Héros de l’Olympe Mark of Athena Fanfic, arc en ciel Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
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il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
meh
uhhhhh.......
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
^Lol xD

Don't worry, I don't care what you do with the love shtuff. You could kill off Percabath and destroy us all. xD I just know it's gonna be AWSHUM anyway. :D
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
ummmm....okay...
ugh. my computer wont let me sign in, so im using my phone right now. sooo annoying.
il y a plus d’un an Phrabow said…
wow all the respect for jason i had is now gone
mechdemigod commented…
ditto il y a plus d’un an
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
yea... liper seems like the best strategy.

Also why are you guys so shocked? i mean well if they were 17 then of course. 16 alright. 15 believable 14 erm.... um ok.... but can happen. 13.......... not unheard of. cause people usually have sex at like 16.
mechdemigod commented…
go liper! il y a plus d’un an
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Hi I lost my page so can N E 1 explain 2 me? Oh and I read the last couple comments and have decided I like the book version better 'cause,I admit it I have an over powering crush on Leo Valdez. My friends tease me about it.
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
Confused......
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
about what?^
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
Btw, WELCOME BACK CINNOMOMINBUBBLE!! I MISSED U!!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Hi I used to ask if N E 1 missed me, but Corrected thinks I'm retarded so I stopped:(.
il y a plus d’un an seaistruth said…
Hey this is amazing I'm
New here and it's really good quick question
A what pov?
B that's pleas post it's really good and on the other one its also
Good ok bye now
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
point of view.
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Ok then. Please tell me what's going on!
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
um... a week or two ago meredog got raped and now we all dont rlly care about talking about stuff related to sex on fanpop atleast. Real life dif story, people say whatever the shit they want.
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
...ok... I meant in the story but okay... That's creepy.
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
big smile
YESSSSSSS!!!!! I FINALLY SIGNED BACK INTO FANPOP ON MY LAPTOP!!!
thank u soooo much for being soo patient w/ me! a post on saturday!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Aww. That means I won't be able to read it for the whole day! (I have islamic School:()
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
oh. that sucks.
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
IKR! And I have swimming and piano on Sunday!
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Please post soon! WE SHALL WAIT! ^~^
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
OH PINEAPPLE! POST ALREADY! Pwease *innocence*
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
i just got back from chinese school, but ill work on it. its pretty late at night right now, so i might now be able to finish it, cuz im having a mini writers block, but like i said, ill post on saturday.
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
IT'S SATURDAY!!!!:)!!! 8:27 in the morning but still, SATURDAY!!:)
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
smile
dont worry! im working on it, since its gonna be a LONG LONG chappie.
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
posttttttttttttttttttttttt
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
tongue
guys, calm down. ill post when i have time. im working on a psat right now. and im actually sneaking on the computer right now.
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
^It's okay! ^-^
Like I said, we shall wait! :D
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
It's Sunday!
I will wait!
*raining on me* WILL STILL WAIT!
* My sister is pestering me* STILL WAITING!
*Some random gumball hit me in the head* STILL WAITING!
....so on and so forth.
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
IM SOOO SORRY!!!!
first, i was gonna work on the chappie, but my dad kept pestering me, so i couldnt
then, today, i had a parade till 2:30, so i didnt have time this morning.
but i will work on it!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
Eh I'm fine unless my Cheetos run out... Then I'll stalk you. Yummy Cheetos...
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
i like hot cheetos. anything spicy is good by me.
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
^OOH! I love spicy food! YUM. (>^O^)>
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
I
HAVE
NO
MORE
CHEETOS
!
POST
OR
ELSE
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il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
^RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! STALKER ON THE LOOSE! D:

ASDFGHJKLQWERTY@#%&$€£¥¢₩§
mechdemigod commented…
hahaha il y a plus d’un an
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
okay okay! ill post in bout an hour! okay?
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
YAY! :D

*Immense happiness!*

♪┏(^ o^)┛♪┗ (^o ^) ┓♪┏ (^o^) ┛♪┗ (^ o^) ┓♪┏(^ o^)┛♪
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
YOU BETTER!!! And everyone else, check out Fanfiction.net. There's this awesome story I'm reading there called This means war! It's a mixture of PJO,HP,Twilight and Maximum Ride(I don't know that last one but the story is utterly AMAZING! Whats a Mary sue? now,RAINBOW....
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
Mary Sue - A fictional character, usually female and especially in fanfic, whose implausible talents and likeableness weaken the story.

So, basically, a flawless character with no personality who is always portrayed as being overly amazing. This usually happens when a writer dreams him/herself into their story and becomes the centre of attention.
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il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
surprise
@festus: how do u do that little dance thing? its amazing!!
il y a plus d’un an cinnominbubble said…
OH ok cause The author of This Means War calls Butterflykiss a Mary Sue.
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
^Well, that's weird and slightly rude. xD

Iris Flower: I just copy and paste it. xD
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
from where?
il y a plus d’un an Artemis253 said…
mischievous
Heyyy It me!!! Luna!!!
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
^Hi Luna! xD

Iris Flower: From here: link
I edited the dance a little though. :P
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il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
hey luna! welcome back!

@festus: cool!
il y a plus d’un an Artemis253 said…
Heyyy gurleee
il y a plus d’un an Artemis253 said…
W T F! Whats with the asian emotians???
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
Wow..... thats racist.......... All the eyes are small.... true tho.
Also i got my hair cut today, my hair used to be my picture now its buzzed O.o My Ears and Neck is so COLD!!!!!
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
sad
Also it has been 2 hours, rainbow = LAIR!!!!
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
It's not racist. It's the emoticons they use in the east.