Hey Thankyou all so much for the comments! I still have my MAJOR writers block, but I will try and see how this turns out...
I hope you're enjoying my story. Don't forget to commentaire and tell me what toi think, and if there is any thing I can improve on. Okay since of my writers block I just got this Idea... I hope toi guys like it... I wrote part of this at 4:30 in the morning, so sorry if it doesn't make sense.
So here is the last bit That I had done in Edwards POV... It was so long ago....
"Bella, are toi okay? What's wrong?" I knew Bella wouldn't call me unless it was an emergency. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" Bella sounded so scared, I wish I was there to protect her. Then it sunk in. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I knew Bella would be sûr, sans danger there until I came back. There was no reply, "Bella are toi there?" I was starting to get really scared that this would be the last time I could talk to her. "Edward, I l’amour you" Just when I was about to say it back, I heard a loud screaming sound coming from Bella. "Bella!" was all I could get through the phone before it went dead, "Beep, Beep, Beep."
"Carlisle, Esme, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, Rose!" I shouted out, they were all here within seconds. "what's the matter Edward?" Carlisle asked me, I could see he was thinking the worst scenario's that could happen. "It's Bella, We have to get back!"
Edward's POV
We all rushed to our cars, I was in the car with Alice and Jasper, Emmett and Rose were in Emmett's jeep, and Carlisle and Esme were in Carlisle's car. I looked at the clock it was 7:14, it had been 7 minutes since Bella had called. I tried calling her back, "I'm sorry but this number had been disconnected" The annoying computer voice coming out of the phone told me.
"Ahhh!" And I threw my phone on the ground.
"Edward calm down. Bella will be okay." Alice a dit in a soft voice.
"Alice? Can toi see Bella?" I asked her frantically.
"I'm trying Edward" Alice a dit back, almost as frantically as me. I felt like yelling at Alice, but it wasn't her fault. It's just so hard when I don't know if Bella is okay ou not. I would have asked Alice to drive faster, but she was already going the haut, retour au début speed to her car of 300km/h. I took a long deep breath and closed my eyes. I would not take this out on my family I repeated this over and over again in my head. Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine...
"EDWARD!" Alice shouted at me.
"WHAT?!" I shouted back.
"Will toi shut up! Bella is going to be fine!" Alice half yelled at me now. Oops I didn't know I was saying that out loud.
"But toi can't know for sure." I told her.
"I know Edward. But we have to think positive, for Bella's sake."
"I guess you're right." I replied
"Yes, I usually am." Alice said, she was thinking in her mind all the times that she was right and I wasn't.
"You're pushing it Alice." I warned her.
"I know" She a dit with her Alice grin.
I tried to block out Alice and Jaspers thoughts, it was a bit harder to block out Alice's though. I leaned back and closed my eyes again, hoping Bella was okay. What if she wasn't? What would I do without her?
There were so many questions swimming around in my mind. And how long was this car ride going to be?!?! Bella needs me and i'm stuck in this car, even if it is faster then us running, I just feel so helpless. The car ride normally takes us an heure but that is going half the speed of what we are doing right now.
I only then realise that Alice was trying to get my attention, when I opened my eyes I saw here pointing to a sign. It was only then that I realised that it was the sing to Forks. I looked at the clock 7:46 we had been driving for 32 minutes, record time!
"Thank toi Alice." I told her.
"Its okay, I'm worried about Bella too. We all are." She replied.
"Yeah" I a dit with a sigh.
"Edward, she will be okay." Alice told me... again.
"But what if she's not? What will we do then?" I asked. I know I should be thinking positive, but its so hard to do that when Bella isn't here with me.
"Edward. She will be okay!" Alice half yelled at me. "And if she's not, we will go to the ends of the Earth until she is okay." Alice said, she seemed very determined. And I knew what she a dit was true, none of us would give up if she wasn't okay.
I looked out the window we had slowed down, we were just about to come into Bella's street. I looked behind me to see Emmett and Rosalie in Emmett's jeep. He gave me a big grin. Rosalie gave a shy smile, I know she is not a big fan of Bella, but she would deffiently help. Behind them I could see Carlisle and Esme, in a deep convosation.
We stopped outside Bella's house just then, Charlie wasn't accueil yet but he would be soon. I was the first to get out of the car, everyone else followed. I knew where their house key was, and quickly let us all in.
I was hit par the smell of Bella, but also the very strong smell of a Vampire. I was guessing everyone else could smell it too, there was a few hissing sounds from behind me. I could hear all their thoughts and most of them were thinking the same thing "Who is here... ou who was here?" Except Emmett, he was thinking "Whoooo! Hopefully I can fight someone... It's been awhile since I have had a good fight with-"
"Emmett! This is serious!" I yelled at him
"I'm sorry dude, but toi know how I am." Emmett replied sheepishly.
