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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. par no means am I forcing toi to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless toi truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before toi start posting. It can be as little as a bio, ou as big as an entire article series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no plus than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he ou she is in, can pull out another trick out of his ou her hat.
4. If toi absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his ou her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aléatoire and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when toi have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the suivant jour you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own ou is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the récent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, ou claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If toi must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, ou so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if toi do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot ou stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutes later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull ou flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to ou dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to ou dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created par you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing ou potential character is a Mary Sue, ou if toi suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, toi can take link. If toi want, toi can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case toi were curious, which toi probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all toi want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, par no means do toi have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
added by Robin_Love
Source: Google
Devs~ If it’s okay with you, I made some kids for Aisling and Rowan that toi can put in Generation of War if toi want. Let’s assume this is a universe where Jackson doesn’t exist, so Aisling and Rowan actually end up together.

Name: Victor Matthew Heyywood
Hero Name: Apocalypse
Age: 16
Appearance: 6’1” ish, strong/solid build, wavy dark brown hair, blue-green eyes, light skin, freckles, he looks a LOT like his mom although his facial features are a bit plus like his dad’s
Powers: Vic can fly, like his mother Aisling, and he also has super-strength. He mainly fights with hand-to-hand...
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posted by Robin_Love
When he awoke for the seconde time, he thought of a million things, coherency streaming his mind and starting the engines of his very unique brain. Out of the millions and millions of streaming thoughts, he pulled out three and processed them:
Where the heck was he?
Why was there loud knocking at “his” door so early?
Where had his snuggle buddy from last night wandered off to?
This third question brought up a million others that he was less than happy to deal with at the minute. He rubbed his eyes and yawned, stretching his arms out as he called entrance; anything to get the noise causing his...
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posted by Skittles98
My name is Evelyn Veronica Isabelle Lang. I’m 13 with black hair and grey-blue eyes. I have special powers like my mom does. She is really strong, really pretty, she can fly and she has special bracelets that deflect things. My dad has no powers, but he’s really cool. He is really smart, makes his own little gadgets and is a skilled fighter. When I was little, they disappeared. I felt like they abandoned me, so I changed my name from Veronica Wayne to Evelyn Veronica Isabelle Lang. ou Evil. I’m a rue kid now, but I’ve always held my own. I’m a really great fighter, I’m really...
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posted by YJTTFAN
[JUSTICE LEAGUE DATABASE NOVEMBER 2018]

Alias: Red
Name: N/A
Age: Seems to be 15
Occupation: Freelancer
Personality: Mocking and cold hearted, She’ll taunt and torture her enemies. Red seems to have an infatuation of hunting down the old members of Young Justice, but she never lays any hits. No further information is known about ‘Red’
Powers: None. But seems to be very agile and fast.
Weapons: Morphing Weapon. The strange device has been seen in a gun, scythe, and a strange mix of both.
Weaknesses: She has no powers and is entirely mortal.
Background: Brant Key has stated that she is a hunter...
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posted by BladeYJ
 Blade and her Dad.. (She doesn't like him -.-)
Blade and her Dad.. (She doesn't like him -.-)
((Kurls, if toi read this I didn't realize toi had an OC called Serenity ;-; So I'm sorry about that... Cause it just happens to be Blade's middle name Dx I'm sows!!))

I took Damian's hand and he lead me back into the mansion, the lonely idle building in the middle of a forest. His touch was cold, but comforting as he pulled me in, locking the grand doors behind him. The thought of being stuck here still didn't stomach well and I'd give anything to be some place else. Unfortunately, for me, my apartment was taken, par a wonderful passionate couple in love, it was sickening. So my last resort...
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Kaya punched Martina to the ground, then walked up to her grabbed her neckline and head-butted her blocking Martina out.
“Sorry toi can yell at me later.” Frostbite said, hoisting her in the air par control her body. Frostbite clenched her fist proceeding down the direction she was head for before being. She walked through the halls unrushed; she came to an intersection when, to her surprise, Lelisa, Honesty and others were rushing towards her. They halt and Lelisa eyes widen, at that Snowflake appeared in the hall on they left.
“Perfect, just the people I needed to see.” Kaya a dit smiling...
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posted by MafiaYJ
"Come on Cad, toi know toi want to."
"Its not like toi haven't done this before, right?"
"Go on Cad, just like old times."
"No one is gonna tell toi toi can't."

"No Cadmus, toi promised."
"You a dit you'd stop this."
"You know its wrong toi cant do this!"

Her finger itched at the trigger, staring intensely at the man she held captive. He was a no one. Just someone who was worth a lot of money. She sighed in frustration. The fight was almost unbearable.

"Nyet! I can't do it!" she snapped, but she didn't put down the gun.

A large hand was placed on her shoulder and a deep voice snarled in her ear, "I...
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posted by SilverWings13
In the tundra, she could see her own breath. It escaped like a faint nuage from her nostrils and floated upwards a few centimeters before disappearing into the pine needles. This high up, those tendrils of breath would be unnoticeable to anyone far below. Below, the crouching snow-covered bushes remained still and silent. No visible clouds escaped them.
An approaching roar drew her attention over the forest floor as a black jeep emerged from the forest. It barreled through undergrowth, breaking through the freshly fallen snow, leaving behind deep tire treads and the reek of diesel. It would...
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posted by Robin_Love
salut guys, it’s R_L, obviously. I just wanted to do something I should have done a long long time ago. I’m not leaving, if that’s what toi think. But this is just as important.

