Sonic fan Characters Club
rejoindre
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
So while the first full fanfiction I wrote was Lizzy: Eternal, the first idea and series I had was the Seven Server Saga; the thing that literally started EVERYTHING I ever made.

This was the origin for…
~Virus
~Tak
~Daricha
~Tons of other characters toi haven’t heard of
~Phantis
~And basically every plot that started in other series, ou almost all of them.

This was my first, and to this jour only, series that involved canon, cannon characters, but it had quite a few changes along the way.

So let’s go to the beginning involving my first ever fan Character, Starcher Saraduct. I made this guy when I was seven I believe, and back then he was just a “true form” for Tails, called “Saraduct” ou “Starduct” and later “Starcher Nova”, and now “Starcher Saraduct”.

The plot started out with (my memory is foggy on this) Tails, Sonic, Knuckles, maybe Shadow, going to stop Eggman, Eggman releases a villain I made that isn’t that important at the moment named Nazoc (NOT stolen from Nazo. I just took Zonac and respelled the name. He has nothing to do with Nazo.), Sonic and co die, Tails gets angry, turns into Starcher, adventure adventure, yippie doo, the end.

Obviously a bad plot, but again, I was seven. So a an ou two later we get Mist, Luner, and Tear. These characters were originally ancient guardiens of Lost kingdoms who would appear in my series at some point, with their kingdoms rising up again, and our Heroes seeing them as threats. They’d go to each character’s kingdom and defeat them, before discovering that there was a traitor named “Morf” (Yeah terrifying name), who was the only actual villain. One Real Super Power of Team Work later, and Morf’s defeated, and Mist, Luner, and Tear go back to their… hibernation I guess.

I actually think this plot sounds workable, and I’d like to use it, but it doesn’t fit with my current series, so maybe I’ll just use the idea in something else.

I had other characters that popped up along the way.
~Slash: A raccoon (lynx actually I didn’t know the difference back then) who had two curved blades. He’s sort of the origin for Craiger but only because they are a bit similar in personality. He’s paired with
~Breeze, a wind hedgehog girl, who’s not important and I never use, followed by
~Tak… a twelve year-old NORMAL fox, that throws tacks at people with two tails… yep that’s his origin.
~A rat girl named Jynx, who’s basically a cynic. This would later become Jenna, and become a bat obviously instead of a rat.

Some others came along the way, but if I listed them all we’d be here all day.

So looking back on the stories I started to think “This is kind of dumb”, and I began rewriting characters. Mist, Tak, Tear, and Luner were called “Seven Servers”, Mist going from a Shadow-rip-off to a pyro echidna, Tear being a water type poke- hedgehog, and Luner being a plant-controlling echidna. Tak got two inhibitor rings, one light, one dark, and his faded eyes, but he was still twelve.

So over time Starcher was starting to fall out of my interest, and Tak was starting to interest me more, so I changed up Tak a bit, and we have the Time Controlling Chronos Sever, now nineteen instead of twelve.

THEN we have the first story “His World” (I based the titles off songs). In it, Tak is created par Dr. Finitevus, rebels, summons Midnight Psych (another server, also half responsible for the banshees), and goes through typical adventure until Finitevus uses the Master émeraude to destroy New Mobotropolis, and Tak and others save the day, yada yada.

Tak also has feelings for Nicole, but I try to make it non-cheesy par not actually pairing them. The idea is that Tak “loves” her, but doesn’t make a déplacer from guilt, and it sounds better in my head X{D.

Following that plot, Tak dies, but fuses his rings to Nicole, allowing her to have a sort of moveable body, but somewhat unstable. I might change that but moving on.

Now we have Virus. So we have Iron Nicole, and we have Anti-Nicole, both coming from their Mobiuses and dying from lack of power. Both of them find Robotropolis and fuse, causing the city to completely explode, and we have Virus Prime.

After this it’s just spoiler plot. The series would eventually introduce plus Heroes like Revten Tess, and Trixin Lighten, and Villains like Trisell Chronos, and Seela. I haven’t actually written it due to time constraints, but I definitely will at some point.