"I know, I'm sorry. I'm just a bit tense." I said
"Its okay dude, Bella will be okay." He replied.
"I don't know this scent." Carlisle spoke up.
"neither." I replied. "I don't think any of us have."
"We don't know who ou what we are up against then." Esme a dit worried, not only for Bella's sake but for her whole family as well.
I decided to check out the house before Charlie came home. I started to climb the stairs, when Alice called out.
"Wait Edward! Charlie will be accueil in 10 minutes, lets see if any of us can find a clue then we have to get out of here."
We all divisé, split up, Emmett, Alice and I went up stairs while Rosalie, Jasper, Carlise and Emse stayed downstairs to look for some clue as to where Bella was.
"Wait Alice. What are we going to tell Charlie?" I asked.
"Crap. I don't know. What about if we call Charlie after he gets accueil to say Bella is sleeping over, and that will par us sometime to figuer out what to do." Alice was good at coming up with Idea's.
"Okay" I said
I went into Bella's room, and that's where I saw a letter sitting on her Bed, on the envelope was written The Cullen's in neat hand writing, it éperlan of Vampire.
"Alice, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Carlisle, Esme. I found something!" I called out to everyone.
They were all here within seconds.
"What is it Edward?" Rosalie asked.
"A note."
"Well are toi going to open it anytime soon Bro?" Emmett asked.
"How about we do it when we get home, Charlie is 1 minute away from the house." Alice said. So we all rushed to our cars, speeding off only 10 secondes before we were standing in Bella's bedroom. I held the note in my hand, desperately wanting to know what was on the note, but also not wanting to.
"We will open is back at the house if toi want to ou not." Alice a dit quite sternly. Of course Alice could see my future changing.
"Yeah, I know" I a dit with a sigh. I was blocking out Alice and Jasper's thoughts I didn't want to here what they would most likely be thinking. The car stopped, I looked out the window and here we were back at home. We all didn't rush to the living room, but we didn't go at human pace either. I was still clutching the letter in my hand, Did I want to open it ou not?
"I'll open it." Alice a dit a bit frustrated.
"No." I a dit and opened the letter.
I hope you're enjoying my story. Don't forget to commentaire and tell me what toi think, and if there is any thing I can improve on. Okay since of my writers block I just got this Idea... I hope toi guys like it... I wrote part of this at 4:30 in the morning, so sorry if it doesn't make sense.
So here is the last bit That I had done in Edwards POV... It was so long ago....
"Bella, are toi okay? What's wrong?" I knew Bella wouldn't call me unless it was an emergency. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" Bella sounded so scared, I wish I was there to protect her. Then it sunk in. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I knew Bella would be sûr, sans danger there until I came back. There was no reply, "Bella are toi there?" I was starting to get really scared that this would be the last time I could talk to her. "Edward, I l’amour you" Just when I was about to say it back, I heard a loud screaming sound coming from Bella. "Bella!" was all I could get through the phone before it went dead, "Beep, Beep, Beep."
"Carlisle, Esme, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, Rose!" I shouted out, they were all here within seconds. "what's the matter Edward?" Carlisle asked me, I could see he was thinking the worst scenario's that could happen. "It's Bella, We have to get back!"
Edward's POV
We all rushed to our cars, I was in the car with Alice and Jasper, Emmett and Rose were in Emmett's jeep, and Carlisle and Esme were in Carlisle's car. I looked at the clock it was 7:14, it had been 7 minutes since Bella had called. I tried calling her back, "I'm sorry but this number had been disconnected" The annoying computer voice coming out of the phone told me.
"Ahhh!" And I threw my phone on the ground.
"Edward calm down. Bella will be okay." Alice a dit in a soft voice.
"Alice? Can toi see Bella?" I asked her frantically.
"I'm trying Edward" Alice a dit back, almost as frantically as me. I felt like yelling at Alice, but it wasn't her fault. It's just so hard when I don't know if Bella is okay ou not. I would have asked Alice to drive faster, but she was already going the haut, retour au début speed to her car of 300km/h. I took a long deep breath and closed my eyes. I would not take this out on my family I repeated this over and over again in my head. Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine...
"EDWARD!" Alice shouted at me.
"WHAT?!" I shouted back.
"Will toi shut up! Bella is going to be fine!" Alice half yelled at me now. Oops I didn't know I was saying that out loud.
"But toi can't know for sure." I told her.
