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Ok hi im not goood at peoms but im not sure if this one is any good can u plz tell me??

im here
im there
im everywere
everywere but your heart
wich is the place
i want
and need to be
toi smile
i smile
and that almost makes my day
but when toi look at me
it makes my week great
but if toi told me toi loved me?
that will make my life brilliant
but now ill just watch you
as i wait for my lifes dream come true...

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MDR thanks so much
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vampirefreak_26 said:
toi are great, I hope toi will put plus peoms.
gose I totelly loved this one.
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ScottishChic said:
For someone who isnt good at poems tht was gr8 but u did kind of lose the magic at the end... sorry honestly im no good at poems either but jst work on the end bit a little, i think its from "it makes my week great" u shud try n improve.
Sorry, didnt mean to sound rude but the rest of it was brilliant!!!!!!
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thanks so much
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um... is tht a sracastic thanks???
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countrygirl2008 said:
that was great.
toi seems to have the gift to write naturally.
it had a few miss spellings but it was great!
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Abilei said:
I agree with the first person to comment.
I can write poems and to me it was pretty good.

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MrsRadcliffe said:
That was great, although i think at the end it was a little off, but 4 a person like me who is good at littleture, i dont think i could write a poem like this :]
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Robertmanyac said:
Thats a really good peom better then what i've heard witch is only a few but still
sorry not a really good speller
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lilmisstwilight said:
its mint how long have toi been écriture poems lol
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Elzybells said:
honestly that was brill. i l’amour écriture poems 2! uv got guts 2 montrer it on this website! but ye well done :) i find bella and edwards relationship magical and i l’amour écriture things about it 2 i l’amour écriture songs about it i cant get enough twilight!!! :D is it ok if i add u
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honestly that was brill. i l’amour écriture poems 2! uv got guts 2 montrer it on this website! but ye well done :) i find bella and edwards relationship magical and i l’amour écriture things about it 2 i l’amour écriture songs about it i cant get enough twilight!!! :D is it ok if i add u
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i l’amour your picture
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thx
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