Young Justice OC'S!!! Article: My Total OCD Moment About All The OC's

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posted by KatRox1

Okay, I'm having one of those moments again. The kind where I get all depressed about Mercy becoming evil (because I really didn't want her to!) and about how there are WAY to many OC's! Not pointing fingers at anyone, because I'm doing it too, but seriously! If toi want to make an OC, could toi PLEASE just write an article about them first? We need some idea about them first!
That's why I won't be RP-ing at all until I can actually WRITE a story for Casey! I suggest a lot of toi guys do that, saying that some people don't even put up a bio for their character!
One plus point, PLEASE refrain from making plus OC's than toi need! I mean, I get it if toi need to make them for like, one night to make sense of something in your fanfic. I've already deleted a few of my RP accounts, I suggest some of toi do also! But please, don't overcrowd!
And I also learned this term from one of my friends: God modding. That's a big no-no also! So that means, don't make yourself "so powerful that toi can take over the world with the snap of my fingers"; it also means don't be able to just dodge everything that comes at toi and don't be so invincible that toi can be stabbed in the cœur, coeur and be completely fine! (I know, that happened to Mercy, but I will explain that later)
One plus thing (probably not) DON'T control other people's OC's! I know in real life, we don't control other people! So, don't put them in those kind of situations!
Okay! I promise, almost done! I just wanted to give a round of applause to those people who montrer that their OC's are imperfect. They are able to montrer that they go through what a bunch of us go through on an everyday basis! Not being perfect, second-guessing ourselves, and being who REAL people are!
And one last idea! What if: Because there are SO many OC heroes, and not that many villains (That doesn't mean toi need to create one!!) Once toi see that about 2 ou 3 OC's have gotten themselves into a fight, don't swoop in and join... 3 ou 4 OC's only, to make it plus fun and interesting!
**But don't forget to interact and not always be the lone wolf!**
Haha! toi thought I was done! Nope! Just also wanted to say, IF Mercy does come back as a normal hero, NEVER question what she does... E.V.E.R.... Unless toi want to repeat the "I'm a mentally and emotionally unstable villain who hates my life" thing!

Sorry if toi guys don't like any of the things I have stated, but thats life! Deal with it! This has been bothering me for far to long and I thought SOMEONE needed to say it! l’amour toi guys!
-KatRox1

The_Writer, SilverWings13 and 6 others like this

BentleyYJ OOC: YOU READ MY MIND!!! OMG DO YOU KNOW WHAT IM THINKING??/ 0_0 XD people listen to this brilliant person

EclipseYJ OOC: I think i can live with that ;) and i think i might change eclipse to being deaths apprentise instead of gods daughter cuz i'm going a little over bored <3 LOV U TOO

SilverWingsYJ OOC: I luv this! Thank you so much for posting it!!!

Devin_Grayson OOC: heh. The last point refers to me. Heheh. Sorry!

66Dragons I completely agree. I believe I have pointed out enough that Red is NOT the perfect hero. In fact, he sorta fails a lot more than his cocky attitude lets on... Damn. Now I sound egotistical...

KatRox1 Heh. You know when I said I wouldn't be RP-ing as Casey? I kinda lied, saying I have nothing better to do in my free time!

AislingYJ OOC: You are my life now. No seriously. This is amazing. Of course, I face the extremely uncommon problem (at least I think it's uncommon) of my OC not being able to do ANYTHING, and me getting completely bored of that. Like I was tempted to kill Aisling, but ya kinda get attached to your first OC, so she probably will just get an upgrade, like some actual fighting skills or something. Now I'm rambling. Amazing article though!

ShadowYJ Great article. Even though none of this applies to me 'cause my OC doesn't have any powers. But yet all the same: great article.

Living Things Part 1: "Skin to Bone"

posted by AislingYJ

No, this is not a new series. This just me doing something very Rebelle and probably very stupid. With the help of InfinityYJ, I am songfic-ing each and every song from Linkin Park’s (semi) new album, Living Things. Wish me luck. Btws this and most of the other ones are all AU.

Skin to bone, steel to rust
Ash to ashes, dust to dust

Wide eyes, narrow eyes. Turquoise blue to slate gray. The shock was clear on his face; she waved it off, the rage eating away at her heart. She knew that from the start, it was never going to last, she knew she could never have actually pulled it off, but that didn’t...

