Just because I don't feel like I went deep enough into his background

Name: Derek Adams 

Hero name: Fang

Age: 14
 
What he looks like: Around 6'2, black hair that covers his eyes. Dark eyes, fair skin tone.

Personality: Kinda drawn back, shows little emotion. He has a sense of humor just doesn't montrer it. Rarely smiles, highly intelligent, and doesn't trust most people. 

Powers: Flight (wings) if he stays still an doesn't make sudden movements he can blend into his surroundings, can see glimpses of the future but only when really bad things are about to happen. Super strength, Raptor vision, and...

Chapter Two-

Jazzman waited until they were in an alley to confront them.

"What do toi want?" he asked, turning around.

Sam and Becca looked at each other. They had hoped to get farther than this, at least to the base, but it seemed Jazzman wasn't as stupid as they had thought.

Sam looked at Becca, who was still slightly nervous about the villain, and stepped forward.

"I think toi recognize me." he said.

"What do yo want, Grant?" Jazzman asked. "I already paid you."

Thoughts whirled through Becca's mind. 'Pay him? For what?'

"That's not what I'm here for." Sam said. "I want in all the way."

This statement...

“Take the casque off her, Fate!”
Wally West yelled up towards a glowing yellow figure, known as Dr. Fate. Rather, the force of Dr. Fate was kept in a helmet. This casque was currently worn par Zatanna Zatara, a young magician being held under Fate’s influence. Zatanna/Fate spoke now.
“No. She is already skilled in the mystic arts.” The other teens looked towards each other and the recently discovered adults. Zatara stepped out from the crowd and spoke to his daughter’s body. “Take me instead. I will place the casque on I give toi my word.” His accent was heavy with depression as...

Robin took out his grapling hook and pinned it to the side of the stone walls and grabbed Becca. Artemis took out her grapling hook aswell and grabbed hold of Kaldur, Lucas still continued to fall, he closed his eyes trying to use his gravity but it wouldnt work, he screamed and closed his eyes as he fell toward the lava, expecting to feel the burning begin he opened one of his eyes to see he was floating right ontop of it, Melinda and Joy continued to fall and Phoebe grabbed them, Andrew fell past Becca and Robin, Becca gasped and reached into her boyfriends conveyor ceinture and threw out one...

" The only logical place Nabuu would go would be the tower of fate " Andrew a dit montrer the map on the screen. " Well then what are we waiting for! lets go! " Becca said, " well remember it wont be that simple.. remember our last visit..." Connor said. Everyone looked at eachother then they all turned to Wally, he took a key out of his pocket looking at it, " a test of fate....." Wally muttered looking at the key in his finger tips. Becca turned to the others " I know this is what we need to do... please..." Becca said, " i agree.... lets go " Kaldur said.

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Unkind Fate

Robin woke up and held his chest where he got hit as he sat up. He looked around and saw Wally nowhere in sight, Kaldur being hit par some kind of beam, M'gann talking with Billy, and Zatanna holding the casque of fate.

He stood up, ignoring the pain, and ran over to Zatanna.

"Zee, wait!" he yelled, stopping her from putting the casque on.

Zatanna looked over and saw him coming. When he finally made it to her, he pushed her arm down a little to make sure she didn't put the casque on. "Robin, we need him to win this battle."

"Maybe, but whoever puts the casque on has a chance of never...

It was a beautiful Saturday afternoon. The sun sparkled gently on the cool Rhode Island waters, and a few wisps of clouds hung in the sky, drifting softly on the breeze. We were about a mile out from the Happy Harbor shore, the imposing, rocky figure of Mount Justice looming out over the water. A few waves drifted in, sweeping us up before passing through and breaking at the shore. A couple of the boys had a plage ball, and were tossing it back and forth.

At that moment, there was a vast explosion from under me, and I was, without warning, launched high into the air, propelled par a stream of...

“So how far away are toi guys from Happy Harbor?” Willow asked Billy.
“Eh. We're located in Keystone City.”
“Ah. I was wondering where toi guys went.”
“Aww! toi missed me!”
“Of course! Who else would give me free rides through solid objects?”
Billy sighed, mock pain on his face.
“I knew it was too good. I'm only wanted for my speed. Tsk tsk tsk.”
Willow laughed and Billy smiled at the lovely sound.
“You'd think she would have woken,” he commented.
Somewhere along the way, Becca had fallen asleep. Her head was still in Willow's lap, but her eyes were closed and her breathing...

Zeus sat in his chair across from Volt and Fang. 
"It looks like he's holding her in Hades." 
"Do toi think toi cou-" Zeus stopped Volt in mid-sentence. 
"That is a journey toi must take. If I did release her, she would not be able to return to the mortal world." 
"Can toi help in any way?" 
"There are three pearls in the United States. Hermes will help toi from here." Zeus pointed towards Hermes standing suivant to a table. 
"Alright. You'll probably need this." He handed Volt a map. 
"This will give toi the locations of all the pearls, then the entrance to Hades. toi might need this too." He...