There are a LOT of things I wish I could say that come from this series, but even the smallest detail could be a spoiler. Buuuuut… I’ll just say that this involves Melcro quite a bit plus than you’d think.
So a lot of the time when I'm in a forum it ends up that it's either me, Gracethefox, ou Sarathedog, that are the only ones staying on a forum, and I gotta say, it gets old, and BORING. I mean sure, WE aren't boring. We l’amour rping together in forums, but we can't do it with JUST us the entire time.

Now I know a lot of people CAN'T get online at times, and when that happens there's nothing wrong, but when people CAN and just don't, it gets really annoying. I'm not saying that toi have to get back on, but everyone just disappears and doesn't say why.

My guess is boredom. They get bored, and lazy...
continue reading...
Ok,we know toi want to skip the mumbo jumbo and get straight to the information,WE CAN DO THAT!!!

Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater

A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out par takthefox)

The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If toi make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If toi make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes...
continue reading...
posted by silverstream101
Well...basicly i got bored and i desided 2 make something 4 Riley! its just going 2 b why i made him and stuff
___________________________

Riley is from the Sol Dimention like Ember and her oldest sister Nova. When Ember and Riley were little they played togather all the time. So when Ember "died" he didnt belive it and has been looking for her sence. He got word that a red cat has been seen in the Mobius Dimention and found a way to get there. He STILL hasnt found her but refuses to stop looking. So now hes somewhere in Mobius looking for Ember.
_______________________________-

Small? yes...but i was feeling lazy...so i WILL make a story version soon
posted by silverstream101
Im only making this 1 part...unless people think im missing detail then ill do another 1 in plus detail...making it longer. 1st person told par Nova...im starting when she was 5. yes yes...i know i change their ages alot...but 20 WILL STAY. but as a flashback...so the present time Nova will come in at times.
___________________________

I sigh bored as i sit through my normal morning lecture.

"i can tell we Lost u again Nova" says a yellow w/ orange tips cat.

I smile sheepishly, "sorry mom...but its the same thing every day" i reply

A red cat replies, "ok Star...if shes so bored how about we tell...
continue reading...
posted by CosmoLuvsTails
I will follow Him
Follow Him wherever He may go,
And near Him, I always will be
For nothing can keep me away,
He is my destiny.

I will follow Him,
Ever since He touched my cœur, coeur I knew,
There isn't an ocean too deep,
A mountain so high it can keep,
Keep me away, away from His love.

I l’amour Him, I l’amour Him, I l’amour Him,
And where He goes,
I'll follow, I'll follow, I'll follow.
he'll always be my true love, my true love, my true love
from now until forever, forever, forever

I will follow Him,
Follow Him wherever He may go,
There isn't an ocean too deep,
A mountain so high it can keep,
Keep me away, away from His...
continue reading...
posted by Giz_4ever
One night stand

Let me tell you.....

Jennys getting her stuff in my room
Puts on her jupe and shes looking good
Six AM and shes leaving soon
Says what a crazy night I had
A real good time

But her Kiss tells me its goodbye
Just like nothing happened last night
But if I had one chance
Id do it all over again

One night stand I dont think shes coming back for plus
She was only looking for a one night stand
I dont think shes coming back for plus
No no

Now Im left up in my lonely room
She left her underwear and her perfume
I never thought that it could be this good
And I still feel a little on my...
continue reading...
posted by Giz_4ever
Sandi:

Ribbon broke my heart,
I knew he would.
So what is he going to do?
I'd know if I could...

Gizbin:

SHUT IMBECILES, I'VE HEARD ENOUGH.


