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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. par no means am I forcing toi to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless toi truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before toi start posting. It can be as little as a bio, ou as big as an entire article series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no plus than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he ou she is in, can pull out another trick out of his ou her hat.
4. If toi absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his ou her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aléatoire and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when toi have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the suivant jour you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own ou is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the récent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, ou claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If toi must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, ou so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if toi do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot ou stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutes later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull ou flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to ou dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to ou dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created par you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing ou potential character is a Mary Sue, ou if toi suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, toi can take link. If toi want, toi can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case toi were curious, which toi probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all toi want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, par no means do toi have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Nudge civvies 1
Nudge civvies 1
Yes, I made Nudge a villain. *shrugs* OH WELL!

Name: McKenzie Styles

Alias: Nudge

Occupation: Villain

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Powers: Flight (wings), telekinesis, ability to inflict a mental illusion of burning pain, expert hacker, experct gunsman, Posses some magic, superspeed, superstrength, perfect vision, and great hearing

Past: Created as a experiment just like Fang, Nudge escaped at the age of 9 along with Max, Izzy, The Gasman, Angel, and Kylie. She traveled wherever Fang went, except when it came to dealing with Seraphs. Nudge was a hero, until her powers spiraled and went out of control. Turning her eyes completely red.

Notes: -Nudge has a 10 an old brother named Keaton
-Nudge has long hair in civvies and short hair in villain
-She is part vampire
-Nudge now has black bat wings.
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posted by AgonyYJ
Blüdhaven
12:00 AM

Agony walked into the old apartment, she peeled off her leather veste that was sticking to her body from the rain outside. The apartment was a dark gray, the only thing illuminating the stained walls and cracked furniture was the flashes of lightning outside and the soft flicker of candlelight in the driest corner casting an orange glow over a old worn out black and white photo of a family. Sighing the red head laid the veste down on the back of a half broken chair, and laid down on the papillon de nuit eaten couch.
“Home sweet home,” She whispered and looked around the apartment,...
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posted by SilverWings13
Another OC Poem

A team is a puzzle of armor,
Many of a single piece.
Fitting together with perfect precision,
Securing every chink.

(1)Fighting the shadows,
(2)Controlling the hidden,
(3)Creating a flame,
To do your bidding.

(4)Flying high as a sparrow,
(5)Wise as a leaf,
(6)Traveling in shadows,
Quick as a thief.

(7)A Phoenix fallen from grace,
(8)Plummet from the heaven,
(9)A dark winged angel,
To catch the fallen.

(10)Measure our distances speed,
(11)Put a speedster to sleep.
(12)Manipulate a natural law,
(13)Dive a hundred miles deep.

Every chink of armor,
Protected from harm.
A total set, invincibility,
No cause for alarm.

I was feeling really guilty for taking soooo long to post this. I'll do another with any remaining OCs I've missed because I know I missed many.
posted by NekoTheif
There was a large group standing down wind. Their chevaux pacing nervously. "I want that girl!" The leader shouted. The men nodded "Come back with out her and your good as dead to me" he hissed. This girl had eluded him for far to long. He had hunted Lycans for as long as he could remember (Lycans are a hybrid werewolf. They can change from their human to loup form at any donné time) His grandfather he remembered had one as a slave. The golden lycan had refused however to shift forms.

It was set loose then hunted. But as the Lycans went into hiding rarely entering their human form ou their wolf...
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posted by Scarlet_Ember
The only memory that I can clearly remember from my past is that horrible jour when my powers went berserk, but I'm getting ahead of myself. My name's Scarlet Adenfeld and this is the story of how I became what I am now.

"Bye Mom I'm headed to school!" I shouted

"Be careful, and have a good day." Mom called back

As I made my way to school I a dit good morning to my dad, he died when I was two so I only know what he looks like from pictures my mom has. Notice anything different, yes I was acctually a normal six an old well that is before I met the witch who gave me my powers. As I reached school...
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posted by Skittles98
“Gambette, how are we supposed to contact you?” he asked. I pulled out a playing card.
“I can’t really answer that. But know this: toi and your team have people watching over you” I said, slipping the card into his hand. Night Crawler, Laurna, X-23 and Scarlet Witch all came up behind me.
“Au revoir, mon ami” I said. I walked away with my real family, who took me to my new home. It was a surprisingly short trip. While Laura had to leave right away, because of the usual reasons, Wanda gave me a tour with Laurna and Kurt. The island was beautiful. Finally, they showed me to my room....
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Early afternoon, gotham docks.
Twan climbed up on an shipingcrate folowed par Boris and Natasia.
He spoke in a loud voice.
Pepol of Gotham lissen,
You micht have heard rumerors about a confilct between myself and Pingweing.
Those rumors are truwe, thoug this is no mere gang ficht this is a full fleged war.
And if thad bird succeeds it wil be your homes he will loot, your woman he will abuse.
So Are toi going to just hide and live to his began call, ou do toi stand whit us, and montrer him this is are city.
A few men stepped forward.
We will stand whit the dog.
Others in the crowed joind them, there numbers...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
((Its long I know but please read to the end and thank toi Discord for help with the titre I just look for a synonym XD))

