Sonic fan Characters Article: "Who--WHAT... am I?" (MTL's monologue)

posted by MattTheLynxX

"I was created among three others who share my qualities ... to serve for good. But have I done what I was designed to do? My powers alone are very destructive, I destroyed cities trying to defend the citizens and I have turned once kind people into outlaws. Have I really done any good? I mean yes, I have pulled off impressive feats such as defeating the power hungry tyrant Geno and stopped baffle... but even then, LIFES WERE AT STAKE!"

"Am I simply a tool of destruction... do I even deserve a shot at feeling emotions? DO I EVEN HAVE A SOUL?! I mean I have been controlled against MY OWN will to kill off innocent people during the time I adapted the element of darkness. I'm referred to as the "Hero of this world"... "Hero", huh? I mean, I never had a chance to think this over, all those fights... were they just to feed my power? Meta even a dit it himself: My power can lead to great things... if handled with responsibility and care... BUT HAVE I BEEN RESPONSIBLE WITH MY POWERS!?!"

"I am the most powerful out of the Gearsmo family, but is that a good thing?! I have... slaughtered. I HAVE SINNED. and I should be punished. I despise all evil and injustice... but am I evil? I took pleasure out of simply killing others... even if they are evil, there could of been another way... So should I end it all? should I depart from this world, leaving it to my son, Fazon. What AM I saying? a boy can't grow up without his father. but... Perhaps I could still watch over him... after all, in the position I am in... I am basically a sub-deity... my powers way to strong... over-powered to be exact... not even my limitations hold me back..."

"Okay... I am ready to depart, to protect the innocent is WHAT I stand for, to stop evil is my goal... even if it's myself..."

MattTheLynxX Huh, It looked a lot longer when I was writing it. If your curious what MTL is talking about, this basically bridges the gap between the MTL series and the Fazon series(Seeing both series are being rebooted, some changes to the plotline must be made... MTL is no longer killed by his wife around the end, he simply ends his life to stop himself from taking other lives.(At that point in the series, MTL is pretty at his most powerful... so it would be nice to kill him off before he became a "Stu" anyway.))

MattTheLynxX He gradually builds his powers as the story goes, around the end he pretty much a stu.(Well seeing he refers to himself as a "sub-deity".) What I mean by "Kill him off" is simply ending MTL's story and beginning fazon's.

MattTheLynxX Well y'know, I'm still working on it... who knows, I might write the story soon. It's rather hard to say...

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Evolia's Bio (Needs critique when possible.)

posted by Evolia-Wulf

Evolia Headshot

((The following is a new Bio for Evolia, my 'sona, I'm working on. I feel like I repeat information here, and I also feel I used the comma too much.
If you're up to being a critique: DO NOT HOLD BACK. I need some order to my chaos here. Evolia's personality is going to be rewired (and posté here too) and her design as well. I'm trying to be plus realistic now and make her original as possible. At least to my standards.))

Evolia only remembers from early childhood to start of her pre-teen years through an outsider's perspective. As if her, ou someone else's, life between those two points have...

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:::Gang Days: Part One (Dis is the Rynk story thing I talked about X{D):::

posted by TakTheFox

Gang Days

Introduction

The group was called “Heavy Metal”; a gang that was mainly in the state Supircor , in the country Supreta, the planet being Mobocan. Supreta was not a very nice country. The only good thing about it was the lack of laws. However the laws they did have were brutally enforced. Especially in cities like Elnoc, Rimro, and Semretches.

There were the main laws, don’t steal, pay taxes, no murdering, etc. Then there were laws against trading with foreign countries, especially the country’s rival, Gei Si Heir. The most well-known law however was the prejudice-based outlawing...

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In Another World Chapter Five

posted by TakTheFox

Chapter Five

“Ah, victory is sweet.” Grace announced triumphantly from a game of air-hockey. She had just once again beaten Dave. Rynk was watching and refused to play due to fearing either losing too much, ou getting too aggressive.

“Are toi sure toi don’t want to play, Rynk?” Dave pleaded. “My ego can’t take much plus of this.”

Rynk shot a glance to Dave, then to Grace, then back to Dave again. “Okay” she sighed while shrugging, “but I don’t blame me if I end up making the puck hit the window ou something. Who am I playing against?”

“Gr-“

“Him!” Grace interrupted,...

"The Missing" Part 6 - Finding Asher

posted by RawrMonster123

"Oh, Asher? I know him," Dave said.

"Me, too," Echo added.

"Where do toi think he is right now?" Casey asked.

"Probably his job. He works in a gratte-ciel over there," Dave replied while pointing at a group of skyscrapers that were in the city a couple of miles away from them.

Casey nodded and then started driving towards the city.

When they got there, Casey got out of the car and walked into the building.

As soon as she got in, she went up to the secretary. "Hello," the secretary greeted. "How may I help you?"

"Um.. Yes... I'm looking for Asher Burns?" Casey requested.

"Oh, toi mean Asentzio. He's...

