this a fanfiction bout seth hope toi like it
(seths pov)
chapter one
i was out for my usuall run, in my loup form i thought mabey later i would go see edward but first i was gonna do my job and be on patrol no vamp scent other than the cullen i thought knowing they were listening as they rarely let me run patrol on my own as i was "to young" as they put it. i was running through the forrest when i heard a girl scream, i ran in the direction that i heard it and found a a ours attacking this girl. she must have been around my age, i didnt think i pounced on the ours and killed it. she was shaking in fear and bleeding so much, i phased and lent over her fragile body, as i looked into her eye's the gravity of the earth no longer held me here she did, this beautifull fragile Angel was my only reason for existing.first i was shocked this is what it felt like to imprint, then i was in pain she was going to die, i couldn't let her die she was the soul reason i wanted to live and even though i had known her all but a seconde i couldn't live with out her. i scopped her up gently into my arms, not wanting to hurt her any plus than she was already hurt, i lent down to wisper in her ear "it's going to be o.k, i will find away to save you" i kissed her check, i had to save her but how, she was so badly hurt she was dying and i didn't know how to save her and i couldn't save her but at the same time i couldn't let her die, then a thought came to my head and i was running, i would rather her a vampire i could live with the smell but i couldnt live without her. i arrived at the cullen's and they were expecting a loup as alice's visions must of disapered "edward" i wispered as i walked through the back door letting my mind run over the last twenty minuets of my life. he sighed and came out into the hall with carlisle "i can't let her die" i wispered looking down at my Angel in my arms "seth she would be a vampire" edward wispered feeling my agoney "i don't care, i onistly don't care edward please save her" i would be able to l’amour a vampire my best friend was one and she couldn't die she just couldn't "carlisle" edward wispered "can we make an addition to our family..." edward started to explain to carlisle about how i imprinted on her, but i werent really listening i was looking at her face, she was starting to lose consiousness "please" i wispered felling totally helpless there was no way i could save her they needed to help me "bring her up stair to mine and esme's room" carlisle ran off up stairs, i followed, i didn't really take much notice of the room i just wanted my Angel to be ok "lay her down on the bed" carlisle told me i walked other to the big double lit and placed her down very gentely trying not to hurt her "seth toi can leave the room while i change her if it make's toi feel uncomfortable" i just shock my head i didn't want to leave her, he sighed then bent down to her throat if i didn't hear her skin pericing i would have sworn he was s’embrasser her then i couldn't watch and left the room, while the change began, i walked down the stairs and most of the pack were sitting ther with the cullen's "how are toi seth" jake asked cuddling nessie "confused, i have known her all for one minuet and i can't live without her" he smiled at me "that's what imprinting does to you" he a dit looking down at nessie she smiled up at , then closed her eyes ad leant against his chest. that is what i wanted i wanted my Angel upstairs to be ok i didn't care that she was going to be a vampire she would still be my angel. i looked around the room then went back up stairs and sat par her side.
(the girl's pov)
the ours was abot to finish me off, i heard something aproch the ours at first i though it was another ours but then they started fighting and i heard the big ours fall to the ground. footstep's were coming towards me, not animal but human, i opened my eye's and a gorgeous boy around the same age as me was looking down on me, he had saved my life even though i was still dying, he stared into my eye's as i stared into his, he had the most beautiful chocolat eye's i had ever seen, and i didn't care if i was dying i didn't want to close my eye's and waste a seconde when i could be looking at him. he picked me up into his arms very gently so he didn't hurt me, he bent his head down to my ear and wispered "it's going to be o.k, i will find a way to save you" he kissed my check and sent a feeling like and eliectric current run through my body, i loved this person who was holding me the moment i looked into his eyes. all of a sudden he started running, it felt plus like flying at speed he was going at, he had stoped at the back door of a massive house. as he walked through the back door he wispered "edward" who ever edward was he couldn't hear a sound so low as that. out of nowere two men were standing infront of us, my eye lids started to close i was losing so much blood "i can't let her die" he wispered looking down at me, one of the men mumbled something to low for me to hear then my Angel wispered "i don't care, i onistly don't care edward please save her. the two men started mumbling amongest themselves when one a dit "bring her up to mine and esme's room". i closed my eye's leting the pain eat me then all of a sudden there was a new pain it felt like i was on fire, the ours was nothing comapred to this pain i though this was hell, i wanted to scream but i couldn't, i wanted to tell them to kill me but i didn't. i tried to remember a reason to be alive and all i could think about was my Angel who was at my side holding my hand, then he was gone i wanted to scream and tell him i couldn't be without him, that he couldn't leave me. i then heard voice's down stairs "how are toi seth" a man asked "confused i have known her all for one minuet and i can't live without her" seth replied. my angel's name was seth, and he couldn't live without me just how i couldn't be with out him. "thats what imprinting does to you" the man replied, what's imprinting was all i could think about untill i felt a warm hand take mine. my Angel my seth was at my side
(seths pov)
chapter one
