Happy birthday Breeze

"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ a dit to Emily. "Ok thank toi AJ."Emily a dit to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca a dit yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one a dit in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...

Chris kept cheering. Eventually, he went to a Mobian store and bought a rug, a bed, wallpaper, a refrigerator, food, a TV, and a Nintendo 64. They were all very cheap, and either way, Chris had a lot of rings with him. He carried them all back to his home, one par one. Eventually, he got in his lit and fell asleep. MEANWHILE, AT THE LOOP WHERE MADJIN WAS LAYING.... A smirk spread across Madjin's face He opened his eyes. They were glowing red. His hands started glowing. He blinked and his eyes stopped glowing. He slowly stood back up and chuckled. He slowly walked away. He saw a circular peice...

Chris held the gun up and shot. It hit a buzzbomber. Chris felt a tingling feeling in his stomach and chuckled. "MUAHAHAHA." He ran around, firing everywhere, hitting badniks, knocking down hills, and making loops collapse. "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!" He shouted, running along. "This is SO COOL!" he shouted. About an heure had passed, and Green colline Zone had been torn apart and filled with smoke and ruins and now looked like piles of blocks and dirt and scrap metal. He ran away, but then ran into a blue hedgehog. "Did toi do this?!" It said. "Ummmm..... toi DIDN'T SEE ME AND I WASN'T HERE!" Chris...

First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu ou Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If toi don't know the whole issue, here's some questions I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

Demons,Soldiers,Helicopters,Jets,Tanks,A burning City,A Lightning Demon,And Typhoon's Group.

That's just GRRREEEAATTT isn't it?

Typhoon,Slahsing Demons left from right,Running across the Hellish City,Then he jumped and kicked down another Demon and slashed it's head off.

Haze,Being the Swords man he is,Cut down every last Demon he saw,He chopped off the legs of the one in front of him,and Stabbed his face.

Nocturn,With his Shotgun,Walked down the street,And continued to shoot down every Demon,He put a shot gun up to a Demon's face and shot it clean off.

Mother,Being the most Ferocious,Ripping apart...

As the renard noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a mois ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. bouvreuil, finch inhabits it.Dr. bouvreuil, finch was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the renard wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very haut, retour au début of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young renard knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

Freedom fighters Jaxik the Panda and Lellian the loup set off to find Robotnik at Knothole and disable his bots which will ensure safety to all animals.
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Jaxik the Panda and Lellian the loup were walking through their village. "It's clean." Jaxik said. He was searching for Robotnik's badniks. "You sure?" Lellian asked. "Pff... No." Jaxik said. "When can we EVER be sure?" Lellian worried. She took a couteau out. "SHOW YOURSELVES!" she yelled. "The whole village is empty, it seems." Jaxik said. "Robuttnik is definitely up to something." Lellian turned her head back to Jaxik. "Uh, WHAT did you...

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason ou meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

Midnight was snoozing her life away in her gothique style castle. It was decorated with tons of things that she liked, and they definetly were not gothic! She quietly snored like a angel, and her petite hands tapped on her paper. Her butler, John Vezun Cuando, looked at her. He had her thé with sugar all prepared for her, and he thought his efforts were for naught. The perfect thé time, ruined beyond imagination. John was a male vison who had a silvery white pelt and wore a butler's attire with a red carnation in his upper pocket. The serene but friendly butler spoke in a formidable British accent,...

Most stories are always based around the hero ou the villain,but what of the unlikely,ladies and gentlemen,I give toi bronko the cat.

-Bronko:ZzzZzzZzz...
-Bronko's mother:WAKE UP BITCH!
-Bronko:Mom...
-Bronko's mother:You slept it,you are late for school.
-Bronko:...ugh.
-Bronko's mother:*Slaps him*GET DRESSED NOW!

After a getting dressed,bronko headed off to crystal city high school.he is in 10th grade.he is the unlikely target to most school bullies because hes a fan of the hero of crystal city:MTL.

-Bronko:*Jumps off the bus*oy..
-Marty:Morning bronko.
-Bronko:Morning marty.

This is marty the edchinda,a...