Prisoner of War 9

posted by Robin_Love

She opened her eyes and looked around the dimly lit room. She read the time on the clock. Only noon. She had time. She reached under her lit and pulled out the suitcase. She got up and looked in her closet. Pushing the clothes aside, she grabbed all the weapons left on their posts. She placed them in the suitcase along with the other smaller knives and pistolets hidden in the room. S
he threw in a book of photos and her journal. She closed the suitcase, slipped her iPod in her pocket, and looked around the simple room she had called hers. There really wasn't much she had, a few books, few clothes,...

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Ebony Flame in Crimson Darkness Part 5

posted by InfinityYJ

Rene leapt over another roof, looking around every once in awhile. Ciel came up behind her. “See anything yet?”
Rene shook her head. “How ‘bout you, Ariel?”
A couple blocks away, Ariel held her hand up to her earpiece. “Nope,” she said, popping the ‘p.’ “I don’t think Revenge does either, but how should I know? He doesn’t talk.”
“Yeah, he’s like,” Aisling had a sudden coughing fit, “in that way...”
Rowan glanced over at her. “You okay?”
She snickered quietly. “Yeah, I’m fine. Tanner? Fang? Any luck overhead?”
The two landed behind them. “No, nothing,”...

Red Revenge: A an of the Black Hero!

posted by The_Writer

Can toi believe it? It's officially been a an since Red Revenge made his first appearance in Heart of Courage...

And now it's time for the party to start! Later this week, 66DragonAnimations will be uploading a video celebrating the one an anniversary of this vigilante! The link to the link is below. They've even re-designed it for the special anniversary!!!

And what will the link account be doing toi ask? Why, we're re-publishing every single Red Revenge story ever! Go check it out, fan us, and enjoy this mois of the Black Hero.

Celebrations start December 1st and continue until the World Premiere of What Matters? on January 5th!

So please, enjoy this mois of festivities and DON'T LEAVE!!!! WE'LL BE RIGHT BACK!!!

A Truth A-Fold, A Spark UnTold Part 6

posted by ShadowYJ

Part 6! (Oh and thanx to my readers for reading...I really appreciate it :))
Since its a ling time since posting, This is plus like a continuation article. Now we are definitely getting to the good parts hehe
Enjoy!

At the same time...
“AHHHHH!”
“Girls, its fine, its just a power cut.” Shadow said. Reaching frantically inside one of her utility ceinture pouches she bought out a small flashlight and clicked it on.
“Oh yah”, Fin said, obviously creeped out, “Than what was with the scream? toi know how creepy that was?”
All the girls stayed silent, too shocked to say another word. One of...

Buyout Promo ~ Red Revenge V: What Matters?

posted by The_Writer

This is not a fairy tale. There are no happy endings

Power can make even the greatest among us fall.

Allies Fall
Enemies Rise
Friends Return

The Story that changes Everything,
Starts Now

---SNEAK PEEK---

"Mr. Grant, Wayne Industries is the biggest company in the world seconde to LexCorp and us. I highly doubt a buy-out would be a good déplacer on our part. Even if we did buy out Wayne, that would leave us with no money."

Sam looked at the man for a long moment before standing up.

"Follow me, all of you."

Eight Chairmen looked at each other before following the man who's name was hanging above the door. Grant...

The Invisible Boy part 7

posted by SilverWings13

Maddex backflipped, avoiding two blunt projectiles.
"Ha! Missed- oof!" He stumbled back as a boots collided with his chest. He dodged another kick, then knocked it aside as it swung at him a third time. SilverWings fell back, her balance thrown. Maddex pounced on his opponent. She leapt out of the way at the last moment and he had to screech to a stop to keep from face planting into the wall.
Coaxoch and Harmonian walked in and face-palmed in unison. "They're still going?" Ceil said, astounded.
"Not for long," Mel got the sneaky smile on her face that made her friend nervous.
Silver swung a...

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Daddy! 0One~Shot0

posted by HarmonianYJ

This started out in IM... Enjoy!

