I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have posté it over there too.
here are liens to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. toi will recognize many scenes I kept. toi will notice some things that I have combined. toi will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. toi will notice them.
This is my seconde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third ou possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would l’amour to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. toi could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if toi go according to the typical 1 page =1 minute rule. Some scenes do go par faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look vers l'avant, vers l’avant to your comments.
Again, this is a fan made script. If toi want to share it with friends, ou what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of toi gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope toi enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether toi want to PM me personally with a lengthy review ou just give me a shout out on my comments, I would l’amour it to death.
Thanks for reading!
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have posté it over there too.
here are liens to my screenplay
link
link
link
This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. toi will recognize many scenes I kept. toi will notice some things that I have combined. toi will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. toi will notice them.
This is my seconde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third ou possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would l’amour to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. toi could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if toi go according to the typical 1 page =1 minute rule. Some scenes do go par faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look vers l'avant, vers l’avant to your comments.
Again, this is a fan made script. If toi want to share it with friends, ou what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of toi gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope toi enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether toi want to PM me personally with a lengthy review ou just give me a shout out on my comments, I would l’amour it to death.
Thanks for reading!
