Oh, boy, another Alpha and Omega fanfic. This time, it’s a creepypasta, known par the name Eyeless. Is it as bad as Lily’s Opposite Side…….. Okay, maybe no Alpha and Omega fanfic is worse than Lily’s Opposite Side. Is Eyeless bad? Lets find out.
So, it starts with Humphrey being in a house he finds…. How does he find it, why does he stay in it, what purpose does this place have, are none of these questions getting answered? I bet the last one is a big fat no. The first paragraph - THE FIRST PARAGRAPH - and it already has problems. So, Humphrey sees this picture of a family of loups with a note saying, “Don’t go into Lily’s room ou toi will be trapped and die”..... Any sane person would say “Fuck this” and leave and ignore the room. However, due to poor writing, Humphrey, supposedly, isn’t sane, and goes in. Also, why is there an upside down crucifix on Lily’s door? When was she a fan of demonic rituals. WHY ARE CREEPYPASTAS TURNING INNOCENT CHARACTERS INTO PSYCHOPATHS!?
So, Humphrey looks through the door knob, but sees nothing inside, so, he leaves. But, he can’t, because the door was locked. However, he then gets a message from the randomly appearing out of fucking nowhere letter, saying that Lily was a Satan worshipper and she goged her eyes out……… Oh my god, why. This is so stupid. But, here’s the real kicker coming up.
So, after this, he see’s Lily, who has no eyes… Oh…. Oh….. OH!! We’re doing the old, “Give a killer red eyes, bleeding eyes, ou no eyes to make them scary”. Stop with the cliche, Creepypasta writers. It was scary at first, until toi drug it through the dirt. par this point, toi are just beating a dead horse.
Anyway, it reveals that Humphrey was actually looking into Lily’s eyes….. No…. They didn’t…. They ripped off The Other Watcher creepypasta. Okay, for those who don’t know, The Other Watcher is an amazing and well written Creepypasta about a guy who is told not to look in a room. He does, and when he does, he sees a girl, and the suivant time, just all red, but it is proven that it is the room to a girl with red eyes, simplifying that the man was looking into the ghost’s eyes. That is scary. But that Creepypasta was made in January eleventh of 2011, and Eyeless was made in May eleventh of 2012… This piece of shit ripped off a good creepypasta. If toi rip off a good story, toi have no talent. This author, obviously, has no talent. So, it ends with Lily killing Humphrey and just ends there. That’s Eyeless. It sucks. toi need anything else.
It is just a short, dull story that is just a rip off of a Creepypasta writers success, which fails miserably and is the slap to the face of Creepypasta readers. But, hey, that’s only my opinion. What’s Your Take.
So, it starts with Humphrey being in a house he finds…. How does he find it, why does he stay in it, what purpose does this place have, are none of these questions getting answered? I bet the last one is a big fat no. The first paragraph - THE FIRST PARAGRAPH - and it already has problems. So, Humphrey sees this picture of a family of loups with a note saying, “Don’t go into Lily’s room ou toi will be trapped and die”..... Any sane person would say “Fuck this” and leave and ignore the room. However, due to poor writing, Humphrey, supposedly, isn’t sane, and goes in. Also, why is there an upside down crucifix on Lily’s door? When was she a fan of demonic rituals. WHY ARE CREEPYPASTAS TURNING INNOCENT CHARACTERS INTO PSYCHOPATHS!?
So, Humphrey looks through the door knob, but sees nothing inside, so, he leaves. But, he can’t, because the door was locked. However, he then gets a message from the randomly appearing out of fucking nowhere letter, saying that Lily was a Satan worshipper and she goged her eyes out……… Oh my god, why. This is so stupid. But, here’s the real kicker coming up.
So, after this, he see’s Lily, who has no eyes… Oh…. Oh….. OH!! We’re doing the old, “Give a killer red eyes, bleeding eyes, ou no eyes to make them scary”. Stop with the cliche, Creepypasta writers. It was scary at first, until toi drug it through the dirt. par this point, toi are just beating a dead horse.
Anyway, it reveals that Humphrey was actually looking into Lily’s eyes….. No…. They didn’t…. They ripped off The Other Watcher creepypasta. Okay, for those who don’t know, The Other Watcher is an amazing and well written Creepypasta about a guy who is told not to look in a room. He does, and when he does, he sees a girl, and the suivant time, just all red, but it is proven that it is the room to a girl with red eyes, simplifying that the man was looking into the ghost’s eyes. That is scary. But that Creepypasta was made in January eleventh of 2011, and Eyeless was made in May eleventh of 2012… This piece of shit ripped off a good creepypasta. If toi rip off a good story, toi have no talent. This author, obviously, has no talent. So, it ends with Lily killing Humphrey and just ends there. That’s Eyeless. It sucks. toi need anything else.
It is just a short, dull story that is just a rip off of a Creepypasta writers success, which fails miserably and is the slap to the face of Creepypasta readers. But, hey, that’s only my opinion. What’s Your Take.
Robotnik: Snooping as usual I see. *Talks faster* Snooping as usual *Slows down* I see.
It was a wonderful, and sunny jour when a poney with a sniper fusil, carabine was looking at a mare swimming. The poney with the fusil, carabine was named Scorpio, and he was an assassin. The mare swimming was at the haut, retour au début of a huge building, and Scorpio was going to do whatever he could to kill this mare. Why? Because he's evil.
With one shot, the mare was killed. Blood came out of her body, and into the swimming pool looking like red paint being washed off a brush.
Half an heure later, a poney was walking. This poney was...
Now, there is a lot a fanfic can do in at least a minute. But a one minute fanfic can leave toi with a "That sucked" emotion. However, one fanfic actually knows how to be short and scary. That Creepypasta is What toi Don't See.
Now, this story is about where it tells the reader what happens to the face of people when your not looking. It is a dit that while your back is turned, the people toi really know are just monsters who are hiding their true faces. And, that is it. A one minute creepypasta. However, this left lots of people paranoid, including myself. This Creepypasta really has a big effect on people who read it, even if it is just one minute.
Sorry, but the story is so short, that there really isn't much to say left. So, if toi want a good short creepypasta, then read What toi Don't See But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's toi Take
Now, this story is about where it tells the reader what happens to the face of people when your not looking. It is a dit that while your back is turned, the people toi really know are just monsters who are hiding their true faces. And, that is it. A one minute creepypasta. However, this left lots of people paranoid, including myself. This Creepypasta really has a big effect on people who read it, even if it is just one minute.
Sorry, but the story is so short, that there really isn't much to say left. So, if toi want a good short creepypasta, then read What toi Don't See But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's toi Take
