Héros de l’Olympe Mark of Athena Fanfic, arc en ciel Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
last edited on Jun 27, 2012 at 09:29AM

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il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
im kinda stuck on what to do. please give me some suggestions!!
il y a plus d’un an jberagon17 said…
how about you start out explaining mother earths evil lair
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
i have no clue...
srry !
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
No, sorry. I just came back from school. My brain is fried @_e
il y a plus d’un an snowflakes989 said…
do something with either stalker bunnies or magic mushrooms.
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
laugh
LOL! HAHA
il y a plus d’un an book-worm said…
Add something completely hilarious! You don't want it to get too depressing
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
hmmm
sure. i guess.....
hmm...
il y a plus d’un an jberagon17 said…
post
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
big smile
ill post tomorrow.
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
smile
Okayy! :)
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
i just need to do my homework first. ill work on it though.
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
heres a short preview.

Jason
After Lou Ellen reported that Octavian was completely exiled, Jason went directly to the infirmary. It hurt him to see Reyna like that. He wanted rip that augury into pieces, though he was sure no one would appreciate that. But then again, he could've stopped him when he had the chance...
Flashback...
Jason was walking along the Little Tiber the morning after the battle against Atlas and his army. As he got closer to the lake, the ground began to shake. Not so much that it would cause buildings to fall, but enough to make him lose balance. Jason silently crept forward. There he saw him. Octavian stood at the edge of the lake holding a...was that a fluffy bunny? It was from one of the Disney movies-Bambi. That's right. The bunny was Bumper, Bambi's friend. But why Octavian was holding it, Jason had absolutely no idea. Things were weird enough already, especially since the augury killed stuffed teddy bears, but a bunny? That was new.
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il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
laugh
AHHAA A BUNNY! HOW CREATIVE XDD
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
big smile
hehe. thanks.
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
Anytime :)
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
1999=rabbits right? nice touch
wanna seee fulll happie
postttttttttt or u shall feel the wrath of uhmm ... uhh . pencil? no i got it OCTAVIAN'S FLUFFY BUNNY !!!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
laugh
LOL!!
ill be working on the chappie tonight, but i hafta leave soon, so ill most likely post on saturday, cuz im busy on friday, even though its my b-day.
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
laugh
Hahahaha!
il y a plus d’un an book-worm said…
Oh no!!! Poor bunny!!!!!!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
smile
lol.
il y a plus d’un an jberagon17 said…
post the rest soon and poor bunny really. it should be to Hades with Octavian!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
sad
gah. i still have to go to chinese school. i really hope i can get the chapter done, but im afraid that im busy tomorrow. im actually not that sure.
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
Ok havent read this yet but pls dont be a huge percabeth, i like tension, and pls dont be a percabeth!
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
annnnd, shit, percabeth, 6 paragraphs into it, yep screw this story bye.
il y a plus d’un an Lt_Pupster said…
well i might be back to see the results of my comments but, i wont be reading, yea u get the idea.
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
big smile
okay. its just that there r sooooo many percabeth fans out there.
i want u guys to take a poll.
should percy love annabeth or reyna?
should annabeth choose percy?
should jason stay with piper, or move on to reyna?
should hazel love frank or leo?
should piper love jason or someone else?
and who should leo love?

please answer at least 2 of the questions.
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
i can't imagine percy and annabeth being with anyone except eachother!
hazel and frank leave leo SINGLE!!!!!!!!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
okay.
but i hafta wait for more people to answer.
but ill be working on the chappie since it doesnt involve any love scenes.
@LNC: actually can u answer the one whether jason should be w/ piper or reyna one.
il y a plus d’un an jberagon17 said…
keep percabeth together and jiper too have Leo and Reyna get together
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
okay. i just want it to be a bit...different. cuz i think everyone is going to have percabeth and jiper and leyna. i want to do something different.
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
percabeth, jeyna, fazel, and liper<3
mechdemigod commented…
ditto il y a plus d’un an
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
hmmm
okay. we have some very different ideas.
il y a plus d’un an book-worm said…
Percabeth, jiper, frazel, Leo is forever single! Trust me Rick has everyone with a certain person (Or in Leo's case no one) for a reason!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
big smile
finished it!!

