Have toi ever felt like your entire body was on fire, and there was nothing toi can do about it? You're in excruciating pain and all toi can do is lie there and let it happen. That's how it feels to be turned into a vampire.
I didn't ask for this. I honestly would have rather died, but I suppose that wasn't an option ever since Emmett and Rosalie found me. Rosalie must have taken pity in me, being raped, beaten, stabbed and left to die in the middle of nowhere. Right before my spirit almost left my body, I could feel bite marks all over my body. My neck, my legs, my stomach and wrists ached with the feeling that two big needles stabbing into my skin.
"Rosalie, what were toi thinking?" Emmett asked, furiously.
"I couldn't leave her there. I know I resented Carlisle for turning me, but now that I'm in the same position as he was, I couldn't let her die."
* * * * * * *
When I found that I could control my body again, I immediately grabbed my throat. All I could feel was burning, like someone had thrown lit matches down my esophagus. I was so thirsty. I tried to ignore my thirst for long enough that I was able to look at myself in the full-length mirror in the room. I was beautiful. My black hair had a certain shine, like it did when I'd get it cut and washed par my hairdresser, only this looked natural. My skin was pale, the color of snow. I was so glamorous, it hurt a little to even look at myself. All those changes wasn't what shocked me the most, that was the color of my eyes. They were the color of blood, a crimson red that made me gasp.
"You're awake!"
I turned to see a beautiful blonde girl looking at me. Wrapped around her waist was the bulky arm of a handsome, tall, dark-haired man, with a devilish smirk on his face.
"Rosalie," I found myself saying. I really hoped that the girl I was looking at was the girl who saved me.
She smiled. "Yes. That's me, and this is Emmett. What's your name?"
They towered over me. I was short compared to the rest of the girls in my school, but they were even taller than anyone I knew. They were like models. "I'm Charlotte."
They smiled, "Nice to meet you. I know you're probably confused right now... and you're thirsty."
"Yeah, I am. Can toi get me a glass of water?
Rosalie and Emmett looked at each other and laughed. I was confused, until Emmett looked at me, "Water won't do toi any good. How's blood sound?"
My throat burned even more. I licked my lips, but at the same time I was lost. Blood? Why would I want blood?
"Emmett, Rose, you're scaring her. She probably has no idea what's going on."
I turned to see a handsome, twenty-something blonde man and a pretty twenty-something brunette walking towards me. I assumed they were married. "I'm Carlisle," the man said, "and this is Esme," he motioned to the woman suivant to him, "You're a vampire now."
I burst out laughing. "Vampires aren't real."
Carlisle sighed. "Rose, take her hunting."
* * * * * * *
Hunting made me feel like I was alive. I could run at the speed of light and not get tired, I had the strength of a hundred men. This was amazing.
"Hey, Char, see that deer over there? Kill it, and suck out it's blood. That should keep toi controlled for a while."
I immediately ran after it, but it saw me. "Damnit!" I screamed.
Come over here
Suddenly, the deer walked towards me. There was blatant fear in its eyes, but it still came to me. It stood in front of me for a few secondes before I snapped out of my shock and pounced at it, sinking my teeth into it's skin and sucking out all of its blood.
"How the hell did toi do that?" Rosalie yelled.
"I... I don't know."
"Do it again," she commanded. So I did.
She looked shocked, looking at the seconde deer to stand in front of me.
"Your eyes are black."
I then stopped thinking about the deer suivant to me, and it ran away.
Rosalie looked angry, but mesmerized. "You just hypnotized those deer. Your eyes turned black and when they went back to normal they went back to red."
"Is that bad?"
Rosalie frowned. "We need to tell Carlisle."
We then began to run back to the house, when a smell of stench and blood ran through my nostrils. Suddenly, I found myself running towards the smell. I could hear Rosalie screaming after me, but I was ignoring her.
Then I saw a yellowish colored loup staring back at me. It began walking towards me, I guess due to my control over it.
The wolf, much larger than I was, stood before me. Right before I bit it, I was pushed to the ground par what felt like a boulder.