It was happening again that memory, that horrible memory, haunting him another night. The heavy breathing, the sudden crashes, and the sound of pain pounding into his head.
Then that scream, that woman's scream, the scream of torture and fright, the one that made every hair on his body stood up. Its high pitch and a hellish bang that came after and synced with it, dampening the air with death and fear. It played out as it did eight and a half years ago. The moments that changed...
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"So this....is the under...stan...ding you...and Que....en...Beet...le have." Honesty forced out as Frostbite squeezed his throat even tighter, She chuckled, "Alanna doesn't know I'm her daughter."
Snowflake laid on the floor groaning in pain but was in a bit of shock as she gazed upon the or hair creature. Honesty's face turned a deep red as he tried to chuckle but gasped and coughed for air.
"You a dit before that I had no idea who I was dealing with, but I have to admire you're a pretty good fighter." with that a dit she released his neck and the boy hit the floor. He went on all-fours as...
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posted by SilverWings13
Warning: Kind of creepy

The young woman fought her heavy limbs to pick herself up from the ground. Her cat-like eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness. The end of the tunnel disappeared into the darkness not far ahead, freezing air whistling toward her from that direction. The walls were covered in what she thought was ice, but when she reached out a tentative hand, the white frosting pulled like spiderweb. As she drew her hand away, thin strands stuck to her fingers like glue. A panicked whine escaped her and she pulled at the webbing. It untangled from the wall, slowly revealing a trapped, pale...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Minkabh
Minkabh
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Minkabh Lyons
Nickname: vison
Reason ou meaning of name: Minkabh is Egyptian for “Justice”
Eye Color: Dark
Hair Style/Color: Long, Dark
Height: 6’3
Clothing Style: Depends on my mood
Best Physical Feature: My eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: None
Your Guilty Pleasure: Belly rubs
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Shedding Cats
Your Ambition for the Future: To rule

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I have too much energy
What toi Think About the Most: My home
What toi Think About Before Bed: Not enough energy
You Think Your Best Quality Is: My awareness

LAYER...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
1: link
2: link
3: link

Make your own: link

INTERRELATION WITH OTHERS

-Is character divorced? No

-Has character ever cheated on any signficant other? No

-How does character relate to others? Talents and Strifes

-How is s/he perceived by...
Strangers? Moody emo
Friends? Interesting but slightly scared of her
Wife/Husband/Lover? :3
Children? Funny lady

-What do family/friends like most about character? How caring she turns out to be, once toi break through that cold exterior she turns into a whole different person. She has a sense of wisdom about her, makes toi feel sûr, sans danger when your in her company.

What do...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Alex sat at her desk, humming quietly as she tapped the pencil on the notepad. "Where is my brother..?" She asked herself, tilting her head. The shorter layers of her hair fell from the ponytail, framing the blonde's face. "He's really tough to find.. But.. Where there's a riddle, there's a way..." She hummed out and stood up, sliding open her closet door. The blonde quickly changed in her usual hero suit, opening the window of her apartment. Alex colombe out of the window and spread her wings, closing her eyes at the breeze. She flew in silence until she landed at Arkham Asylum, tucking in the...
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posted by Robin_Love
Listen. Read. Enjoy X3

link


A dark figure shadowed the light from her window. A hand clamped over her throat and warmed neck. The hand tightened on her neck, strangling her. The shadow’s eyes shinned or in the darkness. The shadow had four horns and giant wings. Silver fangs dripped drool down on her. Red smoke breathed from its nostrils, framing everything in her view. A cold clutched at her cœur, coeur and the shadow’s feu illuminated its ugly, scaly face.
Scales were peeling off of its skin, some with a darkening black poison. Its tail swung around, creating plus smoke. The creatures giant...
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posted by InfinityYJ
Okay, so most of these were made up when I first made Fin, but then the rest I just made up today with help because I'm an idiot and wanted 13 reasons why Fin's lucky number is 13. Because, toi know, an 2013.. *shrug* Idk man some of these are really weird but they're all damn true.
[Remember that I was only like 12 when I first made Fin.]

1. She was born 13 minutes after Robin

2. Born on the 13th stop on the (circus) tour

3. 13 stuffed animaux she slept with

4. 13 hours awake everyday

5. 13 when (first) she died

6. She dies every 13 years

7. 13 reincarnate form of the phoenix (don't got a clue...
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posted by Robin_Love
“Under the sea?”
“Been done already.”
“Night in the clouds?”
“Too simple.”
“Uh....Medieval?”
“Used too often.”
“Ugh! This is hopeless!”
Becca looked at her upside comrade.
“Devin, we'll find a rockin theme for you. I promise.”
Devin turned her gaze from the window to where Becca sat upside down. Since Devin had wanted privacy, they had gone to Becca's place. And hadn't been interrupted since entering.
“Fine. But I just can't see how.”
“Think outside the boring fun box.”
“That was contradictory.”
“Whatever.”
Devin turned her gaze back to the outside view. She...
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posted by CoaxochYJ
Cold as steel...



Silver needle oh so sharp...
It hurt so bad when it broke my heart...

couleurs of pain all around....
Yet it hurt....I couldnt make a sound....

She stroked my cheek, and told me it was alright....
But I grasped hope instead, for dear life...

When all hope was gone away....
I thought I was there to stay....

Then the miracle of the day....
Someone came.....and snatched me away....

Unsure of what to do...
I just cried like a fool....

A wolf, a cyborg, and a savior tried to comfort...
But I trusted no one....ever since the export...

Now I still feel a little queasy....
So they force me to take it easy....

But now inside I hear the voice...
And she is giving me no choice.

Hehehe......Guess whats its based on!!!
posted by ScarletYJ
This article is based off a fight me and my younger brother had, please don't flame as some of the things a dit are very personal

There will be swearing just warning toi now
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I was sitting at the cuisine table, tableau at the house that my father had onwed before he was murdered. Keith and I had decided to meet up after not being in contact ever since father was murdered. But I had no idea that this meeting would go horribly, very quickly, I heard footsteps lazily make their way to the counter and I turned around to face...
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