Eclipse sat in her corner. Being the little emo she is, rocking back and forth. She sneezed, and she had wet herself. She continued to rock. Ciel felt for her, walked into his room, and searched his drawers. Meanwhile, Eclipse had crawled into her box. Ciel's walked out of his room, holding a pair of jeans, and a shirt. Eclipse crawled out of the box.
"Help?" She whispered. Ciel crouched down, holding his arms out.
"Come here..." He said, and she slid over, and her eyes had turned pink. He held his arms out, and she hugged him. He stood up, holding her.
"Lets go...

Insanity's Catching

posted by InfinityYJ

My mind wanted this.. and I completely hate my mind right now.. But I wrote it anyways... So... *goes and hides in corner*
It's kinda... creepy/weird. Forgive me.

“I missed you.”
The halls were completely bare, the rug was clean to perfection, but the house had an eerie air to it. The lights didn’t work well and the doors seemed to whistle creepily. Shadows bounced off the slightly dirty windows. He walked slowly, his bloodshot hollow eyes darting to and fro among the halls, jumping at even the slightest of noises. His mouth would open to scream when a sudden shadow came out at him, but...

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WHA Matters? Scene 7- rendez-vous amoureux, rendez-vous amoureux, date on the Rooftop

posted by The_Writer

Cassie took a large bite out of her hamburger, swallowing a gulp of her chocolat shake. "I'm ravished. That business in Moscow made me hungry."

All that food?" Tim asked, looking at the nice, neat, perfect salade before him.

Cassie shrugged. "Teen's gotta eat. I don't have to worry about the tighty-tights." Cassie stopped mid-chew. "Not that toi don't look good in them."

Tim smirked. He was dressed in a tight T-Shirt and jeans. Cassie was wearing her usual civvies: Red spandex, white and red T-shirt, and baseball cap.

"You realize you've only mentioned the tights eight times in the last three dates,...

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Nikita-- New OC

posted by InfinityYJ

Just chillin'

This is my new OC, appearing in Ebony, and then I swear to god I'm never making another OC again. If toi want me to RP as him, tell me, but I won't do it if toi don't want me too. So... don't hate me? *sheepish grin* I deleted all my other ones, basically!!!

Name: Nikita Andreevich
Age: 15 (17 in Ebony)
Hero name: ((You guys can help with this!))
Appearance: light caramel colored hair, light yellow/green eyes, 5'11", strongly built upper body
Civvies: brown long sleeved shirt, slightly worn navy jeans, old black high tops
Costume: he basically just throws a grey hoodie on (see picture)
Personality:...

DON'T kill me... Don't.

posted by CoaxochYJ

X3

Just one plus wouldn't hurt...would it? *Flees from angry mob*

Name: fougère Elizabeth Ameer.

Alias: Delirious.

Appearance: Pale. Blood red hair. Sapphire eyes. Scar that runs from her eyebrow to cheek. Golden Wings.

Civvies: Green hoodie, black t-shirt, jeans, and sneakers.

'Stume: Picture.

Powers: Flight(wings)*You didn't see that coming, did ya?*Wink**.

Skills: Hunting. Extremely advanced senses.

Past: Escapee from the School, took shelter at a circus. Hid her wings from others, started accidentally killing everyone. Fled to Germany, hiding her wings for a year, came back to USA.

Notes:

~Fear of heights, despite her birdy-nature.
~Can make her wings blend into her skin, but only for a short period of time, due to it getting extremely uncomfortable.
~Finds interest in rain.

I just had to! And if toi request, I will supprimer her...

'Stume. Ignore the awkward blonde hair...

What her Wings look like.

Ebony Flame in Crimson Darkness Part 2

posted by InfinityYJ

“Epsilon, are toi sure this is where she was?”
Delta sat on the edge of the roof, watching out over the dimmed lights of Trinity for any signs of trouble, ou even just a flame. Eric was pacing on the roof as well, glancing over the edge. “Yes, yes, I’m very sure..”
“I don’t know, man...”
“It’s a possibility.”
Both Delta and Eric whirled around at the new voice. Red Revenge stood there, glancing over the city himself, arms crossed. “I saw the news as well.”
“Were toi invited?” Eric questioned, glancing to Delta out of the corner of his eye. The teen made an innocent...

OC Bio

posted by RichiYJ

*Insert grinning face here* *Turns around* *Sees angry mob* ~flee~ Ahhhh! I'm sorry!

