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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. par no means am I forcing toi to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless toi truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before toi start posting. It can be as little as a bio, ou as big as an entire article series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no plus than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he ou she is in, can pull out another trick out of his ou her hat.
4. If toi absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his ou her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aléatoire and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when toi have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the suivant jour you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own ou is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the récent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, ou claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If toi must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, ou so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if toi do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot ou stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutes later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull ou flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to ou dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to ou dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created par you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing ou potential character is a Mary Sue, ou if toi suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, toi can take link. If toi want, toi can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case toi were curious, which toi probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all toi want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, par no means do toi have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
Ravage Part III 6


Chapter Twenty-One:



Revenge trudged ahead. Despite the pain his spear-wound was causing him, he ignored it. He refused to let anyone look at it. 

It was bad enough he was in this hellhole looking for his sister. But on haut, retour au début of that, he'd found Cassie first. And she had found a guy...who she was flirting with.


Flirting wasn't exactly the word Cassie would use. plus like...talking and understanding. Liam was very much like her. Youngest of his family, full of enthusiasm, always managed to make mistakes.

He had extraordinary abilities which always seemed to heighten his number of...
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posted by The_Writer
Ravage Part III


Chapter Sixteen: 



"N.O.W.H.E.R.E.?" Robin and Kid Flash growled.

The rest of the team looked lost.

"N.O.W.H.E.R.E. is a terrorist organization who capture and experiment on meta-human teenagers. Robin and Wally had...experiences with them." Nightwing explained.

"When I get my hands on them..." Wally began, but Nightwing held up a hand and Wally fell silent.

"Batman is currently...out of town and won't be back in time. I'm taking emergency authorization to send a squad  to save Artemis."

Nightwing thought for a moment before continuing. "We'll need some people who can fake not knowing...
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These would be their kids. xD This is a future timeline, par the way. Like probably 20 years ou something? Cuz she probably had her oldest when she was in her 20s and the oldest is 12 so....You do the math.
Name: Lily Brooklyn Cohn
Alias: Midnight Streak
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Appearance: brown hair, wavy, medium length, green-blue eyes (more green than blue), average build
Powers: speed, strength, can turn invisible par manipulating darkness
Weapons: martial arts/combat
Personality: talkative, slightly gullible, headstrong, kind of has a temper, determined
Name: Chandler Austin Cohn
Alias: Coda
Gender:...
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((I was going to post other ones (2 other articles) but they got erased from my compute D: any way.. This article is going to be VERY dark... So if toi don't like dark articles don't read.
Btw this is a Song Fic! So the italic words are the verses. Unless it's a name))

"You didn't kill them did you?" Gage a dit calmly looking down with his eyes closed.
"Yes I did, Gage.." Her voice trembling.
"No toi didn't, toi know what happens when toi lie."
"I'm not lying!"
He hit her... hard.. knocking her unconscious. This has happend twice this week but he always does something new.
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Past: Scott was born in a small town of around 1,000. The community he grew up was a quiet one, never on the news, never any gang fights, but plenty of preps. Scott’s younger sister (Sarah) came along when Scott was 3. Years later Scott was running around with his Friends when a Lightning bolt struck him. When he awoke he had snow white hair, and new powers. The lightning activated his dormant powers, being 9 Scott learned he had to keep his major emotions under control ou else catastrophic storms would appear. Sarah was killed par Scott accidentally when their father was beating Sarah. Scott...
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posted by Robin_Love
 bêche costume
Spade costume
Name: Rylan Touya
Alias: Spade
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Agility, acrobatics, ability to manipulate, trained in hand to hand-to-hand combat, flight, trained with a pair of Sais, jinx factor
History: Rylan Touya was born and raised in Japan. Both her parents were of German background, but Rylan's mom married a Japanese man after her husband died; Rylan was three. Rylan's new father was a scientist experimenting with all kinds formulas. When Rylan was five, she discovered her new father was trading and making deals with the villainous Poison Ivy. Rylan tried warning her mother, but was ignored. Three...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Gimmick costume
Gimmick costume
Name: Zero
Alias: Gimmick
Occupation: Android; hero
Base: Metropolis
Powers: can walk through solid objects, can mimic abilities, lightning, super-senses.
History: Zero was originally made par Cadmus. He is an android; a robotic device made with human emotions and patterns. He was imprisoned in a chamber, sleeping. He was freed par his Friends Terror and Zeth. He began to learn of his powers and joined the X-Men, who all had some sort of ability like his. Once he was able to control his powers, Zero became a hero. He has often ran into Terror and Zeth on several missions. He has also met Teague the...
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SUPER PREVIEW 
To 
Ravage Part III: Going N.O.W.H.E.R.E.


