heyy here's my new fanfic it doesn't have a name yet so if toi have any ideas let me know please.
Chapter 1.
'Bella, oh Bella. My sweet baby sister.' I heard in my head. "Lily?" I asked out loud. 'Shh. toi can only here me in your head. I'm coming don't worry. We'll be together again.' She a dit before fading out of my head. "Bella who are toi talking to? Who's Lily?" Edward asked waking me up. I was alseep? Okay it was just a dream. "Oh, just a dream."
It's been 10 years today that I haven't seen Lily. She had gone missing right from her bedroom. I was 9 and she was 16. So long ago. Too long. I missed her dearly. I never told Edward about Lily. Jake never mentions her because he loved her like an older sister. The truth is we both miss her.
Edward repeated again. "Bella? Who's Lily? I bursted out crying. "My-my sister." I said. "Oh. Bella. I'm so sorry. What happened?" I looked up at him. "I was 9 and she was 16. We were playing and I a dit I was hungry she made me a snack while we waited for our parents to come home. I heard her cell phone ring and she ran upstairs. I remember sitting there for a half heure waiting for her. She never came back down. When I went upstairs to her room the window was smashed. I couldn't remember my parents phone number so I called 9-1-1. I told them my sister was watching me and she's no where to be found. I remember crying when my parents came accueil to the police in their house. 10 years today she's been missing. And I-I miss her!" I started to sob.
Edward craddled me in his arms. "Then the worst part is I have a dream about her!" Edward rocked us back and forth. "It's okay. She's in a better place." Edward comforted me.
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I know this is really short but I want to know what toi think so I know wiether ou not to continue this story.
Chapter 1.
'Bella, oh Bella. My sweet baby sister.' I heard in my head. "Lily?" I asked out loud. 'Shh. toi can only here me in your head. I'm coming don't worry. We'll be together again.' She a dit before fading out of my head. "Bella who are toi talking to? Who's Lily?" Edward asked waking me up. I was alseep? Okay it was just a dream. "Oh, just a dream."
It's been 10 years today that I haven't seen Lily. She had gone missing right from her bedroom. I was 9 and she was 16. So long ago. Too long. I missed her dearly. I never told Edward about Lily. Jake never mentions her because he loved her like an older sister. The truth is we both miss her.
Edward repeated again. "Bella? Who's Lily? I bursted out crying. "My-my sister." I said. "Oh. Bella. I'm so sorry. What happened?" I looked up at him. "I was 9 and she was 16. We were playing and I a dit I was hungry she made me a snack while we waited for our parents to come home. I heard her cell phone ring and she ran upstairs. I remember sitting there for a half heure waiting for her. She never came back down. When I went upstairs to her room the window was smashed. I couldn't remember my parents phone number so I called 9-1-1. I told them my sister was watching me and she's no where to be found. I remember crying when my parents came accueil to the police in their house. 10 years today she's been missing. And I-I miss her!" I started to sob.
Edward craddled me in his arms. "Then the worst part is I have a dream about her!" Edward rocked us back and forth. "It's okay. She's in a better place." Edward comforted me.
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I know this is really short but I want to know what toi think so I know wiether ou not to continue this story.