I’m sorry. I’m sorry to all the people I’ve been mean to, the ones I’ve pushed so far away that they don’t come back. I’m sorry that I was such a toxic person. I shouldn’t have been and if ever toi were hurt because of ANYTHING I did, I’m truly, deeply, unbelievably sorry. I’m not leaving ou anything like that, just apologizing for being such a toxic person. I was still growing and learning. That’s...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Luinil
Luinil
Eldrin shrugged off the heavy coat, pulling his long white away from his face. He looked down at the white marble tiles, and to the guard standing at his left. The elf pulled the blades from their sheathes and dropped them to the floor, glaring at the guard. He huffed and kicked them over before he started to head down the long hall. It didn’t take long for Eldrin to hear the distance chattering of the council, girl’s laughter filling the corridor. He sighed at the thought of having to deal with the girls but pushed vers l'avant, vers l’avant out into the open room. He immediately locked eyes with his own...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Ara
Ara
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Arabella Conley
Nickname: Ara
Reason ou meaning of name: Ara meaning water; Conley meaning Fire
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: long, blonde
Height: 5’5”
Clothing Style: Modern
Best Physical Feature: Eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Loosing my mobility
Your Guilty Pleasure: Donuts
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Snobs
Your Ambition for the Future: To be big

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Time for greens!
What toi Think About the Most: Dance
What toi Think About Before Bed: Time to rest!
You Think Your Best Quality Is: My confidence

LAYER FOUR: WHAT’S...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Callie leaned on one hand, her blue eyes sweeping around the school cafeteria. A sigh came from her ruby red-tinted lips at finding who she was looking for. Jaime then leaned over her shoulder, his eyes directed in the same way as hers. He smirked and dropped the tray of nourriture beside her, causing Callie to nearly jump out of her skin. "Take a picture, it lasts longer~ " He grinned, chuckling at the glare he was given. "Why do toi insist on torturing me?" She asked with a pout, batting her long eyelashes. "I must carry on tradition." Jaime replied with a grin, opening the lait carton that sat...
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posted by SilverWings13
There was a dull roar in his ears, what he knew immediately to be applause. Yet when Callaghan blinked his eyes up at the blinding fluorescent lights, he thought himself to at first be alone. There was a heaviness to his body that set him into a momentary panic. But the smell of disinfectant and cotton blanket beneath his fingertips explained the circumstances to him.

Turning his head allowed the young warlock to find a man apparently twice his age sitting in a chair in front of the television, watching a black-and-white film of an ice skater. The whirling athlete on screen was a young teenager,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
...I haven't posté in forever, and I've finally started developing Lexi so that she can be used in things :P

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Alexis, ou Lexi. Preferably Lexi.
Reason ou meaning of name: Apparently it means I'm shy and humble.. hm.
Eye Color: They're brown.. however i do have specks of blue.
Hair Style/Color: Jet black and super silky! Although it's very.. jagged. I may ou may not have cut it off with some glass.. out of.. angst?
Height: 5'6. Taller than my brother and still growing.
Clothing Style: I tend to wear very bright and what's the word? (Frilly?) That! Like, pinks and...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Belle Reve
Belle Reve
She looked up at the large building ahead, the sun beating down on her. It was a thick wall, gray and made like a battlement of a castle's wall. There was a long way to a heavily guarded gate. The humid winds blew around her in the marshy land. She looked around for a minute, the boy still standing suivant to her with something of a content look on his face.
“I may not remember much, but I'm fairly certain I wasn't born in Belle Reve...”
He smiled again, that ever vague smile of the Cheshire cat.
“There's a lot for toi to remember, kitten. Let's get started.”
He walked to the gate, pulling...
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posted by Robin_Love
She stood in silence, letting the view take over her instincts. It was time. Everything was falling into place, just as predicted. She let out a heavy, shaky sigh. This was it....this was the last time. The sun was a needle in her side, portraying emotions she didn't feel. She looked at the sword tied to her waist. How she would have loved to not have this burden...but she'd fought so hard her whole life...she couldn't fight anymore. If this was what happened, she would do it. Not because of her life, but the lives of others. She had so many to protect now. And it was time to take her place,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Before her rebellious side set in
Before her rebellious side set in
pt.2. but there is only one kid lolol

Name: Kori Adams (formerly Karina)
Alias: Raum
Occupation:Hero
Age: 16
Appearance: Kori is a spitting image of her mother, having an angelic look about her. The same straight black hair and the same icy blue eyes. Don't let her innocent looks deceive you, however, she acts just the same as her father. However, because of this, Kori has taken to the rebellious side, and a favoritism to Jason Todd. She chopped off her long black hair into a short bob and dyed pieces in the front, white. Like her father, Kori can be found in dark pieces of clothing and old band...
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posted by khanna266
9:00pm at Daniel and Lily's apt.
Christmas Eve
Daniel and Lily just finished baking biscuits, cookies and are now setting them down n the cofee table, tableau with a glass of lait and a note for Santa from Lily.
"Daniel?"the little blonde tugs on her brothers sleeve.
"Yes Lil?"he responds to her
"How will Santa get in if we don't have a chimney?" the little blonde worries.
"Santa's magic, he can get in however he wants." daniel tells her and she feels reassured.
"How about we watch The Grinch before we go to bed?"Daniel asks his little sister and she nods her head making her pigtails bounce.
"Alright then. I'll make...
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posted by Robin_Love
 The Queen
The Queen
This will be my newest league team, which I will be doing bios for in a slightly different way, that won't bring much of anything out of the spoilers bag


The halls are silent the further I walked down the hall. The remains of my accueil were large, but toi could feel the snow-brought air through the gaps. The little minx; ruined everything with little plus than a lie and a hoax. I got to the main room and survey the damage. mur hangings faded ou torn, chairs toppled over, scattered remains of that fateful night so long ago. And my one prize possession, a trinket from my long dead love, shattered...
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