Revenge grinned and grabbed the girl behind him par the neck before dropping her. "Cassie." he growled.

"Good to see toi too." Cassie replied, rubbing her neck. Revenge glanced at the male.

"Who's your boyfriend?"

"Liam. He's a meta. Helped me."

"For now." Revenge said, narrowing his eyes.

"I don't like you." The guy stated plainly.

"And why not?"

"You've got too much hatred, anger, but also fear. Fear for Artemis and fear for...yourself."

"Well wiseguy, who is this Artemis?"

Liam grinned. "Pretty fierce warrior who'll kick your butt. I'm sure she...
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posted by Obscurity98
Harley eyes fluttered open as she looked around. Her hands where strapped to a chair and so were her legs. She tried to pull loose, but she couldn't It surprised her, Nothing, ou at least almost nothing, could have led her.
Her eyes darted around the lightly dimmed room, and they feel upon a human figure, and out of the shadows where she looked came Klarion.
"Can't get out of your chair girly? toi might be wondering why."
"Like hell i'm wondering why! what do toi want with me?"
"Quiet girly! I ask the questions here!"
"Yeah and we both want answers, so give me mine and i'll give toi yours."

Klarion...
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posted by Obscurity98
I sat on the roof haut, retour au début of a big corporate building, when i hear sirens. I smiled, I and took off towards the sirens. I always had a knack for beating the bad guys. Buts of been my drive for wanting to be a superhero.
I ran all the way, not stopping to breathe. I jumped, roof to roof, and my eyes landed on a large bank heist. i jumped down onto the rue and the earth shook just like i wanted. It usually drove fear into the Villain's hearts. And made them freeze, but not this time, I ran into the building, ignoring the policemen's shouts, and my eyes flamed with the feu i finally learned to...
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posted by ShadowYJ
Name: Lara Nightingale

Occupation: Hero

Hero Name: Nightingale

Age: 16

Appearance: Dark-brown hair, green eyes, tall and slender

Powers: Has the power of flight, strength and longer stamina.

Abilities/Skills:
Knows jujitsu and is very good at evading enemies.

Hero costume: Purple crop haut, retour au début with long sleeves (With an "N" logo) Black pants, black boots, yellow utility belt, and a black cape with hood.

Civvies: Green crop top, three-quarter jean pants, white shoes, black baseball cap.

Weapons: None. She has her powers-she doesn't need weapons has her powers are strong enough.

Personality:
Sarcastic and is a friendly person.

Family: Her grandma is Talia Al Ghul and her parents were killed in a plane crash-so she's a orphan.

Story: Came from the future (52 yrs from time)
posted by Obscurity98
I posté this b4 on YJ group, now here for some ppl to know my relationship status with Kaldur!

( B4 Kal went rouge)

Harley kicked the punching bag with fired anger. Roy had promised her a rendez-vous amoureux, date tonight but then canceled because of a Cheshire sighting. He always canceled. She Kicked it again, and it went flying on the hook and sand spilled from the bag. And the punching bag slammed into Kaldur as she walked in. he was pressed back against the wall, and Harley ran over to help, "Oh god Kaldur! are toi okay!?"
Kaldur stood up brushing himself off, "Yes, i am fine thank you." He looked at her and...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
SERIOUSLY?!?!? All this stupid fighting is getting old. toi guys have seriously pissed me off, and trust me, it take ALOT for me to say something.
YOU GUYS ARE jouer la comédie LIKE A BUNCH OF GIRLS I GO TO SCHOOL WITH! Seriously! I don't care if you're gay/straight/lesbian/or whatever! I'll still talk to you, I'm not going to blow toi off and block you, ou ban you. I think it's wrong, but that doesn't mean I'm going say anything to you. toi are who toi are. If toi make that choice, then SO BE IT! This rule stuff is getting old too, no matter where toi are, people are going to copy. toi people who make...
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posted by 66Dragons
"Quite impressive." A voice whispered in Revenge's ear. 