Killerpose:

People call me the terror.
People call me the selfish.
People call me the nasty.
People call me the cruel.
People call me the idiot.
People call me the stupid.
People call me the crazy.
People call me the annoying.
People call me the long lasting.
People call me the fishy.
People call me the curious.
People call me the laugh.
People call me the cheesy.
People call me the stubborn.
People call-
Everyone: SHUT IT!!
posted by ShadowWolf337
Welcome Everybody to my Chatroom, for those who are just finding this im making a Video of me playing Slender with Commentary. Okay let me Explain all the other details. im going to be talking to toi all before the "Action" and that will be at 12:00 A.M. Central Time.I will be recording a my best friend's house so toi will be hearing him in the background. So untill i make the Video ou vidéos (it depends on my nerves after the first video) Please don't freak me out because if i get scared i will scream, and im guessing thats what toi want(XD) OH I almost forgot to mention this if toi want to thank someone for (in a way) starting this Thank TakTheFox, when he made the Slender RP he encouraged me to watch vidéos of other people playing the acursed game which led to this whole thing!
Oh here is my Youtube account name so toi can know where to go: Uberko2424
anyways feel free to talk to me and to each other.
posted by sonicgmance221
feu Elementists : The Flame Holders

1,000 Years Ago,

There was a Young Leader name Schfior. One of the Acient Leaders of the Elementists of The feu County. Tribes like the Kabyuze, Acers, Grekinda, and the Zertandia had joined together for county meetings and Awardings of New Members of the Elementists. Schfior was a Great Leader for 135 years of Ruling the feu County. Those Greatful years of cheering and happiness was changed after the new crowning of Prince Destin. After 10 years of ruling, There were dangers of getting robbed of everything. The new King didn't care about anyone else but...
continue reading...
Scarlet: *goes back in the house*
She heard loud cries of a little baby and entered her baby sister's room.
Crimson: Whaaaa!!!!
Scarlet: Crim, we gotta go.
Crimson: Whaaa!
Scarlet: *picks her up*
10 YEARS LATER............
Crimson: Pass it here, Synthos!
Synthos: *throws it*
Crimson: *catches*
Synthos: let's stop for now.
Crimson: Sure. *eyes flash*
Synthos: Another vision?
Crimson: Yeah.....
Synthos: What was this one about?
Crimson: I saw a girl...... She looked like me, but older.... I think I have a sister, Synthos.
Synthos: Don't be ridiculous. That's not possible. But if it is......
Kurt: Crimson, back...
continue reading...
In a small villge, deep inside the Green colline Zone...

"Just hang in there, dear...it will all be over soon..." one Echidna says. The one he is talking to is Rana the Echidna, a soon-to-be proud mother. As Thundros, Rana's wife, stands outside the door waiting, Rana is delivering her baby boy. The doctor comes outside to speak with Thundros. "You're son has arrived, sir." Thundros walks inside, seeing that his son, whom they had decided to name Cyber, is lying asleep in Rana's arms. "He's so beautiful..." Rana sighs. "Yeah...such a cute young boy..." Thundros adds. One doctor gasps loudly and...
continue reading...
posted by ShadowWolf337
Blood's Past
Chapter One:
T.D.
Ten an old Miles Blood Prowler wakes up and walks downstairs to eat breakfast "Good Morning Honey" a dit Erica Prowler (Miles Mom) "Morning mom!" a dit Miles happily, "where is dad?" "Oh your dad went to work early this morning" Zoey walks down stairs and tackles Miles playfully and the two go outside and play. Erica goes to the T.V. and turns it on then the news comes on "I have just received that Dr. Robotnik has attacked the robot manufactureing factory" an explotion is heard "Oh no thats where West works!" a dit Erica "there are survivors here is a liste of names" "West Prowler! Kids get in the car now" "Okay mom" a dit Zoey and Miles,
Two Hours Later...
    "It was Dr. Robotnik! he has gone insaine" a dit West weakly "Miles here i grabed this for you" West hands Miles a small computer "What is this dad?" West coughs "its a computer with a voice i call it T.D."
posted by ILoveSonic21
Norma the hegehog
Age:16
Species:hedgehog
Alignment: good
Likes:adventure,having fun, helping others, mint, chocolate, nice people, happiness.
Powers:fire,lightning
Talents:drawing and singing,karate,and is a ninja as a side job.

