All right guys, as toi all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my suivant chapter will be right. And just incase that toi have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the suivant chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any conseil on how I can make my écriture Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be cloche, bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
l’amour flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be cloche, bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
l’amour flynnismine
Renesme's POV
I laughed, Jacob was a great guy and very funny. I loved him, I mean who wouldnt?! He's cute smart, Buff, and Funny. I think even mom has a crush on him! "Ness!"Jacob shouted/laughed. "Huh? Oh I'm sorry jacob what were toi saying?" I dumbfoundly asked. "I a dit do toi want to go to dîner with me on friday?" He smiled. "I would l’amour to! But I have to ask my mom and dad... My dad will probably say no.. He dosnt like you" "I know, call me ok?" He ask's. "Okay!" I say cheerfully.
1 heure later.
"Mom, Can I ask toi something?" I dubiously said. "Sure hunny" Then mom put down the paper and gave me a warm smile. "Well toi see jacob kinda asked me out on a date." "Really? Well I would say yes but the final desicion is up to your dad" She a dit seriously. I sighed, I then sent mom a mind message saying, "I know".
I laughed, Jacob was a great guy and very funny. I loved him, I mean who wouldnt?! He's cute smart, Buff, and Funny. I think even mom has a crush on him! "Ness!"Jacob shouted/laughed. "Huh? Oh I'm sorry jacob what were toi saying?" I dumbfoundly asked. "I a dit do toi want to go to dîner with me on friday?" He smiled. "I would l’amour to! But I have to ask my mom and dad... My dad will probably say no.. He dosnt like you" "I know, call me ok?" He ask's. "Okay!" I say cheerfully.
1 heure later.
"Mom, Can I ask toi something?" I dubiously said. "Sure hunny" Then mom put down the paper and gave me a warm smile. "Well toi see jacob kinda asked me out on a date." "Really? Well I would say yes but the final desicion is up to your dad" She a dit seriously. I sighed, I then sent mom a mind message saying, "I know".