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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. par no means am I forcing toi to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless toi truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before toi start posting. It can be as little as a bio, ou as big as an entire article series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no plus than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he ou she is in, can pull out another trick out of his ou her hat.
4. If toi absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his ou her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aléatoire and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when toi have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the suivant jour you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own ou is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the récent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, ou claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If toi must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, ou so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if toi do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot ou stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutes later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull ou flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to ou dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to ou dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created par you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing ou potential character is a Mary Sue, ou if toi suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, toi can take link. If toi want, toi can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case toi were curious, which toi probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all toi want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, par no means do toi have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by GlitterPuff
 Maxine
Maxine
Maxine grabbed a root bière from the fridge and plopped herself down on the couch, dreading the event that would take place in Rene’s apartment in a few minutes. The red head came out of her room in leggings, a sweatshirt, and boot slippers, then picked up the bowl of pop corn, maïs soufflé in the cuisine and set it down on the table, tableau in front of the couch. She went to the DVD player and put in their first movie: Finding Nemo. Maxine groaned when she saw the movie choice, making Rene giggle as she went to her spot on the couch. Just when the movie was about to start, Amara came out of her room in footie pajama’s...
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posted by Robin_Love
 For those who l’amour red-heads
For those who love red-heads
Name: Jackson Rider
Alias: J-Rider
Occupation: Shadow hunter
Powers: shadow manipulation, agility, fire, combat expert
History: Jackson grew up with Dylan in the orphanage. He was adopted before it was burned down, but his foster parents were abusive. He ran away and his fully developed powers acted upon his emotions. He accidentally started a feu in a nearby town before he was found par his long time friend. Dylan introduced him into the Shadow Corps, where he was mentored and trained. He has become an expert in destroying shadow realms, only beaten par Dylan himself. Jackson and Dylan have an...
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Everyone still stood in Rene’s apartment, besides Zack, when Tess walked in.

    “Dammit, I though no one would be here.” Quickly she went over to Rene and shook her. “Rene! Wake up! You’re Rene, not Cosette!!” Blade pulled Tess off of Rene and threw her on the floor. Rene woke up quietly without anyone noticing.

    “Tess, we can’t do that to her!” Blade whisper shouted.

    “And why is that?”

    “Because she’ll get utterly confused, sad, and she’ll have no idea what the hell anything is!”...
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DragonAnimations, the owner of the Red Revenge character and series, announced today that the series would be reaching it's finale in the series' sixth book: The Legend Falls.
Red Revenge, who has only been around for a single year, has published a total seven and a half livres (after the full release of What Matters?), completed a four-episode stand-alone season of Becca vs Revenge* (the series was voted to annuler par readers) and several one-shots (some involving characters belonging to different owners).

In July of 2012, Dragon Animations issued a re-boot of the Red Revenge series due to the...
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posted by Blitz359
The escape plan didn't work out as planned.

As the gang began to make their exit, two gunshots rang out, and someone cried out in pain. "Scotch!" Valeriya exclaimed. She crumpled, and behind her, the thug that Aryess had left alive was standing with a pistol raised and a smirk on his face. "One down..." he muttered to himself. In an instant, where his head used to be was but a spray of blood. Throwing his sword on the ground, Richi knelt beside Scotch as she lay bleeding. The others ran over too, concerned for their injured teammate. "Two gunshot wounds," Richi noted, "one to the stomach, the...
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posted by White_Lightning
 Swordsss!
Swordsss!
Name: Christopher Adams
Alias:Avenue
Powers/skills: -No powers.....but, he is swordsman and a expert marksman.
-Field tactics
-Hand to hand combat
-Can make bombs and explosives
Past: Chris was donné up for adoption when he was born, his parents failed to tell their later on kids that had on older sibling. Upon returning later on around the age of 21, he realized both his parents had passed. But had two remaining siblings, Brendan and Crystal.
Others: -Musically inclined!
-A lot plus social than Fang. He's a social butterfly!
-Picks on Fang plus than Crystal.
 Christopherrr~
Christopherrr~
posted by Blitz359
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Several hours later, the trio stepped out of the airport and into South America, specifically, Rio. Without hesitation, Richi set off for the nearest hotel to set up camp, but as he took his first couple steps, one of the girls spoke.
"R-Richi?" The voice a dit shyly. It was the violet-haired girl's voice. "W-why are we in Rio?" He stopped and turned to look at her, his eyes softening for the girl's sake.
"I'm going to go find a couple Friends hiding out here. toi guys are going to the hotel while I'm out. My problems aren't your business, so toi have no reason to follow me." At this,...
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"Damn, it's dark." Nightingale noted to her comm as she walked into the sub-basement.