"Seth! Get back to the house with Jacob!" A girl screamed. She was pretty, with dark hair and or eyes. She was holding hands with a auburn-haired man, who was the most handsome man I had ever seen in my life. The girl glared at me, and then barked at Rosalie.
"Rose! toi know it's dangerous bringing a new vampire into the family. Renesmee could be in danger, especially if she almost killed Seth! What were toi thinking?"
Esme frowned, "Bella, enough. Keep Nessie in your house for a little while. Rose will take her hunting every jour to quench her thirst."
The auburn-haired man gave me a death look. "I'm not keeping my family around this newborn. Bella, Renesmee and I will have to stay with the Denali's until this girl can control herself."
Rosalie went ballistic. "Edward, not all of us can have perfect control like your little wifey. I've adopted Charlotte, and she's part of our family. She's not going anywhere. Leave if toi want, but she's not."
While all this carried on, my guilt overthrew my thirst. I managed to slip away while they were fighting, following the loup into the house.
When I walked into the house, the loup had turned into an attractive, tan and black haired boy who looked about my age. I walked up and sat down suivant to him on the couch. When he saw me, his expression went from pain-ridden, to mesmerized.
"Hi, I'm sorry about that back there. I'm not used to this new appetite... I'm Charlotte."
He looked at me with the same expression, not saying a word. I frowned, not understanding what was happening. That's when another tan boy walked in.
"Oh shit, Seth, no."
I didn't ask for this. I honestly would have rather died, but I suppose that wasn't an option ever since Emmett and Rosalie found me. Rosalie must have taken pity in me, being raped, beaten, stabbed and left to die in the middle of nowhere. Right before my spirit almost left my body, I could feel bite marks all over my body. My neck, my legs, my stomach and wrists ached with the feeling that two big needles stabbing into my skin.
"Rosalie, what were toi thinking?" Emmett asked, furiously.
"I couldn't leave her there. I know I resented Carlisle for turning me, but now that I'm in the same position as he was, I couldn't let her die."
* * * * * * *
When I found that I could control my body again, I immediately grabbed my throat. All I could feel was burning, like someone had thrown lit matches down my esophagus. I was so thirsty. I tried to ignore my thirst for long enough that I was able to look at myself in the full-length mirror in the room. I was beautiful. My black hair had a certain shine, like it did when I'd get it cut and washed par my hairdresser, only this looked natural. My skin was pale, the color of snow. I was so glamorous, it hurt a little to even look at myself. All those changes wasn't what shocked me the most, that was the color of my eyes. They were the color of blood, a crimson red that made me gasp.
"You're awake!"
I turned to see a beautiful blonde girl looking at me. Wrapped around her waist was the bulky arm of a handsome, tall, dark-haired man, with a devilish smirk on his face.
"Rosalie," I found myself saying. I really hoped that the girl I was looking at was the girl who saved me.
She smiled. "Yes. That's me, and this is Emmett. What's your name?"
They towered over me. I was short compared to the rest of the girls in my school, but they were even taller than anyone I knew. They were like models. "I'm Charlotte."
They smiled, "Nice to meet you. I know you're probably confused right now... and you're thirsty."
"Yeah, I am. Can toi get me a glass of water?
Rosalie and Emmett looked at each other and laughed. I was confused, until Emmett looked at me, "Water won't do toi any good. How's blood sound?"
My throat burned even more. I licked my lips, but at the same time I was lost. Blood? Why would I want blood?
"Emmett, Rose, you're scaring her. She probably has no idea what's going on."
I turned to see a handsome, twenty-something blonde man and a pretty twenty-something brunette walking towards me. I assumed they were married. "I'm Carlisle," the man said, "and this is Esme," he motioned to the woman suivant to him, "You're a vampire now."
I burst out laughing. "Vampires aren't real."
Carlisle sighed. "Rose, take her hunting."
* * * * * * *
Hunting made me feel like I was alive. I could run at the speed of light and not get tired, I had the strength of a hundred men. This was amazing.
"Hey, Char, see that deer over there? Kill it, and suck out it's blood. That should keep toi controlled for a while."
I immediately ran after it, but it saw me. "Damnit!" I screamed.