Name: Hibi Rain

Age: 12

Skin Color: Light

Eye color: Green-ish blue

Hair: Short and occasionally messy, blonde

Civvies: Green jacket, or T-shirt, black cargo pants

Costume: (See picture)

Weapons: Two small pistols which feu an infinite amount of small thorns that slow down response time; a slingshot with toxic bombs

Powers: Earth-based powers. Hibi can instantly grow any plant anywhere with soil, manipulate all plants, travel through the roots of plants and soil from location to another quickly, and morph himself...

Prisoner of War 6

posted by Robin_Love

The metal pierced her skin gently, drawing a small amount of blood. The darkened room matched her mood. She picked up the mask, the souvenir from last night's fun. She held it over her face and grimaced.
“How did Bane see in this?”
She tossed it aside, retracting the long claws back into their hidden place in her arm. The line of blood on her arm started to heal slowly. Ever since she had watched her boyfriend die because of Bane's goons, she had kept a tight control on all other emotions beside her rage. Now that she'd properly disposed of the villain and his lackeys, she wanted to sob....

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Another Strange Dream.

posted by CoaxochYJ

*Giggle* I have weird dreams...

"MEL! Get down here!" Fang shouted for me downstairs. I groaned, slipping on my sweats.
"I'm coming!" I walked out of my room, jumped onto the rail, and slid down. I'm too good to walk down the stairs, what I saw seemed normal. Until... uh... Fang spit a mouthful of cereal into Lexi's mouth. Am I the only one that finds that disgusting?
"AK! GOD! DADDY!" I almost puked.
"What? Its good for you!" Fang said.
"That. Is. Disgusting." I stared at him.
"Were birds! Its what we do!" Fang looked at me oddly.
"We're two percent bird." I said. "NOT ACTUAL BIRDS! Plus, its the...

~Dust of her Wings~ Prologue.

posted by CoaxochYJ

Ciel POV.

Mel has been jouer la comédie strange lately... Its odd, she's been, too clingy. She hasn't let go of me for two days. I'm starting to think she's permanently attached. This is where other people come handy, to pry Mel off of you. She had her legs wrapped around my waist, and she started crying whenever I managed to pry her off. And I can't stand to see her cry! Mel sneezed, still sick. She rubbed her nose, then wrapped her arms back around my neck. I don't have a problem holding Mel, but when she's stuck to toi everywhere toi go, its kinda annoying. I stood up, and walked out the front door....

I'm just a little Bit... -A secret little One Shot-

posted by Eclipse-YJ

I'm Just a little bit
Caught in the middle
Life is a maze
and l’amour is a riddle
I don't know where to go
I can't do it alone, I've tried
and I don't know why

Zeth walked down an alley way and kicked an old soda can, the sun disscided to sink behind the clouds today which is what he wished he could do. Everything seemed to have gone wrong, getting him into trouble with everyone.

His jour hadn't gone well.

Slow it down make it stop,
Or my cœur, coeur is going to pop!
'Cuz it's too much
yeah, it's alot
to be something I'm not

Inches away from the floor Ariel twisted around another corner, panting hard.

"Atleast I'm...

What Matters? Scene 5- "Girl Trouble"

posted by The_Writer

Sam sipped a cup of limonade from his shady seat, watching the men sweat in front of him, rushing to get everything prepared for his 4th of July party. Sam almost felt bad for it, but he enjoyed watching the men work. He enjoyed knowing their lives were in his hands. He felt like a god.

One man stumbled, dropping some items and frantically picking them up. Sam pretended not to see. He heard something and turned to see Tim canard, drake walk up beside him.

"Tim." Sam said.

"Grant." the boy replied in a less hospitable tone."

"How'd toi get past security? No Gothamites allowed near me."

"You need better security."...

A Truth A-Fold, A Spark Untold Part 4

posted by ShadowYJ

Sorry for the long wait! Heres the 4th part, enjoy! :) :D

Part 4:
“Mockingbird, ou should I say Felice?”
“I don’t mind either.”
“WelI, this is your room, hope this isn’t too much, I know you’re new and all but, I-we, hope toi settle in well.”
“Thanks.”
A very over-helpful Ms Martian was taking Mockingbird a tour of the whole Mountain. Ever since Ms Martian had been doing this every time a newbie came into the team, it seemed like tradition.
Now M’gann was montrer Mockingbird her new room, which she would be staying.
Felice though was insecure.
“Um, Ms M?”
“Yes?”
“Do...