True Writers Article: CRINGE chapter 1

posted by kyran12

CHAPTER 1

when cringe woke up all he could see was a crouched figure in the dark. As he watched, the figure slowly rose to its feet and walked away. Cringe was confused, he could remember getting up this morning and going to school and then... and then...... Nothing.

the suivant jour the figure was back but this time he wasn't alone. there was a child standing suivant to him. as cringe started to get up a voice came from the child, but it was different, it was an adults voice. "who are you?" the voice was deep and almost metallic.
"who wants to know" cringe was known for his sarcasm at school but it never got the same reaction as any other boy using sarcasm. All of the children were scared of cringe because of his quick reactions, pale skin and fast movements.
"ME"the voice sounded irritated
"Cringe, and toi are "
"classified information"
"why"
"because"
"where am i "
"classified infor.." 'SMASH'
the door to there right suddenly flew across the room and two cylinders rolled into the room. As cringe suddenly realized what was in the 'cylinders' it as too late he suddenly collapsed Unconscious.

kyran12 please leave comments on how i can improvehttp://images.fanpop.com/images/emoticons/uncertain.jpg

SilverWings13 Interesting... Though it may help to double check your capitalization.

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What I Took From It, Chapter Six

posted by flabaloobalah

Sadie and Claire's Ride

I was so nervous as to what we would be doing out in the woods in the middle of the night. I couldn't tell Claire, I decided. That would only scare us more. So I laid out the outfit they instructed I wear and took a douche in the bathroom. The water was, at first, very cold, but I figured out how to work the nozzle and turn the freezing water into comfortable, steamy hot water. I made as many bubbles as I could and tried to distract myself, but I just couldn't. Sadie, I told myself, stop overthinking this. You'll be alright. We're just gonna play a game out there at night. I slicked my clean...

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We Can't Go On Pretending jour par jour (country song)

posted by hgfan5602

This is reality
This is what toi call the Earth
This is what people call the world
This is what we call life

We can't go on pretending jour par day
That good things will always happen
Stormy days will come, it's not a miracle
But the storm will end soon, and all will be clear again

Heavy rain's crashing against my windowsill
I think, when will this ever stop?
The thunder's crashing against the trees outside
Today's not going to be a fine day, but it will end

I woke up this morning and guess what I saw
Bright sunny mornings with a clear future
No one's gonna stop me from believin
The rain stopped and the future's bright again

Good and bad create our lives
We can't pretend that everything's gonna always be alright
It's hard to think that something's gonna be wrong
But it's the truth, the whole truth.

We can't go on jour par jour pretending
Everything's gonna be alright
But we know that sunny days will come out
Soon ou later.

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What I Took From It, Chapter Five

posted by flabaloobalah

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

I like Blake. He seemed to enjoy having company with our six cousins, and they all looked excited to do whatever they were going to do tonight. That reminded me: what exactly were we doing? I had no idea. I decided to just forget about it and enjoy the rest of the day. We all ran out back and explored th backyard. Past the shed were woods like the ones we traversed to get to Blake's. I guess they were all around us. Dark and inviting and creepy.
We had a few hours to run around outside, then we were called in for supper. Jeb stood par the creaky back door...

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Interview with Simone Rivers

posted by alicia386

Interview with Simone Rivers

Me: How do toi feel about the book The Deadly Truth? Was everything in it accurate?

Simone: I guess the book was okay. It didn't give a good description of my beauty. The auteur didn't describe how brilliant my hair looks in the light ou how my eyes shimmer when I smile. The auteur didn't even mention my glamourous white teeth. [shakes head disapprovingly].

Me: [ignores vain comment]. Can toi tell the viewers out there about your relationship with the pastor?

Simone: [smiles lovingly]. Of course! I just want to smash all of those commentaires about him dating Faye. He would...

