I agree with the Max X guy, toi have something but it needs some work. probly try not to sound exactly like the who ever your trying to sing and control your voice, toi sound like your trying to hard
Honestly, not bad... Could use a lot of work, but still not horrible ou anything. I think toi should try to put plus passion into it. Dont be afraid to SMILE, use your eyes to montrer that toi are actually FEELING the song and what it means.