toi know, there is one feeling that I is hard to feel in modern creepypastas. That is being scared. However, there is one feeling I have never felt with a creepypasta. That is sadness. However, there is one that I have found. That would be the Pokemon Creepypasta called I Won't Leave You.
It starts with a Sylveon named Tyrin who is a very friendly Pokemon. However, he then finds this Eevee named Lonely, who was abandoned par his trainer and feels like he is nothing. par the way, he was abandoned years ago. So, Tyrin decides to take care of Lonely. They then start having a strong bond between them. This shows Lonely going out of his state of depression. He actually begins to feel happy.
Sadly, this is a creepypasta, so there is a catch to this. After a few weeks of them being together, Tyrin starts hearing voices in his head, that Lonely is an evil murderer who needs to die. As this keeps going, Lonely begins to have scratches appear on his body and he is in pain. Tyrin stands in fear, but tries his best to help Lonely. Hey, Creepypasta writers who put gore in your story, TAKE SOME FUCKING NOTES!!! This is how toi use blood and gore. Not using too much, but just enough to scare the reader.
After this, they head to Pallet Town. Here, Lonely says that he needs to find a certain grave. Here, it shows a grave that belongs to Lonely. So, yeah, Lonely died and is a ghost. So, Lonely and Tyrin say good bye in one of the most depressing ways I have seen since My Little Dashie. And with that, Lonely goes into his grave and Tyrin says how Lonely was a blessing.
I l’amour this creepypasta. It has wonderful characters, the story is both scary and heartbreaking, and is used in a way that makes toi respect the story and the writer. This is what toi get when toi respect the story your writing. toi create something that is just amazing.... but if toi don't treat your story with respect, toi get shit like Ihsoy. How bad is this, well, that's a review for another time. With that, I say that I Won't Leave toi is the greatest Pokemon fanfic I have ever read. But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take
It starts with a Sylveon named Tyrin who is a very friendly Pokemon. However, he then finds this Eevee named Lonely, who was abandoned par his trainer and feels like he is nothing. par the way, he was abandoned years ago. So, Tyrin decides to take care of Lonely. They then start having a strong bond between them. This shows Lonely going out of his state of depression. He actually begins to feel happy.
Sadly, this is a creepypasta, so there is a catch to this. After a few weeks of them being together, Tyrin starts hearing voices in his head, that Lonely is an evil murderer who needs to die. As this keeps going, Lonely begins to have scratches appear on his body and he is in pain. Tyrin stands in fear, but tries his best to help Lonely. Hey, Creepypasta writers who put gore in your story, TAKE SOME FUCKING NOTES!!! This is how toi use blood and gore. Not using too much, but just enough to scare the reader.
After this, they head to Pallet Town. Here, Lonely says that he needs to find a certain grave. Here, it shows a grave that belongs to Lonely. So, yeah, Lonely died and is a ghost. So, Lonely and Tyrin say good bye in one of the most depressing ways I have seen since My Little Dashie. And with that, Lonely goes into his grave and Tyrin says how Lonely was a blessing.
I l’amour this creepypasta. It has wonderful characters, the story is both scary and heartbreaking, and is used in a way that makes toi respect the story and the writer. This is what toi get when toi respect the story your writing. toi create something that is just amazing.... but if toi don't treat your story with respect, toi get shit like Ihsoy. How bad is this, well, that's a review for another time. With that, I say that I Won't Leave toi is the greatest Pokemon fanfic I have ever read. But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take
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