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The Inevitable Fate 12

posted by rory2011

some people think if toi did something good to someone ,one jour the person will takes your hand from your problems hole ,but that won't happen this time, that low is only in the fantaisie stories ,not in the real life , Kat was very stupid to believe that she would reward for what she did and realize she must stop being that nice girl who does everything people tell her and she can't say no to anyone

David start taking his medication ,he stood in the hospital cause Mac wanted to fix that old house and give it his soul again
Kat is very busy with her work ,but everything happening taking all...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.15

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 15
        A Gal’s talk
    “Talia, I’m so sorry that toi have to leave so early, but my parents, not very trusting. Plus they already have a full plate…so…the gal’s are leaving soon, again sorry, looking vers l'avant, vers l’avant to the suivant sleepover.”
    Gosh, I almost believed myself!
    “Sure!” Talia beamed, clueless. “See toi later, Pal!”
    “Buddy,” I saluted her.
    Ryler shook his head as soon as the...

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A Life Of Survival, Chapter 2

posted by 1999jacko

action ou fantaisie I am really not sure

Present Day
Leo,now 13, stood on haut, retour au début of the tall, sturdy arbre looking for any sign of the kids who kill. Luckily he'd been there for 2 hours and seen ou heard nothing and decided to make the balançoire, swing back to the arbre he lived in with Jason and Sarah, he ran down the branch and jumped onto the branch and pushed off from what they call the watch tree.

The swinging was the greatest thing ever in Leos mind, with the trees flying par at unnatural speeds, the insects moving all around your head wondering whats going on and best of all the height your up at, because...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.12

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 12
    One messed up sleepover
    “So should I go with framboise yellow, ou remedy green?” Sage asks.
    “Sweetie, were doing nails not a Trix commercial,” I tell her.
    Sage sticks her tongue out at me. “Bite me, the one with brown hair.”
    “Cherry head!”
    Meredith rolls her eyes, but still comes to sit closer to us as Talia’s giving her the obsessed ‘let’s be Friends glance’.
    “So your one of Pamela’s friends!”...

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18 Important écriture Tips for True Writers

posted by hgfan5602

écriture Tip #1: Put off editing

Each of us works at écriture on two levels:a creative, unconscious level and a critical, conscious level.

The unconscious produces creative and powerful words and images. It makes surprising and original connections. It shuts down if the critical "editor" part of your mind goes to work too soon.If your High School English teacher's voice runs through your mind as toi write, if toi worry about spelling, grammar, ou how to sell your book while toi write, toi are écriture with a dull pencil.

There are many livres written on how to unlock your unconscious and let the writing...

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The Guardian of Eden (Prologue)

posted by dragonsmemory

(Dear Reader,
The story toi are about to read is another Eden book. "The Guardian of Eden" is part of the Encounter series. Please keep in mind that some parts may be spoilers for other Eden Chronicles books.
The following story was originally written spring 2011 under the titre "Hirach." It has since been changed. I hope toi all enjoy this tale from Eden.
Jo)
A fantaisie NOVEL

PROLOGUE
THE FIRST GUARDIAN

Centuries ago, when humans began to exploitthe dragons' Knowledge and power for themselves, something had to be done. A special meeting of Parliament was called to address the problem. The king, who,...

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The Inevitable Fate 8

posted by rory2011

David couldn't take all his pain since Jack has been taken to jail from three years il y a ,witch made him very ill ,David now in 47 and almost to 48 years old ,but he looks older because of his illness ,he refused to face people after what Jack did ,all the people in the country knows who's David miller is ,he's the father of the most dangerous criminal in the country, Jack got crazy in jail ,because of a lot of things happening and happened to him
Jack was getting tortured every night ,which made him crazy and pushed him kill three of the cops and two prisoners ,plus he tried to escape so many...

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Phobia-Tastic

posted by alicia386

I am pretty sure everyone in the world has at least one phobia. I found two but I didn't go through the whole thing. This liste is only half of what I found. Shocking!

Ablutophobia – fear of bathing, washing, ou cleaning
Achluophobia – fear of darkness
Acrophobia – fear of heights
Agoraphobia, Agoraphobia Without History of Panic Disorder – fear of places ou events where escape is impossible ou when help is unavailable. Fear of open spaces ou of being in public places. Fear of leaving a sûr, sans danger place.
Agraphobia – fear of sexual abuse.
Agrizoophobia – fear of wild animals
Agyrophobia –The...

