Olley blinked once heherad the front door slam. Olley grabbed his phone, put it on his wrist and went down stairs. he stood in front of the door. he wasn't about to let Ghost do this par himself. he put his hand on the door knob. He remembered what ghost, even though he didn't promise anything, Ghost trusts him to do this and stay and be left out on the action. he leaned his head on the door and goaned. "who have cursed thy day" he a dit softly. he took his hand off the knob and walked over to the canapé and tried to think of who he should call.
Ghost now thought that putting just a band aid on his wound. it hurt like crazy right now. he gluched his teeth and sucked it up. "there is no such thing as luck. this isn't because of bullet's stupid belt." he thought over and over againtring to free his gelt that this is somehow his fault. suddenly he couldn't take the pain any plus and sat down aganist a tree. he breathed heavly. he looked up at the sky. he sighed as his guilt came back. "ghost?" a dit a girl's voice. he looked to the right. He was shocked whn he saw who it was. "Izzy?" he a dit softly for he was pretty weak par this time. "bullet a dit toi disappered. she tilted her head "but i am right here." she a dit as she kneeled down suivant to him. "looks like toi got a pretty bad cut let me see" a dit Izzy. she picked up his arm. she peeled off the band aid. "what are you.." but before he could finish that sentace she licked his blood. He pushed her back and jumped up putting his hand his wound. "Dark feu got you!" he said. Izzy stood up with an evil look on her face. her eyes were also pale green like bullet's had turned. an evil laugh came from above. Dark feu flew down with an uncauious bullet in her arms. "rise my slave' she a dit as bullet's eyes poped open and he jumped out of her arms. Ghost took many steps backwards. he was expecting to fight Bullet and dark feu but also izzy! this was plus than he could haddle. suddenly a rimp apeared out of nowhere. a cr then road over it. "yay!" yelled Carter and Maya as Spirit held up a "help me" sign. they went over all of their heads. they landed on the ground. Spirit pushed herself out and felt like she was gonna throw up. maya and carter stepped out. "you are wicked dude" a dit Maya as they give each other a high five. "who are theese clowns?" asked Dark Fire. "Maya the Seedian sister of lilly the Seedian, l’amour of Milo the fox, and a pure prankster. Carter The Hedgefox, loving father, married to houx the fox, and a soild ghost. Spirit the rabbit, sister of chelsea the rabbit, l’amour of rocket the renard so she hope, and will fight anyone." Bullet said. "I DO NOT LIKE THAT NERD!!!" exaimled Spirit blushing. "and yeah that is right i will fight anyone so put them up." Ghost looked at everyone. "what are toi guys doing here?" he asked weakly. Carter walked over and put his hands under his armpits and dragged him towards the car. "saving you" Carter said. "HEY!" Dark feu a dit as she flew torwards them. but Spirit flew up and kicked her away. Dark feu fell to the ground. she sat up and cover the part of her face where she kicked. she moraned. "agh toi are quite strong" Dark Frie a dit "but i won't be defeted!" Spirit grined. "we'll see about that." carter and ghost reached the car. ghost climbed in. "Maya are toi coming?" asked Carter. "no i want to help Spirit. she maybe strong but she can't do this alone." Maya repailed. carter nodded and got in the car and drived off. Spirit turned "is there anything in there aboutvampires" she asked. Maya took out her book. "yeah it says they die of anything but age." spirit turned back around and grined even harder. "sweet. we will have them begging for mercy 10 secondes into the fight."
Ghost now thought that putting just a band aid on his wound. it hurt like crazy right now. he gluched his teeth and sucked it up. "there is no such thing as luck. this isn't because of bullet's stupid belt." he thought over and over againtring to free his gelt that this is somehow his fault. suddenly he couldn't take the pain any plus and sat down aganist a tree. he breathed heavly. he looked up at the sky. he sighed as his guilt came back. "ghost?" a dit a girl's voice. he looked to the right. He was shocked whn he saw who it was. "Izzy?" he a dit softly for he was pretty weak par this time. "bullet a dit toi disappered. she tilted her head "but i am right here." she a dit as she kneeled down suivant to him. "looks like toi got a pretty bad cut let me see" a dit Izzy. she picked up his arm. she peeled off the band aid. "what are you.." but before he could finish that sentace she licked his blood. He pushed her back and jumped up putting his hand his wound. "Dark feu got you!" he said. Izzy stood up with an evil look on her face. her eyes were also pale green like bullet's had turned. an evil laugh came from above. Dark feu flew down with an uncauious bullet in her arms. "rise my slave' she a dit as bullet's eyes poped open and he jumped out of her arms. Ghost took many steps backwards. he was expecting to fight Bullet and dark feu but also izzy! this was plus than he could haddle. suddenly a rimp apeared out of nowhere. a cr then road over it. "yay!" yelled Carter and Maya as Spirit held up a "help me" sign. they went over all of their heads. they landed on the ground. Spirit pushed herself out and felt like she was gonna throw up. maya and carter stepped out. "you are wicked dude" a dit Maya as they give each other a high five. "who are theese clowns?" asked Dark Fire. "Maya the Seedian sister of lilly the Seedian, l’amour of Milo the fox, and a pure prankster. Carter The Hedgefox, loving father, married to houx the fox, and a soild ghost. Spirit the rabbit, sister of chelsea the rabbit, l’amour of rocket the renard so she hope, and will fight anyone." Bullet said. "I DO NOT LIKE THAT NERD!!!" exaimled Spirit blushing. "and yeah that is right i will fight anyone so put them up." Ghost looked at everyone. "what are toi guys doing here?" he asked weakly. Carter walked over and put his hands under his armpits and dragged him towards the car. "saving you" Carter said. "HEY!" Dark feu a dit as she flew torwards them. but Spirit flew up and kicked her away. Dark feu fell to the ground. she sat up and cover the part of her face where she kicked. she moraned. "agh toi are quite strong" Dark Frie a dit "but i won't be defeted!" Spirit grined. "we'll see about that." carter and ghost reached the car. ghost climbed in. "Maya are toi coming?" asked Carter. "no i want to help Spirit. she maybe strong but she can't do this alone." Maya repailed. carter nodded and got in the car and drived off. Spirit turned "is there anything in there aboutvampires" she asked. Maya took out her book. "yeah it says they die of anything but age." spirit turned back around and grined even harder. "sweet. we will have them begging for mercy 10 secondes into the fight."
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
toi can have a detailed character, if toi want so.
toi can have simply character, if toi want so.
There is only one think toi must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
toi can have a detailed character, if toi want so.
toi can have simply character, if toi want so.
There is only one think toi must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power ou darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for lire this intro, tell me if I should write this ou not. I start suivant week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for lire this intro, tell me if I should write this ou not. I start suivant week. 1/12/12)