"You think the God Zeus can help toi find Nudge?" Batman spoke to Fang through comlink. Fang heard Wally's laughter in the background.
"Zeus is Volts uncle. He keeps a close on Darien. Which has my sister captive." 
"Okay, we'll keep in touch. Batman out."
"Alright Volt open the portal." Volt nodded and closed her eyes. A door appeared and Hermes came zooming out of it slamming into Volt.
"Hermes?" Volt looked at him. 
"Message from Zeus." he pulled out a scroll. Volt pushed the scroll away.
"No, I need to speak with him now Hermes. Where is he?" 
"Go through the door and go west. You'll recognize...

"Do toi have any idea where they could've gone?" Fang looked at Volt. 
"I mig- no wait he wouldn't. Darien hates him." Volt rolled a piece of rock between her thumb and index finger. 
"Volt we could use anything toi might have in mind." Fang looked at Volt.
"I really don't really want to call on him now." Volt walked away
"Who?" 
"My uncle..." Volts voice trailed off.
"Which would be?" Fang stepped in front of Volt.
"Heh, Uhm.. It's kinda a long story." She looked away from Fangs glare.
"Make it short." Fang crossed his arms.
"Alright fine. My father is Hades, and Zeus is my uncle, the one who gave...

Fang was getting off the floor when Volt came running in the blown up entrance.
"Fang? What happened?" Volt looked around.
"Cave was under attack" He coughed.
"Who was it?!?" Volt looked at Fang with worry in her eyes.
"Blaze, Peyton, violet and....." 
"Fang! Who was it?" Volt shook her friend.
"Darien. Your brother. They took Nudge, I have no idea where though." He dusted his jeans off. There was a red mark around his wrist and a bruise on the side of it.
"What's wrong with your wrist?" Volt grabbed his wrist. He instantly jerked it back with pain written across his face.
"Darien probably broke it...

Roy narrowed his eyes at her and Becca stared at him calmly. He smiled and turned to Artemis.
“She's definatly a keeper. Don't let this one go.”
“I won't!” Artemis exclaimed proudly.
“Okay smarty,” Wally stated. “If toi can pin point people so well, do him.”
Wally pointed to a black haired boy smaller than the last.
“Easy. Gymnast. étoile, star of the team, mathlete as well. Excels at just about everything. Hides behind a mask of kindness to keep people at arm's length though he never use to. His father is a rich man and his son gets whatever he wants. But it isn't enough and he has to...

“Shade, toi have some explaining to do,” Batman said.
Becca stood with New Justice and Young Justice in front of Batman.
“Yes sir. I guess I should start par apologizing. Not just for the recent...problem, but also for lying. The first time I got here, I was still working for Talia Al Ghul. I should have told toi sooner, but I never thought this would happen. I was sent to collect DNA from Young Justice. Since I was an old friend of Robin's, Talia expected me to do it. I did what I was told. I a volé, étole DNA. But I also did much worse. I cloned Young Justice and turned them into New Justice....

They stood around calmly, waiting for the others.
“So Tach's going to be our leader?” Speed asked.
“Yeah. It's time toi got on your feet and time I go back to my other friends.”
“You're worried, Shade.”
“I know. But I have reason to be.”
“Care to share?”
“Not really.”
“M'kay.”
“How much longer?” Talon asked.
“Not long now. I say...five minutes at most.”
“Shade, will toi visit us?” Echo asked.
“Of course. I just...can't work with teams anymore. I'm better off on my own.”
“Ever since Talia, huh?”
“Yes.”
Speed looked down at the burglars they had snagged...

“I don't know why you're complaining,” Willow said.
“You don't know WHY?! Them let me tell you! My girlfriend decided to FLIRT! With someone other than me! toi may as well have kissed him!”
“I only kissed Billy once!” Willow defended. “But that was when we broke up!”
“So toi like him?!” Wally shouted.
“No! What-that's completely irrelevant to the subject!”
“Then tell me WHY toi flirted with IF toi didn't like him!”
“Don't yell at me,” Willow whispered.
She looked away from Wally's gaze, feeling scared and hurt. She hadn't yelled at Wally, just raised her voice a small...

“What do toi think?” Becca asked, montrer off her new hair style.
“Whoa! Becca toi look...hot!”
Becca smiled.
“Thanks Billy! Would toi notice me on a first glance?”
“Never!”
“Good!”
Becca put her hands on her hips, a huge smile plastered on her face. She looked at their faces, happy they approved of her style. She had taken the red out of her hair, and had donné herself plus side bangs. She had also layered it, wanting plus flow than anything else. She shook her head playfully before going to sit on the floor at Beck's feet. She leaned against him and he teasingly moved his legs...

Dark velvet shot a beam at Lucas and he got wrapped up with a dark bowa constricor, Lucas gasped as it squeezed him, Artemis shot a Arrow at the snake making it disappear like ash, Lucas got up and threw a peice of metal he found on the ground using his night vision, Dark Velvet used her manteau again to reflect the damage off her, " almost done Velvet.." Andrew said, " wonderful baby... continue" Dark velvet said, Artemis shot two arrows at Dark Velvet but they were reflected back at her, she screamed and flew back into Lucas, knocking them both to the ground. " Minions attack!" Dark Velvet...