Jason
After Lou Ellen reported that Octavian was completely exiled, Jason went directly to the infirmary. It hurt him to see Reyna like that. He wanted rip that augury into pieces, though he was sure no one would appreciate that. But then again, he could've stopped him when he had the chance...
Flashback...
Jason was walking along the Little Tiber the morning after the battle against Atlas and his army. As he got closer to the lake, the ground began to shake. Not so much that it would cause buildings to fall, but enough to make him lose balance. Jason silently crept forward. There he saw him. Octavian stood at the edge of the lake holding a...was that a fluffy bunny? It was from one of the Disney movies-Bambi. That's right. The bunny was Bumper, Bambi's friend. But why Octavian was holding it, Jason had absolutely no idea. Things were weird enough already, especially since the augury killed stuffed teddy bears, but a bunny? That was new.
Jason knew it was illegal to spy, especially on the augury, but hey, this was Octavian. Who knows what that jerk would be up to next.
Octavian started chanting in some language. Definitely not English. Latin? Nope. Maybe Greek. But he had heard Annabeth speaking Greek to Chiron, and it didn't sound the same. It sounded almost...older.
Jason knew he should be worried, but he had seen Octavian do weird stuff and talk in non-Latin or English languages. This wasn't the first time.
The chanting got louder and louder. The ground seemed to shake more and more. Octavian raised the bunny in one hand and his precious little knife in the other.
Jason turned away. When he looked, all that was left of Bumper the rabbit was a few pieces of gray fabric and fluff.
Dang. That kid has to lower his violence level on stuffed animals. Any child would think of him as Bloody Mary, except one who disemboweled their little stuffed animals.
Jason took another step forward and then he heard a crack. He had stepped on a twig. F***k! (sorry bout the language there)
Octavian faltered and turned in his direction.
Jason straightened up and tried to act natural.
“Killing stuffed animals again?” Jason asked. His voice sounded confident enough, but inside, his heart was thumping like crazy.
Octavian stared at him in shock. “Wh-what are you doing here?”
“Uh.” His mouth suddenly felt dry. Think. Think. “Just-just taking a...um a walk.”
Real smooth Jason. Real smooth. He thought.
“So. What about you?”
Octavian glared at him. “Doing my normal stuff, serving Rome of course. Trying to communicate with the gods.
“Of course.”
He narrowed his eyes at Jason. “Now if you'll excuse me, ex-praetor, I need to do some work in private.”
With that, the augury walked away. Ex-praetor. That hurt.
End of flashback...

The memory replayed itself in Jason's head as he went to check on Reyna. He should've done something. Tell Reyna about his conversation that night. Then Reyna wouldn't have gotten hurt and everything wouldn't be so messed up.
He was so lost in thought he didn't notice Piper running up to him.
“Hey Jason!!”
There she was. Her hair was a messy nest of brown hair, but even like that, with no makeup, she looked like a million golden drachmas. “Hey,” he said, smiling.
Piper planted a kiss on his cheek.
Jason could feel his face burning, but he ignored it. “We're leaving tomorrow at dawn. You should get ready for dinner.”
“Okay. See you later.”
Jason watched her disappear into the gates. He turned to the infirmary when a thought struck him. He had Piper, but Reyna was first. But he knew Reyna had feeling for Percy, but he had a dream. A dream where his future would be peaceful and quiet with Reyna.
He looked back at the gates. Or Piper. He hadn't known Piper for long, but he liked her, a lot. And the fact that they actually got together on their first quest....
Jason took a deep breath. Decide later. Business first. He walked into the infirmary, but the thought lingered in his head. Piper? Or Reyna?

enjoy!!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
sad
no one?
im sad.
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
im here! my mommy took the laptop away yesterday
tht was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­
you've gotta POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTT­TTT­TTT­TTT
il y a plus d’un an book-worm said…
I love it!! Sorry I couldn't finish reading the chapter until this morning! It was amazing as usually rainbow post soon!
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
heya guys!!! im thinking if i should get a co-writer cuz im super busy nowadays. so if u want to be my co-writer, just message me. if no one messages me, ill understand.
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
WUV IT <3 :3

Sorry, two forums is enough for me right now. But co-writer or no, I'm NEVER leaving this.
il y a plus d’un an LeosGirl said…
heart
Amazing as always rainbow! Sorry I haven't been around much. I have been very busy and needed to catch up on fanpop. But, anyways I loved it! Can't wait till you post again!
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
big smile
booey wished u asked earlier ... i got two forums
but someone will be dying to help u write an amazing fanfic like urs !
post!!!!!!
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
I'm posting so that you know I haven't left. ^.^

THAT WAS INCROYABLE!! (French for awshum.) xD

I hope Jason picks Reyna. xD
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
^ -high five- JEYNA FOR LIFEEE.<3

But it's okay if it's not Jeyna or Liper or Percabeth. It's your totally amazing, incroyable, fantastic story :D
il y a plus d’un an Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
^YEAH! (>^.^)^^(^.^<)

I agree with Fortune Cookie. T'is thy story! :D
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
thanks guys!
ill probably post in a few days. cuz i have painting class in bout 1 hour.
i hope hazels pov is fine w/ you.
a lot of u want to leave leo single forever. but i think thats too mean. so im gonna change some things....
il y a plus d’un an rainbow_girl said…
sad
well then. i guess ill talk to myself.
il y a plus d’un an kkw1700 said…
big smile
^Sorry, I was sleeping, hehe. But don't think you woke me up or anything. And Hazel's okay! Anything you do will be awshum!
il y a plus d’un an LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
im here!
post
il y a plus d’un an jberagon17 said…
post as soon as you can