Dark Days Part 1

posted by Lancelot8

Okay, the characters Henry, Snow, Vlad, and D'Ablo originally belong to Heather Brewer. I take no credit for them.

"I could use a little help here, Ultimate!" I yelled.
___"Kind of busy right now!!" he yelled back.
___If you're wondering, we're kind of in a fight for our lives.
___"Vladimir, Ultimate, give up now! There's no point in resisting!"
___And now I was pissed. I believe my Friends were too.
___"You can't win! You'll never win!"
___The creature he sent to kill us was huge. It had about a million spikes on its head. The stench that came off it was almost unbearable. Its claws were about the...

Darkness explains himself

posted by FrizTHedgehog

Ahem, Hello people.
I am Darkness and what you've heard of me is all wrong,all a lie. So what is the lie toi may ask, Well my good "friend" Friz says that I am a defective clone made in his image by........*sigh*..Dr.Eggman (sad excuse Friz, very very sad)

So, why don't I tell toi the real story, the clone part is right though. A long long time il y a in a Lab in a Mansion, Friz was trying to clone himself, so he could put his mind into a clone when he died, but something was wrong, the clone wouldn't come alive, he tried everything from Electricity to poking it with a stick, nothing worked. However,...

"The Missing" Part 2 - Finding rapide, rapide, swift and Swerve

posted by RawrMonster123

"So toi change and I'll do my hair," Casey a dit to Jenny after she ended the call with Kyle.

Jenny nodded in agreement, then walked into the closet as Casey ran out and got her toothbrush, toothpaste, and brush. She then ran to go into the bathroom across the college girl dorm's hall.

As soon as Casey got into the bathroom she went in front of the mirror and the sink. She put some toothpaste on her toothbrush without even wetting it. She started brushing her teeth after that.

After brushing her teeth she began to brush her hair to make it laid down rather than the bed-head look.

Jenny ran into...

A Lost soldier...(Part 1)

posted by Mapware3640

"The geno war was a pretty gruesome war for mobius,thousands of soldiers attempted to take over mobius,however the hero of legend put a stop to them and defeated the evil king...but this story does not focus on the hero...After the resulting end o the war thousands of scraps from geno's ship basically flew all over the place...including certain mechs,robots,and other machinery,Now usually most are either destroyed beyond believe ou utterly damaged...but one survived."

-Time:Morning
-Date:???
-Location:Impact site outside the borders of clockwork city

A robot that landed in the border of clockwork...

SlenderFox and the infinty tree:Part 5

posted by Mapware3640

three plus to go...but there will be many perils on the road ahead of you.Ⓧ

MTL walked deeper into the pit until he reached a sewer,progressing in MTL saw many corpse mutilated and being eaten par sewer rats(non-mobian),some of the corpses have strange symbols carved into there flesh,the symbols are circles with "X"s in them(Ⓧ),but suddenly,the slenderfox reappeared,it came flying at MTL,having little to no reaction time,MTL reached in his pocket for note...but the slenderfox grabbed MTL par the hear,he reverted to watch form and whited out...MTL then woke up shortly later,back in the same...

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article I feel I have to write because I'm too lazy to draw something.

posted by shadowknuxgirl

"TERESA, WHAT THE FUCK ARE toi DOING?" Oh hey, it's Natsumi! I always liked Natsumi, she was always happy, well except for right now. "Forgive my language, but what do toi think you're doing?" "I'm motivating people!" She looked confused, then she just sighed. "Going into the middle of a rue with a stop sign that says the word 'don't' on it isn't exactly the best way to motivate people." What? I didn't see the problem. It was my trusty sign. Just like a stop sign, except it a dit 'Don't stop!' on it. Hey, there goes another car! "HEY YOU! DON'T STOP!" I shouted. Natsumi pulled me aside, "Are...

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My RULES AND SUGGESTIONS OF RPING

posted by TakTheFox

My RP rules and suggestions

Allo,

So I’ve noticed some, not too much but some, things that people seem to not do in an rp that kinda make things hard. So Imma liste em.

The suggestions,
These are just suggestions (no duh X{D) as if to say toi don’t HAVE to do this, but could toi please?

1. READ THE DESCRIPTION!
I’ve noticed that in a lot of roleplays I’ve made, people just read the title. I recently made one that makes it VERY important that toi read the description because it had two types of approaches depending on certain characters toi had, but certain people just...

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Gary and Sue make too much ragoût

posted by TakTheFox

Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one ou the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power ou skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something...

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How To Be A Good RPer

posted by RawrMonster123

Pick the theme of the RP

What not to do
Answer: Roleplay?
Details: [None]

What to do
Answer: High School RP
[/u]Details:[/u] Your FC is walking in school when they see.....

Why do this
It actually gives the RPer something to actually reply to. Speaking of that...

Do NOT do the following...
Answer:Your FC sees Mary and Sue playing hopscotch.

