Héros de l’Olympe Mark of Athena Fanfic, arc en ciel Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
last edited on Jun 27, 2012 at 09:29AM

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il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
^The forum has been abandoned because of school. :(

Unless someone wants to continue it! ^~^

By the way, we've reached over 1000 posts! YAY! :D
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
I claim 999 comment. you should continue it, festus.
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Yah!
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
See? Cinn agrees!
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
Lol xD I would be too stumped for ideas. xP

...but you could continue it! >:D
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
I can't cause Im banned from Fanpop. My dad even took the Internet away from my iPhone!
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
Come on festus! But you are so good at writing! I suck, but you are super awesome.
Cinn, that really sucks. I know how that feels, when I got busted on fanpop....Not cool. Not cool at all.
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
surprise
^WHAT?! You're an awesome writer! :O

Cinn: That's horrible! D: I hope he gives it back. :(
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
smile
u all are aweshumm writers

good luck cinn xD
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Not anytime soon...
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
Nah Festus you've never seen me write.

We need to petition for Cinn!!!!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Lol And actually festus, I HAVE AN OFFER FOR YOU!
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
Which is... *gestures with hands*
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
angry
well fuck.......
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
^Mind your tongue. O.O

Cinn: ...what offer? *intruiged* xD

Snow: I have seen you write! You're awesome! ^-^
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
MInd your language, please.

Cinn, just tell us! Or at least Festus.

I don't think you've ever read my forum or anything, Festus....So how could you have seen me write?
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
LANGUAGE Lt -.-

previous forums?
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
If you post, I will introduce you to about 3 amazing eps/forums, give you 30 props and ill be your idea advisor for as long as you wish.
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
big smile
HEY GUYS!! GUESS WHAT?!?
i might be able to continue this forum. ive started writing the next chapter, but i am going to need some ideas from u guys. so please message me if u have an idea. other than that, ill will try to keep writing. ill probably try to finish bout 3 chapters before i post.
remember, if u want me to really continue, MESSAGE ME PLEASE!!!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
YESH!!!!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
smile
Lol. glad someones excited.
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
I will give you some ideas:)
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
BOO YAH !
no ore sadness
can't wait
il y a plus d’un an teamleo said…
big smile
HALLELUJAH!!!!!! Rainbow's back rainbow's! This calls for a dance! <(-.-<) (>-.-)> !!!! Woohoo!!! I'll have to reread he past chappie cause I forgot so I have no ideas right now! Maybe later..
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Yayz!!!
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
Rainbow was never gone...?
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Really?
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
im confused ....
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
Im confused. but anyways, i was thinking and talking/messaging snow.
do u think i should continue this or start an hoh?
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
^I don't mind either way, as long as you keep writing! ^-^
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
P
O
S
T
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
hey guys! ill be posting a previrw soon! maybe 1 to 2 hrs.
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
big smile
okay! heres the preview!!

Annabeth
“So, Percy. Do you like your room?” Annabeth already knew the answer was yes, but she still wanted to hear it from Percy himself.
Her voice seemed to jar Percy from his trance. “It's amazing.”
Annabeth smiled. She had designed everything in the room like his cabin at Camp Half-Blood, with some extra gadgets that she knew he would love. Percy pulled her close and she felt his warm lips on her forehead.
Annabeth breathed in the salty and breezy smell of Percy, hoping to never forget it. “I love you,” she whispered.
“So do I,” he whispered back.
Someone behind them cleared his throat. Will.
They quickly broke apart, blushing fiercely. Percy scratched the back of his neck nervously and glanced at her. “Uhh...”
Oh dear, she thought. “What is it?” Annabeth asked, before Percy could say anything bad.
Will looked between them. “Leo wants Percy to steer the boat so he can take a break.”
Percy sighed and rushed off, leaving Annabeth and Will standing in the corridor awkwardly.
Will cleared his throat loudly. “I guess I should check on our ambrosia and nector supply.” With that, he rushed away.
Annabeth frowned. Why did he seem so uncomfortable around her all of a sudden? She thought about calling him back, but stopped herself. A sudden chill went down her spine and she shivered. Annabeth looked around her, but there was no one. She sighed. Her past few months had probably made her so jumpy. She decided to ignore it.
Lost in thought, Annabeth didn't realize that there was someone in front of her. Too late. She crashed into Frank.
Frank managed to steady her. “Woah. Steady,” he said, laughing.
“Thanks, Frank.” Annabeth blushed. “Where are you off to?”
She knew immediately that she had hit a sore spot. His smile disappeared. “I saw Hazel walk into Leo's room a few minutes ago, and I wanted to...” he faltered.
Annabeth suddenly felt bad for the big guy. It was obvious that Leo and Hazel shared something in common. Something that no one but Leo and Hazel knew. And it was clearly bothering Frank.
She tried on for a confident smile. “I'm sure Hazel wants to figure out what's going on. It's no biggie.”
Frank nodded sullenly.
She patted him on the back. “See you later.”
“'Kay.”
Annabeth turned and jogged down the hall and to her room. She turned back one last time and saw Frank still standing in the same place, staring down at his hands.
She slipped into her room and sat on her bed with a sigh. She was about to relax when she felt that odd chill in the air again.
What the heck?


DUN DUNN DUNNNN!!!!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
SWEET!
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
u ish evilish!
vhat the heck is vappening?!>
postttt
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
smile
Whats up w/ the "v"'s harmony? ^_^
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
...........................
il y a plus d’un an teamleo said…
Ohhh rainbow, why did you word that comment to harmony like that? haha lol! That was awshummmmm!!!! So I am guessing Will likes Annabeth huh? Typical. You better not break up Percabeth or I WILL COME AFTER YOU WITH A SHARP STICK! Post soon!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Umm which Will? I wasn't here...
mechdemigod commented…
is your name will? il y a plus d’un an
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
dot dot dot...
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Dot dot dot. Ellipses...
il y a plus d’un an mechdemigod said…
hmmm
please post soon!
il y a plus d’un an mechdemigod said…
angry
hurry up rainbow
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
hurrrrry it uppp rainbowwwwww
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
NOOOOOO JASPER PERCABETH!
il y a plus d’un an mechdemigod said…
laugh
go liper and percabeth
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
JASPER!!!!
il y a plus d’un an mechdemigod said…
liper
il y a plus d’un an mechdemigod said…
liper shall dominate. please do liper rainbow
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
tongue
Sooooooo sorry! Im sooo busy right now and havent had much time. And i have 2 essays to work on and 2 other forums.
Ill try to work on it asap, but it still might take some time.