Yes finally chapter one is up its kinda long for me so hope toi like it and please review ood and bad commentaires will be excepted because i'd like to know what i can improve!! thank you
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank toi so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone a dit in unison.
“You know what someone a dit to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and toi know what I said," Zac a dit Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I a dit bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if toi keep calling!" Zac a dit and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the cabriolet, gig ou not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the cabriolet, gig and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy a dit 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are toi going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe toi can come when we’re plus close to accueil and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my tronc and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway suivant to her and popped my tronc she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do toi think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our siège belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no écriture on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ ou something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I a dit quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minutes later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I a dit and took a step back, a little frightened par her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane par the way, toi must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I a dit while pointing to each one when I a dit there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand suivant to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your van over to out plane and we can put toi things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the tronc and pulled out all the suitcases and musique equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a siège suivant to the window.
Jane sat right suivant to me.
“So do toi have any particular song toi want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can toi still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well toi have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve heure flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set liste now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What toi Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 plus minutes, and if it’d too ling toi can take one out.” Jane a dit and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let toi get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane a dit quietly and reached up to get a oreiller and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the oreiller and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while chant Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank toi so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone a dit in unison.
“You know what someone a dit to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and toi know what I said," Zac a dit Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I a dit bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if toi keep calling!" Zac a dit and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the cabriolet, gig ou not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the cabriolet, gig and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy a dit 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are toi going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe toi can come when we’re plus close to accueil and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my tronc and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway suivant to her and popped my tronc she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do toi think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our siège belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no écriture on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ ou something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I a dit quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minutes later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I a dit and took a step back, a little frightened par her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane par the way, toi must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I a dit while pointing to each one when I a dit there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand suivant to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your van over to out plane and we can put toi things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the tronc and pulled out all the suitcases and musique equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a siège suivant to the window.
Jane sat right suivant to me.
“So do toi have any particular song toi want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can toi still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well toi have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve heure flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set liste now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What toi Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 plus minutes, and if it’d too ling toi can take one out.” Jane a dit and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let toi get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane a dit quietly and reached up to get a oreiller and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the oreiller and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while chant Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