Come over here
Suddenly, the deer walked towards me. There was blatant fear in its eyes, but it still came to me. It stood in front of me for a few secondes before I snapped out of my shock and pounced at it, sinking my teeth into it's skin and sucking out all of its blood.
"How the hell did toi do that?" Rosalie yelled.
"I... I don't know."
"Do it again," she commanded. So I did.
She looked shocked, looking at the seconde deer to stand in front of me.
"Your eyes are black."
I then stopped thinking about the deer suivant to me, and it ran away.
Rosalie looked angry, but mesmerized. "You just hypnotized those deer. Your eyes turned black and when they went back to normal they went back to red."
"Is that bad?"
Rosalie frowned. "We need to tell Carlisle."
We then began to run back to the house, when a smell of stench and blood ran through my nostrils. Suddenly, I found myself running towards the smell. I could hear Rosalie screaming after me, but I was ignoring her.
Then I saw a yellowish colored loup staring back at me. It began walking towards me, I guess due to my control over it.
The wolf, much larger than I was, stood before me. Right before I bit it, I was pushed to the ground par what felt like a boulder.
"Seth! Get back to the house with Jacob!" A girl screamed. She was pretty, with dark hair and or eyes. She was holding hands with a auburn-haired man, who was the most handsome man I had ever seen in my life. The girl glared at me, and then barked at Rosalie.
"Rose! toi know it's dangerous bringing a new vampire into the family. Renesmee could be in danger, especially if she almost killed Seth! What were toi thinking?"
Esme frowned, "Bella, enough. Keep Nessie in your house for a little while. Rose will take her hunting every jour to quench her thirst."
The auburn-haired man gave me a death look. "I'm not keeping my family around this newborn. Bella, Renesmee and I will have to stay with the Denali's until this girl can control herself."
Rosalie went ballistic. "Edward, not all of us can have perfect control like your little wifey. I've adopted Charlotte, and she's part of our family. She's not going anywhere. Leave if toi want, but she's not."
While all this carried on, my guilt overthrew my thirst. I managed to slip away while they were fighting, following the loup into the house.
When I walked into the house, the loup had turned into an attractive, tan and black haired boy who looked about my age. I walked up and sat down suivant to him on the couch. When he saw me, his expression went from pain-ridden, to mesmerized.
"Hi, I'm sorry about that back there. I'm not used to this new appetite... I'm Charlotte."
He looked at me with the same expression, not saying a word. I frowned, not understanding what was happening. That's when another tan boy walked in.
"Oh shit, Seth, no."
This story take place after Nessie is born. Zoey has been in the family since The begining of twilight. Although I don't cover anything from the books. Whatever happen to Bella it happen to Zoey accept getting pregant with a half vampire half human baby. Zoey is in l’amour with Jacob Black but Jake is in l’amour with Nessie. Alice and Jasper are practically her parents. She fill like the outsider because she is not a vampire, warewolf ou like Nessie. The Volturi have dicided that she can be a human, until a jour after she turns 17. She has her GED so she doesn't have to go to school.
Ok don't get me wrong I l’amour the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to rendez-vous amoureux, date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big arbre a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to rendez-vous amoureux, date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big arbre a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
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Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme a dit wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing toi all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking toi out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper a dit calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will montrer you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme a dit wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing toi all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking toi out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper a dit calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will montrer you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? ou later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? ou later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black château to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black château to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back suivant to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he a dit gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
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I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back suivant to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he a dit gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
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I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I probaly a dit thank toi thirty times.
When I heard that they didn't have a place to stay i offered for them to stay here. They aren't living in out hotel room but they are only to doors away.
When i woke up i turned to susans side.She wasn't there. A note took her place.
It read
Dear Chris,
I am pretty sure i got toi with the note!
The guys a dit toi would think i left. (it worked)
We are hanging out in their room and we are playing spin the bottle. (what!)
Love,
Susan ps. got toi again!
I looked at her hand écriture it was very pretty.
I got dressed and walked to the elevator.When i noticed i pressed two when i didn't even have to change from 11 the doors closed.I pressed the 11 button mabye 5 times.When it went up I sighed.
...
to be continued...