Lights flicked on one par one with a deep, echoing sound. Standing in the middle of the clean, white, utterly empty basement was Red Revenge. Nightingale's dual pistols were aimed at the Black Hero in the blink of an eye.

"You're on my property." Revenge stated in a 'Im the boss' tone. "Stand down."

Nightingale hesitated a seconde plus before dropping the pistols into the low riding holsters on her hips. She'd changed her costume. Black body-armor with yellow highlights and markings. Her same weapons were in place...
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posted by InfinityYJ
What happens when I'm bored in History class? I start a poem where toi guess who's who. Yay.

Think of when the team was small
Think of it right now
Remember the people, remember them all
Of their powers and how they were found

Imagine the black winged, black haired male (1)
His wife of angel’s kind (2)
Their daughter with a prophecy to never fail (3)
Their son with a strengthening mind (4)

The blonde haired girl with the deathly aim (5)
Her boyfriend with secrets unknown (6)
An unsure teen with dimensional name (7)
Her colorful crush with the clones (8)

A goddess among us controlling her wonder (9)
The...
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Jets brown eyes shimmered as the small blade cut into the wood he held being pealed off to the ground beneath him. The sudden sound of the curtains of the hut opening and loud footsteps echoing inside filled his ears, " what the hell were toi thinking! " she shouted out. He cringed slightly at her tone not looking up at her and muttered out " hello to toi too..", she pulled him up to his feet par the collier of his shirt, " enough with the jokes Jet tell me what toi think you're doing! " her grey eyes shimmered glaring at him. He pulled out of her grip looking away " i dont know what your talking...
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Rene leapt over another roof, looking around every once in awhile. Ciel came up behind her. “See anything yet?”
Rene shook her head. “How ‘bout you, Ariel?”
A couple blocks away, Ariel held her hand up to her earpiece. “Nope,” she said, popping the ‘p.’ “I don’t think Revenge does either, but how should I know? He doesn’t talk.”
“Yeah, he’s like,” Aisling had a sudden coughing fit, “in that way...”
Rowan glanced over at her. “You okay?”
She snickered quietly. “Yeah, I’m fine. Tanner? Fang? Any luck overhead?”
The two landed behind them. “No, nothing,”...
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This is not a fairy tale. There are no happy endings

Power can make even the greatest among us fall.

Allies Fall
Enemies Rise
Friends Return


The Story that changes Everything,
Starts Now



---SNEAK PEEK---


"Mr. Grant, Wayne Industries is the biggest company in the world seconde to LexCorp and us. I highly doubt a buy-out would be a good déplacer on our part. Even if we did buy out Wayne, that would leave us with no money."

Sam looked at the man for a long moment before standing up.

"Follow me, all of you."

Eight Chairmen looked at each other before following the man who's name was hanging above the door. Grant...
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posted by Robin_Love
She leaned against the wall, panting. The sun had set and she had reached a city a few dozen miles away. She was making good time. But something told her to go even further. She tried to take a step vers l'avant, vers l’avant and almost fell off the sidewalk.
“I guess it's time for sleep.”
She hefted the bag to her shoulder and walked slowly into the nearest unlocked building. Shipping company. The bag dropped at her feet and she curled into a ball in the shadows. Her eyelids drooped and she let out a yawn. She reached into her bag and pulled out a small teddy bear. A smile tugged at the edge of her lips....
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Eric stormed into the cave. “She’s gone.”
Delta looked up. “Who’s gone?”
“Your sister! She’s gone!”
“Phoenix?”
Eric threw his hands in the air. “You’re all hopeless. Yes, Phoenix!”
“How do toi know that?” Red a dit from the other side of the cave, beginning to stride closer. Ariel looked up from her spot on the couch, and Tanner came out of the hall, obviously just finishing a shower.
Eric sighed and sat on the couch, rubbing his forehead. “I went to meet up with her at her place. We talked a little, and both fell asleep, and when I woke up, she just wasn’t there.”...
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You guys are gonna kill me.