Revenge kept his masked eyes forward. "Yes. Quite. toi secured things on your end, partner?"

"Yes," 

"Good, now we let the two sides fight it out."


A van screeched up in front of Alpha Squad. Gas flew out of the van and in a few seconds, the entire team was unconscious. Masked men walked out and threw the teens into the back of the van.

Sam flew unconscious into the van. A shadowy figure landed suivant to the men.

"Missed one." the female said.

The men nodded and got back in the van before driving off.
posted by Obscurity98
It was dark, i remember, but around me everything was moving i could hear it and feel it. The mask that i wore to keep me breath was the only thing that kept me alive. I could hear all the glass breaking, and suddenly i felt a stinging on my skin, as i looked up i saw chemicals, pouring into the test tubes. My water was infected. I needed to get out. My little five an old fists banged on the glass tube around me, nothing was helping. I couldn't get out, suddenly a large movement occurred it sent my tank flying, and it crashed to ground and broke open, and i tumbled out, water gushed onto...
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Homework One-Shot

(This fanfiction may include SUGGESTIVE material not appropriate for younger people. Just a warning)




Sam had just come back from a diving mission in New York Harbor. His suit was soaked as was he. And he smelled like garbage. He was just about to step in the showers when his phone buzzed. Sam picked it up. It was a text message from Holly.

"Pls hlp w/ hmwrk"

Sam sighed and replied he'd be over in ten before stepping under the hot stream of water. He bathed quickly and dried off, slipping on a white manche longue, manches longues chemise and a red button up that was left undone. He slid on jeans and...
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posted by MaiaYJ
OOC: Tell me if toi guys like it! I might just continue this if toi do! Key: Anything in italics is a flashback!



"They're in our forest!" Maia shouted angrily, throwing her quiver and bow to the ground. "Why are they in our forest? It's our home!" She glanced to her adoptive sister sitting lazily on the couch, petting the furet on her lap. "I don't know, maybe they live around here ou something? A new neighbor?" Ryder didn't take her eyes off the leather-clad book she was reading. "You don't get it! They're going to drive us off our own land and kill us! Just like they did with mom and dad!"...
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I wrote this before I was half done with RoR. It won't fit in the storyline now, but to avoid too many spoilers, this is your super preview. Oh BTW: RAVAGE PART II TOMORROW!!!!



"Where's houx and Artemis?" Revenge asked, swinging down suivant to Nightwing and Batgirl.

"Here!" Artemis called, running up. "Holly's inside planting the explosives!"

"That's my girl." Revenge muttered.

His HUD flashed red thrice. A symbol he had hoped was an accidental set off.

"Evacuate the area!" Revenge yelled, firing his grappling line at the school and swinging off.

"You heard Revenge! Move!" Nightwing yelled. He ran...
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25 Ways to Survive your First Encounter with Red Revenge (Alive, that is)


1: Do NOT call him Samy, Sam, Dude, Bro, etc. Call him "Red Revenge" ou "Sir" (Double R is fine too.)

2: Don't make fun of the cape.

3: Don't make snide commentaires about losers who don't have superpowers. (Last I checked, the guy is still in ICU)

4: Don't make remarks about him jouer la comédie like Batman. (You'll wish toi were in ICU)

5: Don't mention the word "revenge" and "unnecessary" in the same sentence.

6: Don't make snide remarks about rich brats who buy friends.

7: Don't insult Holly.

8: Don't ask why he's partnered with a bunch...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
Kenzie freaks out when Robin tells her that she's going to go insane if she stays with Brennan for too much longer. She watches the fight begin as Brennan picks her up and tightens his grip on her. Screaming, she accidentally freezes time. She then asks for an explanation from Robin, who tells her Fin's real story and who Kenzie was. Kenzie gets really upset par this and time is unfrozen, but no one actually notices. Chelsea gets the upper hand and attacks everyone.

OOC: FINAL INSTALLMENT FRIDAY!!! 'bout damn time too...