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Longing For Cassie Chapter 3

posted by vampirefreak_26

My alarm went off telling me that my nightmare aka combat training with Dimitri was about to begin in a half hour. Although I wanted to go back to sleep like any other normal person in the neighborhood, I came out of bed, dressed and went downstairs to eat something light. I knew the consequences if I wasn’t on time, Dimitri would give me one hell of an cul, ass whooping training and I would be the one who would get the post punches. Dimitri was one of my father’s best fighters and God knows how many battles he’d won, the guy was fast as hell. I could only guess what kind of training he would...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.1

posted by Problematic129

*I've gotten the first six chapters done, still working on it and Remember me. Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 1
    Friends and my dream guy
    One thing toi need to know about me, is I am not normal. I tend to do things differently, right now, I am sitting on my bed, rifling through my awesome ipod in my favori couleurs green, orange, and yellow.
    If toi have an ick face on, I’ll montrer toi my favori finger. I happen to like these colors, there eye popping, different. A color that most people breeze past to...

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Sad to Hear the Truth (song)

posted by hgfan5602

It's sad
It's the truth
Fighting through what it is
But I'll be stronger

I've gone through
Mounds of pain
I've been through
The deepest waters

Nobody can change my past
It's the truth, and it changed me
Sad to even hear the truth
Sad to...say the truth

Reality's always sad
And no one's gonna escape it.
It's how I became who I am today
It's how I didn't brag.

Why does this have to happen?
Why did it have to end?
Why does the world have to be so confusing?
Why did the fun have to end?

The world's just a crazy place
And no one's gonna stop that thought
Cause I'm broken for good...
Because of...the truth.

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Poitics in Eden

posted by dragonsmemory

In Eden, there are many different races. As a whoe, they are called Kinds. Each Kind has a capital city, sends its rulers to the Ruling Council, and contributes its own history to that of Eden. In this article, I will be discussing the Ruling Council and draconian politics, as both are difficult to understand.

THE RULING COUNCIL
The Ruling Council is comprised of the leaders of each Kind (except demons) in Eden. The Council meets at the summit of Councilpeak, located in the cœur, coeur of the Broadplain area. There is a single road spiraling up the mountain, as well as a landing ledge on the south...

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short murder story wroten par me seconde CHAPTER

posted by juliet98

the first part: link

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help toi sir, are toi sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank toi i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- réponses Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask toi some question mrs...-
-Samantha White- réponses the girl -And of...

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A Cat Chasing Yarn (From the Yarn's Point of View)

posted by sadiebugz00

My terrifying enemy, Cat.

(Okay, so this is one of my weirder entries, but I just thought what it would be like for that yarn. This big thing pouncing on toi and stuff, anyway, here it is.)

So, today I was just lounging in the sewing room when this big orange thing swiped a paw at me and caused me to roll out of the basket. The thing swiped at me yet again and I remembered what my parents were talking about one night. "That cat thing almost rolled me completely out of shape and into a completely flat string!"
"That must have been horrifying, honey!" My dad had replied. I wasn't paying much attention to the conversation...

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Inspired:What makes toi smile?

posted by Problematic129

Just a little uplifting, includes pictures that's funny, and things that I hope makes toi smile.
Because smiling and laughing are very healthy to your cœur, coeur and your emotional being, if your down get happy.
Life sometimes gets hard, and when I smile I usually feel better, so if your feeling down this will be a great help to.
We all have problems, ou something that sets us off our course. Life was never meant to be easy, we just have to accept that and take that step forward. Let go of all our fears, because there’s nothing to be afraid of.
Your...

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The Succubus; Prologue

posted by wantadog

The Succubus, Prologue!
Downsized

“You called for me?” the young succubus, Odessa, knelt before her lord. She knew that she was about to be chewed out, but she didn’t care anymore, she would take whatever punishment he deemed fit, then leave his presence until her suivant one. Lord Arlon glared at her.
“You have some nerve, toi have repeatedly disobeyed me in the past, but now toi have gone too far. toi have broken one rule too many, and this one was a serious one.”
She kept her head bowed respectfully, but inwardly sneered at the fool. “You and I have differing opinions, my lord.”
Arlon...