Hey, can toi guys rate AND comment? it's kind of annoying to have like 4 rates and 1 comment. So I don't know who is actualy rating. Thanks! (also Mary meets the Cullens here.)
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I watched the scenery fly by. So I could tell when she slowed and pulled off the road. Her eyes went blank, but still drove.
"What?"
"Nothing, just put these on." She threw me some clothes, that looked just like the ones she had on. Were we going to confuse her coven. I had the same jeans, shirt, jacket, hat, shoes, everything matched to hers. We looked so alike.
We even smelled the same. I doubted they could tell the difference. Following the long, windy drive we pulled infront of a huge white house. Someone came out the door, she looked nice.
Blonde hair, golden eyes, with jeans smeared with car grease. Alice told me to stay she got out and greeted the vampire as 'Rosalie'.
I could hear the conversation going on between them.
"Alice. We were so worried, Carlisle came accueil without you, where did toi go?"
"I had an unexpected visitor."
"You've never not 'seen' someone. Was it one of the werewolves?"
Werewolves?
"Nope. She did catch me off guard though. Mary!"
She turned towards me, wanting me to come out.
I took a deep breath and opened the dor, grabbing my binder of my drawings and pictures.
Rosalie gasped, then growled. Automaticly, I dropped the binder, and growled back. Years with the newborns tought me to react as they did.
I heard the door open and heard the doctor.
"Rosalie, Alice!" He called.
I shot a glance to Alice, Rosalie, then the Dr.
How many vampires were here?
"Alice, why is there two of you? Rosalie." I straightned up.
"I'm not Alice, kind of."
He looked confused.
Me, Alice, and Rosalie followed him inside. I pulled the capuche, hotte and hat off, montrer that my hair was longer.
"I'm Mary Alice Brandon. I'm named after my aunt."
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I watched the scenery fly by. So I could tell when she slowed and pulled off the road. Her eyes went blank, but still drove.
"What?"
"Nothing, just put these on." She threw me some clothes, that looked just like the ones she had on. Were we going to confuse her coven. I had the same jeans, shirt, jacket, hat, shoes, everything matched to hers. We looked so alike.
We even smelled the same. I doubted they could tell the difference. Following the long, windy drive we pulled infront of a huge white house. Someone came out the door, she looked nice.
Blonde hair, golden eyes, with jeans smeared with car grease. Alice told me to stay she got out and greeted the vampire as 'Rosalie'.
I could hear the conversation going on between them.
"Alice. We were so worried, Carlisle came accueil without you, where did toi go?"
"I had an unexpected visitor."
"You've never not 'seen' someone. Was it one of the werewolves?"
Werewolves?
"Nope. She did catch me off guard though. Mary!"
She turned towards me, wanting me to come out.
I took a deep breath and opened the dor, grabbing my binder of my drawings and pictures.
Rosalie gasped, then growled. Automaticly, I dropped the binder, and growled back. Years with the newborns tought me to react as they did.
I heard the door open and heard the doctor.
"Rosalie, Alice!" He called.
I shot a glance to Alice, Rosalie, then the Dr.
How many vampires were here?
"Alice, why is there two of you? Rosalie." I straightned up.
"I'm not Alice, kind of."
He looked confused.
Me, Alice, and Rosalie followed him inside. I pulled the capuche, hotte and hat off, montrer that my hair was longer.
"I'm Mary Alice Brandon. I'm named after my aunt."
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if toi have any ideas tell me
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I a dit under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't toi let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I a dit giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I a dit under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't toi let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I a dit giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the suivant one is a lot longer.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper a dit at once.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper a dit at once.
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back suivant to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he a dit gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
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I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back suivant to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he a dit gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
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I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
'Twilight': Which 'New Moon' scene should debut on the MTV Movie Awards?
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | par Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's MTV Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The question is: Which one do toi most want to see? If toi haven't read the seconde book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- ou Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the loup Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | par Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's MTV Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The question is: Which one do toi most want to see? If toi haven't read the seconde book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- ou Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the loup Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
hello fanfiction writers
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of toi guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate toi all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start lire them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D MDR and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what toi write :D*****
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of toi guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate toi all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start lire them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D MDR and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what toi write :D*****
Golden brown eyes, like hardened syrup in a pool like shape of a continuance lifetime of some burdened sadness.
Lifeless he is, like a beautiful statue, numb to the world around him.
Only the silent whispers of feeble minds he hears.
The red seductive toxin running through their veins, of which he hungers for… his ‘own personal brand of heroin’.
His thirst for normality is torturous to his eternal, tormented soul.
A secret torture for this masochistic lion,
This old face holds many secrets, some unable to tell but all not forgotten.
Lifeless he is, like a beautiful statue, numb to the world around him.
Only the silent whispers of feeble minds he hears.
The red seductive toxin running through their veins, of which he hungers for… his ‘own personal brand of heroin’.
His thirst for normality is torturous to his eternal, tormented soul.
A secret torture for this masochistic lion,
This old face holds many secrets, some unable to tell but all not forgotten.
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