Hair Style/Colour: Blond and short but a tad messy, I call it styled. (Bedhead.)
Height: 6.2" / 189cm...
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added by DiscordYJ
Source: me
posted by Mclovin_69
The luminescence of the télévision caste a blue glow through the dark room as he pulled on his black boots over his black body suit.

Deep down he knew that putting on the suit would be the only possible way he had to getting all that money in such a short amount of time, but it wasn't exactly a choice he had liked to make his only option. Adjusting his black spandex sleeve his attention was turned to the screen of the télévision that was set to the News.

"yet another disappearance has happened recently of a 25 year-old Gotham citizen named Miacheal Fisher" the reporter on the news a dit as he...
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Part 3:
“So, Dana, How did Mockingbird and toi meet?”
Robin and Shadow were outside practicing throwing ring-dings and batarangs on a dart-board which was used for practicing archery. Even though Robin was plus experienced than Shadow, they were both of equal ability in most things and so far they were both tied.
“Well”, Shadow started, throwing a batarang which hit spot on in the middle. “You remember Barbara Gordon lire out the schools news and announced there will be two students one in freshman an and junior year?”
“Yah,” Robin said, recalling the image of the cute freshman...
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Muahahahahahahaha!!!





Fang struggled against the ducktape that bound his hands behind his back. We were in the bathroom, Fang was propped up against the wall. He looked at eleven an old me.
"Mel! Let me go!" He shouted. I only giggled.
"Not untill I get your eyebrows!" I said, smirking, holding up the strip of cloth. His eyes widened. I giggled evily. Fang struggled even more.
"No! Dont touch my eyebrows!" He yelled, struggling, growling. I pulled the stick, half covered in sticky, hot wax, out of the bowl. Then spread it on two strips of cloth.
"Mel! Dont toi dare!" He said. I giggled more, then...
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“Really? Again?”
Blade smirked at the black-haired firecaster, whose cheeks had begun to turn pink.
“I thought toi liked our game last night, Fin,” she said, raising an eyebrow.
Fin blushed even harder. “Well, we don’t need to play it again!”
“Why not?” Alek asked. “It’ll be fun!”
Fin sighed. “All right.” She took the bottle off of the cuisine counter, and everyone arranged themselves in a circle, with the bottle in the middle. They all sat there, staring at it, until Aisling spoke.
“So...who wants to go first?”
Everyone looked at each other, willing the others to...
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posted by Obscurity98
1) Tell her she needs to grow (wally)
2) Recommend that one of toi grabs her legs and some one her arms and pulls her. (wally Robin)
3) bragging about a mission (wally Robin)
4) walking into her room without permission (wally)
5) ignoring her cooking conseil (M'gann)
6) not being able to listen to burlesque
7) poking her and act like it wasnt you
8) trying to enforce her into a group hug
9) telling her that Batman wants to talk with her but he isnt there
10) talking in a baby voice
11) sneaking out of nowhere and then poking her (Robin)
12) plain sneaking up on her
13) Argue about Superman being a bad parent...
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posted by Robin_Love
Everyone else was doing it and people don't really know that Devin's got her share of buttons to be pushed. So I made this! Enjoy! XD


1. Poke her
2. Do anything “Wally-ish”
3. Talk about demons
4. Be mean to Robin (her brother)
5. Ask her to play the harp
6. Ask her to sing
7. Tell her to let Cupid know something (seriously, she WILL hurt you)
8. Make jokes about anges playing harps and singing
9. Taking away her Angel's light (Teague -.-)
10. Follow her around the mountain because toi feel like it (Becca)
11. Tell her she's too sensitive (she's an Angel; what do toi expect?)
12. Stand outside her...
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 Caaaaaaaaaal~
Caaaaaaaaaal~
Outside the mur of floor-to-ceiling windows was a maze of red steepled roof tops. Patches of green disrupted the city scape and, winding aimlessly through it at its own free will, was the wayward Spree. The rain had ceased and rays of sun beamed through the spent clouds to create glittering spotlights on the dark river's surface. Taped to the window's surface just above eye level were polaroid pictures of the city taken from different heights and angles. The river appeared in the montage again and again, populated with boats ou bridges ou pedestrians.

"I l’amour it here." Ana jumped at the voice...
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posted by RichiYJ
I'm being forced to post this, ou Mel will have an early death.... Here toi go.





Name: Lychan (Li-khan)

Gender: Female

Age: N/A, but looks 15 years old

Skin color : Light

Hair: Civvies - Dark-ish brown, shoulder-length hair, usually braided ou tied back in a ponytail

Costume - black-ish silver, knee-length hair

Civvies: long, white scarf, black tank top, with long, black jeans

Costume: Black school uniform-type clothing for the upper body, black jupe with dark leggings for the lower body (see picture)

History: Lychan is the sole survivor of her ancient clan, which was completely massacred 100,000 years...
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-Ooc: I have recently fell in l’amour with Harley Quinn (not like that butcha know) Ok so this is a part of Broken Traitor but its plus of an idea.. if no one likes it ill trash it and right a different part in its place so be honest about it ;) P.s. I do not own HQ And don't hate me cos this article-

She awoke..not knowing where she was.. just that she was in different clothing. Her voice echoed,"Where am I?"
Gage's voice replied cheerly,"Oh.. we had to déplacer positions your Friends
were.. On to us."
She glared,"Gage! Why am I dressed like this!?"
"Oh.. 'cos.. now can i ask toi something"
".Y..e..yes"...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Death costume
Death costume
I l’amour this character in animé so I HAD to use him! Besides, it fit the character I was creating!



Name: Kid-kun (confidential)
Alias: Death/Red-X
Occupation: Hero; high school student at Central High
Powers: No actual powers except traveling through portals of the Underworld/Hell. Gifted with two pistolets that can combine with his soul into a cannon. Expert in weaponry, combat, and has above average speed and agility although not super-human. Has a dark energy dimension.
History: No one knows where he came from ou how he was trained. All they know is that Kid is trouble. Everywhere he goes, death follows....
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posted by AislingYJ
 Vincentttt~
Vincentttt~
Yeah, yeah. Sorry.
Name: Vincent Howell
Alias: Sear
Age: ageless but looks 17
Appearance: about 5’10, average build, pale skin, longish shaggy black/dark brown hair that hangs in his face, brown eyes, sometimes wears glasses
Personality: friendly, loyal, kind of hyper, talkative, a mild cusser, easily distracted, random, silly and immature, can be serious though when he needs to, joker, prankster, funny, slightly hotheaded, impulsive (especially in demon form)
Powers: Vincent is an Angel with an inner demon that sometimes takes over. He has a demon form that he can control and one he can’t. The...
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posted by MafiaYJ
The waiter watched for a second. Looking at the quiet girl sitting in a corner booth in the diner. All alone. She looked a bit dressy for being at a diner. A grey dress that hung to her curves, and a blue blazer. And to him, she was actually very pretty, and lucky him, she was in his section. had he been one of his friends, he would have strut over and flirted focusing on nothing but her figure. But he had a bit plus respect, toi know?

"Hello miss! my name is Philip, i'll be your server today. What can I start toi off with?" he was almost surprised when a matching pair of tired brown eyes looked...
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