"I know Edward. But we have to think positive, for Bella's sake."
"I guess you're right." I replied
"Yes, I usually am." Alice said, she was thinking in her mind all the times that she was right and I wasn't.
"You're pushing it Alice." I warned her.
"I know" She a dit with her Alice grin.
I tried to block out Alice and Jaspers thoughts, it was a bit harder to block out Alice's though. I leaned back and closed my eyes again, hoping Bella was okay. What if she wasn't? What would I do without her?
There were so many questions swimming around in my mind. And how long was this car ride going to be?!?! Bella needs me and i'm stuck in this car, even if it is faster then us running, I just feel so helpless. The car ride normally takes us an heure but that is going half the speed of what we are doing right now.
I only then realise that Alice was trying to get my attention, when I opened my eyes I saw here pointing to a sign. It was only then that I realised that it was the sing to Forks. I looked at the clock 7:46 we had been driving for 32 minutes, record time!
"Thank toi Alice." I told her.
"Its okay, I'm worried about Bella too. We all are." She replied.
"Yeah" I a dit with a sigh.
"Edward, she will be okay." Alice told me... again.
"But what if she's not? What will we do then?" I asked. I know I should be thinking positive, but its so hard to do that when Bella isn't here with me.
"Edward. She will be okay!" Alice half yelled at me. "And if she's not, we will go to the ends of the Earth until she is okay." Alice said, she seemed very determined. And I knew what she a dit was true, none of us would give up if she wasn't okay.
I looked out the window we had slowed down, we were just about to come into Bella's street. I looked behind me to see Emmett and Rosalie in Emmett's jeep. He gave me a big grin. Rosalie gave a shy smile, I know she is not a big fan of Bella, but she would deffiently help. Behind them I could see Carlisle and Esme, in a deep convosation.
We stopped outside Bella's house just then, Charlie wasn't accueil yet but he would be soon. I was the first to get out of the car, everyone else followed. I knew where their house key was, and quickly let us all in.
I was hit par the smell of Bella, but also the very strong smell of a Vampire. I was guessing everyone else could smell it too, there was a few hissing sounds from behind me. I could hear all their thoughts and most of them were thinking the same thing "Who is here... ou who was here?" Except Emmett, he was thinking "Whoooo! Hopefully I can fight someone... It's been awhile since I have had a good fight with-"
"Emmett! This is serious!" I yelled at him
"I'm sorry dude, but toi know how I am." Emmett replied sheepishly.
"I know, I'm sorry. I'm just a bit tense." I said
"Its okay dude, Bella will be okay." He replied.
"I don't know this scent." Carlisle spoke up.
"neither." I replied. "I don't think any of us have."
"We don't know who ou what we are up against then." Esme a dit worried, not only for Bella's sake but for her whole family as well.
I decided to check out the house before Charlie came home. I started to climb the stairs, when Alice called out.
"Wait Edward! Charlie will be accueil in 10 minutes, lets see if any of us can find a clue then we have to get out of here."
We all divisé, split up, Emmett, Alice and I went up stairs while Rosalie, Jasper, Carlise and Emse stayed downstairs to look for some clue as to where Bella was.
"Wait Alice. What are we going to tell Charlie?" I asked.
"Crap. I don't know. What about if we call Charlie after he gets accueil to say Bella is sleeping over, and that will par us sometime to figuer out what to do." Alice was good at coming up with Idea's.
"Okay" I said
I went into Bella's room, and that's where I saw a letter sitting on her Bed, on the envelope was written The Cullen's in neat hand writing, it éperlan of Vampire.
"Alice, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Carlisle, Esme. I found something!" I called out to everyone.
They were all here within seconds.
"What is it Edward?" Rosalie asked.
"A note."
"Well are toi going to open it anytime soon Bro?" Emmett asked.
"How about we do it when we get home, Charlie is 1 minute away from the house." Alice said. So we all rushed to our cars, speeding off only 10 secondes before we were standing in Bella's bedroom. I held the note in my hand, desperately wanting to know what was on the note, but also not wanting to.
"We will open is back at the house if toi want to ou not." Alice a dit quite sternly. Of course Alice could see my future changing.
"Yeah, I know" I a dit with a sigh. I was blocking out Alice and Jasper's thoughts I didn't want to here what they would most likely be thinking. The car stopped, I looked out the window and here we were back at home. We all didn't rush to the living room, but we didn't go at human pace either. I was still clutching the letter in my hand, Did I want to open it ou not?
"I'll open it." Alice a dit a bit frustrated.
"No." I a dit and opened the letter.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
New Moon in theatres November 20, 2009
