New official Jake and Bella photo what do toi think?

I woke up to the smell of breakfast down stairs, but I wasn’t sure if it was really made ou if Jacob had tried to kill my cuisine down stairs. I grabbed my peignoir de bain, peignoir and ran down the stairs faster then a normal human could. “Jacob Black what have toi done to my…” He turned around wearing my new tablier and had fleur all over his face. But my cuisine was spotless and my Jacob was covered in food. “I tried to keep it clean so toi wouldn’t die when toi came down stairs.” Jacob told me while whipping the fleur off with the tablier and walking towards me. “So what do toi think?” I...

Chapter 2

Bella’s POV

It was the first jour of classes. Edward left early. I called Jacob and asked him to pick up Nessie. Alice went to school with me. She’s talking so many things.
“Bella, There’s a new boutique on Seattle. toi want to come with me? Rosalie a dit that the clothes there were amazing.”
I’m not actually listening to her because I’m thinking about Nessie’s nightmare.
Who was that girl?
Is she in l’amour with Edward?
Is Edward in l’amour with her too?
Will she really break our family?
Is Edward really going to leave us?
Why?
Nessie’s face were still on my mind.
She was really hurt.
Then,...

The Character


Name: Alec

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Blocks the senses

About Them: A member of the Volturi's guards, Alec is able to block people's senses. His extremely powerful gift can make people blind, deaf, and numb to any feeling if he wishes to. Unlike many of the vampires his gift is visible and it appears in the form of a clear hazy mist. We learn of Alec's power in Breaking Dawn when he attempts to use it on the Cullen family's gathered witnesses. However, the mist hit Bella's 'shield' and went around it as Bella's shield was a bubble protecting the people gathered. Alec did not retract...

It happens. There’s no avoiding it. When toi can see the darkness coming, there’s nothing toi can do rather than lie there helplessly, waiting. Waiting for the torment to end. Then finally, when toi know it’s all over, there’s that one rayon, ray of hope willing to take your life back. So toi reach out for it, not wanting to loose it. Lock it in a box and throw away the key.
“Charlie how long il y a was it when toi found her?”
That calm voice echoed around the large l’espace in my empty head. The light was fading, seeping out the sides of the box that I locked it in. It was escaping fast and...

The Character


Name: Marcus

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Can sense relationships

About Them: Marcus was once one of the prominent leaders of the Volturi in Volterra, Italy. He has the ability to sense relationships and his former wife who is now deceased, Didyme, had the ability to make others happy. After the sudden and shocking death of Didyme Marcus became extremely apathetic and disinterested in life. As a result he voted against destroying little Renesmee in an 'almost bored fashion' without so much as a glance to the Cullens and their allies. Marcus has jett black hair with the fiery red...

1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt plus about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations,...

Thanks for all the replies, theyre really appricieted. I have the suivant installment (which is in JACOBs POV =]) already written out and will post it as quick as possible. Thanks again =]
My whole body ached to be with her. My anxiety must have been montrer because even without Jasper present Alice leapt lightly to my side and thought softly towards me.
"Dont worry the DOGS" she thought fiercly "will be gone soon and toi can see Bella." she added hoping to placate me.
I sent Bella a quick text, i knew how bad anxiety was for her.
"Problems with dogs. Will be late. l’amour you, E" i smiled knowing that...

Chapter 2- The Doctor

It was a ten minute drive to the hospital in Columbus, I sat and stared out the window of my father's farming truck that was for emergencies only. My mother had stayed at accueil to finish dîner and tend to the younger children.

My father carried me inside and sat me down on one of the hard wooden chairs. The emergency room was empty apart from the two of us and a mother and her screaming infant. I tried to focus my thoughts on something other than the horrible pain in my leg. I thought about the grand adventures Tom, Lily and I had gone on in the past few days. My father...

"Yes thats me" Edward replied "well we were just wondering can we get some help" she said.While walking in. "what can i do for you-"

"My name is jessica and this is justin,Im half- vampire my father is Laurent."

Just then we all froze.Did she come avenge us ou the pack?Did she want to take kill my daughter and justin will take out Jacob?

"Dont worry i just came to see if that carlisle would except us into his coven."

"of course we will except both of you." "Thank toi so much oh bella may i see nessie and nessa?"

"how do toi know our names" i asked "Well thats part of my talent it cames from...

End of Chapter 1:

I jumped off of the balcony, followed par Rosalie.
"You can't even control your wife," she a dit to me.
"I'm not going to get hurt. Besides, Emmett should've seen it coming."
Then I noticed Jasper was following us.
"Jasper, I doubt we'll need you," I said.
"Alice sent me. None of toi might need me, but Jacob does."
Rose and I looked at each other. Jacob thinks we saved Bella. If he finds out Bella is a vampire, he may attack at any moment. Just what we need, an angry loup pack attacking us and breaking their own treaty.
All because of Jacob.

2. HUH?
Jacob


I was running through the...

The Brightest Days Form the Darkest Shadows- Chapter 1b. A Monotonous Existence

Not far from the spot where Maria had stood under the canopy of arching trees to shield herself from the steady rain, was a little abandoned farmhouse. It was a crusted old thing, with an overgrown garden and soot-blackened windows. Nobody bothered with the place anymore- it was almost worthless; ancient and crumbling, it stood silent, defending itself from the pouring rain. Only the mice and other forest-creature inhabitants appreciated the house for its shelter and solitude.
A particularly young mouse-buck, tired...

[Right, so i've been having a look around and couldn't find many Carlisle fanfics. So i decided to have a go at one myself. please leave your thoughts and reviews!]

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Racing through the dim lit streets, I could feel it following me. Feel the heavy prescence, the un human heart, the menace. I slipped on the lightly soaked cobbles. Then everything went black.

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Waking in the dark, damp cellar I waited to be woken from this horrific dream like experience. A feu so powerful, so raw burnt through my entire body, like logs...