Why not do this
WHAT THE HULU IS THE RPER GOING TO DO?!? -.-" Instead, as they play hopscotch, make something dramatic happen.

Add some action/drama

What not to do
Answer: Mary Sue explode your FC. What do they do?

What to do
Perfect examples are the populaire RPs.

Why do this...

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Sandi loup theme song

posted by Giz_4ever

Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky

In the summer night
When the moon shines bright
Feeling l’amour forever
And the heat is on
When the daylight is gone
Still - happy together

There is just one plus thing I would like to add
She is the greatest l’amour I've ever had

Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky

And as time goes by
There is a lot to try
And I'm feeling lucky ooo yea
In the softest sand
Smiling hand in hand
l’amour is all around me

There's just one plus thing I would like to add
She is the greatest l’amour I've ever had

Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky.

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Blood's Past Chapter 5

posted by ShadowWolf337

Blood's Past
Chapter Five
West Returns accueil
A Week Later...
Miles and Zoey are asleep when there is a knock at the door. Erica walks to the door and opens it "West your home! "Where are the kids?"
"Asleep why"
"I need to tell toi something about Miles"
Miles wakes up and went to get a cup of water then he heard the conversation so he started eavesdroping.
"One of the Doctors told me about Miles blood work, he has a trace of chaos power"
"As in chaos émeraude power?"
"Yes... he has powers others can only dream of"
"Miles, our son, is a living chaos emerald"
"basically, yes i know this is a lot to take in so lets go get some sleep"
Miles hurried into his room and acted like he was sleeping. West walks to Miles room"I know your not sleeping Miles" Miles sits up in his lit "Is it true dad?"
"Yes, toi do have special powers son but the question is what will toi do with them?"

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An Encounter with Slender

posted by TakTheFox

An Encounter with Slender
By Trisell Chronos

Not one, but two identities, one a male offspring-identity, and the other a female offspring –identity, sat together in what was meant to become a romantic evening, at 6:34 P.M. They were on Mobius-Zone-221, driving to the Mercian Lake.

The boy, Jep, was sixteen, and spending his birthday week with his girlfriend. This was always a special jour for Identities, because on their sixteenth birthday they enter their evolutionary-state of which they can unlock all of their natural abilities such as morphing and chaos energy.

Jep was a normal teenager, aside...

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Rising Night: Chapter 1

posted by BurningBlazie

ɪᴛ ᴡᴀs ʟᴀᴛᴇ. ᴠᴇʀʏ ʟᴀᴛᴇ. ʙeʀɴᴀᴅᴇᴛᴛᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴀᴡᴀᴋᴇ. ʜᴇʀ ᴇᴀʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴇʏᴇs ᴏɴ ᴀʟᴇʀᴛ. sʜᴇ ʀᴏsᴇ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʀ ғᴇᴇᴛ. ᴛʜᴀᴛ's ᴡʜᴇɴ sʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴅ ɪᴛ...

It swooped down and grabbed someone. A girl. A écureuil girl. This girl was hollering like mad! It seemed so hard to believe that such a small girl could make such a large noise in the night. It didn't care, though. It threw the poor little soul into its mouth, and she was gone. It looked at the tree...

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.:Dancing whit the death:. ~ Mars Mashumaro

posted by seuris

Tonight, the lamp lights fade away,
He thinks about how all of toi could be a different way.
Old scars Slash knife,
red blood in the moonlight glisten beautifully ...

He wanders deeper into the past,
running to escape the emptiness.
Journey deeper into the l’espace of mourning,
opens the gates of darkness.

Dancing whit the death, he cries with great joy:
"Now at last be free from all this I can get!
I do not return to the suffering of the world would never again be,
I want to sleep in peace, I am not afraid of God! "

He believed, hoped and loved, so
deeply engraved the names of his soul to the walls.

The days...

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Rynk Story part three

posted by TakTheFox

Part three

It had been a week since the lynx-girl known as “Rynk” met the strange hooded-female known as “Rin”. Nothing in particular had happened… until…

Rynk was strolling through the streets of Semretechs once again, in chercher of something to do, ou plus importantly, something to eat. Her last meal was ruined when she had decided to get some nourriture from a homeless shelter, but a conflict interrupted.

It began with a man simply asking if she could hand her one of her biscuits. Without looking at him, she pointed at the food-stand, which still had plenty.

“Can’t toi just hand me...

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Epic Last Battle Scene Thingy

posted by numnumyellow67

I Stood there panting with my Blaster Blade in my hand, barely standing up.
I stared at him with the look of pure revenge on my face covered with blood.
I looked around, at all my fallen friends, everyone who tried to help me destroy this monster. Zypher, Matt, Mugen everybody... No, no! I won't lose anybody else to this, there's got to be a way to bring them back, and with that as my motivation, I charged at him yelling at the haut, retour au début of my lungs.
"You monster, Jenso, I won't let toi get away with this!" I cried as I ran at him.
I swung my Blaster Blade at him, a futile attempt to bring him down.
He...