i was out for my usuall run, in my loup form i thought mabey later i would go see edward but first i was gonna do my job and be on patrol no vamp scent other than the cullen i thought knowing they were listening as they rarely let me run patrol on my own as i was "to young" as they put it. i was running through the forrest when i heard a girl scream, i ran in the direction that i heard it and found a a ours attacking this girl. she must have been around my age, i didnt think i pounced on the ours and killed it. she was shaking in fear and bleeding so much, i phased and lent over her fragile body, as i looked into her eye's the gravity of the earth no longer held me here she did, this beautifull fragile Angel was my only reason for existing.first i was shocked this is what it felt like to imprint, then i was in pain she was going to die, i couldn't let her die she was the soul reason i wanted to live and even though i had known her all but a seconde i couldn't live with out her. i scopped her up gently into my arms, not wanting to hurt her any plus than she was already hurt, i lent down to wisper in her ear "it's going to be o.k, i will find away to save you" i kissed her check, i had to save her but how, she was so badly hurt she was dying and i didn't know how to save her and i couldn't save her but at the same time i couldn't let her die, then a thought came to my head and i was running, i would rather her a vampire i could live with the smell but i couldnt live without her. i arrived at the cullen's and they were expecting a loup as alice's visions must of disapered "edward" i wispered as i walked through the back door letting my mind run over the last twenty minuets of my life. he sighed and came out into the hall with carlisle "i can't let her die" i wispered looking down at my Angel in my arms "seth she would be a vampire" edward wispered feeling my agoney "i don't care, i onistly don't care edward please save her" i would be able to l’amour a vampire my best friend was one and she couldn't die she just couldn't "carlisle" edward wispered "can we make an addition to our family..." edward started to explain to carlisle about how i imprinted on her, but i werent really listening i was looking at her face, she was starting to lose consiousness "please" i wispered felling totally helpless there was no way i could save her they needed to help me "bring her up stair to mine and esme's room" carlisle ran off up stairs, i followed, i didn't really take much notice of the room i just wanted my Angel to be ok "lay her down on the bed" carlisle told me i walked other to the big double lit and placed her down very gentely trying not to hurt her "seth toi can leave the room while i change her if it make's toi feel uncomfortable" i just shock my head i didn't want to leave her, he sighed then bent down to her throat if i didn't hear her skin pericing i would have sworn he was s’embrasser her then i couldn't watch and left the room, while the change began, i walked down the stairs and most of the pack were sitting ther with the cullen's "how are toi seth" jake asked cuddling nessie "confused, i have known her all for one minuet and i can't live without her" he smiled at me "that's what imprinting does to you" he a dit looking down at nessie she smiled up at , then closed her eyes ad leant against his chest. that is what i wanted i wanted my Angel upstairs to be ok i didn't care that she was going to be a vampire she would still be my angel. i looked around the room then went back up stairs and sat par her side.
(the girl's pov)
the ours was abot to finish me off, i heard something aproch the ours at first i though it was another ours but then they started fighting and i heard the big ours fall to the ground. footstep's were coming towards me, not animal but human, i opened my eye's and a gorgeous boy around the same age as me was looking down on me, he had saved my life even though i was still dying, he stared into my eye's as i stared into his, he had the most beautiful chocolat eye's i had ever seen, and i didn't care if i was dying i didn't want to close my eye's and waste a seconde when i could be looking at him. he picked me up into his arms very gently so he didn't hurt me, he bent his head down to my ear and wispered "it's going to be o.k, i will find a way to save you" he kissed my check and sent a feeling like and eliectric current run through my body, i loved this person who was holding me the moment i looked into his eyes. all of a sudden he started running, it felt plus like flying at speed he was going at, he had stoped at the back door of a massive house. as he walked through the back door he wispered "edward" who ever edward was he couldn't hear a sound so low as that. out of nowere two men were standing infront of us, my eye lids started to close i was losing so much blood "i can't let her die" he wispered looking down at me, one of the men mumbled something to low for me to hear then my Angel wispered "i don't care, i onistly don't care edward please save her. the two men started mumbling amongest themselves when one a dit "bring her up to mine and esme's room". i closed my eye's leting the pain eat me then all of a sudden there was a new pain it felt like i was on fire, the ours was nothing comapred to this pain i though this was hell, i wanted to scream but i couldn't, i wanted to tell them to kill me but i didn't. i tried to remember a reason to be alive and all i could think about was my Angel who was at my side holding my hand, then he was gone i wanted to scream and tell him i couldn't be without him, that he couldn't leave me. i then heard voice's down stairs "how are toi seth" a man asked "confused i have known her all for one minuet and i can't live without her" seth replied. my angel's name was seth, and he couldn't live without me just how i couldn't be with out him. "thats what imprinting does to you" the man replied, what's imprinting was all i could think about untill i felt a warm hand take mine. my Angel my seth was at my side
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can toi imagine being shown up par someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after lire a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can toi imagine being shown up par someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after lire a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