Norma the hedgehogs backstory is this:
when she was little she had a normal life she was and still is a happy go lucky girl and her parents l’amour her so much, but that one jour ten years il y a she was playing tag with her best friend Jagger the echidna and out of nowhere he gets kidnapped par bounty hunter with a mask and she promised her mother not to use her powers in public...
continue reading...
~Story as told par Flame Blizzard
    Let me start with this...we're sorry 2 all those we've hurt....I guess what u reap is what u sow...and a cœur, coeur that beats is a cœur, coeur that bleeds....can u 4give us ou will u hold a grudge? It's hard 2 steer thro life when all u've been trained 2 do is fight and kill...we're sorry. We can't be perfect and I rlly don't want 2 b. I don't aim 4 perfection anymore...I just wanna b close but....some demons u just can't out-run. That, my friends...is where this story starts...
    I was...raised from birth par the 1 called Docter...
continue reading...
posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
The wind howled at the windows of the orphanage, a small girl sat near it, watching outside as the rain pounded on the weak building, the aged place already having plenty of holes and wearing from years of nature's abuse.
The girl was a petite, faded cerulean blue souris with hair traveling down her back to her knees with eyes as black as coal, she seemed utterly depressed despite her young age of 7. Her mourning state matched how she dressed for an amateur's funeral, a long black dress that worked like a fontaine dress, drenching her in dark satin.
"All must make sacrifices to live, yet the...
continue reading...
posted by alphahetalia
Rules of engagement

1.    Engage. Participate. Be fully present. No auto-pilot.
2.    Meetings and multiple appointments are a fact of work-life; the least we can do is be on time so they can start on time and our peers are not kept waiting.
3.    Respect the attention of your peers. Come prepared means come prepared.
4.    Always have a pen and paper for note-taking. First, toi respect others who are giving toi information par acknowledging it, and secondly you’re expected to capture it, and follow-up; forgetting...
continue reading...
posted by CosmoLuvsTails
 Kyra Levenine
Kyra Levenine
"Dad's here, guys!" Called Kyra's big sister, April, from downstairs. Kyra grabbed her suitcase and went downstairs. It hadn't been the same since Mum and Dad had gotten divorced the an before. "Kasey, Ivy, C'mon!" yelled Kyra. "We're coming, we're coming!" Kyra's twin brother shouted down to her. Their Dad walked through the door. "Nice to see you're doing well with the kids, Julia" He a dit to his ex-wife. "Same to you, Kaylen." Mum said, coldly. Ivy ran to her Dad "Daddy!" She smiled as she ran up to him. "Hey, Dad." a dit Kasey.
"You all up for a good weekend, then?" Their Dad grinned....
continue reading...
Mobius Academy idea

So I was thinking that since Mobius Academy (restart) has been so successful, we could make a fan fic about it.
What would happen would be that one ou two people would write it, while the others supply info about the forum (this would include actually écriture about what happened in the forum, and not just starting from scratch). We would have to rewrite some things, but I think that most of it would probably be very usable.

If nominations are open, I would like to be one of the writers. I think there should be two for one reason in particular; There are multiple happenings...
continue reading...
posted by blazecat713
It was a dark and scary night four little girls were in a dark dungeon where a witch had put a curse on the girls.

After the girls have been cursed they've been orphans their names were : flare,jewl,frostene,and sharmaine. They were quiet little girls and they have unique powers flare has feu power jewl has spy power frostene has ice power and sharmaine has speed power. So every jour and night nobody would want to adopt the girls because of their curse so 10 years later the orphanage was out of business and the girls left and took care of themselves.

Flare was just walking down the rue and...
continue reading...
posted by cookiemaster
I quickly ran over to my husband, Ximy, and put down some lunch for him on the table. I could see par the look in his face he wanted me to just 'chillax' as he called it.

"My love, just calm down....you'll put stress on our child..." he said.

"I know, I know, but I've got so much things to do that I haven't done!" i replied.

I then looked at a liste of things I had to do. I crossed out the suivant thing on the liste which a dit 'make lunch for Ximy'.

"there." I a dit to myself, but talking openly for anyone to reply. "2 plus things on my liste of 30 things to do."

"Zellic, babe, calm down... Just sit down...
continue reading...