This was serious. No one could know. Not even Ciel. I had to do this. I walked into the cave.
"EVERYONE! Come, here." At first, I yelled, then it slowly became a indoor voice.
"Yessss?" Silver hung from the rafters. I snapped my fingers, this tugged up my heart, but I put on an evil smirk, and Erasers swarmed the cave. Jaime dropped down from the rafters.
"WHY ARE THERE ERASERS IN THE CAVE!?" He shouted. Just then, I wanted to break down and cry. I pulled my swords and lunged at him.
"Gyah! Clone!" He jumped to the side, sticking out his leg. I tripped, caught myself...
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posted by The_Writer
Yo! Attention all Red Revenge fans! I've got a proposition.

((It's called a contest toi idiot))

Oh, shut up!

Anyway, as I a dit *tapes Sam's mouth closed* I have a competition!

Holly's mask is supposed to be domino themed, but I don't want a Robin domino mask ou one the sidekicks wear. I want something unique, individual, and awesome. Here's the contest:

GOAL: Draw/make/Whatev a domino mask for Holly, soumettre it par November 31st in the images on the club with a link messages to me.

DETAILS: I want the mask to hide her identity (duh) I don't want it to be like Robin's and Speedy's, etc. I want it to be green and decorative.

PRIZE: To the best mask, I'll give the winner "What Matters?" a week before it's release (Dec. 29th) in one big package. The only agreement toi have to make is no spoilers.


Have fun peeps!
Cassie took a large bite out of her hamburger, swallowing a gulp of her chocolat shake. "I'm ravished. That business in Moscow made me hungry."

All that food?" Tim asked, looking at the nice, neat, perfect salade before him.

Cassie shrugged. "Teen's gotta eat. I don't have to worry about the tighty-tights." Cassie stopped mid-chew. "Not that toi don't look good in them."

Tim smirked. He was dressed in a tight T-Shirt and jeans. Cassie was wearing her usual civvies: Red spandex, white and red T-shirt, and baseball cap.

"You realize you've only mentioned the tights eight times in the last three dates,...
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Some of it is Scott's perspective of Gotham city, and some is Scott's past. Enjoy~ :P

Danny looked up from the parking lot, and up towards his apartment window. Scott was perched in the window sill with his head on his knees. He walked up to the apartment and unlocked the door.
"Hey Scott, what are toi doing here..?" Danny sat down his backpack.
"Needed a break....."
"And may I ask what?" Danny plopped down on the couch,
"Everything. Work, the cave. I'm just tired and wanted some peace." Scott looked over at his cousin. "Did I ever tell toi the whole story?"
"About..?"
"That night.."

When toi see...
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posted by InfinityYJ
A/N: Okay! This is loosely based off some Youtube vidéos "11 Drunk Guys Play Slender/Hospice/Sanatorium/Slender Mod."
Warnings for pure stupidity, some cussing, and mentions of alcohol.


You ever heard that joke, 4 drunk Heroes go into the forest at night, with nothing but their stupidity and a flashlight? No? Well, here’s how it went.

The dampness of the forest sent shivers down her spine. Fin glanced behind her, then back vers l'avant, vers l’avant again. suivant to her, Eric was waving the flashlight aimlessly, letting the light hit the dark green leaves of the treetops above and the muddy road below their feet....
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posted by CoaxochYJ
I got borrrrred! So I'm écriture this! Not sure how long this shall continue...




Lexi, even though she was little, had a devious little mind. She had buttered the floor, making it slippery. She took a quarter out of her pocket, and slid it across the floor, it slid across perfectly. She smirked, this was a good prank, and maybe she would earn the titre of, "Prank Master". This would be great...

Jaime rubbed his eyes groggily, and stepped--scratch that--slipped into the kitchen. He slid, and clumsily fell onto his rear. Lexi was giggling madly, sitting on the counter. Jaime winced, then looked up...
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