I have this story on two spots, Twiight Fanfictio and The Twilight spot. Enjoy!
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I paced the room with 10 minutes 'till the others would wake. I had to get dressd. I went to my suitcase and pulled some clothes out.
I pulled, some dark washed designer jeans. Black tortue neck, A black baseball hat, and a hoodie. It was just in case thing. IF my aunt was alive I looked just liked her. I could have someone noticing me as her.
But I know I would see the Dr. so I couldn't be noticed par him. I would be at the back of the group, I can easily dissapear if I needed to.
ou I could stick with the group, see this Dr. Cullen. I couldm't see a vampire working where blood was. I could barley handel it. I didn't even know anyne witht he same diet as me. I drew an animal with a figure on it, so that's how I got hooked on it. They didn't taste good, but I didn't have to kill innocent people.
I pulled my sneakers on and hear a knock on the door.
"Comming!" I jogged towards the door.
I oppened the door to see one of the girls, Hannah.
"We're about to leave so are toi ready?"
"Sure, let me get something."
I walked over the my huge binder, it had all my pictures and photo's of my mother and aunt.
"Your taking that?"
"Ya, I am. I never leave without it."
It was true it went everywhere, I needed to draw. Once I drew on a wall, and got in trouble. I had to have a piece of paper and a pencil. I couldn't not draw. I had to, it hurts when I don't, anyway it was a mandatory.
I followed hannah out and see the group waiting par the door. i grabb the clip board and take role. Everyone was here. No one has disapeared, yet.
Now we're off to the hospital.
teamalice_0
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I paced the room with 10 minutes 'till the others would wake. I had to get dressd. I went to my suitcase and pulled some clothes out.
I pulled, some dark washed designer jeans. Black tortue neck, A black baseball hat, and a hoodie. It was just in case thing. IF my aunt was alive I looked just liked her. I could have someone noticing me as her.
But I know I would see the Dr. so I couldn't be noticed par him. I would be at the back of the group, I can easily dissapear if I needed to.
ou I could stick with the group, see this Dr. Cullen. I couldm't see a vampire working where blood was. I could barley handel it. I didn't even know anyne witht he same diet as me. I drew an animal with a figure on it, so that's how I got hooked on it. They didn't taste good, but I didn't have to kill innocent people.
I pulled my sneakers on and hear a knock on the door.
"Comming!" I jogged towards the door.
I oppened the door to see one of the girls, Hannah.
"We're about to leave so are toi ready?"
"Sure, let me get something."
I walked over the my huge binder, it had all my pictures and photo's of my mother and aunt.
"Your taking that?"
"Ya, I am. I never leave without it."
It was true it went everywhere, I needed to draw. Once I drew on a wall, and got in trouble. I had to have a piece of paper and a pencil. I couldn't not draw. I had to, it hurts when I don't, anyway it was a mandatory.
I followed hannah out and see the group waiting par the door. i grabb the clip board and take role. Everyone was here. No one has disapeared, yet.
Now we're off to the hospital.
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can toi imagine being shown up par someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after lire a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can toi imagine being shown up par someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after lire a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.