Heres part two. Hope toi like it.
I fell over, catching my hand on something sharp. I knew I was being sort of silly, but they weren’t going to let me see Jacob! I pulled my knees to my chest burying my face on them. This wasn’t fair.
Pretty soon it began to get cold and dark. I wondered if I should be heading accueil ou if they were just going to leave me out here. I didn’t want to talk to dad anyway. I heard a low whining in my left ear and a wet nose brush across my cheek. I looked into his big black eyes.
“What?” I asked.
He whined again. I buried my head back onto my knees. He curled up against my side to keep me warm; as it was obvious I wasn’t going to move.
It was the morning and it was raining. But it was Forks, what did I expect! I was alone, because Jacob had left me, only to change into a human form, I soon found out.
“Renesmee, why on earth did toi sleep out here last night?” He asked sitting down suivant to me and putting his arm around my shoulders.
“Because... Oh Jake!” I cried.
“Hey, Nessie. It’s ok, whatever it is we can sort it out.”
“He’s not going to let me see toi anymore” I sobbed. “He says it’s because of my school grades.”
Jacob didn’t talk for a seconde and then asked me.
“What about your school grades? I thought toi were doing really well personally.”
I nodded.
“I know but Dad doesn’t think I’m doing as well as I could. And he says I can’t see toi anymore for a while because of it.” Jacob nodded.
“Maybe he’s right Nessie.” He a dit softly. “Maybe he is”
I opened my mouth shocked. Dad’s side was the last side I expected Jacob to take.
“No, he’s not right.” I a dit firmly
“If that’s what toi really think.” Jacob a dit shrugging
What was wrong with him? Why was he being like this?
I fell over, catching my hand on something sharp. I knew I was being sort of silly, but they weren’t going to let me see Jacob! I pulled my knees to my chest burying my face on them. This wasn’t fair.
Pretty soon it began to get cold and dark. I wondered if I should be heading accueil ou if they were just going to leave me out here. I didn’t want to talk to dad anyway. I heard a low whining in my left ear and a wet nose brush across my cheek. I looked into his big black eyes.
“What?” I asked.
He whined again. I buried my head back onto my knees. He curled up against my side to keep me warm; as it was obvious I wasn’t going to move.
It was the morning and it was raining. But it was Forks, what did I expect! I was alone, because Jacob had left me, only to change into a human form, I soon found out.
“Renesmee, why on earth did toi sleep out here last night?” He asked sitting down suivant to me and putting his arm around my shoulders.
“Because... Oh Jake!” I cried.
“Hey, Nessie. It’s ok, whatever it is we can sort it out.”
“He’s not going to let me see toi anymore” I sobbed. “He says it’s because of my school grades.”
Jacob didn’t talk for a seconde and then asked me.
“What about your school grades? I thought toi were doing really well personally.”
I nodded.
“I know but Dad doesn’t think I’m doing as well as I could. And he says I can’t see toi anymore for a while because of it.” Jacob nodded.
“Maybe he’s right Nessie.” He a dit softly. “Maybe he is”
I opened my mouth shocked. Dad’s side was the last side I expected Jacob to take.
“No, he’s not right.” I a dit firmly
“If that’s what toi really think.” Jacob a dit shrugging
What was wrong with him? Why was he being like this?
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