Hii everyone... i decided i was going to try and write a fanfiction. im not a great writer but i thought i would give it a try. its going to be a journal entry written from bellas point of view starting in breaking dawn in the days following alice's disappearance. just commentaire below please i would like commentaires and also suggestions and if i should even continue. thanks!!

(Bella)
This is my first journal entry. My life had seemed to be going great until about a couple days il y a and I need somebody to talk to. I would talk to Edward, who is my husband, but he seems so stressed these days. I know he tries to hide it but he’s not fooling me and I don’t want to make it worse. He doesn’t know I am écriture this journal for that exact reason so I can only write when he’s not around. We all have to keep a smile on our faces because of my beautiful, curly-haired Angel child, Renesmee, although I think she can sense something is up too. I am going to confess everything into this journal, so let me start par telling toi some things about myself.
     First my name is Isabella Marie cygne Cullen (I know the name is a mouthful but that’s the least of my problems). I was recently changed into a vampire par my soul-mate, Edward Cullen. He is the l’amour of my life and I can’t even picture my life without him. The reason I was changed into a vampire was because while giving birth to Renesmee, I almost died but I think it was all worth it in the end. She is a very special and loving child who has a special way of communicating and because I was human and Edward was a vampire while she was conceived, is half vampire, half human. She grows at a rapid pace because of her half vampire-ness and par the time she is 16 she will be fully matured. Anyway, we live in Forks, Washington with Edward’s family, the Cullens who are also all vampires. There’s Carlisle (a fatherly figure), Esme (a mother for all intensive purposes), Edward and then his siblings Alice, Jasper, Rosalie and Emmett. vampires are immortal so I have gotten used to the idea of living with my loving and caring family (that I would never trade for anything). Alice can see the future, Jasper can control emotions and Edward can read minds. The Cullens are also very rich because Alice can predict stock trends and from the money accumulated over time. There is also the La-Push reservation where the Quilete Tribe lives. The Quiletes are werewolfs and Jacob Black who is my best friend and my daughters imprintee is also a werewolf. Well I could go on and on forever telling about my past and describing my daughter ou family, but I have pressing issues that I need to tell someone. Oh no, I can hear Edward coming out to our cottage with Renesmee. I promise I will write tomorrow.